Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I知 Home.

Nice how everyone rallies around.  I fully expected to see Jenn show up.  Even if he was fifty and something similar happened, she would be there.

Should be interesting to see how Jerry's kids respond to Mark and his place in their Dad's life. 

Good point that Jerry made about the press and Mark's mother.  Hopefully, they can be pleasantly surprised and find out she cleaned up her act.

Well, I'm glad that Linds is responding well to treatment (but I wonder if she is truly cured of her Brian obsession).  I'm not sure of Canadian law, but assuming she received permission to visit her parents (and they wanted to see her), would the probation office have to notify B & J of her proximity?

I always love the banter between B & J.  It's funny, but it also shows their love & affection.

Great chapter, on to the next!



Author's Response:

I'm reminded of my aged mother insisting waiting at the hospital when I had gall bladder surgery not too long ago. Three cheers for mothers everywhere. Sadly Mark's mother's is a mess and risk to him. Lindsay is under court order to stay away from Gus or go to prison.

Hugs!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I知 Home.

"I'll pull this car over and make you walk home"... Hey, that's what my father told us when we were kids and we were arguing in the car... That's what I also say to my husband when he criticizes the way I drive !

Nice chapter, I loved it. A little incursion into their life at home with the family... Poor Mark, his family wasn’t very great… Luckily, he can find love and support from Jerry. I hope it will go well with Jerry’s kids…

Big kisses

 

Ps : Talk of the devil and he appears… Gex comes just into view !!! 



Author's Response:

About to post a new chapter right now. Things happen fast for Jerry and Mark. The kids are on a mission.

Big kisses back!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I知 Home.

poor jen thats going to be a doosy when she realizes about molly.

hope they find mark's mom and can help, hope too jerry's kids are cool with their dad switching side & w/ mark



Author's Response:

Knowing Molly is seeing him for a long period of time should lessen the blow when she finds out. And she raised Justin so she should be able to handle just about anything. Mark's mom is hopeless and very dangerous. Jerry's on top of it believe that. Mark can charm the skin off a snake. Read on and see how the Kid's Test turns out. Thanks alys for commenting very much.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I知 Home.

A few more battle scar is only make Justin more hot. The banter between Justin & Mark in the limo is so child like it's hilarious.

Love, love love this chapter.

Brilliant.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it; it's sometimes challenging to fill in new important information and still be entertaining. I'm glad it might have worked. Went to Sunday brunch and came home to reviews; feels like Christmas in August! Thank you!

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I知 Home.

Very funny chapter. Intresting about Mark's family espc. his mom. The I Love Lucy routine was a riot.



Author's Response:

A typical B/J day with friends. I had fun writing it too. Thanks for commenting Dave.

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