Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I see someone took the porn tapes away from him and the drugs.  He looks much better now.



Author's Response:

He's a nice clean hamster now.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I need more...



Author's Response:

1,000 REVIEWS!!!!!

Thanks to all my reviewers for helping me reach this milestone on MW.

The next chapter is dedicated to you Carlly!

Reviewer: Brenda (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I just read this whole thing and I wish there was more.  Can't wait for more chapters.



Author's Response:

Welcome Brenda and thank you for commenting. I update very fast; as you might see all this was written in just over a month. I only write one novel at a time and give it my all. I wrote the successful epic novel Embraced in 3 months. You'll see rapid multi-chapter updates on a regular basis. This story is shaping into a long one too. I don't have a beta so there may be minor typos I miss but most readers prefer the rapid updates without delays.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Much better



Author's Response:

Thank You! :)

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Brilliant.

Mark gonna be the best daddy ever. I know it.

Ooo.. Mr Hamster, I will always love you....

Thank you JT for taking care Mr Hamster.

You will hit 1000 in no time JT. I'm sure of it.

Kiss, kiss.



Author's Response:

Jerry and Mark are ready for the kids and love them very much. More about that later in the story. Mr. Hamster is clean now and off the hard stuff. He still dreams about you complicated. His love for you gave him the courage to clean up his act. We did pass 1,000 reviews overnight; I woke up to find 1,010 reviews. I'm in awe of my wonderful readers/reviewers who did this for me.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: James (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Forget that chick.  Get ger good.



Author's Response:

Jerry will in time; thanks for commenting James.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

ahhhh nice hamster, cute hamster.... not scary hamster.

love how the kids worked together to get rid of mommy dearest.

 



Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster is looking good today all cleaned up. The kids were brilliant and waited for dad to come home to deal with the problem. They didn't spoil his vacation. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I check every few hours for a new chapter and you have yet to disappoint me. So much is going on - Mark's mother is being dealt with, Keith, Janet and Trey are moving in with Jerry and Mark, Justin is getting plastic surgery, Hunter joined the firm and is making his way, Justin's baby can't be far off, Mikey loves his job, Ted and Blake, Jennifer and Tucker, and more...

Lindsey worries me - I think she is going to be given permission to visit her parents in Pittsburgh - Gus isn't safe - Lindsey isn't sane. If Mikey saves Gus then maybe his position in the family will improve. He may be at the family pasta dinners but he's still on the outside. Would you give some thought to a story line including Lindsey, Gus and Mikey?

Not for nothing but that was one scary picture of Mr. Hamster.

Jane



Author's Response:

Thank you Jane for your detailed comments. I plan to add more of Gus in the story; Lindsay and Michael is always there too for new scenes of things but not major characters really. Mr. Hamster is pretty now and cleaned up.

Hugs!

Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Well ... I know I'm not the 1,000th reviewer, but I just wanted to say that I love this story.  I don't always get to post a reply, but I have thouroughly enjoyed each and every chapter.  Love this universe you've set up for the boys and their extended family, its fantastic! Can't wait for more and I'll be crossing my fingers for Mr. Hamster :)



Author's Response:

Wonderful to hear from you boltgirl426. Thanks for commenting and telling me you like the story. Mr. Hamster will be a success story and all clean now.

Hugs!

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Mr. Hamster is adorable - I'm sure he and Spookers, my cat would be great friends - The last few chapters have been great - but then they always are - I like the way you are developing this story. Much as I'd love to be your 1000 - I'm in the process of writing a sequel to 2 of the novels I've written - I really should choose one or the other and sit down and finish - but damned if I didn't get bitten by the bug of the second one before I could.If that made any sense at all. www.magicalmoonlight.ca - if you haven't checked it out - Shadowed Legacy is being edited at the moment - but will be published in a few days/weeks - who knows.

Anyway Brat - I love your writing - occasionally I sneak in and fix a mispelled word, but not often. Your writing is generally clean (snicker)

erb



Author's Response:

Girlfriend! We did it! You now have a story on your website with over 1,000 reviews. I predict you will give fanfiction.net a run for their money in time. Word is spreading fast this is the most author/reader friendly website for us to publish on and easy to read. Thank you for supporting me from the beginning. I remember you were my first reviewer ever as a writer. Love you so much.

Your brat only,

~JTSecrets

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Wow, I'm touched by your chapter ! Your description of situations is terrible... You gave me the shivers. I'm also about to puke !!!!!!! How a mother could fall so low ? It’s atrocious. She deserves to lose everything and yet Jerry is nice not to send her directly to jail ...

Poor kids ! There was what upset them for life. Fortunately they are smart (rather than the nanny at least ... She waited for what? A catastrophe happens to react?). I’m extremely happy that they are definitely with Jerry and Mark now

A big hug for this chapter

A big peck on each cheek and lips to Mr Hamster who has found a face more suited to his case. He is too cute when he is clean ...



Author's Response:

The kid's mother got much worse when Jerry and Mark were in Pittsburgh for 3 weeks. The kids and Tammy didn't want to spoil Jerry's rare vacation. They waited until they were with him to drop the bombshell. Mr. Hamster feels and looks wonderful now. He will stay clean and happy.

Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Excellent chapters.  I really like how everything is coming togehter for B and J.  I can't wait to see what happen with Hunter.  I am really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks jay for commenting. I can see the end of the tunnel answering reviews today before writing the next chapter.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

Hi! I have one comment, where was Gus when Justing got hurt?

You now have had Jerry's kids in the story which I think is a nice twist to it. I am glad that the kids will be living with Mark and Jerry.

However, I like to hear more about Gus too!

You are truly a gifted writer.

I like this Hamster better than the last one.

Debbie



Author's Response:

Gus was at home with Lily and nobody knew about the accident. I should have written him in when Justin got home. You're right to point that out. I'll make an effort to add more about Gus in my story.

Hugs!

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

oh thank you for getting mr. hamster clean. Cause he was just scary.



Author's Response:

He was good for gathering 30 review hits! Mr. Hamster is all good now. Thanks for commenting darkraven.

Reviewer: Melissa V (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I love your story and cant wait for more! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!



Author's Response:

Thank you Melissa V for commenting. After answering all these reviews I'll write the next chapter.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I've never understood why people even begin with meth (and like drugs), when the information has been out there for years about how addictive, physically damaging, not to mention expensive, etc., they are. *shrugs*

Poor kids, I hope this doesn't scar them for life.  At least they had the preservation instincts to speak up and get themselves out of that situation.  Although I'm surprised they (and Tammy) waited as long as they did to say something.  I'm glad that Jerry is a protective daddyand that he & Mark can give them a much more stable home life.

I'm glad Mr. Hamster looks like a familiar species now.  Lol.



Author's Response:

It's a wicked drug and people rarely kick the habit. The kids will be fine but the mansion now has too many bad memories to live there again. Mr. Hamster is all good now since he got 1,000 reviews finally.

Hugs!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

get her jerry.... i hope shes smart enough to sign the papers and leave..

nice Mr. Hamster  i'm proud of you for trying to get of the hard stuff. lol



Author's Response:

She would be a fool not to sign and run now. Thanks so much for commenting nicole.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate

You write from light and happy to hard, gritty and seedy. What a roller coaster but I'm getting use to it and loving the thrills. I'll do my part to save the little guy. He's a lot cuter off the stuff.



Author's Response:

Two things that I hate with QAF fanfiction is too much canon written in a story or a slow level--no action or emotion in a story. I try hard to avoid doing either in my writing. Thanks for commenting David.

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