Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Hot Damn, free cars. what have you done to Gus!!!!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Good chapter!
Nice w/ Ford. Interesting w/ Jerry's divorce. Good for Jennifer.
Great for Kinnetik!
Busy, busy Mark.....
GUS?! On to the next chapter to see what's going on w/ him!
Author's Response: Kids will put anything in their mouth. Yes, Kinnetik is growing leaps and bounds. Thanks Susan; happy to see you reading again.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Ford! WOW! I really want to know Vangards reaction to that. Kinnetic is kicking ass big time!
I hope Gus Gus will be ok!
Author's Response: Just a close call with a child. Carl's on top of it. Our boys are just beginning to take over the ad world. Vangard's shit right now.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
It's interesting to read the variety of training that Mark is going through.
Oh my gosh, Ford! That's a humongous whale. I love how we got to see everyone's different reactions to what this means for all of them. I mean Ted was positively giddy and rightly so! Lol
I'm so glad Jenn gets a piece of the pie too.
OMG, what's wrong with Gus!
Great chapter, hurrying on to the next...
Author's Response: Ford is big that's for sure. Kid's will be kids as you will see.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Hey, what happens to Gus ?... OMG, I have the knot in the stomach and I run to the next chapter, although I know you love Gus too much to hurt him. Anyway, I can’t stop myself, maternal instinct ...
Oh, JT .... Evil, evil JT
Author's Response: I know; children in danger cliff hangers are pure evil but they sure get the readers going. Gus is ok.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Oh my god! I hope Gus is ok
Author's Response: Carl knows what to do. Love you for commenting you know.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
A sentence and just one to forget everything (the fabulous account, Mark, Jerry, the future building)... What happens to Gus ???
Oh, you are a little devil, JT ! I'm just on the top of the roller coaster.
Fortunally, I don't have to wait for the update...
Wonderful chapter
Bravo, you are a great writter
Author's Response: Author and his hamster takes a bow for the very kind compliment.
I stayed up all night so my readers wheren't left on the cliff.
Thank you so much for each chapter's comments Gehexan.
Big Hugs!
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Was wondering where Gus went, Soooo glad you are posting the next chapter, so we don't have to wait to find out what has happened.
Author's Response: I stayed up all night making sure not to leave you with a cliff hanger and then my hamster got crazy and we're still writing now.Thanks for letting me know Lori your reading. Please comment again, and again, etc. Feed the hamster your lines.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
I should have know by now, with the title like this chapter to prepare myself with a clifhanger that for sure almost make me fall out from my chair and give me chill to the bone.
Before, I punch the air coz I'm so happy when Ford come knocking on Kinnetik door. Mark is on the way to become superstar.
You are truly GENIUS!!!! Clap!! Clap!! Clap!!
Author's Response: The good thing is you don't have to wait to see the end of the cliff. I stayed up all night to make sure today's readers had all the story. Our major characters are having a growth spurt including Jennifer too. Thank you for your very kind compliment; I'm now motivated to try and belt out at least one more chapter today. Just a couple of reviews blows my writing sail to creation of new work for you. Thank you for realizing how important you and your reviews are to me.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Evil cliff hanger. Naughty writer you!
Author's Response: Yes, I'm guilty of the occasional cliffie. It wouldn't be fanfiction without them here and there. At least I don't end every chapter with a cliff hanger or make you wait weeks for the answer. That's evil writing. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Aaagh! What's wrong with Gus, you meanie??
Author's Response: Humm... the title to the chapter is All Choked Up. I promise no little boys will be seriously harmed with this story. Kids will put the damnest things in their mouths; you know? Thanks for reviewing.
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