Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

I’m currently completing the final preparations for Christmas while regularly checking the site hoping to find the last chapter of this wonderful story and tonight I was too happy to see this new text. And when at last I read the note at the end, I was even happier ... So you've decided to continue a little longer. Your rate will be ours. I just sent a sms to Gex who went snowboarding with his boyfriend and my son to inform him of this new publication (and never mind if I interrupt an intimate moment ...;)...). As always, only happiness. Justin was right to repatriate everyone on Pittsburgh to escape threats and lighten the lead weight with all this security around them. And what a good idea to spend the holidays in London. It’s a beautiful city especially in this period. And Justin can get all of them to see Paris as Eurostar expects to resume partial traffic trains on Tuesday 22 and in full from next Monday, after these three days of disruption due to snow that has affected the electrical circuits of motor .. . :) 

Until the next chapter, I send you and Mr Hamster thousand kisses and my wishes for beautiful holidays to you and yours...

Zorionak eta eguberri On (Best wishes and Merry Christmas in Basque)

Author's Response:

Thank you and Merry Christmas to you too! I'm always so happy to read your comments. Chapters may be 2 weeks apart but over 500 people are still  reading the story and I got a dozen emails and more review comments not wanting the story to end. So I thumped the hamster in the rear and we wrote a new chapter. I am very busy with the school program but I can still do the story too I hope. I have to play it by ear. Give my best to all your wonderful family this holiday season.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

You have made me very happy. I was actually feeling a loss that 'Forever Yours' was ending. These 20 odd (not meant that way) people have become important to me. Either you're very, very good or I seriously need help. I vote on you!

To you and yours I wish you a Happy & Healthy New Year.




Author's Response:

I'm insane trying to continue the story and do my school work too; I'm going to see if I do it. There are hundreds of readers who are important to me and I'm honored to entertain you. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

what?? you were planning to stop this story?? don´t do it.... :-))rose

Author's Response:

I've started an online college program and I was planning to end the story but now I'm going to try to do both. New chapters will be about 2 weeks apart so I don't hurt my college work.Thanks rose for letting me know your wishes. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

great story. keep up the great writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you alys for commenting. It means so much to me. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

I throughly enjoy this story.  I came to it late, having to read about 50 back chapters in one sitting - such a delightful chore!

I'm glad you're going to be continuing - even if it's only once a week.

Author's Response:

Thanks Carol; new chapters will more like two weeks apart on average. My college studies are demanding. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

JT you do know that you are the BEST.. Happy holidays

Author's Response:

Thank you meme; I really appreciate that. Merry Christmas to you too!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

hehehe.. JT i want the story 2 go on 2.... tell Mr Hamster I love him soooo much 4 doing such a good job. But JT, please don't stress urself so much ok?

I don't think i can live with so many security all around me 24/7. Love this chapter.

P/s: Merry christmas JT. Have wonderful holiday.

Author's Response:

Thank you complicated for commenting and rating. New chapters will be about 2 weeks apart on average so I have time to do my college work also. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

Whoa!!! So much infomation. Good work JT, Mr Hamster.

Reviewer: busysol (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 188: Escape

Thank you for deciding to try to continue! It would definately have been a sad note to the start of the New Year for your fans had you decided otherwise.

Author's Response:

Thanks for telling me busysol. There are over 500 steady readers still with the story who I feel dedicated to. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

This chapter was interesting and informative, good research.  It always felt the Bible could be like the old telephone game, given the number of translations and interpretations, who could say what was meant at the time it was written.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 141: Justice for Lindsay

Man, did they throw the kitchen sink at Lindsay!

Author's Response:

The American Justice System is a crap shoot; like a roll of the dice. There is an old saying in the USA, if you want justice go to a whore house; if you want to get screwed, go to court. :)  Things happen in fiction and the real world. Thanks Kat for commenting.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 139: What about Randy?

Poor kid, that lawyer should be ashamed of himself taking advantage of a kid. So, Jerry's sending him to live with Ted and Blake, that's cool.

Author's Response:

Rich people know how to handle greedy little people. Jerry's on top of it. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

They've been investigated for months! Its a good thing they have always dotted their i's and crossed their t's when it comes to that island.

Author's Response:

They wanted to create a paradise for gay people and not take advantage of the young one doing it. Everyone was evaluated and strongly instructed not to break the law. It only takes one clown to fu*k up the entire circus. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 135: The Talk

I'm glad Gus and Jenna aren't rushing into anything. They have all the time in the world, they're still kids. I was wondering how what Lindsay did to Gus would effect him as well. I'm sure Brian and Justin are going to keep an eye out for any signs that something may be wrong.

Author's Response:

Real LIfe has me over a barrel lately. I'm so happy to see you still reading and leaving me comments. Gus is one of my favorite characters to write about. Kids are strong and can overcome amazing things we might think are impossible. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

Aww! My baby had his first date! Very cute and such a gentleman! Good for him!

Author's Response:

It helps to have rich dads too! hehehe

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans

I'm glad they ended up keeping Kinnetic and what an idiot that guy was to not have the money available. Bad business! But good for Brian and Justin.

Author's Response:

Kinnetik was never in any major danger; the owner was at his wits end until Justin came home however. Vangard was losing his shirt over a period of time as Brian slowly took more and more big clients from him. It was a merger destined to happen. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

Look, I just noticed that I didn't post my comment on this chapter (It waits quietly on the doc where I do my translations)... Well, this year I'm the one who organizes the festivities of Christmas and New Year and I'm so busy in the preparation that I lose a bit of time. So now, I took a few minutes to copy and paste this little word ...

Another chapter very informative. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing this work of Faris Malik with us ...

Good luck with your future projects and lots of big kisses for my favorite writer and the cute little hamster who helps him to keep us in suspense in these wonderful stories ...

Author's Response:

Forgive my delay in replying to your valuable comments. RL has dominated all my time lately. In the next week or two I'll write the final closing chapter. My online college studies are very demanding, and exciting. I'm so grateful for fans like you and Gex who have supported my in this massive writing project.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day

Good for Justin coming to the point where he forgave his father. This will only help Justin in the long run by letting go his hurt feelings. Craig doesn't deserve Justin's forgiveness, he was such a bastard to him, but Justin deserves to have this part of his life a done deal.

Author's Response:

Following Gus's example this was Justin's way of letting it go. And yes he will be better off for doing it this way. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles

WOW! As pissed as I am at Lindsay for what she did to Gus, I can understand how much she missed her son and how much Gus misses his mother. That is one brave smart little boy, really takes after his dad.

Author's Response:

This topic was not easy to write about. There are so many emotions going on with everyone we sometimes fail to see what is happening to the young victim. Gus decided to not be a victim but instead a survivor and forgiving his mother was the first major step. As he matures his emotions will change; this is normal for victims of child abuse. Coping is a lifetime event. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 113: Danni

Ted brought up some excellent points! I'm glad Brian talked to him.

Author's Response:

Brian listens to Ted more than Ted realizes. Thanks Kat for commenting.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 113: Danni

Ted brought up some excellent points! I'm glad Brian talked to him.

Author's Response:

Ok, answered above.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker

I'm glad Justin talked to Gus about everything! Now Lindsay has gotten herself arrested. Brian told her to stay away from Gus.

Author's Response:

Justin is so good with kids and they love him. Lindsay's story is still unfolding.

Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

I'm very sorry to hear about your ending the story; with school is replacing your writing. It would be great for all of us if you could do both - school first then writing. Your talent is too great to stop - your fans don't want you to stop. We'll wait longer for chapters to be posted but to know that it's over - that's terrible.

Start a new story - less involved - maybe one chapter stories - at least consider it.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. I do plan to write after gaining my degree; however it will probably not be fiction. This is the longest story on Midnight Whispers; all my stories combined are more words than both the Old and New Testament of the Bible combined by hundreds of thousands of words. I was approaching a million words total and I haven't been writing a year yet. School has started and it's challenging; it takes all my free time. I'll complete the final chapter of this story within two weeks from today (12-17-09). That is the best I can do. Thank you jane for reading my work.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son

Interesting about Peter coming out. I'm glad Claire is going to let him stay with Brian and Justin.

Author's Response:

It works out for everyone. Thanks for chapter commenting Kat.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

i love it

Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that! I love you too!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

Glad to see you’re back and your computer is safe. However, I’m sad to know that this story comes to an end and that you will not have time to write. The coming off  will be difficult ... very difficult. But it's for a good reason and I wish you a great success in the studies you are undertaking ... And a lot of courage at the same time.

To be sure to omit nothing, I sent this chapter to my ex in Glasgow by mail so he translated it perfectly for me. This text is still a mine of information ... We now know the origin of this lie. Brian is right, they hold is the sequel ...

Thank you for this job and every time you give us. It is 04:00 am here and I will now join Tomas. I'll still have to wake him but it’s for good reason ... ;)

Big kisses

Author's Response:

Damn I've been busy! I'm sorry the story has to end soon too; however, it must so I can move forward in a new direction. This has been an excellent exercise and a lot of fun. The next chapter is dedicated to you Gex as my 1800th review; WOW! It's amazes me the response I've gotten from the readers.

Kisses Back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

Agree with sister for the movie title ... At least it announces the subject and arouses curiosity. Sure, it would be a sacred bomb dropped on the world but the truth will be finally known .... And although some still cling to their vision of the love of God, others will have a doubt in mind ....

Big hugs

Author's Response:

After careful consideration I realize a lie means someone intended to share a false fact; good Christians or only making a mistake they have been taught. They don't better yet. It might surprise you how many gay Christians are out there too. Many of them know the information I've added to this story.

Hugs Back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

Jerry is right. Such a film would be needed just for the controversy... This important message will reach at least some minds .. If only some are beginning to ask questions, that would be great ... I have difficulty with this general blindness affecting Christians. Some have never even read their Bible. They just repeat what they have learned. If the clergy said God hates gays, then it's true ... If one day they announce that God loves gays, then this will be true ... No reflection !! It's like the so-called apocryphal texts. Why would they be less truthful than the canonical texts? ... Just because they don’t say what the Church wants us to hear

I repeat myself but this work you have provided is wonderful. I'm glad to hear all these informations.

Thank you very much, JT

Author's Response:

The church is evolving and will change ever so slowly. Not everyone is anti-gay.

Love you!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

I will be excited about this picture too ... but NEVER, Hollywood will never have the balls to make a movie like this ... O yeah, I'm a boy with little faith! " As my sister, I scoured the Bible that we have here (the last time I’m so passionate and documented on a reading was for the Da Vinci Code) ... I can tell you that your chapters have monopolized the house here. My father showed me other items based on this subject. I like to talk with him because he is educated and interested in many things. He is loving spirituality. He fought the Catholic dogmas in which he was raised and above he rejects the narrow moral, prejudice and other inconsistencies. He knows perfectly well the Texts and can justify and support his point of view when he talks to religious ... Younger, I attended some of these exchanges with the village priest. He taught us to develop critical thinking and not follow blindly. Those who promote hatred of homosexuals using the Bible should receive a good lesson.

Great job here

Big kisses

Author's Response:

I'm honored; it was just a story and some are bored with the facts.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 182: The Amazing Love Story

I reach the end of all my backlog of work these days... and here I am FINALLY available for comment on all these brilliant chapters. Wow... My brain is in turmoil with all these  informations you have kindly put at our disposal. It’s a huge research work that you have done here... You're a really great man, dude....

A big big love

Author's Response:

I can't take the credit; I got it from other sources who did the research. Google "gay Christianity" and get a ton of it. Love back!

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

I think this stuff should be put on billboards in front of the god hates fags church.  I might even contribute to it being done.

Author's Response:

ROTFLMAO !!!! Thank you!  : )

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 187: When the Hate Started

wow.... again lots of research.... interesting update :-)) rose

Author's Response:

I found it online and credit the author who is a gay Muslim; go figure! :)))  Thanks for commenting rose.

Reviewer: busysol (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

Despair not! Actually, plenty of people are readig your excellent research along with your excellent story. I've sent links to a number of my friends so that they can read up and be better prepared the next time a Bible-thumper tries to send them to hell! So please, hurry back!

Author's Response:


This was a bad virus and I almost had to wipe off my hard drives and start over. My tech was able to go into the programming registery and find the bug and disable it so we know now what was the problem without losing all my data. Most technicians can't do that. I'll have a new chapter up soon. Thank you for your comments busysol.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 186: Message from the Author

Will always wait for you JT.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm back and a new chapter is coming soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

your story is great but even though i am VERY pro-gay this story line right now is informative but not iteresting or passionate. hope you get back to everyday life soon.  thanks DEB

Author's Response:

I'll venture to say if you were gay this would be more than informative for you. I personally know of 6 boys who took their lives over this bullshit by the Christian church and the ministers. The rate of attempted and successful suicides of gay males between the ages of 14-17 in nations with a majority Christian population is over 28%. The majority are in the American Bible Belt states. The story continues addressing this issue and will be concluded soon as the climax of the story. I've started a college degree program on line and will not have time to write.


Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

Cool title. Good work Mr Hamster.

The argument will not go away but they have something to add into the argument. The cast is really something to talk about in the movie.

Excellent as always JT.

Big hugs 4 both of you.

Author's Response:

Thank you complicated; I appreciate it. I am soon concluding the story.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

WOW!!! My head is spining with all the fact & research in this chapter. It's taken me quite long to finish reading coz I've to refer to the dictionary for me to understand better.

Bravo!! Superb job JT & Mr Hamster.

Author's Response:

Here is one more fact for you; all three of my stories now exceed the number of words in the King James Bible! Thank you for your Bravo!~ :)

Reviewer: qafqueenbee2 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

It's not that the is not liked it's just that people have to think after reading the last couple of chapters. I know that I am.

Author's Response:

Thank you for telling me this. I messed up on one point; covenant is mentioned many times in the Bible; not just three times as previously said. So far that is the only mistake in my research facts. The story continues to address this issue and so ends.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

I love this title. A film like that should really exist. None religious argument against homosexuality survives a critical analysis.

I'm just sad to hear this wonderful story comes to an end soon ... Your stories are so wonderful that I don’t want see the word « end »...

Big hugs

PS : You'll have certainly comments from Gehexan later. There has been some trouble between him and Tomas. So, Gex is gone to spend a few days in Scotland where his former lives. I know that Tomas has called, apologized and Gex must return, normally this weekend ... A little crisis among others ... ..


Author's Response:

I am so  grateful for your comments. I worked my butt off doing this research and expected more of a response frankly. I'll answer all of my reviews later;  I'm not home and at my brother's house out of town celebrating our Thanksgiving Day in the USA. Thank you Ihintza very much.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

To me, God's message is a message of unconditional love for all of us... The obscurantists, retrograde peoples and fundamentalists are the problem. Fortunately, some churches ministers have a more progressive opinion and sometimes it’s not the youngest. I’ve had for example the old priest here who often came to discuss with my father. He often said to us, young people, "know that God loves you as you are, the main thing is to believe in him... The Church and the rest is nothing."

Anyway, thank you for this wonderful work. I hope that readers of this story will perpetuate this knowledge. Tall oaks from little acorns grow...

Big kisses

Author's Response:

Thanks Ihintza; your words make the hard work worth it. Your priest is right. My last chapter(s?) of the story deals with the history of condemnation of homosexuality by the church started in 390 AD, and not before. It's part of a sequel to the first movie.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

I knew the controversy about the story of David and Jonathan. I read an article written in this way in a magazine that my father subscribed to. But, I had no recollection of Jesus’ story with the roman... So I looked for this story in the ancient and modern Bibles in our collection. Read the Bible with new eyes, that's what many people should do.

My father is like you. He also thinks that the best way to take down your opponent is to use their own evidence against them

Simply brilliant, like you

Big Love

Author's Response:

Forgive my late answers to your reviews; I've had major computer problems this week. I believe you'll like the end to the story.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 182: The Amazing Love Story

I haven’t had much time to comment lately. I started Christmas shopping... And as I want to spoil my children (even if Maïa will have only 5 months at Christmas), my husband and the rest of my wonderful family, I was extravagant... like always ;)

I LOVED these last chapters that explore a burning issue... In any case, it is beautifully documented... What a great job, JT. BRAVO... Jerry and Brian hold here a sublime revenge, a big time bomb ...


A ton of kisses

Author's Response:

If only Hollywood would have the balls to make this movie! The condemnation of gays by Christians had to have a beginning and that is explained in the end of the story. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

Still loving the story.  I haven't reviewed in a while but have been reading,  work has been very busy.

Love the Bible stuff.  My son-in-law is a Baptist minister and refuses to preach that homosexuality is wrong.  I can't wait to tell him about this stuff.  He will probably try to work it into a sermon. 

I know the story has to end sometime, but I wish it didn't.  I love your stories. 

Author's Response:

I do have to end the story; I've started a college program online for my BBS (Bachelors in Biblical Study) which is a difficult and intensive course of study academically. I already have three other degrees. The total number of words in my three stories exceeds the number of words now in the King James Bible. I may write a book on the changes creating the modern Bible after I get my degree. Thank you for your comments.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

This is by far the best argument I've ever read for the Bible being for gays. The outcome of the movie is predictable. I hope you keep writing.

Author's Response:

If RL has its way, the story will end soon. Personal issues are getting in the way of writing. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

Lots of great detals here. Terrific story.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Alec Frazier (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

I believe it was Socrates who said:

Concubines are for sex, women are for childbearing, but men are for loving.

In addition, in high school Latin 1 we learned that servus was latin for slave, not pais.

Author's Response:

That sounds like something Socrates would say. Pais is an ancient Greek word; well it was a mixture of Greek and ancient Arabic spoken at the time of Jesus at those locations to my knowledge; mostly Greek. That was a long time before modern Latin was created and evolved. Thanks for the info and your comments Alec.

Reviewer: alison (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

wow..... these chapters are really great and indepth and may come in very useful to me at some stage,  we have found out recently our eldest daughter is in a lesbian relationship whilst our youngest daughter is a comitted christian.... so far no fire works always handy to no where to look for reference should any go off in the future tho !!!!!!!

Really enjoying this story still so hope you wont end it to soon


ali xxxx

Author's Response:


Thanks ali for your comments. Perhaps you might like to get this book for your daughters this Christmas. It's an amazing read and I strongly recommend it for this subject (you might want a copy for yourself). They are about $25 each and some shipping cost.

It really helps me to know my hard work is helping people. Thank you !

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

poor boy... how much research did you do for this last 4 chapters?? it must have been a lot... well done :-)) rose

Author's Response:

I didn't keep track but it was many hours well spent. Thanks for commenting and the compliment. I love to hear from you Rose.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

If only this were true the Catholic church would go up in flames and the right wing of the Republican party would die. Can I live in your dream world?

Author's Response:

Maybe the readers on MW are new to this debate but the tide has turned since 2007; anti-gay Christians can no longer hide behind the Bible to support their bias. The general ignorance of the masses are the only thing keeping this message from coming forward more than it has. In short; they don't want to know the truth; they want to continue to keep their wrong thinking. It fits their dream of a perfect straight world. Perhaps one day Hollywood will make this movie and make a difference. Thanks for commenting shf1210.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 185: The Greatest Lie ever told with the Bible

thanks for the great update! i so love this fic, and i am also reading embraced again.


Many Hugs Buffytess

Author's Response:

Thanks for telling me Buffytess. I really need to hear from the readers to stay motivated to write. Hugs back!

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

these last few chapters were really informative and learned a lot from it!!!!!!!!!!

and u did a very good job in researching these!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

thanks and more to come

Author's Response:

Thank you patheticgal; the research is online and in the reference materials I mention in the story. As a gay man raised Baptists this was very important news to me and I wish I knew it when I was much younger. It would have saved me a lot of grief.

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 184: The Script Arrives

I love it

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)  I love you for telling me.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

WOW!!! I can just imagine how much time you spend to do research for this chapter. It is very informative.

Love the movie idea.


Take care.

Author's Response:

I had researched this topic years before writing the story and did more research to add it to the story making certain it was true. I want to mention to another reviewer: Jonathan did have one crippled child, a son who David placed in the royal court in agreement with his covenant with Jonatan to last to his decendants.

Thanks for your comments very much. Sadly they have dropped off considerably making me consider ending the story soon.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 182: The Amazing Love Story

Hi...!!! Glad you are back. Hope every things ok. I am also having some RL issue plus am not feeling very well.

Thank you so much for the amazing story.

Love you so much. Hugs & kisses for you & Mr Hamster.

Author's Response:

It means so much to me to hear from you and know you like the story still. Thank you very very much.

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

Hello JT, it is all right? I hope you're well, I missed you in these days and while I'm waiting I started to read again "Forever Yours": o).

Author's Response:

I'm good; thanks for asking. I won't be writing as much as before since my doctor chewed me out for staying up at night and writing for you. So that and RL matters make me write slower now. I've re-read the story myself to refresh my own knowledge what I wrote.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

interesting chapter!!!! very educational and biblical........

thanks and more updates to come.........

Author's Response:

One thing I learned in the high school debate team was the best way to take down your opponent was to use their own evidence against them. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Thanks very much for commenting.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 183: Movie Research Arrives

I just caught up with all the chapters I've missed to date. HOLY SHIT RAGE! You ended it with a hydrogen bomb! I found a Bible and verified all your data on the stories. More research online shows that there is a great deal of debate on the interpretation of ancient Hebrew and Arabic or Roman words and there is a vast amount of evidence that the Church did fabricate the theme against homosexuality centuries later after the original Bible texts that are known (for example: The Dead Sea Scrolls). How in the hell can the Bible thumpers hide this evidence? Are most Christians that stupid not to read the truth in the Bible for themselves? Is it that hard to accept the fact that two men loved each other enough to change the course of history for all time? 

The only way I see a peasant slave boy become king is on top of a prince who loves to bottom as the nakedness of his mother describes by Saul! The scripture is dead on with many quotes of how much they loved each other. Later they took wives and made kids but never said they loved the women they had kids with. David even said Jonathan was a better lover than women.

Your stories go where no one has gone before. BRAVO JTSecrets!

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting David; I've missed you.

David had several wives and kids but I think Jonathan never did and soon died in battle. I  don't recall any mention of children of Jonathan in scripture. My quess is he was the bottom of their relationship and had no interest in women at all. I just wish Hollywood had the balls to make this movie true.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 182: The Amazing Love Story

wow i like the new movie idea. sounds great. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

The irony is the movie concept is based in truth about the Bible. The idea that the Holy Bible and Christianity are against loving gay relationships is a modern invention. But the sheep believe what they are told; the ministers learn the truth sometimes in college but they bury it; they make too much political and financial hay by being against the immoral queers! Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 182: The Amazing Love Story

loving your syory hope you're doing better take care

Author's Response:

Part of my absence was research for this story. I hope you like the new way it's going. Thanks nickie for commenting.

Reviewer: DUH (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

Actually Jane, you are incorrect.  The author request reader reviews so opinions are in fact asked for.  Not all reviews are going to be complimentary.  A good author shouldn't expect them to be and should be able to implement criticism as a tool for improvement.  Please don't swear at me too....

Author's Response:

I love all my reviews; roses and tomatoes. Thank you.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over


I will not curse, I will not curse, I might curse.

Did someone ask for your opinion - shit no!

Do we care about your opinion - shit no!

You are mean and cruel; and besides that, totally wrong.

We, and I mean 126,946 separate reads of this story, love it and wait patiently (okay not so patiently) for the next chapter.

You are now dismissed...

Author's Response:

Next chapter on the way; you would not believe how crazy RL is right now for me--tidal waves of issues almost over now. Thanks for your support.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

RL has been crazy here too... But I finally found enough time to comment on this chapter. I knew the family would be there to support the young mother in this difficult time... Tiffany must now take it upon herself for her children.

The story is really beautiful. I love it ... Keep the job, you do it so well...

Big kisses for you, big hug and a little peck on the lips for Mr Hamster with a caress from the tip of his ears to the very end of his tail

Author's Response:

Thanks Ihintza; love to read your comments. I could write a book on the crap this past weeks has been for me. I do have 1/2 the next chapter done. Me and Mr. Hamster are thankful for the love.

Reviewer: Alec Frazier (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

I like what you've done with the story. I was the one who suggested that the next step for Frank, Shawn, and Peter's relationship was double penetration. The reason why is because I believe that in a three-way gay relationship it could very well be the epitome of love. I hate to talk shop, but I have inferred (perhaps mistakenly) that you don't know what double penetration is. It is when one man takes two cocks in his ass at the same time.

Author's Response:

Thanks Alec for clearing that up. I remember being much younger and trying that and it was damn hard to do. It is erotic no doubt.

Reviewer: WildEAPFAN (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over

bwa ha ha ha amazingly bad!fic. best laugh ever. gotta rec everwhere.

Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

I am very sad...... but glad that they have a very strong family unit to cope with everything.


Love you

Author's Response:

Pardon the delay answering; RL has been nuts lately. Thanks complicated for commenting.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

I'll miss Hunter. I like the idea of the young ones taking a stand and doing an interview.... as Brian would say 'free publicity', hopefully nothing bad happens around this Baptist bible thumper junk. ;-(


Glad you're feeling better Mr. Hamster!!!

Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster is happy to be up and running again too. More on the boycott soon. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

The family is gathered around Tiffany. It’s the support she needs to progress and not to sink into despair. She has her daughter and the unborn child, she must move... They will be the driving force for her.

I’m longing to see the counterattack against the Baptists. Between Jerry and Brian, they’re going to have a terrible backlash

Superb chapter

Big hugs

Author's Response:

Hopefully Tiffany is young and will recover quickly; as you say she has to think about her kids. We'll have to see what the PI's can dig up on the Baptists. Hugs back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 180: Tragedy

Holly shit, that's an end.... Wow! The news is brutal for Tiffany. And it’s a horribly trauma for those who stay. But her suffering will be eased with the family. Like Brian, I fulminate with the boycott... Damn homophobic... I hate them

Very strong chapter

Big love

Author's Response:

Things were going so well for everyone and life sometimes kicks you in the gut. This time it was two kicks at once. But our extended QAF family is strong and up to the challenge of hard times. The Baptists don't know who they're messing with attacking Jerry Griffin and Brian Kinney. Once they get passed Hunter's funeral and things get back to normal the shit will fly. Thanks for commenting Gex.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping

Love the story, as usual.

Possible typo,  Mark says: "I want to invite Mom and Roan to come stay...."

It should read "I want to invite Tiffany and Roan to some stay with us..."

Mark would not call Tiffany 'Mom',

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know about that; I've made the correction. I had Zack on my mind at the time I was typing. I'm delighted you like the story.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 180: Tragedy

OMG!!! You give me the chill to the bone with the ending. Very sad when people always looking for something to bring people down.

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

I almost have the next chapter ready to post. 3/4 done. Thanks for commenting complicated.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 180: Tragedy

... But how sad is this chapter. End on the Hunter’s death, it's true it's not fair but Life is not always fair... It’s not just pink clouds, there are also times when the sky is gray... This is not fair our friend recently died in a motorcycle accident, not fair my best friend died in a car accident with her husband when they joined us to celebrate the new year, not fair my first father drowned in Spain there is a twenty year ... But that's Life. And those who stay get closer, strengthen connections... I’m very sad for Hunter, but I know that Tiffany and Roan can rely on their large, warm and supportive family to overcome this tragedy. They will know how to mobilize to help them...

And finally, I’m also been through a little angry when I read the passage about the boycott. I can’t stand this kind of homophobic event... I wish Brian find a wonderful parade in response ...

Beautiful chapter, however, made me shed a few tears ...

A tons of kisses for you and Mr Little Hamster ... Love you

Author's Response:

I believe most families have had to deal with an untimely tragedy at one point or the other. The uncertainity of life is part of the mystery of the adventure we travel. The bad times make us realize how wonderful are the good times. Thanks so much for your comments Ihintza.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

I wanted to comment on this chapter much earlier but one thing leads to another, the time flies. Therefore, I use my last reading to give you my comments without delay ... I was sorry to learn for the flu but delighted to see you’re back with us now. I hope you feel much better...

This chapter is really nice. These latest news about the family are great but my favorite passage stays Carl and Debbie with their daughter. In this moment, I can’t help thinking about my future with Txabi or Maïa ... or thinking about my parents with us ... (My god, I recognize we were precocious on the subject ; )

Superb for this one


Author's Response:

I don't envy parents dealing with teenagers at all! When those hormones kick in nothing will stop a horny teenager from having some fun. I guess the best you can do is try to keep them safe which is a challenge when kids hide from their parents what they're doing. I guess kids are the same anywere. Thanks so much for your chapter comments; they make my day.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 180: Tragedy

that was mean leaving it right there. hope you update really soon. hope you are feeling better.

Author's Response:

I didn't mean to be mean; honest! I'm working on the next chapter now.  I'm felling much better but still down a bit-weak. Thanks for commenting darkraven.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 180: Tragedy

are you crazy? you got rid of hunter instead of lindsay. not fair. not fair at all.

why do i get the feeling that no matter what debbie and carl are going to become grandparents again.

and now this problem at the studio. how much more can this large family take?

Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting sjmpets3. Tragedy happens even to our fictional family. I didn't get rid of Hunter; he was killed in a tragic car accident by a drunk driver head-on. It happens in real life too. The new adversities will have a profound effect on our extended QAF family in future chapters. I agree with you; it's not fair at all, and neither is life sometimes. Can I blame the hamster?

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

Hey love,

I was delighted to see this new chapter. It shows that you are better. Here, from the early autumn, mom gives us all Royal Jelly and capsules of Echinacea to strengthen our immune system + Vitamin C with unlimited Kiwis... With Intza, they are our dealerettes. They like alternative medicine and between the two, it’s impossible to escape from these preventive cures (anyway, we’re used to it...). I just wake up from a tender nap (considering the rotten weather outside - hail, wind, pouring rain, thunderstorm - there was nothing else to do but stay under the duvet) and I leave my comment before joining Tomas in the shower ....

The latest news of the family are welcome. Everyone pursues his way quietly. Lindsey is doing well, Michael and Mark have found a teen to help. The harder part will be maybe for Carl and Debbie with Harmony

Pleasant chapter

Rest still to fully recuperate (we have tons of patience at your disposal)

Big kisses and big hug

Author's Response:

Thank you Gex for your comments. I'm still getting over it; this was a tough one. The story takes a turn darker with tragedy for our extend QAF family next. Kisses and hugs back.

Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

i'm glad you are feeling better. i thought maybe you had abanded this story. i was so happy to see a new chapter. thanks deb

Author's Response:

First I was out of town on personal business and then came home and got sick with the flu. That had me down a week. Still I was less then 10 days between chapters. Due to my doctor demanding I sleep more I won't be writing the multiple chapters like before but the story is ongoing. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

Hey JT, I'm sorry you're sick, take care of you and you are well soon :)

Author's Response:

Thank you; I'm on the mend now and getting back to being my old self again.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

YOU'RE BACK!!!!!! (feel like kissing & hugging you).

Brilliant as always.

You make my day.

Love you & take care. (sloppy kiss for Mr Hamster ;) )

Author's Response:

I'm very happy to be back too. Thanks for the hugs and kisses. Mr. Hamster is blushing hard. I plan to write the next chapter this weekend after laundry is caught up.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 179: As Time Goes On

love the glimpses into everyone's lives. don't envy carl at all! should be entertaining if debbie will do the talking LOL!

glad you're feeling better, flu is going around here too.

Author's Response:

Please forgive me for missing this review when answering them. I was half-sick at the time I tried to write. Thanks for commenting alys. Debbie talks to the girl next chapter.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 178: Visiting Pittsburgh

Hi JT. Hope you get well soon. Better take care yourself. I am too just getting well from high fever. With november knocking the door.... together with monsoon right beside. Thank god my place never (almost, yes) had flood.

Love you. Kiss for Mr Hamster.

Author's Response:

Thank you complicated; I'm beginning to recover slowly. It was no fun and I really wanted to be writing. Glad the storms don't hurt you much. I just posted a short chapter trying to get back into the swing of things. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 178: Visiting Pittsburgh

Gus is extremely generous. Forgiveness is not an easy act. I sincerely hope it will help him. Lindsey can make a fresh start now with the help of Gus, Ted and Brian’s agreement... I hope Mel will hear Gus’ request.

Beautiful as always

Hugs for you and Mr Hamster


Author's Response:

Thanks for the hugs. I got home and got slammed with the flu. It'll be a few days before I'm writing again. Love, bob

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

Poor Brian... Gallbladder problems are sometimes very painful. But with surgery, a good rest and adequate nutrition, he will go much better... And this trip to Pittsburgh comes just at the right time.

Thank you very much for the news on everyone's life...

Big kisses

Author's Response:

Feeling much better today so I'm going to try and answer reviews. This has been a rough week starting with out of town business which ended successfully for me followed by getting ill.

I had gall bladder surgery and know all too well what it's like. Kisses back.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Ah, McLaren is dead. That's all this pervert deserves... Lindsey will have to cope alone. And she met Claire. With her, she will be able to view things from a different angle

Very good work

Big Love

Author's Response:

Things will improve over time for Lindsay. Love back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

My husband surprised me with a stay in Marrakech during these Fall's vacations. Four beautiful days at friends’place who have a riad there with my hubby and my kids. We came back this afternoon. I'm still on a cloud... Now I take time to read the last chapters (and how you were also away from home, I’m not late... I hope you enjoyed your break)

I’m glad Brian has consulted. Now, he knows where the problem comes. Unfortunately, he will take lifelong treatment. Zack speaks with his guard about the proposal. Good thing

Excellent chapter, thank you very much

Big kisses

Author's Response:

Sounds like you had a great time! Zack was a smart boy and knew not to let it slide. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 57: Les Amis

Great chapter!


Author's Response:

Thank you!   :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants

Start w/ Gus, end w/ Gus!

Enjoyed the in between.

Quite funny at the end!!

Author's Response:

I was LMAO writing that chapter. Glad you liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 55: Pirates !


Great chapter from beginning to end. 

Good news for Michael. Wondering if Michael's going to do something stupid just because he thinks it's going to be easy!

Enjoyed the sneak peak of the filming out in CA.

PLAYMOBIL! LOVE them, brings back memories! Their inexpensive, separate pieces are perfect incentives & rewards for kids to behave, especially while traveling........ I used to be a nanny & always had food, drink, playdough (which we would make from scratch!), AND Playmobils for all the plane rides. Thus never had one child misbehave! I'm sure I'll use them for my own kids as well!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments; pardon my delay answering you as I've been out of town followed by sickness for a few days. I'm feeling better today so I'm trying to get back into the swing of things again. Michael will be good I think; I have so many chapters written now I'm not sure where you're at. Enjoy! Thanks again for commenting Susan.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two


Well done, truly enjoyed it. Felt like I was actually "watching" the show!


Author's Response:

That was a fun chapter to create. Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One

Wonderful....... wonderful!

You know I love Gus!!

Author's Response:

I've been away from home for a few days; time to catch up on my reviews and write the next chapter. Thank you Susan; Gus is also a favorite character of mine as well.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

GREAT, great, great!!! 

ALWAYS love the business info you add to the story! 

Love the conversation in the "class room" w/ the kids, perfect!

REALLY enjoying the story.......

Author's Response:

Since business is a big part of their lives I had to discribe it some what. I'm glad it doesn't bore you to tears. I'm very happy to see you still reading the story.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 178: Visiting Pittsburgh

I love it. What Gus is doing is for his sake. He have to move on and getting angry to Linds for 12 years is not the issue any more. He just want Mel to understand & respect his action.

What a lovely dinner in Pitts.

Take care. Love you.

Author's Response:

I've had a lovely couple of days away from home just resting comfortably without Internet access or work. Just  got in and wanted to catch up on reviews and work on the next chapter. Love you back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 178: Visiting Pittsburgh

Lindsay is fucking lucky to have Gus. He’s really adorable. I hope he’s right and that to forgive her will be beneficial for him. But give her money and plead her cause to Ted and Brian for working at Kinnetik is a big step... I don’t know if Mel will be too magnanimous despite the request of his son
Very good job. The story is so great
Big kisses for you and Mr Hamster 

Author's Response:

I expect Melanie to have a blowup moment the first time she sees Lindsay in the tower but she will eventually calm down; she's by herself as the one lone person against her now. Big kisses back Gex.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

Bi-polar mania, gallbladder surgery... Brian hasn’t a good time on the health front. Fortunately, cholecystectomy is a common operation but it’s true the stones in the gallbladder can cause very strong abdominal pains. Now he has to rest and start the diet. At least one month of a low-fat diet before come back to a “normal” diet, I’m sure Tray will cook excellent meals for him in the respect of the diet.
I'm really happy for the future shooting of X-Men. The boys will be able to participate in the Hollywood-life too.
I really enjoyed these updates of everyone's life.

Big kisses 

Author's Response:

I had my gall bladder removed in 2005 and remember altowell how painful the attacks are. I was in and out of surgery within 8 hours. E may be fun but it causes many mental health issues later in life; that is well documented. Big kisses back and I'm very grateful for your chapter reviews Gex.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

An expeditious settling of scores for this Mister McLaren. Speed, efficiency ! Jerry and Ricky work as a dream team (Army of Shadows)... Lindsay and Claire become friends, lost souls meet. Fortunately, Claire is loyal to her brother now otherwise this association could be disastrous... Brian and Justin are now well up on the danger which has threatened the kids. Vigilance will be even more effective.
Excellent chapter 

Big hug

Author's Response:

Jerry and Brian don't mess around where the kids are concerned. Ricky knew who to get and what to do without saying a world about it. The guy was such a sleezeball nobody gave a damn either. Big hug back !

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

Haaa.... This is an interesting awakening ! It's stimulant and it helps start the day. Very good start how I like it too ...;)
Bi-polar mania for Brian, nothing less... Wow, I'm going to have a new look at my recreational uses because when I’ll be ancient, my brain will be toasted. I hope he will be well.
Lindsay is still trying to get in touch with the family. Now, it’s Justin. Why she doesn’t call Brian instead of Justin? Chicken !
Zack reacted very well. Now, I want see Jerry and Ricky move. And knowing Jerry....

So good


Author's Response:

Not everyone who took E has issues later but many do. Zack was nobody's fool in this circumstance and growing up with gay parents only made him better aware of the situation at hand. Love back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 174: No Daddy

Justin knows how to get Brian to see someone. It’s especially important he understands why those nightmares resurface and how to to get rid of  them. He should consult a specialist who can help him...


Big love

Author's Response:

Bubble butt restriction is Brian's greatest fear! hehehehe Next chapter you see the problem isn't that hard to fix. Love back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Welcome to the little Pamela Cole, new addition in the family. Jenna and Gus are proud parents and Justin must be completely wild about his first granddaughter... The little party at Ted to meet the Pittsburgh’s family is unfortunately ruined by Lindsay. But what did she hope ? Day of Atonement ? It's a bit early to start talking about success considering Gus’ reaction and above all Jenna’s.

I love Jerry’s idea for the boys with a sequel of X-Men. I hope this film will be made...

Excellent as always. I love this story and the development. You work wonders


Author's Response:

Lindsay was only a blip on the day's radar screen; no big deal. I hope they make a new X-Men movie like this so I added it to the story. I really enjoyed that series and hope for more. Reading reviews gives me the inspiration to write well. Thank you!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys

Gus did the right thing sharing these painful moments of his life with Jenna. She will be a great comfort for him. I love Brian in this chapter. He’s clear in his warning to Lindsay… I hope she will understand the message. Anyway, Gus doesn’t want to see her. He’s still the most directly affected. And now he has a family to protect.

Jerry is great. He’s one who knows to handle the art of manipulation

Super Chapter

Author's Response:

Gus is very close to his wife and wishes to hide nothing. Also, Gus is struggling with the Lindsay issue and it isn't over yet. Hugs!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 171: It's Not Pretty

Wow, Lindsay and guards... She doesn’t seem to complain too much... And in addition, how she’s pregnant, they allow her to leave prison. Poor kid ! I don’t know the life he will have with her. In any case, this early release surprises everyone but they are none too pleased  and especially Gus (me too).

Excellent chapter

Big Love

Author's Response:

Prison in the USA for women can be very bad;  those kind of things really happen here but you rarely hear of it. Lindsay getting out did surprise everyone and they weren't ready for it. Big love back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On

Poor Vance ! That’s was a close call. It’s time he cares about himself and takes his retirement. He’s too old for all this crap… All this stress isn’t good for his heart. Anyway, nice from Brian and Justin to come to see him...

Ah, the spies were caught... They were lucky to get a friendly guard. I got a very very angry brother but he didn’t tell our parents… (phew)…

Super, bravo

Mr Hamster did a great job, as the writter

Author's Response:

Vance was lucky; 33% of first heart attack victims don't survive it. Kids will be kids; the guard handled it without making it a huge issue or making his job protecting the young boys harder by getting them against him. Thank you for the compliments!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 169: The Conveyor

The intensive preparation with Mark will make very wonderful boys. It's good Jerry has agreed that everyone trains together. So, no jealousy  and other boys will also have their chance... I’m impressed by the sustained tempo because they were still in school… I started jogging, swimming and rollerblading again and I know how much it may be hard to get down to it after classes. Their motivation is far greater than mine...

Great chapter, love it

Author's Response:

At their ages they have tons of energy they can channel into development. It would shocked most folks to know how hard actors work to do what they do. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and once again thank you for all these wonderful comments.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 168: My Three Sons

Me, it’s my brother that I spied until he caught me and I soon realized I had no interest to do that again. What ? I just wanted to know what was happening in his room when he had friends sometimes and didn’t give me permission to stay with them... But, I don’t remember if it was so hot that your excellent scene between Frank, Shawn and Peter... ;)

I’m glad the film could be made with everyone. This will be great again and the kids will cause a sensation

Excellent chapter

Big kisses

Author's Response:

You were just being a kid Gex. Sometimes it's easier for a producer to create a new actor then to find one existing to fix the part. Big kisses back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 167: Talent

Well, I’m finally at home. I’m going to update my comments before joining Tomas who is already sleeping... I don’t forgotten you

Nice gift this trip for Gus & Jenna’s honeymoon. Justin and Brian are really adorable. Brian announces the possibility of a sequel to Rage… I hope strongly that Matt and Mark are willing to do it…I love Lindsay in jail... Well my girl, that's all you missed because of your stupid actions

Super Chapter

Big love. You are the best

Author's Response:

Thank you! All your comments mean so much to me! The honeymoon was a sweet idea and the movie will fly; count on it. Big love back at you dude.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 178: Visiting Pittsburgh

glad the visit went well for everyone. hope gus finds some resolution to his nightmares by visiting linds

Author's Response:

Thank you alys!  :)  I believe things will work out soon.

Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

Thanks for the update on Clarie - I didn't realize she had been at Ted's house.

So much action in the last two chapters - it was wonderful.

i am never disappointed by your work. I was wondering if you have any stories prior to the two that are on this site. I'd like to read them.


Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed your reading.

Forgive my lateness answering this review; I've been away for the house and the Internet. All my writing is on this website. The Future of Brian and Justin was my first attempt to write followed by Embraced. Now we are in the mist of Forever Yours. So you already have all the fiction I've written. I'm very loyal to this website and except for a couple of chapters on LJ to send readers here I'm not posted anywhere else. Thank you Jane for your interest.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

Thank you for the update.

Glad Brian is going to be ok. Hope no more emergency for him in the future.

Can't wait for them to visit Pitt.

Hugs & kisses.

Author's Response:

Brian was in a lot of pain but never in any danger for his life. I know first hand how painful the gall bladder can be with stones and infected. Hugs and kisses back!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

thanks for the greate updates.


Hugs Buffytess 

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thanks! Hugs back.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

your story is like my daily fix of bj-love.... I need it... :-)) rose

Author's Response:

My reviews are my daily fix of reader's love. Thanks!

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

The updates were good. Glad the boy on the island is going to be ok. Glad Brian will be ok too. Looking forward to Pittsburgh.

Author's Response:

Things happen in life so they happen in the story. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Jerry does not mess around where his kids are concerned. Claire and Linds was interesting too.

Author's Response:

Jerry's one tough cookie where people he loves in concerned.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

I've heard that E causes bi polar syndrome. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

It's true as well as other mental problems later in life. The drug is dangerous.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 174: No Daddy

Debbie is too easy on people; whatever. Brian has nightmares too? Wow! Justin was perfect with Brian.

Author's Response:

Debbie has a soft spot for a mother to be.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Glad Pam arrived ok. Lindsay is too much for words.

Author's Response:

Most babies get born without trouble; Lindsay is trying to return to her previous status with the gang.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

glad it was a routine surgery for Brian. also glad it's turning into a mini vacation, his retirement from Kinnetic slowed him down some, but breaks are great.

Author's Response:

Gall bladder removal is a day surgery now without complications. It was good for Brian to take more time off for sure. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Jerry, smart man.

Glad Claire and Linds had their talk. Hope Linds takes it to heart.


Author's Response:

Jerry's a complicated man; Lindsay will not make trouble.

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 177: Emergency

Thanks for the updates at the beginning of the chapter.  There is so much going on it is great to find out where everyone is at.


Keep up the great work!!!

Author's Response:

A complex story must have updates so I try to keep this moving with the info and not over do it. Thanks Jay for commenting.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning


Bye, bye pervert.

Hope Bri will be ok. I want him around a long time too.

Good job.

Kiss. Kiss. Kiss

Author's Response:

Funny how the man could be taken out and no one ever said a word about it to make it happen. No conspiring done; no crime, and nobody knows who did what. Glad you liked the chapter. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

Good chapter.

Gus, cute as always!

Author's Response:

Gus is one of my favorite characters to write. Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

a FULL chapter. so glad Zack gave Ricky the name of # of the creep. love Justin's little role play & knowing Brian's moods, getting him to go to therapy. Brian saying yes and going to therapy asap.

linds and claire, glad seperatley they are doing well, could be karma if they got together, if not creepy though. ;-)

Author's Response:

Funny you say that; more on Lindsay and Claire in the next chapter, and Jerry deals with the molester and his boy. Thanks so much for commenting alys.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

ooooh daaaamm they done f&^% with the wrong child star... ruuun ruuun.

very good zack, if clair is talking how bad of a mother you are lens you reeealy f&^% up... even the blondes blond can see that. wooow

keep them comeing Mr. Hamster heres some extra peltes to keep you going...lol :D

Author's Response:

Yeah the molester's days are numbered. Zack's a smart kid; a thousand bucks means nothing to him too since he has millions. Mr. Hamster appreciates the treat. Thanks nicole.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 175: Hook Up

Love the opening of this chapter so much. It's HOT!

Poor Brian.

The dark side of Hollywood is more & more get on the news.

Love you.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the hotness. Brian will be ok in time. Zack is too beautiful for his on good. Many will try to get in his pants over the coming years; Devin and Gus too. Hollywood's a very dirty place if you know it for real. Love you too.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 174: No Daddy

Ah, those colds in our babies... Well, it’s not serious but we must be careful to keep the baby's nose clear and keep an eye on the risk of dehydration. My little Maïalen's better now (... until the next cold from his brother ;)  )

I’m glad that Brian agrees to see a shrink. This can help him. Justin is quite right to force him to it...

Now I’m going to join my husband in bed. It is time, I don’t stop yawning

Great chapter, I love it

Author's Response:

Since I never had a kid I'm winging it here. I've had family and friends with children though to remember what they went through raising their children. Thanks so much for all your comments.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Happy for Jenna and Gus, they have an adorable little girl. I'm sure Justin and Brian are happiest grandparents... But what a surprise to see Lindsay at Ted, without invitation. She has certainly got some nerve ! The only thing she gets is a slap on the part of Jenna (wow, bravo) and a total rejection by his son.... Well done. Debbie has a really big heart, but the reunion is not yet on the agenda

Excellent chapter

Author's Response:

Debbie's in the dog house for a few weeks for this one but not too bad. Justin especially is happy for a baby girl; he's wanted one always. Lindsay's lonely and hopes for reunion with the gang and her son but like you said it's not yet going to happen.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys

Jenna knows now about Gus’mother. Brian is very threatening in his talk with Lindsay, but he has good reasons for setting the record straight. Jerry is wonderful. He handles very well the careers of his young actors. He acts masterfully with Disney. I love it...


Kisses for my favorite writter

Author's Response:

I don't think Brian would really hurt Lindsay or he would have already done it. Jerry knows the business of Hollywood and how to make the deal. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 171: It's Not Pretty

Wow, Lindsay has found how to win her freedom but I’m now very worried about her futur baby. I strongly hope she will be able to behave better with him than she did with Gus. Anyway, Gus doesn’t seem to want see her again. It's good that he can talk with his wife

Excellent, it's always a delight to read this story

Kisses for you and the beautiful Mr Hamster

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it; Jenna and Gus are very close. It never really came up until now to tell about Lindsay. It's not something Gus is proud of. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On

I liked this chapter. The training continues, Gus and Jenna have even the opportunity to go on their honeymoon. Everything is fine except for the poor Vance. It’s right he deserves to retire. He must follow Justin's advice and enjoy his time... I loved the bodyguard with the little spies. They are lucky that the man is so kind with them ...

Superb chapter


Author's Response:

I have to fix dinner before answering all my reviews but I want to answer this one; you're the 1,700th reviewer! The next chapter's dedicated to you Ihintza. I'm delighted you enjoy the story. Love back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 169: The Conveyor

It was a great weekend with my older brother and Tomas birthday party… I’m tired but I promised myself to catch my delay in my comments before the end of the week.

Well, I knew children would agree, but what work for them !. It’s not easy especially when Zack and Devin are still so young... Many sacrifices but a good future for all of them if they succeed... Impressive, the training with Mark.

Great chapter

Big kisses

Author's Response:

Family parties are so much fun. Thank you for commenting; it really helps me write to hear from you. The boys love to act and it really isn't work to them. Big kisses back!

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