Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 02:53 PM · On: Pretty Sure

Sooooo glad Brian told Justin about the baby. Looking forward to Michael learning out about the baby ( evil laugh ) which will let him know Brian was willing to give into Justin what he wasn't willing to give him.
Looking forward to next update.

Author's Response: You're so crazy, how do you think Michael will react to the news of a baby. Not good. Now, think about how Michael will get when he finds out that Brian is the one carrying it. Nothing but trouble ahead. I will keep Brian and the baby safe. Promise.

Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 09:58 AM · On: The Madness Begins

More please this is wonderful...although I do want to gunslap Mikey...ugh!



Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha. I know what you mean. I'll try to give you guys more soon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 05:12 PM · On: Pretty Sure

Wow!  I'm so happy that Brian finally told Justin.  Michael is the only fly in the ointment.  Connor is a good friend but he's interested in Jesse who is supposed to marry his boyfriend. 



Author's Response: I know, I'm happy for them. Michael is not going to be very happy, but I won't let him ruin Brian and Justin's happiness. Poor Jesse, it doesn't matter if it's friendship or relationship, he always seems to be stuck in the middle. You will be pretty surprised about the things that will happen next.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 06:53 AM · On: Pretty Sure

I'm so glad they are on the same page now. I got worried for a second there. I really loved how you characterize Brian in this story and him being the pregnant one is a plus for me. I'm so excited for their announcement about the pregnancy, though I think they would keep it to themselves for a while, what's with having a crazy, jealous ex boyfriend running around. But I bet the ex would go ballistic.

Thanks for the update and I truly can't wait for the next one:)



Author's Response: Yay! Everything is falling into place. Yeah, for the most part I always get Justin pregnant and that's a lot of what you see in the stories out there. This time I turned the tables. I think Brian is just a strong to be having the baby.Oh my god. I'm working on the chapter. And I'm telling you right now there are so many people that are so happy about Brian and Justin's baby. I'll try to post it soon. Take care.

Reviewer: qaf fan (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2016 03:44 AM · On: Pretty Sure

I am loving this story. Please keep Brian and his baby safe, I do not trust this Michael.

Keep up the great work.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. I don't trust Michael either and soon you know what I mean. It's going to be crazy. But I promise you that I would not let anything happen to Brian and the baby. You got my word. Thanks for the motivation. Love it.

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2016 12:20 AM · On: Pretty Sure

i love this story, i hope you finish it.

Iam glad Brian finaly told Justin about the bayby-

Cant wait to see Michael reaction-

Plese dont take too long

Hugs



Author's Response: I am working really hard to get to the end. I am very happy to. Justin is so happy about it. Oh, Michael is probably going to die. Lol.

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2016 07:10 PM · On: The Madness Begins

This story is so beautiful and I am truly loving it.  BUT....I just realized when  it was published; do u intend to complete this and the others,  as I really love your wrin


Author's Response: Oh I intend to finish it, it's just been hard. I was amazed too when it was published and how long it was since I update. Once this one is completed I will work on the other ones. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2016 01:28 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Capitulo Hermoso!!!



Author's Response: Un millon the gracias. Espero que te guste lo que va pasar pronto.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2016 03:05 PM · On: The Madness Begins

You got Me!!! It never crossed my mind to think that Brian would be the one having the baby having the baby, LOVE IT!!
Why do I get the feeling that when Crazy Michael finds out all HELL WILL BREAK OUT lol.
Again loving this story. Cant wait for next update

p.s. also looking forward to the continuation story of quads,twins and Liam haha

Glad your back.

Author's Response: Oh you have no idea the things that will happen. They will be sad...don't worry I promise you that Brian and the baby will be fine. I will try to update as soon as I can. I'm so happy to be back too. I will work on the other stories as soon as I finish this one.

Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 10:27 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

It's a great story, only let down by grammar and spelling.



Author's Response: I am very sorry about that. I posted so fast that I missed a lot of things. I have been going back and fixing everything that I can. I always keep reading so anything that I find I will try to fix right away. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 04:01 PM · On: The Madness Begins

What a great opportunity for Justin in Chicago. I admit I was initially worried about that separation, but after reading the entire chapter, my mind is a bit more at ease. I really do believe that Brian will to everything he can to protect his relationship with Justin, no matter what Michael tries. And I do think he will keep trying. Especially after what unfolded at Woody's. He feel betrayed. I get that. However, he has to come to the realization at some point that what he and Brian had was an entirely different kind of love. At least for Brian it was. For Brian is was the love of a brother or best friend. He wasn't in a position to really understand the difference between love that way to actually being IN love. Now he does and Michael is very bitter. I think Brian was with Michael more out of obligation than anything else. Because Michael was there for him so much throughout his life, that it would be only natural for them to wind up together.

So...Brian is preggers huh? I hope he tells Justin soon. Justin angry is a sight to behold and I really don't think he's want that turned onto him. Hopefully as soon as Justin gets to chicago adn get settled, much like Brian intends. fingers crossed that onther events don't get in the way of that. this will inevitable destry Michael, but I'll be honest with you, I'm not sure I care too much. I think becuase I forsee him being an even bigger asshole, and I don't trust him. :) Wonder what everyone else's reaction will be? 

I feel bad for Jesse to be honest. He's kind of between a rock adn a hard place. Michael is is brother and wants to be supportive, but then Brian has become one of his best friends, and wants to be supportive to him as well. He tried to lay it out to Michael, but I don't think Michael really heard him or listened. He may be one of teh few who will actually be able to get through to Michael at some point.

That last bit between Brian and Justin was truly beautiful. An open and forthright Brian, honest about his past, and an ever accepting and loving Justin. It flowed in such a lovely way, no matter how abhorrent the subject was. It made them even closer.

What a gorgeous chapter!! I ate up every word!! (twice) Nice and long as well was a real treat!

Very thankful for the fast updates. enjoying this more than you know.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of sending him to New York but it's always New York. Decided to try something new. I am happy that you're feeling more secured about their time apart. But don't worry, there is trains and cars and planes. They will see each other no matter what. You know, Brian, in this story has really fallen in love with Justin. Even thought he and Michael weren't really meant for each other, he still went through the breakup. He knows what that feels like and with Justin it would feel hundreds of thousand worst, so he will do what he got to do to be with Justin. The history that Michael and Brian have would keep their friendship for so long. Like any other type of relationship it needs to be nourished or it would die. Eventually there will be a fall out. Yeah, Jesse is stuck in the middle of Brian and Michael and it sucks because he loves both men as brothers. But things will get better for him. Yeah, at first I was like, fuck did I really wrote this and wondered so many times if I wanted to go with it. But like u said it flowed easily and it just made them closer. I couldn't let it go. I'm so happy that you love reading this story. Yay! I am updating and writing chapter 14 as we speak. Later, T

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 03:06 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Now that was an interesting turn of events.  It's a good thing that Michael didn't hit Brian in the stomach.  I can understand Michael being mad, but he gave up any rights when he left Brian.  It's good that someone else knows about the pregnancy because Brian's going to need all the help he can get.  I have just one question, if Justin was using condoms how did Brian get pregnant?



Author's Response: Yeah, I thought so too. I'm so excited about it. You are so right. Michael didn't care about Brian then, only what he wanted. Well, he won't get what he wants anymore. Well, condoms are not one hundred percent secured. There are many reasons why u can still get pregnant even if you're using a condom. But there will be more in that matter.

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 02:23 PM · On: The Madness Begins

God I'm loving it and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll update as fast as I can.

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 12:32 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Understand where Michael coming from. but punching Brian in the face not cool omg always love feisty Justin omg Brian pregnant can't believe he's not going tell Justin yet Justin going to be pissed or Happy......you are doing such amazing job with this story and your other fics as well you and edom are my top Author in midnight whispers keep up the awesome work ;) 



Author's Response: Soon you will see where Justin gets that's feisty attitude. Don't worry he will tell Justin when the time is right. Thanks so much for the amazing words. I really love that. I will try to update more soon.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 09:54 AM · On: The Madness Begins

Wow, that was a surprise to me. I never thought it would be Brian getting pregnant. If I can remember right, I read one of the scene where Justin changed the bed sheets in a hurry like he didn't want Brian to see what was in it, and I just assumed that the condom had broken. But it was Brian topping, or I don't know, I must confuse this with something else. I plan on reading the whole thing again, anyway:)

I'm honestly worried about the two months separation, that is a long time being apart especially with someone trying to get your man back. I trust Brian not to do anything to hurt Justin, he just promised that. But it's Michael that I don't trust. I hope Brian will not fall to any of his friend's manipulations. 

Thanks for this long and fast update. You're the best!



Author's Response: I'm so happy that I can surprise you. At first I'm not going to lie, I was going to make Justin have the baby. It was kind of a last minute decision, but I think it was a good one. No, that time Justin was just changing the sheets so when they came out of the shower they could lay down comfortably. I'm still toying with the idea of them kind of figuring out when it happen but it's really not a priority. Don't worry about the separation, like really, as if they could stay away from each other. Lol. There is more to come, thanks for all the great input. Hope you like what's coming.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 04:20 PM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Woah....Ok, THAT was disturbing with Michael. I mean, not entirely unexpected, but I didn't think it would happen in the men's room. I don't trust Michael, (shocking I know) He's manipulative enough that he's going to do his best to cause trouble. I hope that brian is able to asuage Justin of any of his fears. That Justin becomes more confident in their relationship, and of course, that Brian doesn't do anything stupid. You'd think that Michael would grasp the idea of what love is. I mean, look at Ben, he loved Michael enought to sacrifice his own wants, for what Michael wanted. for Michael's happiness. Brian did teh same thing. He thought Ben would make Michael happy, thus let Michael go since he figured Ben could give Michale more than he could. I wonder if he understand that it's not gonna happen on Brian's part? Either way, he knows Michael's heart isn't in it anymore, and letting Michael go. Does Michael understand that concept? NOw. We already see different ways he's trying to manipulte things.

I know that Brian will stand for his relationship with Justin, but how long will it take for him to REALLY let Michael have it? What happened at the office and at Woodies is only the beginning. Brian intends to hve everyone around him so that it doesn't continue, but I don't trust Michael.

Ah well....I guesss we'll just have to see what you have up your sleeve.

Great chapter!! Loved it and love that you updated so quickly. It's nice that this story is being revitalized.

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response: Michael is getting desperate and that's like the only place that he could get Brian by himself. He still thinks that Brian is like he used to be. Brian would fuck anyone anywhere but even if that was the case I don't think he would go for Michael anymore. Hell, Brian doesn't trust Michael even thought he wants their friendship to see the light of day. Oh soon enough there will be certain things happening and Justin will not have any doubt about his place next to Brian and he would fight for his man. Soon enough Brian will have to make a choice and things will never be the same. Please keep on reading and letting me know what you think. I love it when people pour their emotions towards the stuff I have written. Take care, T

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 12:11 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

What is Michael thinking?  That Brian would drop everything to get back with him?  What a numbskull.  Even Ben is not hanging around, and Mikey doesn't have the guts to tell Brian the truth.  Brian is very happy - with Justin.



Author's Response: He doesn't have much of a thinking brain...lol. Brian is super happy with Justin and he will keep on getting happier and there is not a single person that will be able to push them apart.

Reviewer: Bufferhalsy 003 (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2016 03:07 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Why does Michael even want to get back with Brian?  He and Brian broke up for good reasons. And those reasons wouldn't change if they did become a couple again. 



Author's Response: He is like a little kid, you know. You know when kids stop playing with a toy and then they don't want it until someone else wants to play with it. Too bad for Michael, Justin doesn't think that Brian is a toy but a man and he's not letting go of it anytime soon...or ever!

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 05:33 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

I want to marry your Brian, he's so perfect:)

Thanks for the fast update, can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response: Ha ha ha. I know right. There is more to come and I'm trying to write the next chapter as I update. Take care.

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 05:12 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Awesome chapter but Michael a prick please dont make him fuck it up with Brian and Justin 



Author's Response: I would not let Brian let Michael fuck anything up. Lol. I hope you enjoy what it's to come. It's about to get intense. Later!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 03:14 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

I just want to say i'm really enjoying this story, I never forgot about it when I first read it awhile back. I am truly happy that you are back "On the Job" (hehe)as you are one of my favorite authors and I missed and hope you'd return. Thank you.

Lol, I just read this new chapter and already can't wait for the next !:)

ps. why do I get a feeling that grimmie Michael is up to something soooooo not right!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I know it took me for ever to update. To tell you the truth I didn't even realize that I think a year had gone by and I hadn't post anything on it. I am itching to write other stories but if I do that nothing is going to get done so I am trying to finish this one so I can write the next one.

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2016 11:47 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

So, you're back! What a great news!!! I really love ALL your fics. I hope this time you'll finish this one because it's a good story. You're getting on my nerves with Michael... What an idiot. I really hope you're going to give him what he deserves and I hope that in this story Justin will be strong enough to shut Michael up FOREVER and I also hope Brian's family will be more supportive for him, I speak about Debbie. I don't like this Ben at all, he's a completely ASSHOLE. I think Ben and Michael deserve each other. I'm fond of Jesse, he's a very great and kind guy. I never understood what Brian found in Michael. PLEASE UPDATE SOON...



Author's Response: Thanks you so much for following this story. I'm working on it as much as I can. I am itching to work on other stories but I am not doing it, not until I finish this one. I plan on completing everything that I can before I start anything new. Oh and just so you know Justin will shut Michael for forever without even having to speak one word. You will love it. I will update chapter 12 pretty soon.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 09:29 PM · On: My Whole World

She lives!! great to see you back with us and utterly thrilled to see an update. I went back and re-read it all as I had forgotten most of it, so I'm just going to say it all here.

thank goodness Brian and michael are no more! Ugh...the very idea icks me out! :) 

I really don't like Ben in this. He kind of reminds me of Ethan in says. Putting down Brian, being overly possessive of Michael, getting in between them knowingly and not caring.  Both have similar qualities to me. He must realize there will be interactions between B&M, and the fact they were friends initially, one would think he'd understand that. that Brian was a big part of that little family, and it's not Ben's place to replace him, but realize that he's an addidtion to it. Him trying to win over Jesse isn't necessarily a good move. All of Michael's residual feelings for Brian will of course be Brian's fault in Ben's eyes I would imagine. I'm sure he's happier than a pig in poop that Brian has a new boyfriend. Even if Michael obviously isn't. Ben has to start cluing in fairly soon. will he just make excuses though? Assume Brian is just bringing someone along to make Michael jealous? Does he assume Brian is trying to get Michael back (Ok....again, that idea is just gross...) Brian finally realizes what it's like to really be IN love. that the love he had for Michael was really just friendship and it shouldn't have gone beyond that.

Brian got his shit together at least. That was a bit nerve wracking, but at least it was short lived. Thank you! No prolonged separation. The rest of the gang seem to be pretty supportive of B&J as well. Happy that Brian is with someone special. I doubt they really realize just how special Justin is, but I'm sure they will soon enough.

Again, really happy that you've come back to us. Looking forward to more angst filled chapters ahead!

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response: Thank for the welcome back. Reading what you have to say really makes want to write faster. There is so much happening next I think you are going to like what is coming.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 02:17 PM · On: My Whole World

OMG!!!!!!! YOU ARE BACK!!!!
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE SAY YOU ARE BACK!!!!!!!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes I might be a bit slow but surely I'm here.

Reviewer: Paula (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2016 07:23 PM · On: My Whole World

This story is so good, you write it so well. I'm totally in love with it. Please, update soon. 



Author's Response: It's been a while for a second I thought it wasn't good enough. Happy you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2016 06:49 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I was so happy to find this update! Love your stories!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on the next one.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2016 01:40 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

 Brian'a boyfriend is Michael. Even if it's not for long I can't see that. Sorry this story is not for me even if I am a fan of anti Michael.



Author's Response: That is okay you are not forced to read it. Hopefully you will like the other stories I got around.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 11:08 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

So happy you updated this. Really enjoying it, the Jesse character is wonderful.  Look forward to more. Soon? 



Author's Response: Well I'm happy you guys like it. I didn't realized how long it's been since I updated.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 10:29 PM · On: My Whole World

Love the engagement party.  Everyone was having a good time and then Mikey showed up.  Not only were he and Ben late but he acted atrociously.  Sadly while everyone saw it, even Emmett, Ted, Fred and Conner, Michael doesn't have a clue.  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Michael is going to get everything he deserves one thing at the time and is just going to kill him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 10:08 PM · On: Midnight

Wow is right.  Brian and Justin together and now Jesse knows and is happy!  Michael is under the misreprehension that Brian should be pining for him.  That's so funny.



Author's Response: I know right. Like I see Brian pinning away for Justin. But for Michael... I don't think so.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 09:52 PM · On: My Heart Beats

Can't get over Michael, he breaks up with Brian then he wants to be 'friends'.  He seems to think that Brian should be there for him regardless.  Love how Jesse is the friend that Mikey never was and now that Cynthia knows someone who makes Brian smile.



Author's Response: I know but he will get his. And too late realize that he fucked up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 09:24 PM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Yay, even Connor thinks Mikey is being a dick.  Good to see that Brian listened and went after Justin.



Author's Response: Connor went through what Brian is going. Not exactly the same but the man has a clue.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 08:48 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

Jesse is the friend that Mikey was not.  Shame he doesn't know about Justin.  I liked the Conner guy, mostly because he didn't push when he realized it wouldn't work.



Author's Response: You know, Connor is truly a lot like Brian. He is really a nice guy no matter how he acts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 07:53 PM · On: Do Something

Jesse is going to try fixing Brian up?  Too bad he doesn't know that Brian is seeing Jesse's professor.  Like what you did regarding Jack's death.



Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought that since Michael was out of the ex he shouldn't be there. Originally it was going to be Jesse but the muse had other plans.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 07:18 PM · On: Without Even Realizing It

Brian always gives in to Jesse.  So Brian and Justin are going to NY for a few days?



Author's Response: Hope you enjoy what's to come. Slowly the boys will fall for each other.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 05:50 PM · On: Chance Meeting

Michael ends it and everyone turns against Brian?  Fuck that.  At least Jesse sees things like they are.  The only problem is what if Jesse wants Brian for more than friends?  After all Brian is now planning to see Justin.  Ben was totally out of line!



Author's Response: Don't worry about that. I promise you right now that Jesse loves Brian like a brother.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 02:13 PM · On: Later Brian

I like Jesse.  As Michael's brother he tells Michael like it is, but he's still friendly with Brian.  Now we meet Justin who teaches at PIFA. 



Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you like Jesse. Hope you like the other original characters as well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 01:46 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I feel sorry for Brian. Everyone seems down on him.  Except Jesse.  Michael seems to want his cake and to eat it too. 



Author's Response: Michael will get his. Hopefully you like what's to come.

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 11:42 AM · On: My Whole World

Yes yes I've been waiting for a new chapter for a very long time ..................... I loved this chapter grrrr Michael he's so angry and jealous he's such a dick i love the interaction with Brian and Justin can't wait for the next chapter 

Tasha :)



Author's Response: I'm sorry about the wait. I will really try to finish this story.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 10:27 AM · On: My Whole World

I think I already told you that this is one of the best stories I have ever read, one of my favorites. I'm so happy you updated, thank you:)



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm already working on more. The plan is to finish this before I touch anything else. That way I can concentrate on one thing at the time.

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:47 AM · On: Midnight

Please update



Author's Response: I will try to update more.

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 12:35 AM · On: Midnight

Thank you for sharing! Will there be more?

I like your original characters, Jesse and Conner!



Author's Response: Thank u. I am having a great time writing them.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2015 05:49 AM · On: Midnight

Brilliant, Fantastic fic! Is this the finial chapter?  Love Jesse's friendship with Brian, so much , much better than Mikey's ( immature, idiot).

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: I know right. I hope u like what's to come

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2015 11:35 PM · On: Midnight

God I am loving this story can't wait to read the rest!



Author's Response: Hope u like it

Reviewer: onlytime (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2015 04:38 AM · On: Midnight

Hey!

Why don't you finish your stories. They 're so great and good.



Author's Response: That's what I'm going to try and do.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 04:17 PM · On: Midnight

I am sooo deliriously happy to see you updated this. No kidding!  If I'm not mistaken, there's a slight change in this chapter and I actually like it better than the first post of chapter 9.  If there werent any changes, well I have always listed this story as a "Hope to high heavens that this gets continued!!!", so I'm sure I love chapter 9 then and I love chapter 9 now. Looking forward to your chapter 10 and I  dearly hope you have your creative juices running and continue with this.



Author's Response: I have more time in my hands so hopefully I will be able to update more.

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2014 04:57 AM · On: Midnight

I just read the whole story through when I saw it posted. Love it so far and looking forward to more. Jesse is a cool character, good to see him happy. Glad to see Michael is as much an idiot as ever. And of course, I love that Justin and Brian are finally truly together. Cannot wait to see how things continue to develop for them. What could possibly be coming up next?

Author's Response: Oh I hope you love what's to come. Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2014 03:57 AM · On: Later Brian

Jesse has Mikey pegged right.  So Justin is a professor?  Interesting.



Author's Response: Well Michael has Debbie, he doesn't need another person coloring the world for him when it's not true. Yes, Justin is a professor. Sexy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2014 03:40 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

You had me going, I thought this might be a Mikey/Brian story.  Everyone seems down on Brian except for Jesse.  Mikey sounded an awfull lot like Justin did in season 3.



Author's Response: Yeah but then Justin came to his senses and Michael will too, except it would be too late for him.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2014 06:10 AM · On: Midnight

Well I have just enjoyed my day off work reading all these chapters of this fic and I am loving it 👍💕 Thank you

Author's Response: Thank u so much will try to give you guys more soon.

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2014 05:05 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

OMG lol didn't even knew it was a Mpreg please don't let Michael get knocked up



Author's Response: I would never let that happen. And if he does...well it's not going to be by Brian. I can promise u that now.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 11:04 PM · On: Midnight

Glad you have begun updating. I'm a fan of your writing and am enjoying this one.  I like how brian and Justin are developing their relationship and how Mikey seems to be having second and third thoughts about Brian.   Happy Jesse has figured it out he is a great character to put in as Brians best friend.  Is this still going to be an Mpreg?  Look forward to more updates!  



Author's Response: Yes definetely an mpreg. That is coming soon

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 09:00 PM · On: Midnight

I'm very glad you are back, I missed you very much and I thought your stories would remain unfinished forever. I love this one, I was crushed when I realized chapter nine disappeared and I don't have it saved. Now I changed that, though! I saved it, so if something happens, I will have all of the story.

I loved this chapter! Do you plan to update frequently?

Welcome back!



Author's Response: I am hoping that I can update frequently.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 04:10 PM · On: Midnight

Omg...I'm glad somebody figured it out lol. And yeah Mikey is being a big asshole when he has no right to be, after all he's the one who broke up with Brian in the first place. I really don't see how Ben is putting up with it.

Author's Response: There are so many things that are going to happen. Don't worry Michael will see the big mistake he made.

Reviewer: Flora (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 03:13 PM · On: Midnight

Very good story. love it



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 12:35 PM · On: Midnight

Thank you thank you thank you... God, this is like my favorite fic ever. Hope not to wait too long for the next update ;)



Author's Response: I can't make any promises.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 11:51 AM · On: Midnight

I never liked new characters but I love Jesse and Francis. I want to read as much of them as Brian and Justin.

I'm hoping Jesse will be the one telling Michael to stop his shit. Jesse not yelling at him (like a good Novotny) would clue Michael on how serious his little brother is. Jesse would leave Justin out because it's none of his or Michael's business what place he has in Brian's life.

I'm sick of how the gang is still treating Brian after a year. He did nothing wrong but it was still his fault. I'm just glad Brian is entouring himself of people not envolved with the gang. I so want the gang (Lindsay, Debbie and Michael) to realize that Brian doesn't need them. The way Debbie is with him make me think of Joan. She's not happy with him. She let him know every chance she gets. She makes him feel like he owe her for whatever fucked up reason. It's like she knows what hurts Brian the most and she uses it againts him because she thinks he hurt her son when it really was Michael who fucked up.

Am I a bad person to want Jesse and Francis to only tell Brian about their engagement ? It would be easy because only Francis has a ring.



Author's Response: Jesse is a family guy he wouldn't keep his engagement secret. Don't worry people will see Michael for what he is. They will come around.

Reviewer: Tania (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 07:31 AM · On: Midnight

Yes I remember this chapter. When's the next chapter 



Author's Response: Hopefully soon.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 06:49 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

Great to see you posting again. Welcome back. TAG



Author's Response: I am very happy to be back and posting. Happiest camper!!

Reviewer: Nadine (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2014 02:59 PM · On: My Heart Beats

Your stories are all great! I love how you make each one of them very unique yet interesting. Please update soon. I'm going to read all your stuff.. It's addicting.

thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: You are welcome. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cassey (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 09:13 PM · On: My Heart Beats

I hope you would update this!



Author's Response: I am working on it.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 05:28 PM · On: My Heart Beats

When are you updating ch. 10 and reposting ch.9? I hope you dont abandon this.  I really love your Justin. Cant wait for him to be introduced to Brian's world. And of course the mpreg part. Pls. Pls.



Author's Response: Its all coming. The chaper is lost so I have to make a new one. Coming soon!

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 12:26 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Hi,

 

i love the story.

 

I'm loving Brian and Justin, and there relationship progression. I'm loving Jesse being a friend to Brian. I wish that Michael would leave Brian alone and let him be happy. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Courtney



Author's Response: Hey girl, thanks for reviewing. There will b more soon. Hope u like it as much.

Reviewer: dorrit (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 01:39 AM · On: My Heart Beats

I think a chapter is missing here. Please repost if possible.



Author's Response: Not possible. Writing a new one.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 08:33 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Hi! Seems like there was a problem with the harddrive of Midnight Whispers, your ch. 9 got lost. Please repost, then possibly ch. 10? ;D



Author's Response: I just realized this and now I. Will have to rewrite a whole new chapter. Dont know what happened.

Reviewer: hotcat (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2013 03:47 PM · On: My Heart Beats

...wonderful story



Author's Response: Thank u so much...

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 08:59 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Hope you haven't forgotten this! Really looking forward to your update. Love your Justin and Brian. Let's have your Justin pregnant!!! Hehehe...



Author's Response: Ha ha I know you guys are waiting for more. I am working on it.

Reviewer: silverstein.moss@gmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2013 05:28 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Love the story, hope you write another chapter soon.



Author's Response: I am working on it. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: Azzurra (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 01:24 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Aww, I love this story soooo much. Justin and Brian are SO sweet :)

Please keep writing :D



Author's Response: I promise that they will keep being oh so sweet together.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 12:03 PM · On: My Heart Beats

I've kinda been lurking for a bit and haven't been commenting on this as you wrote. But, I just wanted to let you know I'm reading and enjoying. Please keep writing. TAG



Author's Response: Hey thanks for letting me know. There will be more soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 10:46 PM · On: My Heart Beats

Great story, would like to read more ,,,satisfactory chapter but so many loose ends to tie up, would therebe a happy ending for them, how would the gang react??? please update soon :)



Author's Response: Doesn't matter how the gang responds all that matters is that b n j push throught it all. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 11:16 AM · On: My Heart Beats

So, when will Justin get pregnant? We all know Brian is in denial on how he feels for the blonde, so of course we want him to be pushed to go to the next level. Cant wait too for the 'family' of Brian to learn about Justin. A pregnant Justin! ;D.

It would also be sort  of a slap on Michael and make him to completely move on with Ben. I dont really think Mikey is in love with Brian, he's just one of those people who want his former minions to always be following him.  And what a boost to his ego that The Kinney is still pining over him, or so he thought. At least I dont't think he's truly in love with Brian, I just dont like Ben to get hurt. Ben has always been a favorite of mine. Hehe!



Author's Response: I think yoy are going to like a lot of the things that are soon to happen. Othets are going to shock you and hopefully you like them. Brian will start telling peoplr about Justin soon.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 06:05 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Great chapter. Look forward to more. Soon?! 



Author's Response: Thanks. I will try to update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Smackcat (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:07 AM · On: My Heart Beats

I only have one question - when will the rest of Brian's "friends" meet Justin?

 



Author's Response: It will be soon. I promise...little by little they will all find out. Thanks for reading. Hugs.

Reviewer: didi (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 06:02 AM · On: My Heart Beats

raally hot chapter!(can I ask why Brian is mostly the one that gets the rim job in your story?what about Justing lovely ass? ;) )



Author's Response: I think is because he needs a bit convincing so that Justin tops him.???? I dont know. But I will let Justin have some of that as well. Ha! Take care.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 05:20 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Hi, Draccone! I’m a big fan of your stories, though I was afraid you decided not to come back to them. I’m thrilled they you seem rather determined to finish those stories which are in progress, but even seeing just a few more chapters already makes me happy. I can’t even tell which story is my favorite – almost all of them are exciting and plain perfect to me.

I decided to write my comment in “On a pathway to you” topic because it’s the one which’s been updated recently. The story is getting better and better, I can’t wait to see what’ll become of Brian and Justin’s relationship. It’s understandable that Brian is afraid of being hurt again, but still, he is risking losing the soulmate he has found in Justin. I’m sure one day he’ll be finally able to accept that what they share is love, but I’m afraid it might be already too late. Justin right now is so in love he is ready to accept almost everything, and, well, in the last chapter Brian behaved almost perfectly, but I wonder how long it’ll last. I *loved* the episode with Michael! Great, finally Brian showed him that despite his betrayal hurt, it didn’t destroy him, and in fact, now he is more alive than ever! I sooo can’t wait to see the moment when Michael’ll find out about Justin! You described all of that just perfectly, I’m looking forward to the next update! BTW, Brian and Jesse’s interactions are always interesting, the friendship they share is rare and real. There is only one thing that I generally don’t like – I can never, *never* imagine either Brian or Justin calling each other “baby” – no matter how close they are, how they love each other. In fact, I can’t imagine any man being called so, but maybe it’s so weird to me because I’m from Ukraine, and our equivalent of “baby” is *so* pathetic and disgusting that I just can’t get it in books. Anyway, those Brian and Justin you write about are your characters, and whatever you feel they should or shouldn’t do is certainly right. Thank you for the great story! I don’t like m-pregs, didn’t see even one story which I would like with it, but I feel this one is going to become one. I’m interested in how it’ll all go.

“Deadly killers” is probably the only one story ever that left me staring incredulously at the page for maybe ten minutes. I was SO shocked, I just can’t describe it to you! Later I told everything about it to my friends and relatives, because I felt I *must* share it with someone! I never expected the killers to actually be Brian and Justin! I was angry at the murderer for trying to set them up, at the detectives for suspecting them, and when the explanation began, I was reading with my mouth agape. Till the last words I was damned sure it’s just a mistake, some kind of a trick, and then the realization hit me… you’re incredible! The story is shocking and amazing… usually I’m not into those kinds of things, main characters – killers, but here it fits perfectly! It’s a pity Ethan wasn’t killed by Brian:) Jealousy crime, like Justin’s – it’s always captivating. The most intriguing and shocking murder for me was Daphne’s, Brian’s motives are so well-thought and rational here… No more words, just applauses.    

“Dreaming about us” – oh-oh, this one is definitely on the top of my list. Everything about this story is breathtaking, I couldn’t stop until I reached the end. The story-line is unusual, and I simply adore Brian here. He is so possessive, so dark, so obsessed with Justin… and he loves him so much. I was furious when he decided to sell him, and impossibly relieved when he changed his mind. The Justin you described here… it’s really not possible not to fell in love with him. It was sad that sometimes he hurt Brian so much, but Brian hurt him too, and well, the situation is so complicated here… Justin couldn’t feel free for a single moment, he couldn’t even be sure that he truly loves Brian, because what if his feelings appeared only because of the lack of choice? His departure was painful for both of them, but it also was necessary. And it made his coming back much more meaningful! I love absolutely all story-lines here, with Ethan and Michael and Brendon especially. I enjoy re-reading this great story immensely, though as long as there is no sequel, I prefer to stop at the moment after the incident with Brendon, when Brian and Justin made up and Justin is sleeping while Brian is watching him:) I love this story, thank you so much for it, it’s so powerful!

“From Utter Hell To Delicious Torment” was the first story about teenage Brian and Justin that I’ve read. At first I didn’t want to – I just wasn’t interested, but then decided to give it a chance. And – no surprise here, you have completely changed it for me! Now it’s one of my most favourite topics! I love the way Brian and Justin got closer, fell in love with each other, I love how Brian didn’t want to accept it for so long. The story with the brother is also interesting! Thank you, I really enjoyed it!

“Forbidden Love” was probably the first story of your stories that I’ve read. I was being distracted all the time, then decided I didn’t like it and stopped reading, After a few months, when I already knew who you are and that your stories always got me excited, I decided to try reading it again. And – I absolutely LOVED it! I didn’t want it to end, it’s so interesting and complicated. Michael pissed me off most of times, and I support Brian and Justin absolutely – not because they’re the main characters - for example, I admit that they are just insane in Deadly killers, though I love them anyway, can’t help it. They just loved to spend time together at first, so why breaking up with Michael and hurting him deeply if this relationship won’t lead them anywhere? But then everything turned more serious, they fell in love with each other… really, I don’t know what I’d if I were them. So I love how you described it, every single moment of it. The marriage, the accident – *everything*.  Perfect!

“Sangre Azul” is the story I missed at first… as usual, your ideas are stunning! I was mad at Justin in the first part, he was *so* irritating! I couldn’t even imagine how Brian’ll end up falling in love with him. Stupid, spoiled brat… but then you started to show the real him, his many-sided complicated character, you explained the reasons for his behaviour, and I fell in love with him as well! I’m glad things with Craig cleared up a bit, though he was disgusting in most cases… but Brian is strong, and with Justin – even stronger. They’ll manage to build everything together, I’m sure of that.

“Just you and me” – oh, this one is on the top of my list too! I can’t count how many times I’ve read it. It captured my attention from the first few lines… the first Brian and Justin’s meeting – wow! I’ve never seen anything like that, Justin SO resembles Brian! Just as ballsy, arrogant, brutally honest. I didn’t think I would like the story with basically two Brians, but you as always made me fall in love with it from the very beginning:) Justin may behave like Kinney, but he is his own person, with his demons and feelings. I love every moment, all interactions between them, I laughed for maybe thousand of times! And Michael… oh boy, he REALLY pisses me off! I’m so happy every time Brian stood up to him, protecting Justin. I’m so excited that now you’re back, and you’ll probably finish this fantastic story! I can’t wait to see how they will sort all their problems out! Thank you a lot for this amazing thing!

“The Agony Of The Condemned” was the last of your stories which I’ve read. It’s just… *wow*, so bloody, cruel, hot and mysterious! I was intrigued with the very beginning, though at first I thought Brian was a crazy beast (and I totally love him this way!), while Justin – almost his victim. But then things began to clear up, to get complicated… I don’t know how you manage it, but once again I just couldn’t stop reading! Fantastic, amazing, incredible – I’m at a loss for words here! I’m not into riddles, so I can’t wait to see how Brian and Justin will find their peace (sort of it) again. And, I *hope* they will, they so deserve it.

Thank you one more time for all your hard work, your inspiration and your talent! You are definitely one of my three favourite authors here!:)    

 



Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for your review. It makes me really happy. I know is weird what you are saying about Brian calling Justin baby. But he only does it when they are in private. All othet times he would not. To me is an endearment, people use it a lot. I like it. I am very happy you enjoy Deadly Killers. Had such a great time writing it...sometimes I wish I had made it longer. A lot of people were guessing. Not too many people even suspected the boys. Lol. Dreaming About Us came as a surprise even to me. It took me for a ride and things ended in ways that even surprised me. I let the muse take over. Ha ha. I am actually working on the sequel. Trying to finish everything else before I start posting new things. From Utter Hell To Delicious Torment...I had such a good time writing this story. Especially when it was moments where Brian left his guard down where Justin was concerned. Glad you gave it a chance. Forbidden Love...this story was so good. The boys fell in love and even thought they tried to stay away from each othet so they wouldn't hurt Michael, it was just not possible. Had so much fun glad you enjoyed it. Belie e it or not I just finished readi g Sangre Azul. I can't get tired of it. Brian and Justin being in love was priceless. Need I to say more? Lol. Just You And Me...I love this story with a passion. There is so much more to come. Hope you enjoy every bit of it. I love to write for Agony Of The Condemned. It lets me make stuff up more freely althought it can get a bit tricky at times. Thanks for your wonderful words. Hope you enjoy the rest of my stories as much. Take care.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 01:15 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Another great!!! chapter.  Lovin this story so much.:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  There will be more soon.  Hope that you like what's to come.  Take care, L.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 12:13 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Story very good.  I was depressed for a while.  It's too bad Brian has to be kicked in the seat of his pants to do what he should do by his friends.We'll see where this goes now.  He always seems to come out on the good end for whatever reason.  Wil  be waiting for an update.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I guess Brian is lucky like that.  Lol.  I'll try to update this soon.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 05:51 PM · On: My Heart Beats

I just think it so great that it's Cynthia who first find out about Justin. I think of her as Brian's real good friend and not only his assistant. She has his best interest.

It seems that Brian is happier without having the gang knowing all about his relationship with Justin.

It's annoye me that Debbie is angry with Brian when it's her dear Michael who "cheated" on Brian with Ben. Brian always was Brian, Debbie and Michael knew it from the beginning.

Best moment : the way Brian told Michael he's over him. I was like : "YEAH ! YEAH ! YEAH ! In your face, Bitch !" Was it too much ? Maybe, but I don't care. You made my day.



Author's Response:

Did you just see how happy Brian is?!!  *Dies smiling* I am loving writing this story more than anything.  Yay.  I know, everyone went against Brian even thought that Michael was the one that fucked up.  But don't worry, what comes around goes around, goes around.  Michael will get his.  His whole world crush to pieces because Brian was able to give love and so many things, but not for him.  Oh hell no.  Just for our lovely professor.  *wink* Loving this story.  I'm so into it.  Glad you happy because of this chapter.  I will try to update more soon.  Take care, D.

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 02:08 PM · On: My Heart Beats

My heart really beats with this chapter! Good job! Keep it up! :) :) :)

Author's Response:

I totally love the name of this chapter.  It was so good.  Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think.  I will bring more soon.  Take care!

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 11:54 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Finally Brian said what I was hoping he would say to Michael. Things are progressing well the mere fact Brian isn't even the slightest bit worried about people seeing him walking hand in hand with Justin says it all.

 

Amazing chapter



Author's Response:

I know isn't it great.  When the muse hits...she does a great job.  Brian telling Michael off was great.  So good.  Still loving it.  Brian is scared shitless of his relationship with Justin but at the same time he's not going to let anyone tell him what to do or who he can or cannot date.  He's really falling for Justin even if he can't see it now.  Thanks for reviewing.  Love it.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 11:22 AM · On: My Heart Beats

OMG I hesitated in reading this since you started it back in 2009. You have some seriously loyal fans here. Please don’t let Michael be the pregnant one to Brian as that would just make me throw up. Sorry but I’m not a Michael fan and I have trouble believing Brian would ever be with him. I love the way Brian put him in his place and I’m enjoying where you have the fic right now. I just wanted to let you know how much I was enjoying this and looking forward to the next update.

Cheers.

Author's Response:

I always told everyone that I will finish my storis no matter what.  And I mean it too.  Sometimes RL throws me for a spin but I promise you I will always be back.  I love this...VERY MUCH.  Lol.  Thanks for the great words.  I will try to update soon.  Hugs!

Reviewer: cedon (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 07:50 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

love this story !!! I'm dying to know what will happen next ... =D



Author's Response:

I do too!!!!! I'm having a blast writing this story.  I think that pretty much it will be angst free, is too good to damage with all the drama.  This is going to be a good ride for Brian and Justin.  Not too easy, not too hard.  Just plain right.  Thanks for reviewing.  Take care, Cedon.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 07:31 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Ok so Mikey needs to get over himself already. Brian has more than moved on with his life and Mikey needs to accept it.

More soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Oh, just you wait until he finds out about Brian and Justin.  Then he will keel over.  Yay! Bet you will love that.  I will try to update it soon.  Working on it as of now.  Later, JP.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 06:59 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Thank you for updating!!!! I so love this story!!!

"I'm over you," Brian told him. "If I wanted you back I would have taken you back because by the looks of it, it wouldn't have been much of an effort.” LOOOOOLLLL!

Oh young LOVE!!!! So sweet!!! Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

I so totally loved writing that part!!!  Take that Michael!  Now, don't you think Brian and Justin are just the cuttest.  They are soooo totally in love with each other.  But still the breaks are on and I am taking things as slow as I can.  Then after that don't be surprised into the moster Brian turns.  Well, love monster.  Ha, ha.  I think it would be really good.  Nothing too crazy.  Just moments with Justin.  Ah, can't wait to go write it all down.  Take care, A.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 06:29 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Wow, hot chapter. 

I agree with Cynthia. Justin is the perfect guy for Brian. :)

Looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Yes, yes, yes.  I love writing this story.  I think I said that before.  But it's important and needs to be said again and again.  Lol.  I will try to update soon.  Much more to come.  And all sooooo good.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2012 08:51 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

I am in love with this story!!
Impatiently waiting for an update.
-britinified

Author's Response:

I am so in love with this story too!!!! I am so happy to hear that you want more.  I am writing for it as we speak.  The muse hit me hard.  Yay! Take care, B.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2012 09:43 PM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

I don't know why on earth people think that it will/should be eventually a Jesse/Brian LOL.(maybe because Justin comes later). I just find the idea particularly -highly- disturbing.

I'm so glad that you didn't conceive your story that way. Jesse and Brian's friendship is what Michael and Brian's relationship should have been if Mickey was not in love and obsessed with his best friend. They are brothers and best friends and Brian needs a friend who is not expecting anything from him or judging him but just wants the best for him. 

It's so refreshing to see Brian in a big brother role!And Jesse is just adorable!!!

You are doing a great job!!!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes, it is so nice to hear this.  Finally someone sees their relationship for what it is.  I was starting to think that it was just me.  Lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I will be updating more soon and hope you like it.  Take care.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 07:55 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

I don't get it. Justin doesn't like seeing Brian with other guys but is willing to put up with it? I'm begining to understand Mikey a little better now. That's how a Ben can happen.

Hey, where is the mpreg?

Author's Response:

Yeah, I understand what you're saying but Justin prefers to have Brian that way than not having him at all.  But just you wait, while Brian wasn't ready or willing to make changes for Michael...well, he will for Justin, all on his own, without being pushed.  At his own pace.  The mpreg will come, we're only on chapter seven.  Let's take it slow here.  Lol.  Take care.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Without Even Realizing It

I still like Jesse but Justin is starting to look good.

Author's Response:

You think so? LMAO.  It IS a Brian and Justin story.  Just letting that out there. Hope you enjoy what's to come.  Take care.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 04:56 AM · On: Chance Meeting

Idon't see how Brian screwed up his relationship with Mikey.

I thought Brian and Jesse would have slept together by now.

Author's Response:

Lol...u know, I got to read this again.  Because everyone keeps saying the same thing.  Lol.  Brian and Jesse are not going to be together.  No.  No.  No.  And...no.  Lol.  Don't you people have ever had a friend that was just really close.  Or is it just me?  Thanks for reading and reviewing and letting me know what you thought.  Later.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 04:53 AM · On: Later Brian

I wondered where Justin was. Jesse still looks promising.

Author's Response:

What?! No.  No...Jesse is like a little brother for Brian.  I mean...is it that you guys want Brian and Jesse together?  I'm just wondering now.  I have no clue what the fuck is going on anymore.  Lol.  Later.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 04:44 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

"For a person like him it shouldn't be so hard to forget the man but he was having more trouble than he thought."

I could not understand why I wasn't familiar with this story and then I read further. I must have been turned off by the Michael/Brian relationship. I still decided to persevere and must say I love Jesse. I'm surprised it's not Jesse/Brian.

Author's Response:

Is not Jesse/Brian but you guys are just making me wonder.  Mmm, should I make it a Jesse and Brian and some point.  I don't know.  Like a mistake somewhere in this path or something.  A night of too much alcohol and drugs and .... something else.  I don't know.  LMAO.  But...then again...after this...ther will be no more mistakes between Brian and Justin.  So....sorry that is done.  But I think that's a good thing.  Right?  I think I'm babbling.  Take care.

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 06:37 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I want more of this please !!!



Author's Response:

And more is coming soon.  Thanks for reading it and liking it.  Later.

Reviewer: Carmel (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 09:41 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

i'm really liking your story so far. Keep up the great work



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much and I will.  I will give you guys more soon.  Later.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 07:55 AM · On: Chance Meeting

I love ben in the show!! However I hate him in this story and strangely I love it. It's good to see him not zen and wise (and boring sometimes)!!! But a little bit crazy!!! He can keep his Michael!!



Author's Response:

Ha, ha.  Yeah, he can totally have Michael.  And then again...that's not going to happen! Ohhhh, now I have you wondering why, don't I? Lol.  Well, soon enough...later than now...of course...you will find out.  Take care.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 07:51 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

Poor Brian!!! They didn't even wait for him to recover....Melanie is just awful!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah I know.  But you know what...sit back and relax...a bit FUCK YOU ALL...is coming.  Yay!!!  Well, those who deserve it of course.  Lol.  Hugs.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 07:44 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I'm lost!!!! Is Gus Brian's son in this story because they don't really interact?!!! Maybe I missed something (sorry)!!! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, he is.  And you will see more of that soon.  Promise.  You know what's funny....when I was writing chapter seven I was stuck.  I was thinking about Brian and Gus and I for the life of me couldn't remember if Gus was even here.  I'm bad.  Lol.  But then I read the whole thing again and it was fresh in my head and I was like Gus and Brian need more time together.  Lol.  And here you are talking about it.  HA! More soon.  Later.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 06:43 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Thanks for updating!!! Glad Connor was there to help Brian take the right decision!!!! Loved it! Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was going to have Brian and Connor be together but then...that's so predictable.  You know.  I wanted something fresh.  Someone that has gone through what Brian went and still believes that no matter what there is hope out there.  Connor will be good to Brian.  You will see.  Hugs.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 03:59 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I usually don't read b/m stories,but I really like this one. Glad b/j are together.

Author's Response:

Oh, I am the same.  Always remember when you're reading my stuff. I'm a b/j fan one hundred percent.  So that's always a plus.  He, he.  Take care hope to hear your thoughts on what's to come.  Later.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 10:50 PM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

I am glad Justin and Brian worked things out. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Yes, this is a good direction for them.  Let's see what happens next.  Whoo hoo.  All but good things to come.  Later.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 02:40 PM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

I must admit I was a bit trepidatious about reading this fic because of the B/M pairing ( no offense to all you brikey shippers out there) I just couldn't imagine those two getting married.

I'm sooooo glad I decided to give it a chance, I love how the characters are introduced and their relationship to one another clearly defined. I read all seven chapters in one sitting and now I'm hungry for more.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

Hey, I am with you on that.  I couldn't stand a wedding between B/M.  I would die first.  Lol.  But sometimes my muse does crazy things to play with us and get me going.  Lol.  I am happy you gave it a chance too.  There will be more and I hope you enjoy it as much as you have so far.  I'll try to be fast.  Hugs.

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 09:17 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Great chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  There will be more soon.  Hope you like it too.

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 09:01 AM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Welcome back its been ages. Still it was worth the wait amazing chapter and this is a good step for them just hope nothing happens to fuck it up.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I will try my best to keep these two on the right...path.  (winking).  Now, what other people do...that's another story.  Lol.  But don't worry too much.  Maybe a little bit of light angst but that is it.  Promise.  Take care. 

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 06:23 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

SO GLAD YOU ARE BACK!! I love your writing :D:D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I am so happy to be back.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2011 10:27 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

Hello

I'm a big fan of your stories this one look so good and promising. I hope you can update soon, one day, next year, soon please. I'm fully aware that life is complicated sometimes but please update soon. That's your fault if I'm impatient your stories are just great!!! Take care

And COME BACK!!!!!



Author's Response:

He, he, he.  Thanks so much for these words. Like to hear that you guys are enjoying this.  I will try to post soon for this one story, working on something for it.  Thanks for all the support.  Later, T

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2011 05:30 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

I miss you my talented friend! I won't ask when you're coming back and will just wait patiently, because I have a feeling that one day soon all your stories will be updated and you will continue your lovely writing. Take care and remembered that a talent like yours is rare and you're truly missed!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much for saying that.  It means a lot to me.  Well, I will be trying to update soon before anything else happens and I'm not allowed to.  Lol.  There always something.  Like my grandmother says, if I'm not in jail they are looking for me.  He, he, he.  Hugs!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 03:51 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

love this story - it would be so much fun to see these two continue to find their way to each other - so sorry it was never finished, but it's never too late!

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

That is right.  Better late than never.  Sorry, I got internet and then moved and lost it for a while.  Not to mention all the crazy things that go on in my life. Take care.

Reviewer: Jack Dorff (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 10:22 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

Just read a "On A PathWay To You" and enjoy it.I must admit i do prefer reading about Brian and Justin relationship,so i wasnt too sure about the introduction of the new chacacter Jesse.Less of him in the future would be goodand more of my favoutie guys

 

Is there goin to be a hotter sequel?



Author's Response:

Just trying something new.  I will make sure though that you get enough of Bri and Jus soon.  Thanks for reading this.  I don't know about a sequel just yet.  Love when you guys review, keep them coming.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2011 11:16 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

what you gave to the QAF fan-fiction is more then I can say,RIP Draccone!



Author's Response: thanks for that, but i'm not going anywhere just yet. very sorry that i haven't updated.

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:00 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

This story is heart-breaking... Seriously, you're making me cry! I just don't get the fact that those assholes are taking parts and that they let Brian alone(well, except for Jesse)... At least Justin's here now, so it's going to be better...right? Right??! Argh! Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response: don't go crazy. everything will be okay. i will try to update soon.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 07:37 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

Will you be finishing this story?



Author's Response: yes i wll.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2010 01:34 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

Please please please finish this story... I can't wait to see where you take the boys on this ride of theirs.



Author's Response: i will try to update soon. thanks for being so interested.

Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:24 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

Great no wait let me put that in better words AWSOME STORY xD

Are you ever going to update it??
LOve
Jill <3



Author's Response: thank you very much for that. i will update as soon as i can.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:39 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I hope you had a good xmas. Hopefully you will update this and rescue what's left soon :)



Author's Response: that's the plan. i'm going to try to finish every wip because it's been a while.

Reviewer: Sammie (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 07:51 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

please update soon



Author's Response: i will try my best.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:57 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

I just re-read this story. Still love it too... Are you updating soon?? I hope so because you have a great story here :o)



Author's Response: i'm so sorry that you guys have been waiting for so long. i never meant for that to happen.

Reviewer: Tanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:24 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I like this story very much and hope for an update soon



Author's Response: thank you so much and i will try my best to do so.

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:38 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I'd love an update :)



Author's Response: hope you enjoy whats to come.

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:34 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I'm still hopeing for an update soon :)



Author's Response: sorry i haven't been around.

Author's Response: sorry i haven't been around.

Reviewer: Anabelle (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:30 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I love this story, update soon.



Author's Response: thank you so much for letting me know.

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:43 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I just read this story again, it's so great. I am ready for a new update :)



Author's Response: i know, i know and i feel so awful for having neglected this story as well as the others

Author's Response: i know, i know and i feel so awful for having neglected this story as well as the others

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:15 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I really need an update :)



Author's Response: i'm so sorry that you have had to wait

Author's Response: i'm so sorry that you have had to wait

Reviewer: Cate (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:54 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

This is a super fantastic story. I hope you update soon.



Author's Response: wow, thanks so much. will try to keep it as good.

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:58 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I need more of this story, it's so addictive :)



Author's Response: i like to hear that. soon more will come.

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:11 AM · On: He's A Great Guy

oh please please please update soon!



Author's Response: i will try my best...

Reviewer: Annabelle (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:34 PM · On: He's A Great Guy

I love that each chapter Brian and Justin are getting closer and falling for each other even more :) Update soon



Author's Response: everyone else is going to have to eat their hearts out, specially michael.

Author's Response: everyone else is going to have to eat their hearts out, specially michael.

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