Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2017 04:52 AM · On: My Heart Beats

I love this fic so much I'm reading it over again

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. I will try to get more out.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2017 06:57 AM · On: Totally Worth It

So glad Francis got the closure he needed. Glad Ethan's not a piece of Sh#t lol
Brian and Justin as new parents Love it!!!! So glad the weasel Michael ain't around!.
OMG!!! A Wedding is coming!!!! whoo-hoo!!!!

I'm need.D an Update stat!!!!

Author's Response: I feel so horrible that all of you have been waiting for an update for... forever. It's not easy now that the kids are bigger. I never thought I was needed that much. Lol. I will try to post something before the year is over. Lol.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2017 05:03 PM · On: Making An Entrance

Who Hoo!!!! The baby is here!!!! Yea!!!!!!!!!!!
Love it!!! Thank you!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your excitement is contagious. Yay!!! There will be more soon and I hope you like it as much.

Reviewer: Belladonne (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 12:17 PM · On: Making An Entrance

Oh, you are cruel!!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for Connor to come home, all I get is a phone call, lol. Then you always seem to make me hate Michael less.  He reacted perfectly.  I even feel bad for Francis. Like I said, you're cruel. Lol

The baby is here!!! So happy, I love the pregnancy in this story, lots of fun and drama. 

My ending wish list is short, some Brian and Justin as parents and some Jesse and Connor happy. No pressure, but I'm expecting something along the lines of kiss in the tide scene from From Here To Eternity, lol.

Love the story, love you and Thanks!!!

Author's Response: I am not cruel... it's the muse. I keep telling you guys this. *Grins* I know you want to see Connor. So do I... just wait a little bit longer. He's making an appearance soon. I promise. Michael just got caught up in a bad situation and his worst qualities came up raging wild. Or something. I feel horrible for Francis... but just you wait. Kids these days always jumping the gun. Lol. The baby is here. He's going to give them a run for their money. Lol. I will try my best to make the reunion memorable. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love it when you guys write me. I get super motivated to make your wishes come true, all of you guys. Later, T

Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2017 05:03 PM · On: Making An Entrance

Yay a new chapter awesome yay baby is here even though I don't like Michael still a good brother to Jesse 

Author's Response: Yeah, Michael does have his moments. As long as he stays away from Brian we are all happy. Lol. There will be more scenes with the baby. I think you guys are going to like it. Thanks for letting me know what you thought. Later, T

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 08:11 PM · On: Making An Entrance

This story sounds like it will be really good, but I am not going to start reading it until it is completed.  I have started too many stories that have been left unfinished for years and to be truthful I am not that patient to wait for endings.  I keep a list of what I want to read when and if they are complete and I will review then.  I admire all the writers for the talent & imagination so very much, but being left for years with sporatic updates if at all is really difficult for the readers. And, sorry to say I just move on to read completed stories.  Keep writing & we will keep reading.

Author's Response: You don't have to be sorry at all. I am reader first, always been and I feel your pain. Stories that to this day I still check and nothing. That's why I always try to come back no matter what. One day it will be finished because other wise I won't be happy. This story at the most has about four chapters left. Then it's over. I hope that then you will read it and like it.

Reviewer: Hilja83 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2017 11:52 AM · On: The Truth Hurts

I really love this story, cant waith for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much for letting me know. I will try to give you guys much more soon. Hope you like!

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2017 11:00 PM · On: The Truth Hurts

I was So happy to see this updated! I actually reread the entire story and happy I did. I love this story. I'm glad Brian finally told Michael the truth. Michael's reaction was as I expected. If this doesn't make him move on I don't know what will. 

Omg Francis! I am so disappointed in him. I had a feeling the baby wasn't Jesse's. I thought the baby would have been the result of a mistake with a trick. I didn't expect he would have had an affair much less with the fiddler of all people. What was Francis thinking? I have to wonder if he never saw Jesse fall apart over Conner would he have left. And to let Jesse and the family believe that the baby was his was really low. What a coward Francis is! Jesse is better off without him. He and Conner will get together eventually and then he will be happy.

Awesome update, can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: It was about time that Brian did. He knew that somehow Michael wasn't going to react well to the news and that's why it took him so long. Part of him feels guilty of how things played out with Michael. Yet, he has never been so happy as he is now that he is with Justin. Oh, now everything will be coming out in the light little by little. Thanks so much for taking a moment to write me. I love to know what you guys are thinking and feeling. I try to read what you guys want or are expecting and sometimes that can be put into the story. There will be more soon. Take care.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2017 01:35 AM · On: The Truth Hurts

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am soooooooo glad I decided to check the site and so YOUR update!!!! Hell I've spent the last MFH trying, looking , searching for my password ! Hell I was ready to pull out the oujju board !!!!!!THANK YOU!!!!!!!! I have re read this story ABILLION times!!!!!!!! Hoping and praying for an update!!! I gave up and figured you fell off the planet or was sentence to prison for LIFE and that was a wrapp!!!!! on ALL yours stories!!!!!!
And to think I wasn't gonna surf the site haven't done so in Long time and the day I do!!!! What the hell man!!! He'll done froze over!!!!! Lol SssssOooooooo glad u are back!!!!! PLEASE STAY!!!!!!I I LOVE This STORY.

Author's Response: Yay. Hey while you check for stories I always check for reviews. I always worry about what you guys think. I didn't disappeared or got kidnapped... I just have four kids and they take most of my time. By the time is me time... I tend to fall asleep exhausted from the day's work. I will never give up until I finish all stories. Never! It might take me a while sometimes, but I will finish! Will be here trying to write more. Hugs!

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2017 08:20 PM · On: The Truth Hurts

SO WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Talk about emotional rollercoasters! Must have been exhausting to write. It was a bit exhausting to read. all in a good way of course! I can't imagine what everyone is going though. Deb worrying about all her boys, Michael being a dick. I get that he'd be hurt, but he's continually being a little prick. No idea what he's going to do now that he knows Brian's the one who's pregnant. 

then Jesse and Francis. I did NOT see any of that coming at all! WOW! Heart is wrentched in two for teh both of them. 

Thank goodness for Mother Taylor! ;) she so adores Brian! hehe. just love it. Really like that she and Craig are so supportive of B&J! Nice change from canon.

I know I said it was worth the wait, and it's true!! But....please don't take as long next time! :) :) :)

Cheers

Elaine

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate that. It was really hard to write. The ending kept changing again and again and I was so frustrating. I would write and think it was fine and then after a few hours had to change it. It took me days, weeks to finally be happy with the end product. Michael had no right to complain or demand anything from Brian. He really did a number on the brunet. I was happy that no one saw that coming. Everyone had theories, but I really wanted to awe and shock everyone. Yay! I think it was a good thing to have Craig and Jen be nice people. Ha, ha, ha, I will try to post soon. Thanks for your support.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 03:28 PM · On: The Truth Hurts

Great to see another chapter. I want to go back to the beginning and start all over again....

Another story I'd love to see a new chapter of is Resuce What's Left of Me. Keeping my fingers crossed...

Author's Response: Hey, I do that sometimes. I have to just to keep all stories straight and not cross any facts. That would get crazy. Thanks for writing me. Take care.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 02:59 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

Omg just found this and I have to be honest, I was really apprehensive about Brian & Michael being a couple. But then I was glad to see they broke up. Poor Brian, Michael is an idiot! Loving Jesse though! Will Justin be appearing soon? 

Author's Response: You have no idea the nightmares that I have just thinking about Brian and Michael. Ugh! Michael is an idiot! There will be more soon. I hope you really like it. Jesse is so great, isn't he? Take care. More soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 01:31 PM · On: The Truth Hurts

Wow this is some chapter.  Brian is happy and everyone now knows it.  Telling Michael went wrong.  Michael was the one who left Brian and now he thinks that Brian should drop Justin and that he and Brian should be together?  Not going to happen.  The one I really feel sorry for is Jesse.  At least he finally got to talk to Francis.  It's a shame that Francis fell for Ethan's fake words, now look what it got him.  Poor Francis.

Author's Response: I know right! Yeah, very wrong. I know, that talk between Francis and Jesse changed so many times. I thought I would never be able to post the chapter. I wanted it all to be perfect before I did. Kids playing the love game. Horrible. Hope you like everything that's coming. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 10:07 AM · On: The Truth Hurts

Omg your back missed your fics

Author's Response: thanks so much. miss you guys. miss writing. i was never gone, in my book. just not able to post and do anything for a while. i will try to update soon.

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2017 09:55 AM · On: The Moment Of Truth

Omg please keep writing/finish this story. It is so good. I love how Justin's parents are involved and supportive in his life. Such a good job. Please don't leave us hanging forever!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it would be a nice change. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2016 11:15 PM · On: The Moment Of Truth

Dear lordy woman...incredibly  long and involved chapter! Really really incredible though! I'm so glad you were happy with it. I have to admit I was dancing with joy seeing teh update. ! :)

The waiting at the hospital is always teh worst. the not knowing. Everyone must be terrified. Good that Daph is there to help ease everyone as much as she can. Connor looks preatty bad off. Hopefully he comes out of it OK. Looks to me theough, thatif he does live, he will have some lasting issues I'm sure. And recovery will take some time. thankfully he seems to have an amazing support network around him and of course tons of friends.

Can I just keep saying how much I am loving Jennifer and Craig's realtionship?! It's wonderful in this. Between each other as well as the one they are devloping with Brian. they obviously just adore him. That little blurb with Craig getting Brian apple juice instead if orange.just little things like that really touched me. Deb is obviously surprised by their acceptance, but perhaps if she'd accepted him as openly she would've seen it too. It seemed her acceptance was contigent on her son's happiness. I think though that she's really starting to open her eyes and will start to see the Brian that Craig adn Jennifer are seeing. that justin already sees. 

Am so glad that you told us how and why that truch ran them off the road. I knew it couldn't be michael, but I just couldn't figure anythng out that made sense except perhaps some homophoic ass. this guy came out of the blue!!! Hope they throw the book at him. Mind you, if connor doesn't make it, it'sll be murder, adn I'm assuming attempted murder of the others in the car. Oh man...those legal proceedings would be awful with everyone having to relive it. Sorry!! gettig far to ahead of myself here. My imagination took over. LOL

Francis is definitely a concern. He's bottling everything down. Not healthy at all. why was he keeping the pregnancy from Jess? did I miss something along the way? 

that last scene was gut wrenching. I was right there imagining Jesse' losing it over Connor. apparently his emotions run deeper that he or anyone else ever thought. I guess Francis is aware now. Oh man.that was harsh on all accounts. Jesse so obviously freaking out that he's unaware of anyone around him, and Francis havingw seen it all, knowing how Jess obviously feels for connor..

All in all in absolutely incredible chapter. Deliciously long. Fraught with so much emotion.

Absolutely bloody frigging brilliant!

Cannot WAIT for more.

Cheers

Elaine

Author's Response: I wanted this story free of drama but my muse she always has something up her sleeve. Lol. Take care.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2016 01:36 PM · On: The Moment Of Truth

Thank you for the update! I am happy that for the most part everyone was ok. Yes, I do feel like Francis is holding something back about not telling Jesse. My mind is coming up with all kinds of drama with that, lol.
I am Sooo looking forward to when Michael learns about the Brian's baby, Please have fireworks and the whole kit n caboodle on that one!!!

as always looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. Thanks so much for following this story.

Reviewer: Andre19Sol07 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2016 05:21 AM · On: The Moment Of Truth

Hola quiero Agradecer Mucho Porque Hayas Vuelto a Escribir sos Una de mis escritoras PREFERIDAS, siempre releo tus historias Porque Me encanta Sobre TODO Como escribis Las Escenas sexuales y El Hecho Que en Una historia narras Demasiadas Escenas de ESE Estilo. El Hecho De Que No haya dejado ningun comentario antes, es por mi idioma no se si lo entendes sino Lo Puedo traducir. Realmente amo todas tus historias, Pero Sobre TODO Esas en donde Brian se el ex de Michael y lo engaña con Justin. AUNQUE Tengo Que Reconocer Que hace 3 capitulos atras Que me enamore mas de la pareja de Jesse y Connor, Realmente queria matarte con El final del capitulo anterior ajajja. Y en Este Capitulo me tuviste con el Jesús en la boca, me llore TODO Porque por Un Momento pense Que Jesse se iba a quedar con Francis (estoy Empezando a odiarlo un poco a ese personaje, por El Hecho Que Sigue en la vida de Jesse) e Ibas a matar el personaje de Connor (seria bueno Tener imagenes de Ellos dos, eS una idea nada Mas no quiero Parecer entrometida). no me Hagas Sufrir Mas, porfa Que Connor se salve he Logrado Amar al personaje. ESA pareja Se esta robando la historia y me encanta Que Logres enamorar con Otros personajes y Parejas Solo espero Que no PASE Como con La Otra Historia En La Cual me enamore de la pareja de Chris y Michael y despues Micky se muere Porque ESA pareja tambien me fascinaba Por Eso entenderas El Miedo Que senti al leer el capitulo; AUNQUE Pensandolo bien todavia le PUEDE Pasar algo fatal a Connor, Como Que Francis podria  intentar matarlo. Pero creo que no serias Capaz, noo??? Bue .. me excedi Demasiado queria agradecerte Un Millon de Veces por volver a escribir, tenes un talento enorme para narrar historias; Esto No Lo Dejes Nunca Porque Sería una pena si lo hicieras. Millones de gracias por lo que haces saludos, besooos y mucha suerte.
PD: CONNOR NO ME DEJES A MI TAMPOCO YA QUE YO TAMBIEN AMO A ESTA MARAVILLOSA Y CANDENTE PAREJA. QUIERO VER UNA BUENA ESCENA DE SEXO ENTRE USTEDES. LOS AMOOOOO    

Author's Response: Gracias por tus palabras tan increible. Espero que te guste el nuevo capitulo.

Reviewer: Connie Melissa (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2016 09:21 PM · On: The Moment Of Truth

All I can say is DAMN!!!! You leave us hanging like THAT! Have you no heart? I am loving Connor and Jessie, still hating Michael, and really loving that Bria sees through his BS.

Author's Response: Brian has come a long way. He is a different person. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2016 08:51 PM · On: The Moment Of Truth

I love the story can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:29 PM · On: Murphy's Law

First off...........HOLY SHITBALLS!!!!!!! One hell of a cliffhanger! Desparate for your next update! Well done!! :)

Felt a tiney bit sorry for Michael, (but only for a second) when everyone was singing Justin's praises. It's hard when everyone loves your ex's new partner. I get that, but in all honesty, he really needs to let it go. I'm really not sure if he really does love Brian, or if he's just being territorial. Would he be feeling all that he is if Justin weren't in the picture? Would he and Ben even have split up? He might be get that he and Brian don't have a shot at a relationship anymore, but he still blames Justin. Hates Justin.

Justin had a terrific idea of what a healthy relationship is all about due to his parents. They are very happy together and accepting of him and it's obvious they adore Brian. the fact they can talk about Jenn's ex and Craig can accept talking about Connor's father. 

Boy, Connor and Jesse are certainly in a pickle. They seem to have very true and very strong feelings for each other. Glad Brian is staying out of it, not giving any advise. that could definitely turn around to bit him in teh ass at a later date. To top it all off Francis is hiding something as well I believe. Is he pregnant too or is it something else? You're good at this....making us wonder. :)

I know some are thinking the truck driver might be Michael, but i can't see it. He's an ass, but not at the risk of killing Francis, his brother's partner. I don't think he's malicious enough either. He may "hate" Justin, but I don't hink he's murderous. besides, where would he get a huge black pick up from? I definitely am curious though. What if was some homophobe from the gas station?? Am on the edge of my seat waiting for the update. Praying that all our boys are ok.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Author's Response: Totally blame the muse! All her. I promise. Ha, ha, poor Mikey. I can totally see your point. I don't think anyone likes being the ex and that's pretty much one of the reason why most people once they break up they go their separate ways. I think he might be one of those kids that plays with a toy and gets tired of it until someone else wants it. Now he's realizing that he lost it big time. Brian's heard and mind and body belongs completely to Justin. People are happy for them and Michael can't cope. Soon enough you will see how Craig and Jennifer are going to just spoiled Brian to no end. He will of course love it, who wouldn't? Lol. Justin will be part of that of course. Connor and Jesse had my head filled with so many fantasies, you have no idea. So many hot sex scenes swimming up in there. I'm itching to write it, but alas, we know that Jesse wouldn't hurt Francis like that. Connor being more mature understand that. He used to be like Brian and then found someone and he loved that person, except for him, things didn't work out. Now, he still tricks like the world is about to end, but he's single. He knows the rules if he were to get into a serious relationship and that's what he wants the most with Jesse. The answers to your questions will soon arrive. I'm happy you know that while Michael annoys the shit out of us and sometimes we want to deck him he wouldn't go to that extreme. He can say horrible things and think even worst ones, but he wouldn't go as far as physically hurting anyone, not to that magnitude. Promise that the muse is not going to be too cruel. Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Hugs!

Reviewer: carmen (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2016 06:39 PM · On: Murphy's Law

This is pure cruelty, that kind of cliff-hanger!

No, don´t do this to us! Wonderful chapter, bad ending. Let me guess, Francis is pregnant?

 

Author's Response: I know maybe a bit too over the top, but it's sooo good. Ha, ha. Is he? Tun, tun, tun, tun! Lol. I guess you will find out in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 03:50 PM · On: Murphy's Law

Ok girl, now is the time for me to offer up anything to your muse to write quickly.  What a cliffhanger!

Sandy

Author's Response: Ha, ha. Don't say that to a pregnant woman. With the craving alone, you will go broke. Don't worry, I know I don't update everyday, but I'm doing it fairly quick. Thanks so much for reading my story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 02:59 PM · On: Murphy's Law

My god what an ending to this chapter.  Who's driving that truck?  What secret is Francis keeping from Jesse? 

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're so intrigued. Well, next chapter is going to reveal all those questions. Hope you enjoy it. Is just around the corner.

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 06:14 PM · On: Pretty Sure

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! Number 13 has arrived! Outstanding chapter; can't wait for more.

And then, hopfully you will have time/desire to work on some of the other incompleted; your stories are really so good.

 

Author's Response: I am working on the next one. As soon as this is done or have more chapters done. I'l try to write something for the other stories. I haven't forgotten about them.

Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 09:58 AM · On: The Madness Begins

More please this is wonderful...although I do want to gunslap Mikey...ugh!

Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha. I know what you mean. I'll try to give you guys more soon.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 06:53 AM · On: Pretty Sure

I'm so glad they are on the same page now. I got worried for a second there. I really loved how you characterize Brian in this story and him being the pregnant one is a plus for me. I'm so excited for their announcement about the pregnancy, though I think they would keep it to themselves for a while, what's with having a crazy, jealous ex boyfriend running around. But I bet the ex would go ballistic.

Thanks for the update and I truly can't wait for the next one:)

Author's Response: Yay! Everything is falling into place. Yeah, for the most part I always get Justin pregnant and that's a lot of what you see in the stories out there. This time I turned the tables. I think Brian is just a strong to be having the baby.Oh my god. I'm working on the chapter. And I'm telling you right now there are so many people that are so happy about Brian and Justin's baby. I'll try to post it soon. Take care.

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2016 12:20 AM · On: Pretty Sure

i love this story, i hope you finish it.

Iam glad Brian finaly told Justin about the bayby-

Cant wait to see Michael reaction-

Plese dont take too long

Hugs

Author's Response: I am working really hard to get to the end. I am very happy to. Justin is so happy about it. Oh, Michael is probably going to die. Lol.

Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2016 01:28 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Capitulo Hermoso!!!

Author's Response: Un millon the gracias. Espero que te guste lo que va pasar pronto.

Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 10:27 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

It's a great story, only let down by grammar and spelling.

Author's Response: I am very sorry about that. I posted so fast that I missed a lot of things. I have been going back and fixing everything that I can. I always keep reading so anything that I find I will try to fix right away. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 03:06 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Now that was an interesting turn of events.  It's a good thing that Michael didn't hit Brian in the stomach.  I can understand Michael being mad, but he gave up any rights when he left Brian.  It's good that someone else knows about the pregnancy because Brian's going to need all the help he can get.  I have just one question, if Justin was using condoms how did Brian get pregnant?

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought so too. I'm so excited about it. You are so right. Michael didn't care about Brian then, only what he wanted. Well, he won't get what he wants anymore. Well, condoms are not one hundred percent secured. There are many reasons why u can still get pregnant even if you're using a condom. But there will be more in that matter.

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2016 12:32 PM · On: The Madness Begins

Understand where Michael coming from. but punching Brian in the face not cool omg always love feisty Justin omg Brian pregnant can't believe he's not going tell Justin yet Justin going to be pissed or Happy......you are doing such amazing job with this story and your other fics as well you and edom are my top Author in midnight whispers keep up the awesome work ;) 

Author's Response: Soon you will see where Justin gets that's feisty attitude. Don't worry he will tell Justin when the time is right. Thanks so much for the amazing words. I really love that. I will try to update more soon.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 04:20 PM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Woah....Ok, THAT was disturbing with Michael. I mean, not entirely unexpected, but I didn't think it would happen in the men's room. I don't trust Michael, (shocking I know) He's manipulative enough that he's going to do his best to cause trouble. I hope that brian is able to asuage Justin of any of his fears. That Justin becomes more confident in their relationship, and of course, that Brian doesn't do anything stupid. You'd think that Michael would grasp the idea of what love is. I mean, look at Ben, he loved Michael enought to sacrifice his own wants, for what Michael wanted. for Michael's happiness. Brian did teh same thing. He thought Ben would make Michael happy, thus let Michael go since he figured Ben could give Michale more than he could. I wonder if he understand that it's not gonna happen on Brian's part? Either way, he knows Michael's heart isn't in it anymore, and letting Michael go. Does Michael understand that concept? NOw. We already see different ways he's trying to manipulte things.

I know that Brian will stand for his relationship with Justin, but how long will it take for him to REALLY let Michael have it? What happened at the office and at Woodies is only the beginning. Brian intends to hve everyone around him so that it doesn't continue, but I don't trust Michael.

Ah well....I guesss we'll just have to see what you have up your sleeve.

Great chapter!! Loved it and love that you updated so quickly. It's nice that this story is being revitalized.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Author's Response: Michael is getting desperate and that's like the only place that he could get Brian by himself. He still thinks that Brian is like he used to be. Brian would fuck anyone anywhere but even if that was the case I don't think he would go for Michael anymore. Hell, Brian doesn't trust Michael even thought he wants their friendship to see the light of day. Oh soon enough there will be certain things happening and Justin will not have any doubt about his place next to Brian and he would fight for his man. Soon enough Brian will have to make a choice and things will never be the same. Please keep on reading and letting me know what you think. I love it when people pour their emotions towards the stuff I have written. Take care, T

Reviewer: Bufferhalsy 003 (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2016 03:07 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Why does Michael even want to get back with Brian?  He and Brian broke up for good reasons. And those reasons wouldn't change if they did become a couple again. 

Author's Response: He is like a little kid, you know. You know when kids stop playing with a toy and then they don't want it until someone else wants to play with it. Too bad for Michael, Justin doesn't think that Brian is a toy but a man and he's not letting go of it anytime soon...or ever!

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 05:12 AM · On: The Heart Wants What The Heart Wants

Awesome chapter but Michael a prick please dont make him fuck it up with Brian and Justin 

Author's Response: I would not let Brian let Michael fuck anything up. Lol. I hope you enjoy what it's to come. It's about to get intense. Later!

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2016 11:47 AM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

So, you're back! What a great news!!! I really love ALL your fics. I hope this time you'll finish this one because it's a good story. You're getting on my nerves with Michael... What an idiot. I really hope you're going to give him what he deserves and I hope that in this story Justin will be strong enough to shut Michael up FOREVER and I also hope Brian's family will be more supportive for him, I speak about Debbie. I don't like this Ben at all, he's a completely ASSHOLE. I think Ben and Michael deserve each other. I'm fond of Jesse, he's a very great and kind guy. I never understood what Brian found in Michael. PLEASE UPDATE SOON...

Author's Response: Thanks you so much for following this story. I'm working on it as much as I can. I am itching to work on other stories but I am not doing it, not until I finish this one. I plan on completing everything that I can before I start anything new. Oh and just so you know Justin will shut Michael for forever without even having to speak one word. You will love it. I will update chapter 12 pretty soon.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 02:17 PM · On: My Whole World

OMG!!!!!!! YOU ARE BACK!!!!
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE SAY YOU ARE BACK!!!!!!!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes I might be a bit slow but surely I'm here.

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2016 06:49 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I was so happy to find this update! Love your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on the next one.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 11:08 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

So happy you updated this. Really enjoying it, the Jesse character is wonderful.  Look forward to more. Soon? 

Author's Response: Well I'm happy you guys like it. I didn't realized how long it's been since I updated.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 10:08 PM · On: Midnight

Wow is right.  Brian and Justin together and now Jesse knows and is happy!  Michael is under the misreprehension that Brian should be pining for him.  That's so funny.

Author's Response: I know right. Like I see Brian pinning away for Justin. But for Michael... I don't think so.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 09:24 PM · On: I Want You To Be In My Life

Yay, even Connor thinks Mikey is being a dick.  Good to see that Brian listened and went after Justin.

Author's Response: Connor went through what Brian is going. Not exactly the same but the man has a clue.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 07:53 PM · On: Do Something

Jesse is going to try fixing Brian up?  Too bad he doesn't know that Brian is seeing Jesse's professor.  Like what you did regarding Jack's death.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought that since Michael was out of the ex he shouldn't be there. Originally it was going to be Jesse but the muse had other plans.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 05:50 PM · On: Chance Meeting

Michael ends it and everyone turns against Brian?  Fuck that.  At least Jesse sees things like they are.  The only problem is what if Jesse wants Brian for more than friends?  After all Brian is now planning to see Justin.  Ben was totally out of line!

Author's Response: Don't worry about that. I promise you right now that Jesse loves Brian like a brother.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 01:46 PM · On: When Things Don't Go As Planned

I feel sorry for Brian. Everyone seems down on him.  Except Jesse.  Michael seems to want his cake and to eat it too. 

Author's Response: Michael will get his. Hopefully you like what's to come.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 10:27 AM · On: My Whole World

I think I already told you that this is one of the best stories I have ever read, one of my favorites. I'm so happy you updated, thank you:)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm already working on more. The plan is to finish this before I touch anything else. That way I can concentrate on one thing at the time.

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 12:35 AM · On: Midnight

Thank you for sharing! Will there be more?

I like your original characters, Jesse and Conner!

Author's Response: Thank u. I am having a great time writing them.

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2015 11:35 PM · On: Midnight

God I am loving this story can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Hope u like it

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2015 04:17 PM · On: Midnight

I am sooo deliriously happy to see you updated this. No kidding!  If I'm not mistaken, there's a slight change in this chapter and I actually like it better than the first post of chapter 9.  If there werent any changes, well I have always listed this story as a "Hope to high heavens that this gets continued!!!", so I'm sure I love chapter 9 then and I love chapter 9 now. Looking forward to your chapter 10 and I  dearly hope you have your creative juices running and continue with this.

Author's Response: I have more time in my hands so hopefully I will be able to update more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2014 03:57 AM · On: Later Brian

Jesse has Mikey pegged right.  So Justin is a professor?  Interesting.

Author's Response: Well Michael has Debbie, he doesn't need another person coloring the world for him when it's not true. Yes, Justin is a professor. Sexy.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2014 06:10 AM · On: Midnight

Well I have just enjoyed my day off work reading all these chapters of this fic and I am loving it 👍💕 Thank you

Author's Response: Thank u so much will try to give you guys more soon.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 11:04 PM · On: Midnight

Glad you have begun updating. I'm a fan of your writing and am enjoying this one.  I like how brian and Justin are developing their relationship and how Mikey seems to be having second and third thoughts about Brian.   Happy Jesse has figured it out he is a great character to put in as Brians best friend.  Is this still going to be an Mpreg?  Look forward to more updates!  

Author's Response: Yes definetely an mpreg. That is coming soon

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 04:10 PM · On: Midnight

Omg...I'm glad somebody figured it out lol. And yeah Mikey is being a big asshole when he has no right to be, after all he's the one who broke up with Brian in the first place. I really don't see how Ben is putting up with it.

Author's Response: There are so many things that are going to happen. Don't worry Michael will see the big mistake he made.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 12:35 PM · On: Midnight

Thank you thank you thank you... God, this is like my favorite fic ever. Hope not to wait too long for the next update ;)

Author's Response: I can't make any promises.

Reviewer: Tania (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 07:31 AM · On: Midnight

Yes I remember this chapter. When's the next chapter 

Author's Response: Hopefully soon.

Reviewer: Nadine (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2014 02:59 PM · On: My Heart Beats

Your stories are all great! I love how you make each one of them very unique yet interesting. Please update soon. I'm going to read all your stuff.. It's addicting.

thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: You are welcome. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 05:28 PM · On: My Heart Beats

When are you updating ch. 10 and reposting ch.9? I hope you dont abandon this.  I really love your Justin. Cant wait for him to be introduced to Brian's world. And of course the mpreg part. Pls. Pls.

Author's Response: Its all coming. The chaper is lost so I have to make a new one. Coming soon!

Reviewer: dorrit (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 01:39 AM · On: My Heart Beats

I think a chapter is missing here. Please repost if possible.

Author's Response: Not possible. Writing a new one.

Reviewer: hotcat (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2013 03:47 PM · On: My Heart Beats

...wonderful story

Author's Response: Thank u so much...

Reviewer: silverstein.moss@gmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2013 05:28 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Love the story, hope you write another chapter soon.

Author's Response: I am working on it. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 12:03 PM · On: My Heart Beats

I've kinda been lurking for a bit and haven't been commenting on this as you wrote. But, I just wanted to let you know I'm reading and enjoying. Please keep writing. TAG

Author's Response: Hey thanks for letting me know. There will be more soon.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 11:16 AM · On: My Heart Beats

So, when will Justin get pregnant? We all know Brian is in denial on how he feels for the blonde, so of course we want him to be pushed to go to the next level. Cant wait too for the 'family' of Brian to learn about Justin. A pregnant Justin! ;D.

It would also be sort  of a slap on Michael and make him to completely move on with Ben. I dont really think Mikey is in love with Brian, he's just one of those people who want his former minions to always be following him.  And what a boost to his ego that The Kinney is still pining over him, or so he thought. At least I dont't think he's truly in love with Brian, I just dont like Ben to get hurt. Ben has always been a favorite of mine. Hehe!

Author's Response: I think yoy are going to like a lot of the things that are soon to happen. Othets are going to shock you and hopefully you like them. Brian will start telling peoplr about Justin soon.

Reviewer: Smackcat (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:07 AM · On: My Heart Beats

I only have one question - when will the rest of Brian's "friends" meet Justin?

 

Author's Response: It will be soon. I promise...little by little they will all find out. Thanks for reading. Hugs.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 05:20 AM · On: My Heart Beats

Hi, Draccone! I’m a big fan of your stories, though I was afraid you decided not to come back to them. I’m thrilled they you seem rather determined to finish those stories which are in progress, but even seeing just a few more chapters already makes me happy. I can’t even tell which story is my favorite – almost all of them are exciting and plain perfect to me.

I decided to write my comment in “On a pathway to you” topic because it’s the one which’s been updated recently. The story is getting better and better, I can’t wait to see what’ll become of Brian and Justin’s relationship. It’s understandable that Brian is afraid of being hurt again, but still, he is risking losing the soulmate he has found in Justin. I’m sure one day he’ll be finally able to accept that what they share is love, but I’m afraid it might be already too late. Justin right now is so in love he is ready to accept almost everything, and, well, in the last chapter Brian behaved almost perfectly, but I wonder how long it’ll last. I *loved* the episode with Michael! Great, finally Brian showed him that despite his betrayal hurt, it didn’t destroy him, and in fact, now he is more alive than ever! I sooo can’t wait to see the moment when Michael’ll find out about Justin! You described all of that just perfectly, I’m looking forward to the next update! BTW, Brian and Jesse’s interactions are always interesting, the friendship they share is rare and real. There is only one thing that I generally don’t like – I can never, *never* imagine either Brian or Justin calling each other “baby” – no matter how close they are, how they love each other. In fact, I can’t imagine any man being called so, but maybe it’s so weird to me because I’m from Ukraine, and our equivalent of “baby” is *so* pathetic and disgusting that I just can’t get it in books. Anyway, those Brian and Justin you write about are your characters, and whatever you feel they should or shouldn’t do is certainly right. Thank you for the great story! I don’t like m-pregs, didn’t see even one story which I would like with it, but I feel this one is going to become one. I’m interested in how it’ll all go.

“Deadly killers” is probably the only one story ever that left me staring incredulously at the page for maybe ten minutes. I was SO shocked, I just can’t describe it to you! Later I told everything about it to my friends and relatives, because I felt I *must* share it with someone! I never expected the killers to actually be Brian and Justin! I was angry at the murderer for trying to set them up, at the detectives for suspecting them, and when the explanation began, I was reading with my mouth agape. Till the last words I was damned sure it’s just a mistake, some kind of a trick, and then the realization hit me… you’re incredible! The story is shocking and amazing… usually I’m not into those kinds of things, main characters – killers, but here it fits perfectly! It’s a pity Ethan wasn’t killed by Brian:) Jealousy crime, like Justin’s – it’s always captivating. The most intriguing and shocking murder for me was Daphne’s, Brian’s motives are so well-thought and rational here… No more words, just applauses.    

“Dreaming about us” – oh-oh, this one is definitely on the top of my list. Everything about this story is breathtaking, I couldn’t stop until I reached the end. The story-line is unusual, and I simply adore Brian here. He is so possessive, so dark, so obsessed with Justin… and he loves him so much. I was furious when he decided to sell him, and impossibly relieved when he changed his mind. The Justin you described here… it’s really not possible not to fell in love with him. It was sad that sometimes he hurt Brian so much, but Brian hurt him too, and well, the situation is so complicated here… Justin couldn’t feel free for a single moment, he couldn’t even be sure that he truly loves Brian, because what if his feelings appeared only because of the lack of choice? His departure was painful for both of them, but it also was necessary. And it made his coming back much more meaningful! I love absolutely all story-lines here, with Ethan and Michael and Brendon especially. I enjoy re-reading this great story immensely, though as long as there is no sequel, I prefer to stop at the moment after the incident with Brendon, when Brian and Justin made up and Justin is sleeping while Brian is watching him:) I love this story, thank you so much for it, it’s so powerful!

“From Utter Hell To Delicious Torment” was the first story about teenage Brian and Justin that I’ve read. At first I didn’t want to – I just wasn’t interested, but then decided to give it a chance. And – no surprise here, you have completely changed it for me! Now it’s one of my most favourite topics! I love the way Brian and Justin got closer, fell in love with each other, I love how Brian didn’t want to accept it for so long. The story with the brother is also interesting! Thank you, I really enjoyed it!

“Forbidden Love” was probably the first story of your stories that I’ve read. I was being distracted all the time, then decided I didn’t like it and stopped reading, After a few months, when I already knew who you are and that your stories always got me excited, I decided to try reading it again. And – I absolutely LOVED it! I didn’t want it to end, it’s so interesting and complicated. Michael pissed me off most of times, and I support Brian and Justin absolutely – not because they’re the main characters - for example, I admit that they are just insane in Deadly killers, though I love them anyway, can’t help it. They just loved to spend time together at first, so why breaking up with Michael and hurting him deeply if this relationship won’t lead them anywhere? But then everything turned more serious, they fell in love with each other… really, I don’t know what I’d if I were them. So I love how you described it, every single moment of it. The marriage, the accident – *everything*.  Perfect!

“Sangre Azul” is the story I missed at first… as usual, your ideas are stunning! I was mad at Justin in the first part, he was *so* irritating! I couldn’t even imagine how Brian’ll end up falling in love with him. Stupid, spoiled brat… but then you started to show the real him, his many-sided complicated character, you explained the reasons for his behaviour, and I fell in love with him as well! I’m glad things with Craig cleared up a bit, though he was disgusting in most cases… but Brian is strong, and with Justin – even stronger. They’ll manage to build everything together, I’m sure of that.

“Just you and me” – oh, this one is on the top of my list too! I can’t count how many times I’ve read it. It captured my attention from the first few lines… the first Brian and Justin’s meeting – wow! I’ve never seen anything like that, Justin SO resembles Brian! Just as ballsy, arrogant, brutally honest. I didn’t think I would like the story with basically two Brians, but you as always made me fall in love with it from the very beginning:) Justin may behave like Kinney, but he is his own person, with his demons and feelings. I love every moment, all interactions between them, I laughed for maybe thousand of times! And Michael… oh boy, he REALLY pisses me off! I’m so happy every time Brian stood up to him, protecting Justin. I’m so excited that now you’re back, and you’ll probably finish this fantastic story! I can’t wait to see how they will sort all their problems out! Thank you a lot for this amazing thing!

“The Agony Of The Condemned” was the last of your stories which I’ve read. It’s just… *wow*, so bloody, cruel, hot and mysterious! I was intrigued with the very beginning, though at first I thought Brian was a crazy beast (and I totally love him this way!), while Justin – almost his victim. But then things began to clear up, to get complicated… I don’t know how you manage it, but once again I just couldn’t stop reading! Fantastic, amazing, incredible – I’m at a loss for words here! I’m not into riddles, so I can’t wait to see how Brian and Justin will find their peace (sort of it) again. And, I *hope* they will, they so deserve it.

Thank you one more time for all your hard work, your inspiration and your talent! You are definitely one of my three favourite authors here!:)    

 

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for your review. It makes me really happy. I know is weird what you are saying about Brian calling Justin baby. But he only does it when they are in private. All othet times he would not. To me is an endearment, people use it a lot. I like it. I am very happy you enjoy Deadly Killers. Had such a great time writing it...sometimes I wish I had made it longer. A lot of people were guessing. Not too many people even suspected the boys. Lol. Dreaming About Us came as a surprise even to me. It took me for a ride and things ended in ways that even surprised me. I let the muse take over. Ha ha. I am actually working on the sequel. Trying to finish everything else before I start posting new things. From Utter Hell To Delicious Torment...I had such a good time writing this story. Especially when it was moments where Brian left his guard down where Justin was concerned. Glad you gave it a chance. Forbidden Love...this story was so good. The boys fell in love and even thought they tried to stay away from each othet so they wouldn't hurt Michael, it was just not possible. Had so much fun glad you enjoyed it. Belie e it or not I just finished readi g Sangre Azul. I can't get tired of it. Brian and Justin being in love was priceless. Need I to say more? Lol. Just You And Me...I love this story with a passion. There is so much more to come. Hope you enjoy every bit of it. I love to write for Agony Of The Condemned. It lets me make stuff up more freely althought it can get a bit tricky at times. Thanks for your wonderful words. Hope you enjoy the rest of my stories as much. Take care.