Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

This shit act showed their vulnerability to them. Brian and Justin are now required to organize the security of their society. The team faces the repercussions of this unfortunate episode. Brian is still under stress, it’s only normal... Todd made the first move to apologize. His mea culpa allows him to get a job at Kinnetik. The last sentence of the chapter is so right...

Excellent chapter (with a big thank you for this hot scene between Jerry and Mark. I love it, as you know)

A lot of kisses

Gehexan



Author's Response:

Shocking experiences have a lasting effect for everyone involved. It's a good thing they now take more security with their lives. Brian wanted to end a bad experience on a good note so Todd gets a job. That should fuck Randy's face when he finds out. Jerry and Mark are still like newlyweds and fu*k like rabbits every chance they get.

Lots of kisses back to the hottie in France named Gehexan!

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

I can see Brian doing that for Todd. Looking for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Brian has a heart but he hides it. Writing the next chapter now; thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

Gus is maybe a little disappointed but he’ll quickly appreciate this new learning. We already know it’s an intelligent little boy. I hope Brian will find some serenity after that stressful day... Anyway, bravo Brian to forgive Todd and give him a job

Very nice chapter

All my thanks for your great story

You are my favourite writter

Big hug

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind comment Ihintza. It means so much to a writer to get this kind of feedback from the readers. Brian will calm down; Gus will get into his new routine of learning with Lily, and Todd will be an excellent employee.

Hug back!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

Justin so good with Gus. Love it. Feeling sleepy right now.

Like the hot scene of Jerry & Mark

Love you



Author's Response:

Thanks complicated. Our family is safe and moving into a new direction. I've slept and will soon write some more.

Love you back!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

Unfortunately, metal detectors and security are a way of life these days (though they are not infallible either).

Gus may not think so at the moment, but he will have fun learning this way, as long as they make sure he still has contact with other kids until he starts school.  And he can still send e-mails to his daddies during the day too.  Will JR stay home too?

I think B/J need to upgrade their building insurance pronto.  I hope B's sense of impending doom is just the aftershock and not a prescience of things to come.

Well, I'm happily surprised that Todd called B to apologize.  And B laid it on the line of why he's in his current circumstances, which Todd acknowledged.   Very good karma for B for giving Todd a job.

Kind of a sobering chapter, but life is like that.  It makes you appreciate the good and fun times all the more.

Great chapter!  I'm all caught up and can't wait for the next.

 



Author's Response:

You have single-handedly raised my review count 60 points!!! I could kiss you over and over for doing that for my story. Readers who do that are why my two main stories have such a high review count on MW and I'm so grateful to you guys for taking the time to do this for me and the story. You inspire and motivate me to write more for you. The insurance for business interruption would be outragous for a tower the size of Kinnetik Tower with so many companies involved. JR will still be in the Kindergarten at work.

Hugs!

Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

Pure awesomeness :) I love it!

Does Matt know that Brian and Justin are the real Rage and JT? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting BlindDreamer; thank you. You gave me a plot idea with your question; Matt doesn't know; yet. Mark does since he knows Brian and Justin better and has listened to them talk to Jerry about the movie script. He's seen Justin story of their lives which the script is based on.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 60: Forgiven

love how brian handled todd, very brianeque... although he'll never admit it ;-)



Author's Response:

Brian felt it was best to hire Todd and take advantage of his artistic talents, and this is one less enemy for Kinnetik out there. Thanks for commenting alys.

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