Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2019 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Wow, you write weddings well. Let's hope the reception goes well.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Good chapter.
Truly enjoyed.
Author's Response: Thank you Susan; I carefully researched that chapter to make it real. I had to shorten the church stuff otherwise it would have been like 20,000 words long!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
What a wonderful ceremony! Joan being there was a great twist. I hope she doesn't try to cause trouble for them. Also loved Teddy being the best man and Daph too!
Author's Response: Thank you Kat; I did a lot of research for that chapter to make it accurate. I did keep it brief as far as Catholic weddings go. Joan will be good if she wants any contact with her grandson.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
The wedding was gorgeous. I can just visualize the dichotomy of people on each side of the church. Lol...
What was Deb thinking inviting Joan without at least asking Brian first?
On to the dinner & reception...! Hopefully, everyone will behave themselves...(I'm looking at Joan and Michael)
Great chapter, on to the next...
Author's Response: Debbie and Joan are old friends since Brian was a young teenager. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
wauww beautiful writen, love the double wedding
Author's Response: Thanks much Marny. I put a lot of research in that chapter and kept the Catholic rites short. Apperciate all your comments very much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Love the wedding ! But what idea of inviting Joan! Debbie, frankly!
I hurry to the next chapter
Tons of kisses
Author's Response: Hehehehehe! Got to stir the character pot for fun and interest. You'll like the next chapter too.
Tons of kisses back!
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Oh wow. This was the best chapter yet!. Loved the double wedding. Hated for the chapter to end. It can only get better from here. Please don't end it until Justin has his son.
Author's Response: Thanks Lori. I just posted a new chapter for you. Be a good girl and give me another review (puppy dog eyes pleading...). This will be a long novel for sure.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
great chapter, loved the purple wedding dress.... mine was green ;-)
loved mel's & ben's interactions with mikie last chapter
wonder how joan and a room full of police will do with a room full of gay friendly people.... and mikie....
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys for reviewing and commenting. Just posted the next chapter 'Reception'. No major problems; just talk with Joan and Jerry mostly.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Brilliant chapter, so very well written. But now they have fixed the problem ‘Michael', here comes old mother Joan... The party might be a little rough.
I can't wait for the update
Jt, the Master of cliffhanger
Love
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thanks Gehexan; always happy to see your reviews. I'm working on the next chapter now with RL getting in the way a bit. Should not be too much longer now; tonight for sure.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
beautiful ceremonies.
joan's has alot of things to complain about. father tom conducting brian's ceremony in the church and finding out she has a grandson she never knew about. oh boy, what fun lies ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your review and comments. Joan starts out ok but after a few glasses of expensive wine things might change. Writing the next chapter today.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Yeah baby! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you VG24; just woke up to find reviews. Ya HOooo! I put a lot of work in that chapter.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
pleeease joan act out please....very good mikey gets a gold star for being a good boy lol.. the wedding was beutyfull....aaaawwww gus and jr.
now on to paaaarty. lol
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; Joan starts out nice then has a few glasses of good wine.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Excellent!!! Brilliant!!! So happy for the couple. Beautiful day.
Take care.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated. I'm delighted you liked it.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
This chapter was soooo amazing. You wrote it very beautifully.
Author's Response: Thanks kwil. I worked very hard to make it accurate but not boring.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
hehehe , loved it.. i laughed when i read about joan kinney, talk about a slap in the face..
can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thanks Lesley for commenting. Writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Terrific chapter. Loved the wedding. Can't wait to see what happens with Joan too. I see you did lots of research for this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you David; truth be told Catholic weddings are a very long precedure and I condensed it greatly. I'm glad you liked it and I'm working on the next chapter now.
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