Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
I'm glad they ended up keeping Kinnetic and what an idiot that guy was to not have the money available. Bad business! But good for Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: Kinnetik was never in any major danger; the owner was at his wits end until Justin came home however. Vangard was losing his shirt over a period of time as Brian slowly took more and more big clients from him. It was a merger destined to happen. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Oops… Jerome goofs on this buy. I don’t think his bosses will appreciate the loss of 3 billions. Finally, the deal is off what should make Brian happy. And as Brian loves his family and doesn’t want to disappoint them, the movement to California is still topical. Grandiose
Bravo
Author's Response: There's no reason they should be without a home in both areas. Everyone wins except for Jerome. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Wow ... I thought it was a deal ! But I forgot about the fabulous but evil great writter you are… What a twist again. Poor Jerome, everything didn’t go according to plan… AD Europe won’t appropriate Kinnetik. Brian keeps his baby and their money and they still have the intention of moving to Malibu. I love it
I’m also happy for Frank.
Excellent chapter
Big Love
Author's Response: When Brian had a way to end the deal he took it. In his heart he didn't want to let Kinnetik go and found a way to make everyone happy. Frank will do very well as a model. Big love back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Brian is so happy & glad. He is 3 billion richer & his baby is stay with him.
Frank is so hot... he can sell anything.
The kids is so happy they still moving to Malibu.
Excellent.
Love you.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is going up right now. Love you 2.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
i love where you are taking this story. thanks deb
Author's Response: Thank you deb for reading and being kind enough to let me know. :)
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Thank you for the great update and good night.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting; I had a wonderful sleep and so did Mr. Hamster. Now we're back at it for more chapter(s).
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
I love your story.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me. :)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Hahaha! I love this twist. Jerome made a very big booboo. This way everybody wins (except AD Europe) and J gets to keep up his flying hours too (if he so chooses).
I never would have imagined that Michael would be smarter than Linds either. But then again, Linds hasn't had to fear for her life, been physically abused, or have to haul garbage like Michael. Those things have to have had an impact. Maybe Linds needs tough love, too?
Happy for Frank. If he needs tips on he can ask Mark or Hunter.
Fun chapter!
Author's Response: Funny how things can work out. Interesting analogy about Lindsay you have here. Frank would look good wearing rags. Thanks cakdg for commenting.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 130: The Best Laid Plans
Your a dog JT. What a plot twist again. You really had me going there. The latest things sound good too. I never know what to expect with your story.
Author's Response: Hehehe; one never knows in the world of business how the wind blows. Thanks for commenting.
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