Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

Mark McGuire who plays Spiderman asked the retired producer

its Toby McGuire.

I just love everyone together again, and in California enjoying a vacation!



Author's Response:

Thank you for telling me about this boo boo. I'll go fix it at once. With the long hours I stay up writing it's a wonder my stories are riddled with mistakes. Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

I loved Gus and Jenna's first time together and Stan first time with Randy and Patrick.



Author's Response:

Ahhhh...young love; glad you liked it.   :P

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

Wow, California air seems excellent for libido ... Sea air, I assume, because the effect is the same here ;).

I think Stan and Gus have enjoyed their night... It’s time Jerry agrees to take again the studio after this mess... He has just to wait for the right moment.

Brilliant, as always

Big love to you and Mr Hamster



Author's Response:

I loved it when I lived on the coast of California in Ocean Beach. It's some of my best memories. Love you too.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

I take a little time before going to bed to comment last chapters. This first night in Malibu is... very intense, especially to Stan and above all, to Gus and Jenna. The visit to the studio proves to be full of surprises for Jerry. He, who just thought to guide the group, ends up to consider taking control of his old company...

Superb chapter

Thank you to you and Mr Hamster. This story is more and more wonderful



Author's Response:

I'm very grateful you took the time to write me. The story is expanding in new directions and going forward. Mr. Hamster blows you kisses.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

Thank you for the dedication JT.

Love the story!! Can't wait to see the New Moon The movie.

Like the idea of Jerry making the come back. So much going to happen.... The twist is ticken...

The more I read this story, the more I love it.

Good works!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your faithful chapter reviews. I can't describe how much they motivate me to write. I'm looking forward to the movie too. Love you!

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 159: Spring Break Party Pt. II

Love the idea of them taking over the studio again. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you Jay for letting me know and the compliment. I'm taking a break and will be back real soon.

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