Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

'Paradis de garçons'. My bags are ready. So, where is the Resort ?....  Ok, I'm just waiting the construction but hurry up, boys. I want the best room and the best services !. Fortunately, it’s only in your story, because with this Resort, I would quickly forget my promise to Tomas ;)... The boys are lucky. They have a beautiful of surfing. My father taught me to stand up on a board. And now, we teach surf to Txabi with his father (he has beautiful teachers). My father is still a damn good surfer at age 62 ! I hope to have his form when I'm his age.

Michael is very lucky. Justin, Brian and Melanie are good with him.

Beautiful

Big hug



Author's Response:

The island is just being planned right now; many decisions to be made. You better kept the faith with Thomas. Watching the beautiful boys surf will be one of the things the guests can enjoy at the island. Big hug back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

Holidays start… The kids take have fun while their parents exchange the latest news. Mark is going to introduce his young team to surf. Brian, Justin and Jerry discuss business and a great idea is born… One question, is the straight members of a gay family can accompagny a gay guest in the Resort ? I just asking to know, just in case ... I already know my parents will be happy to keep their grandchildren a few days ;)

I’m immensely pleased for Michael... It will be a wonderful Christmas for him . What a nice gesture on the part of Brian, Justin and Melanie

Excellent chapter

A big cuddle and a little peck on the lips for Mr hamster 



Author's Response:

Anyone is welcome with the money and right attitude. Michael has been a good boy for years; Melanie decided to lighten up on him and JR did want to see her father.

Cuddle back and Mr. Hamster loves the attention.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

Love this chapter. Family time. I am having good time reading.

Like the idea of gay resort very much.

Can't wait.

Kiss, kiss.

It is almost midnight here, and I just finish baking cookies for Aidilfitri celebration.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. There is still much more to decide about the lsland. Now I have a clue where in the world you are.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

Hey JT, thank you for the chapter dedication, how fun!

Wow! What two really great presents for Michael.  He gets a clean record and he gets to spend alone time with JR.  I didn't know that the criminal record of an adult could be sealed.  Michael has been fortunate and this will make Deb so happy too.

I love the idea of the resort and B/J & J going into business together on the project (it's about time really).  Can't wait to see the designs and advertising.  I'm sure it will be fabulous as always.  After all, who would know better what their customers would want, they are their target market.  Joint adventure indeed! *g*

Just a note:  when the guys land at Honolulu airport you mention Ted and Blake, but not B/J...?

Another great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for catching my oversight missing to add B&J. I've fixed it now with your help. Once an adult completes probation and for certain none violent or sexual crimes and first offenses the record can be sealed. The resort will be a very fun projects for the boys to do. Thanks for commenting cakdg.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

love the island idea. great gift for mikie from b/j.



Author's Response:

Melanie finally allowed him to be a father again. It took over 5 years of being good but it finally happened. Thanks alys.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

great chapter: 3 things though...

typo: Boys Paridise     should be   Boys' Paradise

Since Brian talked about opening the hotel to lesbians, there should probably be beautiful servant women (not just 'beautiful boys and men...)

Which Hawaiian island are you talking about?



Author's Response:

Typo repaired; thank you. They will have beautiful girls too; they have to research how to make a resort for girls. The island in the Hawaiian chain only exist in the reality of my story. I did find a 500 acre island for sale in the U.S. Virgin Islands but it's illegal to be gay there or have sex anyway. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

I am sorry for not commenting for a while but i havent had the time to read because RL has been hard. But now i have read all new chapters and you are so good at this. and i wonder about the gay paradise it must be a dream come true for them.

 

 

Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

RL has a way of doing that from time to time. Glad to hear your reading and enjoying my story. They may push the envelope of gay resorts soon. Thanks for commenting Buffytess.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

Boys Paridise indeed; this is a very rich idea and could be legendary. I'd love to visit such an all gay tropical island full of beautiful boys and men. I'd love to work there and find me a rich daddy. Where do I send my resume? I wonder what ideas Justin has for the upper class hotel? Egyptian kings and slaves perhaps?



Author's Response:

There are gay resorts in the world but not an entire island to my knowledge. Your insight into Justin's thinking is spot on. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons

Sorry it has been a while since I last wrote an feedback. You did a wonderful job as always. The best story i have ever read. Keep them coming...



Author's Response:

Thank you very much kwil. I'm happy to see you're still reading my story. Enjoy!

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