Midnight Whispers
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Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

Wow, T-Rex is a damn nickname for a baby. I love it. That kid’s got a great future ahead of him. Anyway, here is a new element to enlarge the family. Molly and Tyler are now parents... I’m happy for them. Soon Ben and Don ? Randy caused a bit of a stir on the Pittsburgh’s scene. Well,  I can imagine Ted. Fortunately, the psychology of Blake will make up the stress of his boyfriend ... Start of the new adventure for Linds ... Yippee 

Excellent chapter
Very good. Thank you for all this work

I'm wild about Mr Hamster...



Author's Response:

I laughed when that nickname came to me. Many changes for our couples in the story and new kids to deal with. Mr. Hamster is fond of you too.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

Love the name. LOVE the name!!!

Good job!!

Great chapter.

Big hugs.

 



Author's Response:

Once I had Rex Tyler the T-Rex nickname jumped into my head and I laughed. Hugs back and thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

loved randy razzing daddy ted and blake

sad for linds, but she deserved it, wondering what she'll do inside & with who



Author's Response:

Fantastic! You're my 1,500th reviewer alys. The next chapter is dedicated to you.

Randy's a hot sharp lad but he has issues as you will soon learn; not impossible but a bit challenging especially for Ted. What would you like for Lindsay to experience? I should open that up for reader's input. Thank you for commenting and helping the story make this historical milestone. I express this thanks to all my wonderful reviewers.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

I love that nickname, it’s original… T-Rex. Some believe the name affects the character. With a name like this, Molly and Tyler will have a too sweet little monster at home... Randy seems to adjust well to his social life in Pittsburgh (especially social life in Liberty Avenue). I love Ted and Blake in front of this beautiful boy. Ted won’t survive if he keep this up ;)

I’m longing to know what will happen now that Lindsay is in a normal cell

Excellent chapter. Oh, I love this story so much

Thank you for this job ... And Mr Hamster is toooooo cute



Author's Response:

I too loved the nickname T-Rex for Rex Tyler. It's a good butch name. Ted would be lost without Blake to be the voice of reason with a challenging teenager to raise this late in the game. Blake's up to the challenge and Ted will be grateful for it. The best of lovers compliment each other with shared strengths and weaknesses. Lindsay's adventure is about to begin and she hasn't got a clue what she's in for. Readers like you who review give me the power to keep writing this epic novel. Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

your hamster is soooo sweet. :-)) oh by the way... your story too :-)) rose



Author's Response:

He's almost as cute as me! thank you rose!

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

I love the T-Rex.        Quick question: What do you have instore for Lindsay?



Author's Response:

Prison can be hell on earth for a child molester; man or woman. It should be interesting real soon. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

Welcome baby T-Rex! I bet he's a cutie pie. Randy sounds like he's having fun in Pittsburgh.



Author's Response:

Randy's the new hot blond bombshell to explode in Pittsburgh. He had to be a 10 in looks to be on the island to begin with. He has been around the block and isn't really interested in tricking either. Ted feels a little overwhelmed by him but Blake is on top of the situation without a problem. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 142: T-Rex

Haha! Ted can't win tonight can he?  I hope he'll survive the balance of Randy's teenage years, without getting an ulcer.  He also had to know the odds were against him on winning that bet.  *g*

Welcome to the family baby Rex!  Just a note: in the paragraph where Molly gave birth, you wrote that Lindsay came out to the waiting room smiling, and I think you meant Jennifer.

Linds' first day behind bars...the first of many more to come.  I actually think that once she gets acclimated, Linds would do rather well.  Unlike Michael, she is intelligent and she's a practiced emotional manipulator.  Look how many years she was able to play B and Mel against each other, and how many times she interfered between B & J due to, IMO, her jealousy of J's relationship with B.  Should be interesting anyways...

Another good one!



Author's Response:

Thank you for catching that stupid typo; how dumb can a writer who doesn't get enough sleep get?

Lindsay might be smart in manipulating people in the free world but prison's a different environment and she'll be known as a child molester. That places her at the bottom of the food chain inside prison walls. She hasn't got a clue what she's in for. For example: she hasn't never been in a fight but that will change very soon. I'm having fun just thinking about the future for her.

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