Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
A week a little complicated with a bad cold and a clash with Txabi’s teacher about the bad (!) family environment in which I raise my son (Grrrr) Finaly, I find time to sit down and comment all the chapters I've read...
Bill is finally fired. Good ! The merger plan is huge. There is a damn twist to the plot. I'd rather be in favour. Really. They guarantee that nothing will change and employees will stay. The family can move in California to join Mark and Jerry. They don’t need to work and they could always develop another project as they have done with the Resort. Of course, it may be more difficult for Brian because he created this society and it’s his baby. I'm sure it will be a great new life ...
Superb chapter
You're the best. Big kisses for you two
Author's Response: You should report that teacher and perhaps consider legal action. She could get in a lot of trouble doing that here in the USA. You have to read on and see how the merger goes. Big kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
This review is for this chapter, I don't what make it appear for chapter 1.
WOW!! Didn't see it coming.
Can't wait for the 2 family to live together.
I love it.
Brilliant.
Muah. Muah. muah.
Author's Response: Thanks for the additonal review; double hit me any time baby! I'm so happy you're reading and reviewing my little story. Love back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
Wow ! Kinnetik is about to be bought. Huge step for Brian and Justin. They’ll finally be able to move on the West Coast. The children will get together. It's a new life offered to them. Justin is ready to do it, Brian seems more reserved, that’s understandable. Kinnetik, it’s Brian. A whole new life awaits them in California.
I love Emmett. I have a good friend like him (flamboyant and extravagant). I love shopping with him and he has pretty good taste unlike Emmett.
Excellent chapter
Big hug
Now, I go back to study…
Author's Response: Time will tell how this plays out. Emmett's a riot of a character and so much fun to write. Big hug back and happy studies for you.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
wonderful as always. thanks DEB
Author's Response: Glad you like it; more tonight since Mr. Hamster isn't tired yet. Thanks for commenting Anonymous.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
i say no. all the big whales came brian for the way he produces his ads. there is no way that another company can do what they do. it will lose alot of clients. then what. i can't picture brian sitting on the beach lying around in the sun everyday with nothing to do. that's not him.
Author's Response: Kinnetik has the same staff making the same ads with ad men and artists with years of seasoned activity. If they follow the Kinnetik model the clients won't see a difference. Brian will not sit on the beach; you can count on that. There's nothing stopping him and Justin from starting a new company. Thanks for commenting sjmpets3.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
I don't like that Bill got off that easy, but understand why they handled it this way.
Much as I love him, I wouldn't let Em loose on dressing my kids either. Lol.
I'm not surprised that anyone is offering for Kinnetik, I am surprised they are considering it though. It would be a big change in lifestyle. I can see where J would be more enthusiastic, because he could pick up his art again, but I'm not so sure I see B sitting on his hands while all the kids are in school. He'd have to be doing something.
Another twisty one, can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Bill will have a tough time getting another art job now. This is the only agency in town so he would have to leave the Pitts. Emmett is so crazy; he's clueless how weird he is but Drew loves him anyway. This is top dollar for the company and they don't need to work anymore; they're getting a 100 million a month off the rentals alone. Brian will find something to do with his time. Everyone loves California so the show goes on. Thanks cakdg.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 128: Merger Wanted
Glad to hear they will dump Bill; what a jerk. The sale of Kinnetik is huge! This would be a major lifestyle change for our boys and sounds like major fun for all.
Author's Response: Jerk is the perfect word and I borrowed it in a review answer. A lifestyle change will spark new life in the Kinney family and make Devin and Zack very happy. Thanks for commenting.
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