Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2019 08:29 PM · On: About Me
That was fcking hot *o* Justin is making his magic.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2015 03:25 AM · On: About Me
That was SO hot, and not OOC in my opinion at all. It actually really worked with the story. Justin just wanted him to relax and feel good ;)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 04:02 PM · On: About Me
Justin the Majestic and his magic wand...
Perfect! ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: turtlegirl922 (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 02:19 PM · On: About Me
Brian is always so controlled during sex, both in the show and in most fanfics. It's nice to see him "shattered" by a sexual encounter. Especially since it was Justin that did it to him.
Author's Response: That is such a great point! I have tried to look closely at how much of Brian's communication is physical, and as such, the sex scenes take on some additional meaning *clears throat* though of course... they're still you know... sex scenes! *grins* Thanks so much for your attention to those details!!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:46 PM · On: About Me
That was hot. I can see Brian letting Justin do that with him.
Author's Response: A great compliment! :) I wondered whether it would be believable to anyone but me; I'm glad it was (or if not believable, still enjoyable!).
Reviewer: Kitty_Ballou (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:48 AM · On: About Me
Okay...
*coughs*
I need a refrigirator, a cigarette, ice-cubes... something like that! FRESH AIR!
*gasps*
And you're absolutely fucking right! Of course there was a plot!!! *nods* Nice plot! *coughs again* But *whispers* the porn was much better... *ggggggggg*
And why the hell are here just 10 points to rate this story, huh? I need 12! 15! Maybe 20 after this chapter!! *gggg*
Author's Response: For some reason I'm just finding this one -- I'm so sorry for the delay!
Anyway -- you're so sweet and I love your reviews! :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:38 AM · On: About Me
I enjoyed this break very much. It's beautiful writen, Justin loving Brian so much and Brian trusting Justin ... wowww.
I'm going to bed now, no angsty chapters for me.
* big hug * for this wonderful story, one of my favorites of the moment.
Author's Response: *Big smile*
Thank you so much, Marny! I am so glad that I could convey that with this scene; sometimes conveying deeper meaning in sex scenes is tough and I really appreciate the feedback on that issue.
*hugs back happily*
Reviewer: Sake (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:27 AM · On: About Me
This is a wonderful story. I don't think I've evern read one with this angle before. I look forward to seeing new chapters every day. My favorite on going story right now. You are doing a great job, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Oooh, a new reviewer! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. The idea of Brian's past has always been fascinating to me, and the further and further I get into this fic (and planning it), the more possible connections that relate to his adult behavior / life. It's an interesting jourey and I'd like to say thanks for coming along!
I appreciate the encouragement very much. Hearing from readers makes such a huge difference to me and I appreciate your taking the time.
I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter; it'll be out in a few hours. (I have to post them when I go to bed, or I sit up looking for reviews every 20 minutes! ;) ).
-Tiffany
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:50 AM · On: About Me
This just keeps getting better and more intense with each chapter. You have really captured the connection that made Brian and Justin so wonderful together. And we can all use a little PWP from time to time. I'm dreading the next few chapters cause I know they'll be painful, but can't wait for them at the same time. I have faith in your direction.
Author's Response: Aww, that's such a sweet thing to say. I am amazed that anyone would think the story gets better with every chapter. I'll readily agree to the "more intense" aspect, though.
After reading your comment and Sunny's, both of which describe trusting me to get us through the angst, I will admit I got a little...worried. So I went and wrote out a really general outline of the fic wihch safely gets Brian entirely out of psychological trauma. (Thank god, right!?) An odd thing happened after that -- certain quotes came to my mind. Things Brian needs to say or have told to him. Those are what's anchoring the story at this point. So I hope it's all safe now.
I appreciate your vote of confidence, and now that I have things more planned I feel like I can live up to it! :)
Thanks so much for the comments! Hang in there...the next couple are the roughest yet. (Maybe I'm trying to build suspense or something, I guess!).
Reviewer: Minoloushe (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:00 AM · On: About Me
Another great chapter.
And while I think this is more than just porn without plot, let's face it - when it comes to qaf fic pwp is canon : )
Author's Response: **big smile** I can't argue with that! :) I hadn't thought about it that way. I'll have to consider adding some truly gratuitous sex...wouldn't want to venture too far out of canon! :) !!
Thanks for the comment!!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:35 PM · On: About Me
Justin is trying to get Brian totally relaxed, and totally trusting him so that he'll open up. Oh God I hope he does! My heart aches for Brian! Great update!
Author's Response: *Smiles; sighs* Brian will...it's taking a little longer than I anticipated, but the next couple of chapters are pretty intense in what they reveal about Brian's knowledge (or lack their of) of relationships and love. I hope you'll enjoy them -- one will be posted soon!
Thanks so much for reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:36 PM · On: About Me
yet another wonderful chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much! When I checked my reviews today I was really surprised at how many people have commented on it already! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:28 PM · On: About Me
Great chapter.... this is like the calm before the storm... I could see Brian trusting and loving Justin enough to let him take complete control .... I also see myself runnning out to buy some Sweet-tarts or Smartees.. lol.. can't wait to see what happens next......
Author's Response: That's a really perceptive comment -- the calm before the storm. I have to say, this story really takes its own direction. I pretty much thought I knew what came after this chapter. I sat down and two different chapters wrote themselves! More angsty and in a different way than I'd really imagined them... I look forward to seeing what you will think of them.
re: the candy. I don't know. That wrote itself, too! And I have to go to the grocery store, too! ;)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:19 PM · On: About Me
as hot as it was it was also tender and sweet. brian is definitely in the right hands now.
Author's Response: :) Thank you! :) I'm glad I could make Justin's homecoming worth it; I know it's been a long wait for readers and Brian! ;)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: templeton_ma (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:11 PM · On: About Me
I don't think Brian was too OOC. I can imagine that at some point in the future after 513, Brian would be more open to Justin, giving Justin more ways to be his equal. Justin is so gentle in this chapter. Very loving. Well done! :-)
Author's Response: That is such a relief to hear. The chapter wrote itself and I sat there going, "Uh, but this is Brian..." but I couldn't seem to make myself change it; it felt right in some fundamental way. It's great to hear that it seems so from the readers' side of things, too.
Thanks so much!! :)
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:43 PM · On: About Me
Really hot scene. I like a story that knows when to switch - lighten it up a bit, because real life is like that. Things swing from serious to touching to hilarious without too much warning. Well written
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad that the emotion switch worked well in your view; as a writer that is one of the few things that I second guess in my own writing. Usually I just go with what I have, but then those switches always make me wonder if I'm being realistic, etc. etc. So I really appreciate your vote of confidence on that one, especially!
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:36 PM · On: About Me
You´re right that wasn´t porn without a plot. That was making love. That was Justin taking care of the man he loves with all his heart. Justin knows exactly what brian needs to relax.But more than that Justin wanted to assure Brian that he really loves him and that he´s there to help him. It was a very emotional chapter and there was nothing ooc in it. I can imagine brian that way. Now I´m a bit worried about the angst in the next chapter but I now you´ll do the right thing. I´ll be definately there to read it in fact I hope you´ll post it soon.
Thanks for writing this story, Sunny
Author's Response: *bites lip in response to the happiness caused by your analysis of the sex scene...* That's just what I was hoping to evoke... :) :) :) :) :)
So far I'm done with the next two chapters and honestly, they have been the most emotinal to write and are very angsty.I appreciate your confidence that I'll handle them well... I hope so. I will post the next one probably late today. I'm glad you're in the story for the long haul!
Thanks so much for commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:30 PM · On: About Me
Ok, I'll just go take a cold shower.
That was great, wouldn't we all just love to be Brian in that scene? ;)
Author's Response: ;) *ponders whether she wants to be Brian or Justin in that scene...can't decide...*
I'm glad you enjoyed my foray into remembering why this is rated NC-18! :)
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