Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I hope Mikey isn't expecting Brian to come to his rescue. I wonder who decided to give Hobbs a taste of his own medicine.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2018 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Michael got a second chance and he blew it...Buh Bye, Mikey.
As for Hobbes, revenge is sweet and he got his just deserts.
Author's Response: Did you notice the sub-plot in this chapter? Jerry can make art from real life, and make real life match the art.
bob
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I love this chapter!!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Better late than never. Sorry I missed this review back then and the only excuse I have was poor health back then.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Everyone seems to be doing well except for Michael and Chris Hobbs. Wonder who attacked Chris. Looks like Kinnetik is going to be very busy in the near future.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Well, it was a given what happened to Michael. Duh!
Nice idea for Terry & David to live at the loft. It's still in the family, I'm glad.
Methinks I smell another whale in Busch.
Wow, another twist! Now I wonder who would want to hurt Hobbs at this late date? Could it be someone who's just read B/J's story and cares very much about J?
Very good! On to the next...
Author's Response: There lies one of the mysteries of the story. Someone cares very much for Justin and it isn't Brian.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Who hit Hobbs? grr I wanna know
Great chapter * kisses *
Author's Response: The clues are in the story who had Hobbs whacked and it wasn't Brian, but someone else who cares a lot for Justin and wanted to even the score. Thanks for commenting very much Marny.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Hi, hi ! I just wake up. I fell asleep with baby (she is so adorable, she cries almost never).
Well, come on, I go back to my reading. Wow ! Chris Hobbs got beaten up... You are the king of the plot. You keep the thread while you pepper the story with little surprises. It's too great... YOU are too great
I'm very happy for Brian and Justin. Thanks to Jerry, they are on the way to earn huge budgets..
Great job
Many kisses
Author's Response: I just woke up to find reviews and many from you Ihintza; thank you so much. I'm trying to stay true to canon while extending the story past the 5 year series we know. New characters have to arrive and old scores settled; i.e. Hobbs, Claire, Joan. Thank you so much for taking the time each chapter to comment.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
great chapter, very insightful why ben was with mikie... rings very true.
Author's Response: Thanks alys; I try to stay in character best I can.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
i can't say enough how great this chapter was.
michael got caught. terry is a happy camper with his bonus and moving in rent free to the loft. ben and hunter are moving on. justin gets a new account that he doesn't even know about. you have to give something to brian before justin owns all of kinnetik, and chris hobbs got his. what could be better?
brian and justin thinking about doing it raw on their wedding night is so romantic, always.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for reviewing and for your comments. Justin is sensitive to Brian's feeling and it wil show later on. They are a partnership and Justin will keep the things in balance. I very happy you liked this chapter.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
What a surprise! I did not see its coming! Hah! If only Chris can see I stick out my tongue at him. I am so in love with Jerry right now. This is what I call 'the power of love'!!!!
God job Terry. If only my boss like Brian or Justin, I don't have to feel depress everyday at work. (it is only make my hypertension worse) I know, I know... I should looking for new job.. but time right now.... it's hard to fine a job. Hmmm....
Take care.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for commenting and reviewing. These are tough times so hang in there until the climate gets better. Lots of folks are putting up with a job they don't like; it will pass soon.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Great chapters!!! there is so much going on with all of them and it is so fun to read and i am really looking forward to the next chapter of course.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks Buffytess for letting me know; it means so much to me.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Yay, stupid Hobbs. Wow, stupid Mikey. Yay Terry and Angel. Yay beer and car companies!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate for reviewing and commenting. The plot thickens!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I'm curious who attacked Chris. I hope you plan to reveal that. Loved this chapter, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you VG234. The clues are in the story and I practically screamed who did it answering reviews!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
OMG......noooo, you didn't..:D don't tell me he thinks that by doing this he's going to get another night as a thank you...laaawd the crooks and turns of this story.
but i love it keep it comeing ;)
Author's Response: He doesn't want anything for it and will not let Justin know he had it done. He just felt like settling the score and thought Chris had it coming to him. There is now two very powerful men who love and protect Justin; but he isn't expecting to have a tender moment again. He can still love and protect Justin from a distance.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
see now you just had to put this up when i was about to go to bed....lol
mikey mikey what can you say about pooor little mikey. : /
now who in the world whould go after chris hobbs...don't tell me justin hired the same guy brian did to off sap and big ed.. laaawd
Author's Response: The clues are in the story nicole. I made it pretty clear who loves Justin enough and has motive on several levels. Brian and Justin had nothing to do with it. It might be very exciting in a future movie about our lovers perhaps.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I sure didn't see that coming against Hobbs and I have a good idea who would do it. What a story!
Author's Response: Thanks David for commenting. The clues are there so you are probably right.
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