Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 49: Discovered

God, I'm so glad you referred back to the "glass dick" because that totally lost me! I didn't have any idea what you were talking about and obviously didn't figure it out!

Too cute w/ Gus & the ad he's supposed to come up with!

Oops, I had forgotten about Chris........

Enjoyed everyone in the diner, nice touch w/ Tony going to CA & being in the movie.

Author's Response:

A dope pipe it is. Perhaps I should have explained it better but Michael didn't know and didn't want to appear dumb to Carl so he didn't ask what it was. Hobbs has a change of heart. Mark needed a friend in California to end his boredom so Tony was the answer and giving him a part in the movie was an excuse to take him to Malibu. Thanks for commenting Susan.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 49: Discovered

I just read your comment about the business/technical sides of your story.  I personally love it, please keep it up. *g*  I find it both entertaining, educational and gives balance to the hotness.  Too bad they don't teach courses like this in college, I think people would learn something that they could relate to.  I'll let you come up with the course title.  Lol

Good, Michael got a clue.  It's about time.

Lily's had the procedure and now we wait...impatiently.  *g*

I'm with Ted, holding a check for 3.5 bil would be awe inspiring.

I laughed along with B about Gus and his salad.  *g*  I'm curious what Gus will dream up for Hershey as kids have a totally different perspective on things.

Loved the scene at the diner, I can just imagine the commotion with Matt there.  Nice that Tony will have a part in the movie and be a friend for Mark too.

Lovely chapter!  On to the next...

 

 

Author's Response:

I studied business in college and they don't teach crap about the real world; the corporate jungle. I say college is 5% knowledge and 95% learning how to deal with the bull sh*t of the business world but the survival skills you learn on the job. I know a thing or two about making money for instance: it's easier to make the second million than it is the first $100,000. Money is like a magnet; the more you have; the more you can attract.

Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 49: Discovered

Good choice, Mickey... He’s redeemable, finally.

Hey, Jerry’ll still leave with a great male... I’m happy for Tony. That’s very generous of Jerry to invite him, it's a good thing for Mark and a nice proof of confidence... I'm a lot less friendly with the Tomás’ former, really a lot less

Wow, Gus is going to practise ! Attention dads... he might become Caliph instead of the Caliph !

Very good work

Big hug

Gehexan

PS : Sister, you must stop to breastfeed. !!! (Thanks Maïa ;) – I’ll repay you some day )

 

Author's Response:

I started feeling sorry for Michael so he's turning around now. Tony is ok; that what Jerry ask Mark before inviting him. What started off as a way to teach Gus what an ad man does, something much bigger happens when Gus creates the seed of a home run ad. I'm loveing the little running race and chat between you two.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 49: Discovered

love it... just one question a couple of chapter back when mikey heard about brain & justin's gold plain he wanted to kill himself/ died. then he started useing crack at the new job. why would he stop useing drugs the next day after starting the drugs?

Author's Response:

It was actually the next week on the job. A moment wishing your were dead as a failure is not clinical depression or really being sucicidal for real. After a few days Michael woke up and remembered Ted's drug problem and how it hurt him. Crack cocaine isn't addictive; mentally they crave it for a day and it passes. Thank you for asking.