Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

Well, well, well... Children are a big concern for us, parents. Fortunately, it’s only eyes trouble for Trey but he doesn’t want to wear glasses. Yes, wearing glasses give often rise to the mocking from the other kids in school. It's a good thing that Jerry and Mark are so vigilant with their offspring. Justin, as for him, made the choice to stay home to care for his family. So, he can to start painting again. Brian is certainly a little sad but Justin will give him smile every night ;)

Love



Author's Response:

I had to wear glasses as a kid and as an adult. I should get my eyes checked again real soon for it has been two years now. Love back!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

Poor Peter......

Love when you write about the boys. I like it very much.

Sorry for short review, my house under renovation. What a tiring day.

Kiss. Kiss. Kiss.



Author's Response:

We have a winner! You are the 1,600th reviewer complicated!

The next chapter is dedicated to you. Short reviews are fine! I'm happy for two words and the hit. Thank you for being a loyal fan.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

Wow... The CEO restroom doesn’t see these hot moments between Brian and Justin any more. Too bad ! Justin will stay home and take care for his family. He returns to his passion, painting. But the nights will be hot, hot, hot……….

Lindsay has a great time in her penal camp... Matilda is so cute. She organized games and activities... What a luck!

Great job



Author's Response:

Time will tell how the Justin work situation changes and how much. Lindsay could have it much worse if you can believe that.

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

Lindsay is so messed up now. LMAO

I feel for Peter, it sucks to hurt. I hope Trey is ok. Justin's an artist; not a business man. I can see him wanting to make art at peace and raise his kids.



Author's Response:

Payback time for Lindsay. I had a broken arm repaired by surgery as a child and that can really hurt at first. You're right on about Justin's motives. Thanks for commenting very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

 

Lindsay.....Lindsay wow  can you be any more like your hair color..

Mr. Hamster  this is a fambulos story  i reeealy enjoy my "Forever Yours" fix at night and early morning  but all these kids are start to confuse me on who belong to who i can handle gus, jr, deven, and curtis, and maaaybe on a good night mark and jerry first 3 kids form his ex. but after that forget it. i'm sorry, other wise i'm loveing the story kepp them comeing.



Author's Response:

If I didn't have a character list I'd be confused too!



Author's Response:

Forever Yours Main Characters

Brian and Justin / Devin, Gus and Peter (

Melanie (Mel’s new lover Nancy and daughter Linda 11) JR is 10

Jennifer, Tucker, Molly and husband Tyler and baby Tyler Rex or T-Rex

Carl and Debbie (Vic)   Harmony and Helena, 12

Emmett and Drew, and Stan 14 (now owns Babylon)

Ted (Theodore) and Blake / (and Randy Morris 16 lover with Patrick at Ben and Don’s house)

Patrick and Randy lovers

Ben (Don, a grad student who was HIV+) and Patrick 14

Cynthia CFO at K

Hunter and Tiffany Dicken / married with Roan, 2, daughter

Michael N. and Mark 23

Gary (young hot smart artist)

Tim (senior artist; head of artists at K) / Allen head of Video Media

Jerry Griffin with Marvel Comics (kids: Keith 18, Janet 16, Trey 12) lover with Mark Davis (JT) 28

Claire Townsend (Brian’s sister), sons John 21 and Peter 16

Lovers Peter, Frank, and Shawn 16 (was with Ted and Blake first)

Lovers John and Kent 19 (John is Peter’s brother and Claire’s son too) own:

The Malibu Estates, 125 units, $1500 month rent, 16.5 mil purchase price, 3%, 30 yrs , B&J financed

46th floor of the U.S. Steel building K main offices

42 th floor for art and video

18th floor Kinnetik Junior

60th Floor for Melanie and Nancy

Daphne Chanders and her boyfriend John

Tony Sheppard 28 (Mark’s ex and friend) actor

Ricky, security for Mark in Malibu

Frenchie, chef in Malibu

Jerry’s attorney Adam and his lover Fox

Charlie and Jason, K pilots

Tray…..chef at Britin and later in Malibu

 

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 156: Report Cards

great chapters. can't wait to meets deb's new girls. hope nothing is too wrong with mark's boy, hopefully just some reading glasses...

 



Author's Response:

It is a reading sight problem that came on gradual and suddenly he couldn't cope with it anymore. I'm jumping to the Spring Break next chapter then we deal with his vison without glasses. Thanks for commenting alys.

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