Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

They've been investigated for months! Its a good thing they have always dotted their i's and crossed their t's when it comes to that island.



Author's Response:

They wanted to create a paradise for gay people and not take advantage of the young one doing it. Everyone was evaluated and strongly instructed not to break the law. It only takes one clown to fu*k up the entire circus. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

Mark and Fox meet the team and make a reminder of rules (that's not such a bad thing) and the new form isn’t a bad idea (idem for the uniforms). The general attornay won’t find a shred of evidence. And he admits the island was already under surveillance and no evidence of prostitution has been found... The undercover cop can also confirm that after his discussion with the client...

Excellent chapter

Big hug



Author's Response:

I think you'll like the next chapter too. The chapters are short so you should be able to get caught up easy.

Big hug back dude!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

I think any pleasure club, whatever the variety, probably does get investigated by undercover police, especially if there are teenagers involved.  I'm sure Fox would have advised the guys to expect this as well back when the island was just an idea. 

I'm glad the island had already been investigated and nothing was found.  All employers, especially uber rich ones, will always have the odd employee who is going to try to get a piece of the pie (whether by fair means or foul).

Great, on to the next...



Author's Response:

They did establish the island obeying the law from the beginning and didn't want the workers selling sex to begin with. The workers could have sex with guests if they wanted to but they were forbidden to sell it. All the guests knew the rules of the resort when they booked in and signed a statement stating they were informed. Attorneys try to sue anyone if they smell money. Thanks for your review cakdg.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

I like how they approached the problem head on and faced it legally. This whole lawsuit has no merit. Got to read on and see how this unfolds more.



Author's Response:

Let me know know how you like the outcome. Thanks for reviewing Dave.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

Employees of the island are now aware of the threat they have to bear. The rules are clear and respected. The meeting with the attorney general is going well… Apparently, the island was already under surveillance and no evidence has been reported. I hope this misadventure will stop there.

Brilliant chapter

A big hug for my favorite writter and a little peck on the nose for Mr Hamster

 

 



Author's Response:

In the end it was much to do about nothing. Never did the selling of sex exist on the island the way they worked it. Big hug back to our favorite French gal.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

Stupid boy... stupid boy..... stupid boy.

Like this chapter.

Genius.

Love you.



Author's Response:

When I was 16, I was pretty stupid too. Let's see how this plays out. Love you too complicated.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 138: The Investigation

thought I reviewed this yesterday.....

great chapter, glad the rules for employees is so clear and everyone understood them and didn't try and cheat...



Author's Response:

They have a foolproof working system; they don't need to cheat. Gentleman's clubs all over America operate this way legally. As long as the boys and girls don't perform sexual acts there is no crime committed. Thanks for commenting alys.

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