Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

Linds is gonna be history.

Poor Justin. Glad he is ok. Brian is so worried he forget to inform Mother Tucker.

Beautiful.

Kiss kiss.



Author's Response:

Lindsay's an idiot. Justin did get over it quickly with medical help. Kisses back and you're close to a chapter dedication now if you are the next review.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

OMG… My little Justin ! Fortunately, antibiotics were able to fight bacteria… I had this little moment of anguish throughout the chapter. Devin is a sensitive child, he is adorable. All children have also reacted well by supporting their father. Lindsey starts to drink, she threatens Brian… She’s completely lost. Bad karma !!!.

Superb chapter

Big kisses



Author's Response:

Justin recovers quite well; one has to be careful in Hawaii. Lindsay's her own worse enemy. Big kisses back!

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

That sounded like a wicked fever and I'm glad Justin will be ok. Lindsay sounds like she's drinking and Brian spotted it. Great interesting chapter.



Author's Response:

Typhoid is serious and can kill without prompt treatment. Lindsay's messing up big time. Thanks for commenting Dave.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

Wow... Typhoid fever! Poor Justin, he’s unlucky. He hasn’t been suspicious of the local water. Fortunately, the fever can be treated by antibiotics. This stay in hospital helped him recover.

Linds is barking up the wrong tree. It isn’t a very good sign

Super Chapter

Big kisses

I see you wrote an another chapter but now I must prepare my bag… (and do a quickie with Tomas. ;)) before leaving. Maybe I will comment tonight

 



Author's Response:

That is a serious fever to get and must be treated quickly for a good recovery. Lindsay will have a smashing reality check soon. Big kisses back; study hard so you can support Tomas in the lifestyle he deserves to live in. hehehe Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

Lindsay needs to be shown the consequence of her actions, again.  I think this time it should be jail. 



Author's Response:

There is more about Lindsay next chapter. Thanks for commenting Eileen.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 126: Fever

brian will make sure justin takes those pills, love emm playing hair dresser.



Author's Response:

Justin wants to get well too. Brian will make him stay home against Justin's wishes. Emmett is such a queen forever. Thanks for commenting alys.

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