Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Wish I had the money to not care what anything cost.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Another good one!
Love Gus asking if he'll have a room at Jen's!
Author's Response: Kids want to know where they fit in to changes around them. Thanks for commenting Susan.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Vance really did lose his pants didn't he?! I love that Mother Taylor gets the house and how sweet of Brian to want to give it to her for her birthday.
Glad to see Mark doing so well and happy. Yea, an appearance from my Auntie Em. So great that he is helping Jenn decorate her office.
Author's Response: In a takeover of a failing business you maximize profits and limit libilities. Mark is very happy and loved. Emmett is such a lovable character I really should try to add him more in the story. Thanks Kat for your input.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
More B/J hotness, yum!
Vance living on 3K a month and not even a house to call home (it's going to Jenn). Ouch!
Look like Mark is gaining a new surfing friend in Fox. Good he needs some friends other than Jerry around.
Jenn's new office sounds very swank and loved Em's response to her already have 4 employees. Lol.
Oh good, Lily's time is coming up and soon a baby will be underway. Can't wait!
Somehow I think B will get his birthday wish (GM).
Another great chapter with lots going on. But my eyes are starting to cross and my fingers dyslexic, so time for me to get some shuteye. I think I'll catch up with you tomorrow. P.S. Thanks for all the replies to my comments, they filled my inbox! LOL
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for enjoying my story and writing all these wonderful comments for each chapter. At this rate my other novel Embraced will no longer be the king of reviews on MW; it will have to move to 2nd place behind this new novel. I'm proud of all my novel children however. Hope to see you reading again real soon.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
I’m longing to go back to surf. Between pregnancy and c-section, it’s a very long time since I didn’t get on my board (* sight *)
I love Jennifer and Emmett doing shopping. Me too, I want a credit card without limit ...
And soon the baby ... Oh, I want see the baby !!!
Really good job
PS: Oh no, he didn’t dare (and twice more) ... I was told that I didn’t read more comments from Gex.
Author's Response: Thank you times a million for all these wonderful reviews! I'm in tears with joy seeing them when I got home. I'm am so grateful to you for the these hits; it means so much to a writer to have a high review count. Forgive me if I make short answers each. Know how much I love them though (and u 2).
~JTSecrets
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
I'm sitting on the deck by the pool, leaning against Tomás and I read the last paragraph of the previous chapter and the first paragraph of this one out loud... and you know what, it works ! I feel something hard in the bottom of my back... I'm good for a quickie before dessert :D
Mark, you gonna get your kicks from surf. I spend most of my time surfing with my family. I love the shortboard but I love even more the longboard. My father is a crazy longboarder and at 62, he beats us hollow... bah!
Jennifer and Mel move into the tower. Lily is ready for the baby. Everything is fine except for Vance ...
I loved this chapter. It is amazing. You're amazing, Mr Hamster is extraordinary
With all my love to you both ...
Gehexan
Complicated, I can imagine what happens in the head of Mr Hamster at this moment thanks to you. ;)
Author's Response: I am so happy to spark you boyfriend Gehexan. He should read and review too. I love your Twitter updates very much. When I lived in California in the pre-historic days of the 70s I was crazy about surfing; everything was longboard then too.
Spoiler Alert!: Mark hasn't visited their estate in Hawaii or seen those waves yet!
Mr. Hamster is having his first crush and is very creative at the moment; we are still writing going on ...3 days maybe?
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
I'm sitting on the deck by the pool, leaning against Tomás and I read the last paragraph of the previous chapter and the first paragraph of this one out loud... and you know what, it works ! I feel something hard in the bottom of my back... I'm good for a quickie before dessert :D
Mark, you gonna get your kicks from surf. I spend most of my time surfing with my family. I love the shortboard but I love even more the longboard. My father is a crazy longboarder and at 62, he beats us hollow... bah!
Jennifer and Mel move into the tower. Lily is ready for the baby. Everything is fine except for Vance ...
I loved this chapter. It is amazing. You're amazing, Mr Hamster is extraordinary
With all my love to you both ...
Gehexan
Complicated, I can imagine what happens in the head of Mr Hamster at this moment thanks to you. ;)
Author's Response: I love the double hits dude. Music to a fanfiction writer's ears. Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Love it!
Author's Response: Your getting to my favorite part of the newest chapters now.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Great chapter; off to read the next one now. Had a cat nap.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review hit; that puts you in the catagory of my best readers!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Wow!!! Not only the love scene is HOT, you make me HOT too. (Hey Mr Hamster, do you want to take a shower with me?? ;) )
What a good son-in-law Brian is. Gus is so cute when he is asking Justin about the room. It is the most warm welcome feeling whenever I read about Gus in your story, JT. Always looking forward to that & the hot love scene (Dirty!!! in a good way)
Remarkable!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much complicated. I just posted another chapter tonight. Mr. Hamster is jumping up and down with the thought of joining you in the shower. ( I think he's still a virgin) :P
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