Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

I've loved the story up until now you give such great description and suck detail to everything!!!!!!! But I'm very disappointed that you brought Lindsay back into the picture, I feel she should have gone to prison and been out of there lives, I'm strongly thinking about whether to continue reading this story, now that she is back in the picture.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I assure you that Lindsay does not get off easy, and realize that multiple subplots or in the story.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

The ending of this chapter is so funny. I love it.

Very good progress between Gus & Linds. Smart move when Gus decide not to tell about Linds to his brother.

Kiss, kiss.



Author's Response:

Brian's wit is legendary and he's great with kids. Gus is very smart for his age.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

Heavy emotional chapter is followed by an easy funny one. Bravo! I laughed at B and the boys the end.



Author's Response:

I felt we needed a light hearted chapter after the one before this one. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

Ok, you make mistakes intentionally to see if we follow ? ;) That doesn’t work !

Gus is impressive with his thoughts. His views  on Mel’s anger is very perceptive. He’s a fine psychologist. He’ll be amazing older. Justin will go with Gus. It’s the best solution. He won’t leave the boy a second, idem for the bodyguard. I see no risk to Gus...

For Danni, I trust them, they will find an alternative to antidepressants

Excellent chapter

A tons of kisses for my favorite writer

 



Author's Response:

I wish I was that clever. I blew it on the names and admit it. It's corrected now. Twink kisses for this old American man have my heart in tackicardia mode racing wild. Thank you! Mr. Hamster thinks he might be good for one more chapter tonight; in progress.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

OK, Daddy JTS is a bit lost in the names of his kids or then Brian, Justin, Mark and Jerry can’t recognize their youngest and consistently exchange their boys (Zack instead of Devin ! I smiled the whole chapter)

This first time in the jet went well. The next visits will be supervised by Justin. Brian may be right to choose this solution. I loved Brian with Peter and Shawn. And I loved the décision of Gus not to speak of his mother next to his young brother. Danni chose the youngest, it’s her maternal instinct. I just hope she won’t need the Zoloft, poor girl... here, Lollipop is with us when Gehexan isn’t there but when he arrives, we don’t exist any more, she only sees him, hears him. It's fun to see

Excellent chapter

Big hug and a little peck on the nose for Mr Hamster ..



Author's Response:

I have been up over 24 hours writing and screwed up this chapter royally! Yes I wrote Zack instead of Devin; I'm either a retard or this was a clever ploy for major review hits (answer: retard). I better sleep soon if I know what's good for me. Pretty soon the voices in my head will start and I'll get delusional again. It's a very fine line between genius and madness and lack of sleep usually crosses the line. Glad you could see the humor in my errors. Thanks my lady!

Reviewer: Cheryl121152@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

Great Chapter!  Love your stories.

Didn't B/J name Justin's son Devin and Mark/Jerry name their son Zack?  You may have them confused in this chapter.  Also a few chapters back, you had the chefs mixed up.

 

 



Author's Response:

You all caught me big time. I really messed up this chapter. Justin's son is Devin. Mark's son is Zack. I've been awake over 24 hours straight writing 5 chapters and it shows. Thanks for setting me straight. I'm repairing it now. I have a character list three pages long already and should update it. But hey; if major blunders gets me a ton of reviews I'm not above pulling down my pants on line. hehehe Thanks for your help.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

loved this chapter. brian giving shawn and peter a little ribbing at the end was great.

will zack be starting school at Gus's school soon?

dogs love to go to work, I took mine daily for years... if danni gets lonely



Author's Response:

I messed up again; I meant Devin not Zack. I'm tired again and should sleep soon.

Great idea for the dog. Thanks!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

Just a note, I thought B/J's son was Devin.  Zack was Mark & Jerry's?

Well, I'm glad the reunion with Linds is relieving Gus and B/J.  As long as this continues to be what Gus wants and she can't be alone with him, it should be ok.  And though Gus may be right about Mel (smart kid), there's also the kind of double betrayal.  I mean, not only for hurting Gus, but it was due to her fixation on B.  That had to hit Mel double hard and make her wonder if Linds ever really cared about her at all...

I had to laugh at the Zoloft comment.  But another alternative is to maybe get her a doggie companion.  The boys certainly wouldn't mind. *g*

Great! 



Author's Response:

I'm tired again and been up over 24 hours writing. Yes I messed up the boy's names again big time in this chapter. I'm fixing it now. Brian will take no risk with his son; he can't piss without a body guard nearby. Your insight on Mel was priceless. That is sooooo true about the double whammie it had to be for her. The second dog is an excellent idea. Thank you much cakdg.

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs

I lov eit



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow for letting me know.

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