Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

Good chapter.

Gus, cute as always!



Author's Response:

Gus is one of my favorite characters to write. Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

I have to wonder if Lindsay some how finds out about Gus, either by seeing something on tv or in the paper. Its so great to see him doing well despite what his mother did to him. Its a real testatment to Brian and Justin and the family. Gus has a lot to be proud of, what an amazing kid...got daddy Hershey for a client.



Author's Response:

You'll find out about Lindsay's knowledge later in the story. Gus is amazing and kids can bounce back in an incredible way from adversity or harm. Thank you Kat for being a reader and reviewing each chapter. You're a VIP Reader for me and I cherish you.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

An ad like that couldn't miss.  I loved the announcement J made over the PA.  Lol

Gus is a 5 yr old mulit-millionaire, who has to pay his taxes and clean his room.  *g*

If the phones were ringing off the hook before, they will be even more so now that they've appeared on GM Pittsburgh and explained the bonus system.

This was fun!  On to the next...

 



Author's Response:

This was a real fun chapter to write. I can just see Gus the mini-me of Brian doing this at 5 years old. Yes, the publicity will be wild.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

Hey! "Valor's no need of years" - Corneille

And I thought 100 $ was a lot of money for a little boy... Ha, ha, ha, I was a little short ... I'm crazy about this little millionaire. He’s walking in the footsteps of his dads

I loved this chapter

So beautiful

Thank you very much



Author's Response:

Little does Brian and Justin know what they started now. Thanks so much for your reviews Ihintza.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

Shhh, I work something out in my head ! He’s 5 years old, I’m 22. In 13 years, I’ll be 35… Well, it's good ! 17, it’s not a huge gap. Until then, he will be as rich as Croesus. I hope he'll be gay, at least bi ;)...

This is a small boy who is going to become the heartthrob of the world ... It's too top

Super chapter

I don’t know where you find all these ideas but bravo… Mr Hamster is a small cyberpet full of surprises ...

 



Author's Response:

I don't know how to answer this review...the odds are Gus will be straight anyway. Thanks for commenting; I'm loving the chat with your and sis.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

YOU MAKE MY DAY!!

BRILLIANT!! IT'S SO RIGHT.

EXCELLENT!!

WONDERFUL JOB.

KISS, KISS.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much; it was a fun chapter to create.

Kisses Back!

Reviewer: Coffee Queen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

That was brilliant!! Little ad man Gus. I love it.



Author's Response:

I got a big kick writing it too. Thank you Coffee Queen. Did I mention how much I love that name?

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

This was a great chapter... my fave are ones with a Gus focus of course with Brian and Justin front and center as well!!



Author's Response:

It will get better; Gus is a star now. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

gus is soooo great.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it alys; thanks.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

I sooo loved the last part.... great updates :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Found another review that slipped by me. Forgive me rose, the number of reviews have been wonderful but it's easy to miss one when I go to answer them. This program doesn't bring up the ones I haven't answered so I have to hunt them. Thank you so much for commenting.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

aaaawww gus you better get that money...lol his mom most be sh*& bricks...lol



Author's Response:

Lindsay's locked in a nut ward in Canada. See finds out later reading a magazine. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

wowww. i loved these chapters JT. It is was great of brian involving gus like he did. i had to laugh at the part where everyone showed up at the diner.. that would be a big surprise for anyone... i'm glad to see brian and justin doing so well... i hope chris gets over this stupid idea of justin and brian being behind his bashing. we all know they didn't do it...well so should he..

can't wait to see what happens



Author's Response:

Thanks Lesley very much for your review. Chris isn't going to be a major problem; he's a side bar scene only.

SPOILER ALERT: He gets interesting later in the story when he sees Rage the movie and sees his actions on the screen and him getting bashed too.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire

haha sitting here with a big smile



Author's Response:

Here in America you're never too young to learn how to make money! Glad you liked it; you gave me the idea.

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