Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

Applause! 

Well done, truly enjoyed it. Felt like I was actually "watching" the show!

 



Author's Response:

That was a fun chapter to create. Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

I swear I could hear Oprah's voice while reading this! Great interview and Kinnetik will probably get even more business from this.



Author's Response:

What a compiment Kat; thank you. I like Oprah very much. It will be super PR for Kinnetik's future.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

I liked this.  It seemed very realistic of the types of questions that would be asked from Oprah and the audience.  

B & J's answers were equally appropriate to the questions asked.  Some people can be appallingly rude though, can't they?  And they always look so surprised when they are called on that rudeness.  They can dish it out, but they can't take it...Lol.

Very fun, curious what's coming next...(I'm getting spoiled by my immediate gratification *g*)



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. I watched Oprah to get a feel for her show before writing the chapter. You never now what the audience will ask or say. Thanks for commenting cakdg.

Reviewer: kaitelynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

okay so I just started reading this story again and it is enjoyable...this is where the nit picky in me is going to come out.  In this chapter you have Oprah mention that the US Steel Tower is the tallest bldg in Pittsburgh and Pennsylvania.  Actually the tallest bldg in PA is the Comcast Center in Philly, followed by One Liberty Place...I just couldn't help commenting. *G*



Author's Response:

You're right; however it is the tallest in Pittsburgh. This is fiction too. Maybe our boys can buy the Comcast Tower next. I researched the tower and must have found an old reference to use. Thanks for pointing that out and for commenting. Your facts are good.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

We are settled quietly out. We enjoy the cool evening ... No race today, ;)

I liked the exchange between Brian, Justin and the public. It was pretty fun to read. This is a pleasant chapter

Thank you very much,

Big love

Gehexan



Author's Response:

Thank you! Love Back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

The show went well. Gus is an adorable little boy.

I’m against spanking too. Fortunately for us, at 6 years, Txabi isn’t a difficult boy. He respects the ban spontaneously, a simple frown or interjection are enough. There is always someone around him to talk or meet his interrogations in a natural (I don’t want baby langage) and simple way. There are no topics taboo, I never consider he’s too small to understand and we encourage him to express his feelings.

Good chapter

Big kisses



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter. Spanking is a hot topic in the USA with religious feelings behind it: "spare the rod, spoil the child" and that crap. Kisses Back!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

I am having so much fun reading this chapter. After a bad day at work and come home to see 4 new chapter, it's just make my day.

Very, very good job.

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Kiss, kiss.



Author's Response:

Glad I could entertain you complicated. I'm in a zone for writing now so I should produce very well.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

love how the boys answered & deflected questions, especially about the amount of money gus earned for his ad

looking fwd to hearing about matt and mark's visit. glad mikie is thinking more positively

 



Author's Response:

Looks like you're my 700th reviewer and the next chapter about to go up is dedicated to you alys. Not sure what you mean about Matt and Mark's visit though. That already happened. Next chapter they start filiming Rage back in LA. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

great chapter. loved the open honesty.



Author's Response:

Thank you sjmpets3 for your review. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

The interview was as Oprah promised, no questions about Lindsey or Brian's past sexual habits.

I worried when Helen from New York asked about Justin's age but as everything else that you do you worded the response just right.

My favorite paragraph was when Brian said the following: “To be honest he doesn’t. The only thing I remember recently is he choked on a penny and it scared him so much he didn’t need to be punished. Gus is a very well mannered boy with no behavior problems knock on wood. We don’t believe in spanking at all. He’s never been hit by us. We talk to him until he understands what we expect from him.”

Good night

Jane

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Jane for commenting. That's how my parents raised me and I turned out just fine. I'm against spanking at any age. Usually spaking is more about a parent relieving flustration than correcting a child. I believe hitting a child harms their mind and spirit. If you don't have the patience to talk with your child you should not be raising one but thats my opinion.

Have a good night.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

forgot to ask, is Brian and micky going to run into each other? i would really like to read how that would work out.



Author's Response:

You must be psychic; next chapter Brian and Justin give him a break mainly for Debbie. I'm typing it now.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 54: Oprah: Part Two

thanks for the update. i really liked it. the interview was great.



Author's Response:

Thank you darkraven; I'm glad you liked it. True to Oprah, Stedman didn't get a word in edgewise on the air. hehehehe

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