Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
How sweet is that. I really like this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you Anne; I write to please you and love to hear it's working.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
I really empathize with Mark about the cast. I've had two plaster casts in my life (left arm both times) and I used a wire coat hanger to scratch the itches. Both times I'd wake up in the middle of the night because I nearly given myself a concussion and/or broken nose (or beaned my partner). Those things are potentially lethal! Lol.
Too bad about Mark's mom, but he'd already dealt with the reality of her life years ago. I agree with B, the real worry is if she figures out who Mark is now and tries to re-enter his life (for whatever reason).
I was kind of surprised that Mark was receptive to the idea of them having a child together so soon. He's only 18 and he's had so many life changes/adjustments in such a short time, I would have thought he'd want to wait a few years. Especially if his movie career takes off and he has to film on location somewhere far from home. But then again, they have money and can travel as a family unit anywhere I guess.
I think Hunter's going to fall off his chair when he finds out that not only are B & J sending him out to Vegas, but they are sending him in great style. Lol. It's a fantasy come true!! But I do agree with B, regarding rewarding success, not effort. That's how the ad game is played. And I think Hunter would want to play it straight (so to speak).
Mark passed the stress test of Jerry's kids! I think he handled them just right.
Another goody! On to the next...
Author's Response: I wore a hard cast as a child and I mostly remember how bad it itched and bothered me. Mark's mom is a bug and will be treated like one. They are only talking about a baby right now. Actors have kids all the time. Thanks for commenting very much.
Hugs!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
Oh how I'm happy for Mark. Jerry’s children are adorable. It wasn’t obvious Mark find his place but he knew very quickly how to forge a friendship with each of them. And apparently, he won hands down ...
Hunter in Las Vegas, it will be great for him
Big hug for you and a huge caress to Mr Hamster
Author's Response: Mark is great with kids and loves them very much. Hunter will be having a lot of fun in Vegas.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
wow, awesome chapters to catch up on.. thank god justin, and mark are alright.. now what's going on with lindsay, will the boys have trouble with her now?
can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster's all butt hurt you didn't review each chapter but I'm very grateful you did review this one. Writing the next chapter now.
Hugs!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
yeah, mark and the kids did fine together. hope hunter gets his banana from playmobil LOL
great chapters mr. hamster keep running...
Author's Response: I think Janet's about to have her first crush on Mark. Hunter will be fabulous. Mr. Hamster says he's probably good for one more chapter before falling out. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
Fuh! Mark pass the test. Seem he is very good with kid (with the help form Jerry).
Agreed with Brian, Hunter have to earn it himself. Hunter is very bright & he will grab the opportunity to prove how good he is.
Excellent
Take care.
Author's Response: Mark is a charmer and understands kids great. Later the find out how bad the pool boy is. Hunter will be special; Vegas is a major turning point in his career. Thanks so much for your chapter reviews and comments complicated. Mr. Hamster says squeak!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
I loved Jerry's kids reaction to Mark. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Who wouldn't love Mark? Besides next to pool boy he's an 11 next to a 4. Thank you very much for commenting Lorie.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
What a chapter. Mark's mom, Hunter's ad idea, going to Vegas with a jet and limo, the muffler part had me laughing it was so childlike of Justin, and the part with Jerry's kids priceless.
Author's Response: Hehehehe! It was a very fun chapter to kick out. Mr. Hamster was on a roll. Thanks for commenting.
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