Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Brian's reduced to one word answers?  lol.  Michael seems to be reverting to his whiny self.  Mark and Jerry are becoming a big part in this story.  Shame Jerry and Ben didn't get together.  Then they could be Ben & Jerry. giggle.  I want a Frenchie and a jet!!!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Loved a slightly overwhelmed Brian in this chapter.

Yeah.

I just loved that.



Author's Response:

You caught that subliminal plot play very well.

You know if someone wanted to put a :) comment on each chapter they read I could pass 2,000 reviews. *grins*

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Gorgeous jet.  Brian and Justin are now living the high life.



Author's Response:

The jet will help them land many huge accounts in the future.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Wonderful chapter!

Hoping to get several chaps read over the wkend!



Author's Response:

Hi Susan! I'm happy to see you reading this weekend. I hope you enjoy my chapters; they're short and should go fast for you. Thank you so very much for commenting.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Geez, Jerry gave them his jet! I need a friend like that :) Its good that Justin and Brian were able to get away for awhile, they really needed this time off.



Author's Response:

Jerry wanted a new jet and this gave him a write off on the old one. Malibu is a great place to visit; beautiful beaches.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Loved the visit with Jerry & Mark.  Had to laugh at J's reaction to getting the jet.  I sympathize.  You may have lots of money, but unless you see it everyday like an Aladdin's cave or something you don't really think about it day to day.  A jet however is very tangible evidence of wealth, and one lined in gold means extreme wealth.  I think I'd hyperventilate!  Lol.

Very sexy looking bird, they'll have unlimited access to the Mile High Club now!  Lol.

Michael, sigh.  How do you cure a immature child of his victim mentality?

Jerry/Mark...Lovely the rewards one gets for doing good for friends, isn't it?

Another goody!  On to the next... 

 



Author's Response:

This was a fun chapter to write. I love the contrast between both pairs of lovers in my story. Both are inner-generational, beautiful, powerful, and with a destiny for greatness. Michael is actually on the rebound now for better times soon. He is finally growing up. He was just shocked at the news about the jet but it quickly passes. He takes one more dip in the ditch before his life gets better. Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

A little break in Malibu in a beautiful house with a couple of wonderful friend, and with a jet as a bonus, they lead a luxurious lifestyle  ...

Ah Michael… Michael… I had almost forgotten all about him...

Great job

Muxuak, JT! (Basque word, meaning "kisses") (mou-tchou-ak)



Author's Response:

Malibu is a beautiful place and you have to be very rich to live there near the water. Michael adds contrast to B & J success.

Muxuak back!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

........ "Earth to Marny" love the plane, house, haha HOT sex ... and ... and ... everything



Author's Response:

Thanks Marny for your reviews. I'm glad you liked it. Our boys have a very interesting life style.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Michael is impossible. He’ll never learn... Yes, he can try his luck but even if he climbs up all floors on his knees to Kinnetik, singing B&J’s praises every step, it’s not sure that Brian gives him a job.

Our two lovers have now a new toy. They’re going to explode the mile High club !!!

I love Mark & Jerry...But hey, where is the section with the best fuck between B&J  

Excellent chapter

Tons of kisses 



Author's Response:

Hehehe! It was a writer's play on duel events giving one visual and the other left to your imagination to create. Add to the fact I was falling asleep at the keyboard ending that chapter. I had just kicked out like six chapter straight over two days nonstop. I'll make an effort to get back to B/J action soon. Thank you so much for being such a wonderful reader writing all your reviews.

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Good choices for Rage and JT.  Mark is very pretty.  Still loving the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know Lorie. I fell for Mark hard when I found him just like Jerry did. Please let me hear from you again.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Heather. You know how much the hits mean to me. I'm so motivated now to write more still; oh yeah, the hamster passed out cold.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu

great chapter.. and here goes michael whining once again.. boo hoo. he made his bed now he can lie in it, bloody prick...

can't wait for some more...



Author's Response:

VG24 is helping my review count and I missed this one answering them all. Thank you very much Lesley; it should be interesting when Michael shows up at Kinnetik crawling on his knees begging for a crumbs and mercy from the gay gods of Pittsburgh.

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