Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Welcome to the little Pamela Cole, new addition in the family. Jenna and Gus are proud parents and Justin must be completely wild about his first granddaughter... The little party at Ted to meet the Pittsburgh’s family is unfortunately ruined by Lindsay. But what did she hope ? Day of Atonement ? It's a bit early to start talking about success considering Gus’ reaction and above all Jenna’s.

I love Jerry’s idea for the boys with a sequel of X-Men. I hope this film will be made...

Excellent as always. I love this story and the development. You work wonders

 



Author's Response:

Lindsay was only a blip on the day's radar screen; no big deal. I hope they make a new X-Men movie like this so I added it to the story. I really enjoyed that series and hope for more. Reading reviews gives me the inspiration to write well. Thank you!

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Glad Pam arrived ok. Lindsay is too much for words.



Author's Response:

Most babies get born without trouble; Lindsay is trying to return to her previous status with the gang.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Happy for Jenna and Gus, they have an adorable little girl. I'm sure Justin and Brian are happiest grandparents... But what a surprise to see Lindsay at Ted, without invitation. She has certainly got some nerve ! The only thing she gets is a slap on the part of Jenna (wow, bravo) and a total rejection by his son.... Well done. Debbie has a really big heart, but the reunion is not yet on the agenda

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Debbie's in the dog house for a few weeks for this one but not too bad. Justin especially is happy for a baby girl; he's wanted one always. Lindsay's lonely and hopes for reunion with the gang and her son but like you said it's not yet going to happen.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

fab as always.. only 1 chapter....so sad.    thanks for this story.  DEB



Author's Response:

My doctor is making me sleep more so the chapters will come a bit slower. Thanks  Deb.

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

sorry for the mistake: the right word is "where"



Author's Response:

Thank you!   :)

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Hi JT, I think you don't know whwrw to put Lindsey...can I help you? :)



Author's Response:

Heck yeah! How bad do we sink her? hehehehe

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

loved that jenna slapped lins. that lins thought she could be welcomed back.



Author's Response:

Gus married a firecracker who has so much hatred for Lindsay for hurting her man. Thank you alys.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

Well, well, well..... someone never learn a lesson.

What Deb is thinking...??!!!

Good job you guys.

 



Author's Response:

Debbie looks for the best of people with her Christian forgiveness shared to all. It has been over 10 years since she hurt Gus and now she's with child and Debbie feels bad for her. They talked and visited and Debbie is the only one who will see her that way. She'll be very cautious about Lindsay now. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 173: Pamela Cole Kinney

go gus ...aaaaw pam..  keep them comeing Mr. hamster



Author's Response:

Gus is like his dads and won't put up with bullshit. Pam's a lucky baby. Thanks nicole for commenting.

You must login (register) to review.