Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Hope everything is alright. Nice that Tyler was open with Justin.
Author's Response: Everything works out for the best.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Love Big Brother Justin! I'm the same way with my sister, although she isn't a kid anymore.
Poor Mark and Matt, hope they'll be ok.
Author's Response: I feel the same way about Justin and Molly. Mark gets it worse than Matt does. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Almost a very serious injury here. Glad it wasn't. Exciting chapter.
Author's Response: Broken bones are serious but not life threatening usually unless a big bone like a femur that bleeds bad internally. Thanks for commenting David.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
I liked J as big brother, he was protective but not an ass. And he brought up the salient points Tyler should be worried about (due to their ages) if he's in it with Molly for the long haul. I wonder how Jenn is going to get clued in?
I sympathize with Mark. If the arm break is clean, it shouldn't be too painful, just damned inconvenient with the cast...but the ribs (more than one too), oh, ouch! Ribs always seem to take forever to heal, so much longer than a broken arm. I'm glad that for the most part he's ok, I hope Matt will be too.
I hope that the nurse that Jerry revealed his relationship with Mark to, can keep her lip zipped. But then again, considering how he threatened her job, maybe she will...
Another good one, on to the next...
Author's Response: Justin is wise for his years to give his sister room to learn and love. Ribs get better in a month but can be sore for many months yet a person can function. The nurse is too afraid to say anything for losing her job; patient confidentiality is involved here. Thanks cakdg for commenting; I love to read your reviews.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
poor Mark
Author's Response: Boys get hurt on motorbikes worse. Mark will be fine and he's a real tough kid. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
I love the test. I love Justin in his role of big brother. Looks like mine... Tyler is a good boy. Molly was really lucky to find him. The first time isn’t always a great experience.
Wow, an accident on the set. Poor Mark! Jerry flips a max...
Brilliant
Author's Response: Somebody will be the magical 900th reviewer! Brothers are so protective of their sisters. Tyler was perfect and a talented lover too. He had just enough experience to make Molly very happy. Shit happens making movies; more than we know.
Thank you and watch the review count; anyone can be 900.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Oh, oh… It’s hot in the pool….
A big brother is a big brother... Otsoa has always kept an eye on our boyfriends (worse than my parents sometimes). And even now, even if his sister and his little brother have got his two best-friends, he has briefed Tomas and Christian, my hubby (and the worst is that he continues !) But, I did the same thing with his boyfriend, Xabi... Our parents never freaked out when whe have relationship or sex, but they wanted this to happen at home, safe, instead of somewhere else....
I loved Justin and Tyler.
I hope that our two actors go well. It's not funny to have broken ribs .. Poor Mark!
Big hug
Oups, sorry but... breastfeed time !!!!
Author's Response: I tried to write Justin the big brother with a reasonable side to him. Young people want to have sex and fall in love. He knew to give Molly her room to grow; and to let Tyler know he was watching them. 900 coming up for my next dedication.
Big hug back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
OUCH!!!!
Big brother in action, so much for secret Tyler & Molly.
Matt saved by Mark. It's gotta be hurts.
Thank you JT the best writer ever & Mr Hamster the master of the plot twister. Genius!
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: They really don't have to hide their love; Tyler is a little shy since this is his first real girl friend. He doesn't want his parents know he's having sex so Molly can still visit. Duh? Isn't this why they created sleep overs for kids in heat? HA! New chapter on the way.
Mr. Hamster takes a low bow and waves to the kind reader who holds his hamster heart. Kisses back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
ok love the jusitn big brother you beter not hurt my sister... i just wounder does tyler know molly has her own money posiblie billions of her own coming and trying to get in on that...hmmmm
and i thought jerry and mark's relationship was top secret why how he tell a homaphob nurse just state who you are who you want to see and then threten to buy the hospital to fire or just have / get her fired. oooo just thought what if matt's wife comes racing in and finds out about the movie and love seens ooooo..
3 story fix in one day wooohoo :D
Author's Response: Tyler comes from a very wealthy family himself; money isn't on his mind. Jerry was so upset he didn't give a shit who finds out about him and Mark. He was going to see his injured lover over her dead body. Matt's wife knows about the movie and sex scenes; it's only acting and she's quite certain her husband is straight; he proves it damn near every night. I have another chapter cooking in the pot right now. Thanks for commenting nicole very much.
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