Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

OMG!!!  Hope Justin is ok.



Author's Response:

I love Justin too much to really hurt him. Fear not!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

The breakfast is finished and I take a break before the meal… I love these moments when I’m quiet at the edge of the swimming pool, in the cool air, with my laptop and my favorite story… It missed a couple around the table this morning and my daddy, who is always up with the lark, said that, considering the noises he heard coming from their studio apartment, it wasn’t worth waiting for the txikiak (kids in basque) to start because they are not ready to get out of bed… He, He… 

Very beautiful chapter…. And fortunately for you, I don’t have to wait for the next update because or else…. JTS, JTS !!!! All is excellent : Jerry and Mark, Blake… I adored Tyler (me also, the number of times where, teen, I felt a `small something' for the gay friends of Otsoa…! The boys gay have one I-don’t-know-what so sweet, so attractive. I loved Cynthia also, always perfect…In short, I loved every things here…

Well, I hurry to write this comment (It’s not obvious! In French, I’ll go much more quickly and I could say much and much more things…) to read the next and thus to take news of my favourite boy

Enormous kiss for you and a little peck on the lips for Mr. Hamster

 

PS: Txabi seldom, il ever, makes nightmares. I was breastfeeding Maïa when I heard him cry. Apparently, the start of the school disturbs him a little (schools reopen on September 3th).  I went in his room, I took him in my arms, I comforted him, I explained to him that these nightmares were the product of his imagination. We have created a happy end with this awful dream and after he fell asleep again without problem… That always takes a little of time and after I didn’t have any more courage to return to read



Author's Response:

Good morning to my favorite mother in France. Tell what city you're near so I can look it up on a map. I love reading your long comments; and your Twitter like updates. Your English is excellent; Europeans are so gifted with more than one language. Americans are so lazy and demand everyone knows English which I think is wrong. I did study Deutsch in college years ago.

Glad you like the chapter. I'm writing about one right now. Glad your son is ok and not normally having nightmares. In a way it's a good sign of a strong imagination.

Kisses back and Mr. Hamster blows you a kiss toward France.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

WOW!! You did it again.

Brilliant.

 



Author's Response:

Me tickled you liked it. I love Justin too much to hurt him bad. If you only knew how much I love him...

Thank you so much complicated for commenting.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

A good time was had by all at Debbie's.  Well, except maybe for Michael, but he knew enough to keep his mouth such (color me surprised, but it was bound to happen at least once, right? *g*).

Blake has made the announcement about the new ownership and everyone learns that basically nothing will change, except that their jobs are more secure than ever.  Nice.

I can commiserate with Mark & Jerry regarding wealth and fame.  I personally would hate to be famous (for any reason) and would only want to be wealthy if I could be so anonymously.  The loss of privacy wouldn't be worth the trade off for me.  But it is nice daydreaming about it without the downsides. *g*

So Kinnetik RE are becoming national landlords.  They need to go further west (I'm thinking Hawaii) for their next purchase.  Then where in the globe next?

Drat! Another cliffhanger, I wasn't expecting that.  Poor J, fate truly has him marked for calamity doesn't she?  Hope he'll be ok...

Great chapter...rushng to the next to see what happened.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Michael has learned his lesson about his life and takes responsibility for his own mistakes. His path is upward now. Blake is good and will let the pros manage as he does what he does best. Jennifer is taking her time buying only excellent properties at bargain prices in the recession. Justin will be ok; I love him too much to hurt him. Thank you so much for commenting and rating cakdg.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

Evil cliff hanger here. Glad I didn't have to wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I never leave up a cliffie very long. Thanks

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

Not a good place to stop - Is Justin hurt? If he was hit it would have killed him. That can't happen; right?

Please hurry and finish the next chapter...

Jane

 

 



Author's Response:

The next chapter is up; I'm fixing the spacing problems now. Thanks for reviewing Jane.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

oooh that's mean.  can't wait to see what happens. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is half finished now; thanks for commenting Carlly.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

that's a cliffee ending.... did it but only w/ an 80lb tool, some grand mals, but grew out of it. etc.

hope justin ducked in time. wasn't sabatoge was it? 

great chapter    congrats on 900+



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter now to end the cliffie tonight. It was mechanical failure; not sabatoge. Thank you for being part of the very important reviewers who will help me make history; over 1,000 reviews on MW perhaps. If I break that ceiling I believe it's a big win for MW and every author who publishes here. Thanks alys for commenting.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

oh that was mean leaving right there. lol



Author's Response:

If shooting Justin will get me reviews I'll shoot his ass; I swear I'll do it. hehehehe Writing the next chapter now; thanks for commenting darkraven.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

nooo you can't end it like this.... i just know your working on the next chapter riiiight.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is 25% finished. I'll have it up tonight. I never leave a cliffie up very long. Thanks for commenting nicole.

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