Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2019 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
And that's a wrap! Love the glimpses into the gang's future. This story deserves a platinum ribbon. Great job...
Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2016 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
honestly i loved it really. thank you for all your work
Author's Response: Please pardon my tardy response! Very happy to see your review and see this story being entertaining still to people, rukia12.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2016 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Wow was some story, I loved everything about it x from chapter 1 up to the last. It had everything you could dream of in a story. Excellent work seriously excellent
Author's Response: Once again I must ask to be excused for being late in responding to your review comment. Thank you for the kind words; you made my day. Looking back I wish I had done a better ending but I was burned out writing that epic tale and just had to end it and take a long break. Glad to see you sharing your work on Whispers, vic32. I don't write anymore or read much since I'm the tech support for this website and others which leaves me very little time to do stuff like fan fiction. If you can handle a crack!fic, may I suggest my story "Embraced" with a vampire Brian and his slave Justin.
Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2015 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
This story is amazing i really enjoy it, so creative the way you board in all the questions of the day life throughout the history! Liked the introduction of religion, i had the catholic education but sincerely i think that they are surrounded by hypocrisy.. the way that i see it why do we have to follow one book written thousands of years that interpretacion cause so many controversies and wars, in the end is all about love and understanding! Loved to see Justin Brian become like equals in the business and pull all his friends & family straight up with them, i admit that i was feel confused with all the characters i had to go back backward sometimes,but i had so much fun with it thank you! :) please consider writing in the future again ;) :)
Ps. sorry my english :)
Author's Response: Hello Cristina,
Thank You! very much for your review comments. It warms my heart to see an old story still being read and enjoyed.
Don't be too hard on the Church. They did keep Christianity alive during some very dark ages for centuries. Granted, they changed some things but for the most part I believe most of the Bible is accurate, allowing for some errors in translations, coping, and such. Personally, I'm a student of Biblical Studies and hold a very high respect for the scriptures. I like to think the original manuscripts were accurate; however, all we have today is copies of copies of copies, and man has made some changes here and there over time for political and theological reasons.
I might also add that the Church created schools, hospitals, universities, and missions globally before any body else thought to help the poor around the world. Yes they made mistakes and performed wars at times, but they also did a great amount of good as well - all things considered.
It made my day to read your comment.
Hugs,
bob
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2014 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
After the third try I finished your story-- I loved Brian and Justin and the Lindsey mess, I enjoy anything to do with Gus, his Hershey ad was delightful and his interview with "ohpa" was so sweet. I liked the relationship with Mel and Brian, still witty but not anger driven. The parts I did't care for were large amount of characters, I finally had to write them down and who fucked who and who was bi and who was gay,keeping up the surrogates and which child belonged to whom--it took a lot of time and was distracting, also all the church stuff was too much, in other storiest by different authors handled the hate mongers and was less detailed one comes to mind is Prego stud it touched on hateful people who use their faith as a weapon against others out of fear or just feeling they are so better than others. I read your work when ever I spot it and always enjoy-sorry I'm critical over some your story for the most part I loved it-hope I don't sound mean or harsh I don't mean to.
Author's Response: I totally understand the faults of this story. It wasn't planned but instead just flowed out of me like a rushing river of words. Heck, even I got mixed up with the characters at times and had to go back and read what was written to try and keep it all straight. The Bible stuff was to share with the fan fiction community the theology of gay Christians who have a large source of evidence that give a totally different new light on the Bible and Homosexuality. Gay men and boys existed at the time of Christ and were called naturally born eunuchs (Matthew 19:12). That name was still in use by the early Church in 400 AD that I'm aware of. Well they don't tell you that in Sunday School so someone has to share the evidence and put a new light on the Word. The Bible has been used to promote wars, genocides, slavery, and more recently even making interracial marriage a crime. Now they still try to use it against gays and I predict that some way they'll figure out how to use some verses to battle illegal aliens too, since they seem to be the next politically correct targets for the masses.
To my knowledge this QAF story is the only one that has attempted to bring Christian Gay Theology to the reading public of fan fiction. It seems to have been very popular and remains today the most read story on Whispers.
bob
Reviewer: jacket8 (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Dear Bob - I have just finished reading Forever Yours for the fourth time. What can I say, you are an incredible story teller. One big question? About 3 years ago I read a story about Brian and Justin that was really excellent but also different. It was very long and had Justin becoming wealthy thru his art work alone. It also had something called "landing" and delt with Brian and Justin having additional close relations with other men while also keeping their relationship primary. Like this story it had sub stories, photos and had the two investing and becoming very wealthy. I just loved it. The way it was written made me think that you were also the author. I have looked for it, but never found it again. Are you the arthor and if you are, where can I find it? Please reply.
Author's Response: What an honor that you would read this monster size story 4 times! I can't remember the name of the other story but yes, I wrote it and decided to take it off line. Basically it went too far revealing things that were not my secrets to share. I had a copy of it on a thumb drive but an ex-roommate used the thumb drive and erased it so now I don't have a copy of it anywhere. I wish I had better news for you but that one is probably gone. Thank you very much for your comments.
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2014 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Just finish all the chapters, took me a while but finally anyway I like it but I just have some few corrections.
1. There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistake.
2. Some dialogue doesn't make sense.
3. You have too many supporting characters and because of that you had a hard time keeping tract of them. for example. Frenchie was jerry and Mark's Chef but in one chapter he became Brian and Justin's chef?
4. You have character with the same name but different spelling. You had accidentally put Trey as the Chef when it was suppose to be Tray.
I hope your not mad, I do like your story but I think this are some of the things you need to be aware of so you won't have the same mistake again in your story.
Anyway I'm off to read your story embraced. Hopefully I'll be able to finish it quickly.
Author's Response: Thanks BrianNJustin for your review. Everything you say is true. I'm a lousy writer and will be the first to admit it. I'm working on a B.S. degree and don't write fan fiction anymore.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
It took me a really long time, but I finally managed to finish this story.... All I can really say is that I absolutely LOVED it and it was worth every second I spent reading it! :D The only thing that got me sad was Hunter's death T_T.... Anyway, hope to read you soon in another story! :D Kisses!
Author's Response: Due to health I got behind on answering reviews. Thank you very much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2013 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I love a really long story. This one kept me busy for a whole week! Thanks for writing! TAG
Author's Response: Forgive my late response. I don't do much but sleep lately. Thanks Tag for reading and commenting. This one is long!
Reviewer: Neoisevil (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
My friend told me about this site two days ago and said i had to read this story and since i found it i spent my free time reading it and finished it. I love this story and cant wait to see what other stories this site have. I am a big qaf fan but my fav site shut down a while ago i went looking for new cites cuz i totally hate how they ended the show... I am rambling anyways awesomw
Author's Response: How wonderful of you to read and comment Neoisevil (love the pen name too). I was amazed how popular this story was and still is since it has passes 311,000 reads to date. My vampire story "Embraced" was also very popular but a bit like a crack fic however - it's very weird at times :) Thank you very much for joining Whispers, reading and commenting.
Reviewer: lynne (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I have been reading your story not for two weeks constantly. I have to say it was amazing. I have just finished it and had to comment. I have laughed, cried, screamed and cringed and just enjoyed every word that you have written. Why you are not writing novels is beyond me I would buy them all. Thank you for taking the time to write and giving me so much pleasure reading.
Authors comment:
Wow! Thank you so much for this review.
You're a sweetheart for letting me know you have been entertained.
love,
bob
Reviewer: angelstar2 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I have already read this story before but that DID NOT STOP ME from staying up all night to reread this epic tale again! I love it I just love it! Its amazing that a story that in the first chapter i was thinking whoa this is moving fast developed so well and throughly I LOVE IT ALL HARD!!!
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to one day go back and give it a better ending. I was just burned out at the time doing so much writing and very fast too.
I'm so grateful you commented angelstar2.
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
great story!!! read it straight through and enjoyed the b/j relationship and plot twists. will look for the justin psychic story--hope it is finished. i don't read WIPs as so many are never finished...
hope your health is better!!
Author's Response: After 7 days in the hospital recently they got me well again. After 40 I'm convinced it's all just patch and run from now on!
Sorry for replying so late since I hadn't checked this story for new comments lately. Rarely do we get any on finished works.
Love you and thank you for taking the time to let me know I've entertained you.
bob
Reviewer: Angelstar2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I download and read this fic all the way though. I looked like a zombie at work for reading till 4 in the morning, I completely ignored my hubby, I took only minor breaks for RL so that I could finish this story and i must say TIME WELL SPENT!
Amazing tale and how the family grew was awesome. I wasnt sure at the start but by 5-6 chapters in I was totes hooked and addicted! Didnt get the bible segway for thoese three chapters but I still enjoyed it. But overall this story is nothing short of amazing and I enjoyed the hell out of your continuation of the greatest love story ever told.
AMAZING FIC! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: I owe you a huge apology for being so late getting back to your wonder feedback. RL hasn't been kind, and rarely do we get feedback on finished works so we sometimes fail to check for reviews.
I have started a new novel that will go greater into detail regarding the Holy Bible and Homosexuality. Bible Calculus I'm confident I can refute all of the anti-gay scriptures with historical, cultural, and ancient language facts obtained online today. The Bible is used to hurt gay people and we have to fight back. As we say in the faith, Praise God and pass the ammo!
I'm very grateful for your comments and it really does brighten my heart to hear I've entertained you.
love,
bob
Reviewer: jason (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
really loved this story many beautiful lads. your writing is unique, haven't read anyone as prolific and diverse as you. think i will read partners in crime next as it is my line of work.
Author's Response: Thank you Jason for commenting. I'm very happy you liked the story which is rapidly approaching 200,000 read hits which amazes me to no end. In Partners in Crime Justin is psychic and he solves some interesting cases and there are some very funny stories about weird cases too. Years ago I was a paramedic and dated a detective in Vice for a major California city; taught me a lot about cops no one is suppose to know about :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Nice story. Thanks for writing it. You have a wonderful talent and your prolific writing is admirable.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love to write if the hamster does his job.
Reviewer: mysid (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Thank you for taking a step in the right direction, but I'm afraid that was just the tip of the iceberg.
And, out of curiosity, why were you so accomodating to my review but react so negatively when Anonymous also pointed out the appearance of racism in the story. Were you just offended by him/her not using a name to review?
Reviewer: mysid (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I'm afraid I have to agree with Anonymous. The story is dripping with both racism and sexism, and although it was--presumably-- unintentional, it is there. Tammy speaking in broken English and calling her employee "Master"? Are you completely unaware of how wrong that it is?
Employees don't call their employers "Master"; slaves call their owners "Master". And given that Tammy is African-American, that her employer is caucasian, and that the story is set in the USA with its history of whites enslaving Africans, we have a combination that makes me cringe.
Author's Response: OK, I can fix that. I'm familar with house servants of the very rich do use that term regardless of their race. I'd rather change the story than offend anyone.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Loved this story! On to the next one :)
Author's Response: HI KAT!!!!! Thank you for the comments on this story; sorry I didn't catch them sooner. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Tom (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
This was a really good story. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and let me know. Check out my other ones especially "Embraced". It's sort of my favorite one with Brian a vampire and Justin's his blood/sex slave forever.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful moment that you have offered us... Mr hamster can go to relax, quiet in his mind and the heart full of pride. We wish you good continuation in your work and much success... Maybe we'll have the opportunity to find a new story in the future. Who knows ? Anyway, this story (just like the other two) was wonderful ... We enjoyed reading all this (comments and answers included) ... Big big kisses of siblings
Intza and Gex
Ps: You had left an email address. By the time I join my brother (currently immersed in the mid-year exams) and the address has disappeared. My address i.barrets, (for Gex, gexan64) by gmail.com
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear from you and sent you a note. Your comments kept me going in tough times. Ah, mid-terms; I remember them fondly...NOT! Actually I did pretty good in school before and hope to do it again. Thanks Intza and Gex so much for being here for me and Mr. Hamster.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Thank you, you spoiled us(in a good way!)
Author's Response: It was a labor of love to write for you, and my honor. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
What changed your mind. Last week you were going to continue posting once every 2 weeks or so. Unless I missed a posting where you changed your mind - this is a surprise.
Author's Response: My college work is so demanding I would at best write crap; so I felt it was better to end it here and not produce sh!t work (including my course work too). Duh? This story is as long as the Old Testament in word count!!!! (or pretty close at least). I did say I would try to keep writing; I couldn't and didnot promise it. Thank you vevy much jane for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I have enjoyed this story immensely and I hope to see you writing again someday. Meanwhile I can always re-read.
Author's Response: Thanks Carol; it would take many hours to re-read it again. I did recently and was surprised how much I forgot what I wrote :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
Thank you for your stories I have enjoyed them good luck with your college program :)Chris
Author's Response: Thanks Chris; I tend to devote 110% of myself into a project and could not in reality do the story and my studies too. Thanks for reading and commenting very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
THANK YOU.
THANK YOU.
THANK YOU.
ALL THE BEST.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for all your comments. Go back and see a new large HOT picture of Mark Griffin on the last chapter now.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 191: In Conclusion
I loved your story very much. you did a wonderful job. I hope we will get more great stories in the future.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much rose; I have no plans to write again in the near future. I'm neck deep in new college studies. I posted a new large HOT picture of Mark Griffin on the last chapter. Enjoy!!!
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