Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2018 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Kinnetik is making money hand over fist. But are you seriously turning Mikey into a crack fiend? I can't deal with him. I'm so done. "Wall slide!"



Author's Response:

Michael will not continue his high life, and even redeems himself later in the story. Making money for Kinnetik is a stable of this plot. Enjoy! Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Everybody is doing great except Michael.  He's digging himself another whole.  How stupid can the man be???



Author's Response:

Spoiler alert!

Michael recovers in time and gains a good life.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Love it.

Of course, concerned about Michael. You're always throwing in twists that make the story even better!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm about to pass out so I'll answer the rest of the reviews tomorrow. Glad to see you reading Susan.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Oh Michael!! Crack, you smoke crack on your first day of work. I thought he hit his dumbest point, but this just takes the cake.

Yea, Kinnetik got GM! They are really growing by leaps and bounds!!



Author's Response:

Michael is hitting the last bottom before coming back. Kinnetik is having a great year; the story will slowly shift away from business and more toward family matters. Thanks Kat.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Those pilots sure did hit the jackpot, I'd wouldn't mind their jobs either. Lol.

Ok, I take back what I said about Michael maybe taking Carl's fatherly advice.  He was told not to get on this stuff and you would think he'd know better anyway! *blows him a raspberry*

Matt, Mark & Jerry at Britin, I'm getting beautiful visuals *g*

The GM whale has been harpooned!  Happy belated birthday, B.  I'm still loving the company-wide broadcasts.

I hope Michael will have money left after he's paid for his drug supply.  Dumbdumb.

I'm with J, the rapid giant growth spurts would freak me out, too (even though they are a lot of fun to read about).  Good thing Tim is there and can remind J to delegate.

Can't wait to read the next chapter... 



Author's Response:

Pilots really do love the private gigs. Commerical flying gets old fast; just like driving a bus. Michael takes a dip and changes later. GM was a huge gain for Kinnetik; now they have billions to play with. Thanks for enjoying the business growth; one reader rated me 4 stars when she didn't like the technical business stuff. Most readers seem to like it as it adds to B and J lives. Thank you so much for reading and commenting cakdg.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Now, drugs ... you just want to smack him in the mouth ! Brian and Justin go up higher and higher, he goes down lower and lower...

Happy for Brian, he gets a great contract with GM. Other agencies must have a damned rough time with Kinnetik.

I loved this chapter... I'm always amazed by your ability to create such beautiful stories (with the help of Mister Hamster, of course). Thanks for the dedicace

All my love



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the lovely reviews too. Michael won't be down long. The other agencies are suffering both from losing clients and talented people.

Love back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

He couldn’t find another dick to suck instead of the mouthpiece of a crackpipe. Now, he adds drugs to his decline. All his money's going to go into it. If there is a problem, the criminal record won’t help. How stupid !!

Happy for Brian, he gets a fabulous contract with GM. Justin has a little moment of stress (where is Brian and his stress management method ?) Fortunately, they’ll take soon a little break with their guests ..

I can’t wait to see !

I loved it

All my love

Gehexan




Author's Response:

Realize the art and media department practically carried almost the entire Ford campaign single handedly and are sick of making ads for vehicles. Gaining the GM contract was the big break Brian wished for and foreseeing it coming is why he expanded the company with the best talent he could get; now everyone is busy and happy. Michael will hit bottom one more time and I think I'll take pity on him after that. Thank you for commenting Gehexan, I love your reviews.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

sorry i havent left any coments, but i have been away on a trip and i have just finished whit all chapters and i can just say i LOVE all of them, and Mark and Matt is going to look so HOT together in the movie.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

Welcome back Buffytess. I'm glad you like who is Rage and JT. Reader response has been excellent for them. Thanks for commenting.

Hugs Back!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

nice, brian got his birthday wish.

who's going to kill off michael for not being able to pay for his new founded crack cocaine habit? way to go mikey.



Author's Response:

Kinnetik is booked solid for a year soon and very busy. Even I'm starting to feel sorry for Mikey a little. Thanks sjmpets3 for commenting very much.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

jesus, you update fast and I am loving every chapter of it....:-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks rose. I often kick out several chapters at once over a 48 hour period.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

This is one of my favorite stories.  I try to keep up with it and go on to check the status pretty regularly only to find you've written a couple of chapters since I last checked.  It's amazing and the action is fast paced making for a good read. 

I'm not a Michael fan by any means, but could you give the poor guy a break?  He's really sinking fast here.

Love your storyline.

 

Yum



Author's Response:

Thank you Yum for commenting and letting me know your reading and enjoying this story. Even I am starting to feel sorry for Michael a little. I only write one novel at a time and update quickly.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

REMARKABLE!!! Brilliant!! Excellent!!

I am afraid my fav couple don't have time to breath, but they are on top of the world. I am so happy for them.

I am waiting for photo shot of Mark & Matt. It's gotta be HOT (am I right Mr Hamster?? I have a vision of your sexy, hot body with all the running, spinning the wheel all this time)

Mikey... Mikey... Mikey...

You're THE MAN, JT. Kiss, Kiss.



Author's Response:

Well thank you complicated for those kind words. Photo shoot next chapter and getting to know each other too. Mikey is the dumbest character in fanfiction; even I'm starting to feel bad for him, a litttle. Mr. Hamster is flexing his arm muscles for you.

Kisses Back !

Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Poor Michael, he just never learns, does he? If Debbie catches wind of this he is going to be out on his a@@... alone. So sad.

Too bad the boys are all so committed, Matt, Mark, Justin and Brian would have been a pretty picture together!

BTW I want a job at your Kinnetik, WOW what a work Utopia.



Author's Response:

Thanks Riggershh6 for commenting. Welcome to my universe. Always happy to see a new name in the reviews. Please comment again. I always felt the QAF series could have continued with Justin and Brian working together.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

Thank you for such an interesting story I am enjoying this look into the world of corporate AD making.



Author's Response:

Thanks bksbracelet for commenting. I find their busiess activity also very interesting too. Please comment again.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

geez michael you fool.. great chapter.. those boys of ours sure are busy.. that's good to see..

can't wait to see what happens next..



Author's Response:

As soon as I catch with a zillion reviews (not complaining at all!) and some RL duties the next chapter will be up real soon. The hamster is already spinning away. Thank you for reviewing Lesley.

Hugs!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas

love how they're going have to have a schedule for the bird. sounds like their house is going to be full soon.... stories to tell of Matt, Mark and Jerry I hope. the pilots moving and using mother taylor is great.

sleepy time here too.

Rage II: there goes Zephyr... actually meant that Zep could be undercover like clark kent and 'clean up' his act. but knowing mikie he'll go down as it seems he's started in this chapter..... what a dum!@ using cr!$@... dumb

 



Author's Response:

That jet is going to be busy and bring them loads of work. Successful people want to work and hire successful people. I'm beginning to feel sorry for Zephyr and might give him a break soon after he hits bottom one more time.

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