Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Who would have thought all those years ago this story would line up with current news. Mikey doesn't know when he's got things good.
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2015 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Hi,
I've just begun to read your story and i'm already completely blown away.
I'm sooooo happy that i discovered the story so late as i have so many chapters to read :)
I love the storyline and i'm really impressed with all the details you bring up all the time, regarding advertising contracts, tax, comission fees and all. You must have a great knowledge of these things.
Well, just wanted to let you know that i love the story and i'm looking forward to read the rest of the chapters.
Keep going! *thumbs-up*
Diana
Author's Response: Hello Diana,
Thank you for reading and reviewing this epic tale. My background includes living with a man once who owned an advertising agency in California. And I have some history with real estate which taught me much on the business side of things. Then there's story research I needed to learn to make the plot work with reasonable facts. I do hope you enjoy the tale and review again.
bob
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2015 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER...! I really like how it is long enough so that you can really get into the story, whilst not getting boring and repetitive...! THANK YOU...!
Author's Response: Would you believe I wrote that monster in under 4 months. Then they adjusted my medication!
I burned out at the end and didn't give it a climax ending but got to say pretty much what I wanted. I tried to keep the character count under a hundred :D
If you want to read my crackfic days, try Embraced. I'm told it's wicked and so bad - it's good.
Hugs,
bob
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2012 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
I certainly hope MIkey stays in Canada and not return to the Pitts.
Reviewer: taire (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Michael is so freakimg stupid. What a moron. He deserves what coming to him.
Author's Response: I really broke it off in Michael in this story :) Thank you for commenting Taire
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
So many nice snippets - just when you think Michael can't screw things up any worse he does it again.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Michael better not show up in the Pitts again or else...
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
I bet Mel just loves her job right now!
Lindsay is definitely where she needs to be if none of these repercussions ever occurred to her.
Terry landed his whale, I knew he would!
Petulant Michael has another plan (pfft!), and Canada no less. He's going to be caught (no doubt about it) and probably have further charges against him. Dumbshit! Well, I hope he enjoys his adventure while it lasts!
Great! On to the next...
Author's Response: Cops have great computer data bases and files. Michael doesn't get far. Terry does very well.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Now it's obvious. Michael is the epitome of stupidity ! And this so-called "mommy", I hope she'll understand the harm she did to her son ... She's pathetic. Ooh, I really hate her. I would never harm my children and, on the contrary, I can become hellish if someone touches them...
Terry is a very good recruit but we already knew it
Very good work
Love
Author's Response: Thank you Ihintza. Michael is a very immature man and Lindsay is actually very mentally ill and criminal. I'm delighted the story continues to entertain you. You sound like a wonderful mother.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Hahaha... why I am not surprise with Mikey action. Brian so right when he say "His adventure has just begun Angel." I like it, I love it.....
You are brilliant as always, JT.
Author's Response: Thank you! Complicated for your compliment and review. You motivate me to write for you so much.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Mikey is such a stupid shit. I can't wait to see him get what he deserves. He annoys the hell out of me. I love how everything else is going though. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much VG24 for reviewing. This story is now the second most reviewed story on MW behind Embraced. Michael messed up real bad this time with nobody to blame but himself.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
ooohhhh an adventure. stupid Michael.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing darkraven. Michael sunk his battleship this time on his own-BIG TIME!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Add 17 sticks to his pipe going down now. ???
Author's Response: Next chapter; a pipe is a year so Michael gets a total of 18 years in confinement.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
OMG...mikey......mikey....mikey.. let the games begen. how slow can he be.
another fabulous chapter..
Author's Response: Thanks nicole. Michael doesn't get very far. Add 17 sticks to his pipe going down now.
Reviewer: wondering (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
in your last two stories the sex scenes were great. In this story they are like
watching Queer as Folk on LOGO; they kiss - commercial break - they are
finished, dressed and ready to go out. What's up with that?
Author's Response: HA! Thanks for reminding me to add the hot sex. I got so wrapped up in the plot I forgot to make our boys do the nasty much. I'll have to rectify that for sure! Thanks for commenting wondering.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
yay for terry for landing the client.
with brian and justin as well as mel in gus' life, he's going to grow up to be a wonderful person. he won't even remember lindsay.
michael, whoo boy can't imagine what's lying in store for him.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for commenting. International Bail Jumping is a very serious federal crime as Michael soon learns. Yes, Gus will be fine but Lindsay had to learn the possible harm she could have caused as part of her sex offender theapy. Knowing the harm she caused is incentive not to repeat the crime (so says my research for the story).
Reviewer: moonsun (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
I have been reading your story since you have started it and I have to say i am loving it. I hope michael gets what is coming to him. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you moonsun. My heart skips a beat when I hear from a new reader. Every story needs a whipping boy and Michael's mine! Thank you for the compliment and I hope to hear from you again.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Great chapter; Michael is such an idiot. Now he gets charged for jumping bail and leaving the country in flight.
Author's Response: Thanks David for reviewing. You're so right; Michael now made sure prison is in his future.
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