Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2020 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Love how Brian and Justin make deals 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2019 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

The New Year is going to be great.  Kiki seems to have calmed down since we last saw her.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2019 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

glad Craig is dead, to bad it was fast



Author's Response:

It might have been fast; however, a massive heart attack can be very painful if you don't pass out first.

b

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Okay, the new year starts with Craig dead, Lindsay almost dead, and Michael pretty much free.  I feel that you'll improve everyone's lot before this story ends.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Bye, bye Craig......

LOVED this chapter!

Just LOVED it!



Author's Response:

Nobody shed a tear for the man. Thanks Susan!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Craig was a nasty bastard to his son until the end! I know Justin doesn't need his money, but leaving him a dollar. Its good that Brian already had control of Taylor Electronics or Molly wouldn't end up with anything either.

Brian and Justin love to take care of people. So great what they are doing for Mark and Tony.



Author's Response:

It's good karma to take care of people. You get back much more than you give out. Yes, Molly will be well cared for. Enjoy your reading as much as I enjoy your comments.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Mark and Tony sound like a real cute couple.

No real loss to the world with Craig gone.  IMO all that hate and anger he stored up and the final denouement of having B own his store is what killed him.  What a petty man to leave a will such as he did.  Well, we know that B/J will take care of the store and create a true inheritance for Molly by the time she's ready to take it on.

Loved that Babylon is back.

Great chapter, on to the next!



Author's Response:

Craig's will was no surprise to anyone. Molly will be well cared for.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

I've read ten chapters at ones. I don't want to stop, but it's lunchtime here and my daughters want someting to eat. I'll be back later.



Author's Response:

Reluctantly sometimes I have to stop writing and deal with RL issues like eating, etc. I'm so  grateful for all your review hits on this story. You're a very important reader for me.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Quiet evening with family, outside to enjoy the freshness… Gex has vanished into the air but there is his laptop !

Craig was a horrible person. How can he leave 1 single dollar to his own son ? I hope this schmuck burns in hell.

The Babylon opens again. The new couple seems beautiful. Brian and Justin are so great with them.

Nice chapter. You have lot of great ideas for this story ...

A lot of kisses

Ihintza

I know someone who will give me some clarification for his comment tomorrow morning !  



Author's Response:

How is the most beautiful mother in Europa today? So happy to read your comment. This is the gay world and things change rapidly especially with the young ones.

Notice the review count; When you get to 599, enter again saying "I WON!"

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

so good!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Brian and Justin are so sweet, the way they are helping Mark and Tony.  Needed a tissue warning on that chapter too.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Lorie. Mark and Tony are the new Brian and Justin Show at the new Babylon. They're a huge hit.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

boy i wished i worked for them. nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Yawn! Good morning or is it very late afternoon at my area? Thanks for the review sjmpets3. The boys were more than happy to help the new kids at Babylon and they were also impressed how they were like them only much younger.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

jesus, I was only gone five days and you update like 10 chapters in this time..... I love your story. :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks rose. My mental hamster wouldn't stop spinnng out the plot ideas so I had to write them down.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

Great, Babylon is now open... Mark and Tony look pleasant. They have been very lucky to come across B&J. They can peacefully start a new life at the same time as the new year...And speaking of new year, it will be without Craig. Bye-bye asshole, say hello to Satan for me. Break open a bottle of Cristal Roederer !

Me too, I love the sex deals between our two lovers... We do it with my partner. It adds spice in the relationship...

JT, you are too good

Love

Gehexan

PS: Ihintza comes home tomorrow with her baby. So, this afternnon, we helped Christian, my brother-in-law, to tidy up. It's just male solidarity cause, if my sister comes home to find HER house messy, she's going to pull out banderillas. Ihintza  angry, it's not something I would wish for my worst enemy...She's volcanic, hot-blooded. It's the spanish side... thank you mom !

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for commenting and the family update Gehexan. So happy to hear Ihintza and child are coming home. She going to be a little sore after a C-Section but that will pass soon. I'm happy the chapter entertained you.

Hugs!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!

just caught up, excellant. hope mikie continues to growup. love that mel and brian are getting along.



Author's Response:

Thanks alys. I always felt Lindsay had much to do with the strift between Mel and Brian. That isn't an issue in my story now  and Gus needs his momma.

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