Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

What crap to come home !!! So, rotten week-end, it’ll leave me a little time to comment.

Wow, Devin almost fell right in the middle of  grand final in the Egyptian kingdom. Frankly, these nocturnal monsters respect nothing. As for Linds, the guy will be there and stay there. This is a package, the three together or nobody.The other boys, meanwhile, have fun...like me with this chapter

With love



Author's Response:

Good to know you got home safely. Devin of course has no clue what his dads are doing in the morning. Lindsay has a hard time understanding so much security with Gus and wrongly thinks it's only for her. Love back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

Now that everyone has started work again, I stays here with my daddy to hold the fort. I haven’t got a minute to myself (Oh well ok, I presume I overstate a little but, still, the days spin like the wind). Now my babies are sleeping, my husband is watching ‘Lost’ on the TV and me, I’m reading your story…

I loved this chapter. A real lovely chapter... Oh, lousy nightmares. Fortunately for me, Txabi rarely have nightmares...Lindsay has to get used to this situation. If she wants to see her son, she’ll have to do with Brad. That’s final ! Linds, don’t start, girl !!!!

Big kisses for you and Mr Hamster

(Gehexan is currently at university (yes, he resumes his studies after a year off). He called me tonight and I know he’s reading too. Just the time to take his marks and he’s going to comment… He and Tomas are like lost souls...:( )



Author's Response:

So they are separated while he is at college? Bummer! If so their reunions will be all the more sweeter for them. Thanks for your twitter on your life; I love the little details you add. Big kisses back to my favorite French/Basque mommy.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

Yum, love Slave J fantasies.  Had to laugh at B knowing J was having a good dream because he was moaning and snoring at the same time.  Lol  Funny and hot!

Aw poor Devin.  I think closet monsters have been around as long as kids and closets have shared space (they must breed like crazy).  This brought back a lot of fond memories. 

Glad the boys had fun on the jet.  Devin is a typical kid wanting to immediately do it again.

If the Petersons want to see Gus they will endure/accept the bodyguards.

Fun chapter! 



Author's Response:

That's Justin's most favorite fantasy too. Who hasn't deal with closet monsters has missed out on a lot of fun with kids. Boys love power so the jet was a great treat and it showed Peter he was not left out of family events and toys. The Petersons will get over their problem with Brad; Lindsay has another issue coming up but that's too bad for her. Glad you liked the chapter and commented cakdg.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

god, I know those monster stories...hihi... very funny and a very hot sex scene you wrote for us.... :-)) rose



Author's Response:

I had an imaginary robot who killed my monsters. hehe Glad you liked the hottness. Thanks rose :)

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

Hehehehehe..... lucky for them finish in time. Very hot scene.

The Petersons  better accept the bodyguard quick.

Brilliant chapter.

Sweet dream JT. Take care yourself & Mr Hamster.



Author's Response:

That was a close call that morning for our lovers. I had fun writing it. We slept great. Thanks complicated.

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

I lov eit



Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster and I are glad you did. Thanks Rainbow for telling us.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

like the smoke detector analogy



Author's Response:

Thanks alys; it just seamed to apply to the situation of a bodyguard too.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

That was such a hot love scene followed by such a funny emergency. The boys had a blast on the jet. The Petersons must accept the goons or else. Great updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks Dave for all of your chapter reviews; I really appreciate them very much. Lindsay will get over it or else for sure.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster

oooo something is going on with the petersons and lindsay.... gus becarful...lindsay plllleeeease do something stupid



Author's Response:

The Petersons are just not use to goons around; no big deal. Lindsay will be upset about another matter soon. Thanks for commenting nicole.

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