Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2019 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Love it that you have more story than sex sceens which I mostly fast forward
Author's Response: Forgive me for not responding to your review comments sooner. I have no excuse besides working on the new website SSW.media - constantly.
It always warms my heart to see a new review on and older book written. This one seems to have made quite a splash.
Thank you for reading and I hope it entertained you.
bob
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Angel's doing good. Glad most of the bad guys bit the dust. A double wedding will be great.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
What Justin did for Alvin Jones made me tear up but I blamed it on my allergies. Michael's young handler is going places.
Author's Response: Let me begin with my sincere graditude for your chapter reviews that are detailed and sharing your reading experience. Alvin Jones appears and grows in the future.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Angel and Keller are two great additions to the storyline. Can't wait to see where you take them.
Author's Response: How did I miss answering this review? 2012????? MY BAD!
I love you for your support and remembering your help with beta work for me. Doesn't if feel good to help people? I sure do when I can.
Sure hope the story was good for you all the way.
bob
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
No tears here for the poor buggers. Nice on the double wedding.
Author's Response: My bad for not responding to this review; I was probably down with a health issue, and for a while we were not getting our email notices. Glad you enjoyed the chappie. Thank you for your reviews.
bob
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Do you know, I think yours is the first B/J story I've read that is bringing diversity into it. I'm glad as it reflects life and IMO all good fiction has some basis in fact. Love the future that is unfolding for Angel.
Very curious who Jerry will hire as the actors to portray B/J in his movie.
Christmas at Britin and the wedding plans have begun...
Where were Ben & Hunter for this family get together? And maybe I missed it but is Em living on his own or at Deb's?
Great chapter on to the next!
Author's Response: To my knowledge this is the first story with diversity too. The actors will be very hot guys; one known, one unkown. I just didn't write Ben and Hunter any lines this time. Emmett has his own place now. Debbie and Carl are alone.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I'm happy for Angel. He deserves a better life... I love the idea of the double wedding. I'm longing to read about it. And welcome to the newcomer in Kinnetik, I feel he will become an interesting element...
Fortunately I have these moments of reading because I get bored. They don't let me do anything here. I'm not sick, damn. In addition, I carry my baby in a sling and I have my hands free, so... Phew !
Very good job, thank you
PS: I stop a moment because I think my older brother is currently drowning my son ... He teachs him apnea !!!!!
Author's Response: Ha! Sounds like a typical uncle activty for future surfers to learn however I'm sure you might not see it that way. Thanks for commenting; I live for these reviews; they are my reward for writing and knowing the readers like my work.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Okay! I have stated this many times- YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!
I am glad that you brought diversity at Kinnetik. I was extremely happy to have Sap and Big Ed taken out, even though Brian was behind it.
Then, to get even with Craig was even better.
I am really looking forward to the future chapters of: Halloween with Gus, Christmas at Britin, Terry getting the big contract, David as a model, Valentine day with Justin/Brian, the weddding in March with possible an Irish twist, and who knows what summer will bring for Gus/Justin/Brian.
Of course, there is still the need to a baby brother of Gus.
Again, you are great! So, please keep it up.
Debbie
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you very much Debbie for your praise. I'm truly honored by it. Diversity has proven to be a very popular plot twist. A reader gave me the idea for it. I listen to suggestions. You have a very good handle on the story's future. I'll be writing fast and furious as I usually do for each novel. I only do one novel at a time so my readers don't have long to wait for new chapters. If I'm not posting a chapter; I'm sleeping.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I hated ... He, he, I'm sure you don't believe me ! I, L, O, V, E, D, T are the keyboard keys I know the best ... I loved it ! A lot of joy and surprise here with the new ad, Terry, a second chance for Angel with job and school (so Justin). I'm happy for him! "The hand of the master", a beautiful master lol!
By the way, Ted & Jerry as best men
A great job,
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you oh so very much Gehexan. You warm this writer's heart with your comments. Thanks too for the best man vote. I have to sleep soon then more tomorrow.
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
wow. i might learn to like Angel.
Author's Response: I promise you; you will soon love him. He's so much like Justin it's ironic only stronger. Thanks darkraven for commenting.
Reviewer: black-rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I am so happy that you are writing another story so soon after Embraced. You're stories are great!!!
Author's Response: Thank you black-rose. The compliment is very appreciated and motivating me to write for you.
Reviewer: Eniola (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Between the double wedding and the changes made, I'm definetly anticipating the next update. Keep the greatness coming. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much Eniola for commenting. Your input was priceless to the story. I'm very grateful you took the time to help me improve the plot. Writing the next chapter now. Please comment again.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
*Jumps on my bed* because i just love it. Lol. Is michael gunna loose his rights to jenny? And is he getting dumber? Lol. I begining to love angel and jerry but i don't know why lol. Just more please *puppy dog pout* lmao :) :) :-) :-) :) :) x
Author's Response: Your review has me laughing and doing a happy dance. Mommie Mel is a lawyer; what chance does Michael have? Angel and Jerry are very good people; I love them and Terry too. Please comment again. Next chapter maybe tonight if I keep my eyes open to finish the chapter (now half done).
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Hello darling. Love love love the story. You are so talented. Can't wait for more! ~C
Author's Response: Thank you so much Carlly; please comment again. Welcome to my universe.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! QAF needed diversity in my story.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
angel is getting his way to go angel.. :) hes going places.. why can't mikey take notes, and learn.
Author's Response: Duh? We're talking about Michael here. Don't expect miracles. If Michael keeps his ass out of jail later on that will be amazing for him. Thanks for the review nicole very much.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Just keeps getting better!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate! I'm doing me best for your reading pleasure.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
great chapter JT. Glad to see that Angel is a good guy.. I'm happy to see that brian and justin are having a double wedding with carl and deb.. can't wait to see michael and lindsays' reactions to that...
Author's Response: Mega thanks Lesley for reviewing this chapter. Angel is going to me major character later on. Michael and Lindsay won't even know the wedding is happening until it's over; unless I see an angle to rub their nose in it first. They aren't exactly in the social grapevine any more.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Excellent chapter! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you oh so much inkedkelt! Appreciate the compliment. Writing the next chapter now but sleep might get in the way.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I know I say it in every review, but I love my brotha Angel!! Love the way you're fleshing out this character. He's not only someone with a good heart and a Jiminey Cricket persona, but he's talented and smart. I hope he continues on the road that he's on, especially since Justin and Brian see so much in him...meaning I hope Michael doesn't screw anything up for him.
Can't wait for the double wedding!! That is going to be so exciting!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kat for your comments. Michael can't mess up Angel; the teenager is too smart for him. The wedding will be soon. We have a Christmas chapter first and more.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
i don't like he fact that michael will be returning to the pitts some day. even after he gets out of jail. nice that justin has a job waiting for angel and it includes going back to school.
hiring terry keller is a good idea too.
ah, the double wedding. should keep emmett very busy.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your comments. When Michael returns it's straight to jail. As a registered sex offender if he gets one toe over the line when he gets out; he goes up for five years or more. Angel's art is brillant; a true natural artist like Justin. Terry is the new top gun at Kinnetik. More about Terry next chapter. Very soon Brian and Justin will have more work than people to accomplish it all.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Sort of a filler chapter, but still awesome :) Brian and Justin's banter about the wedding was adorable, and I could imagine Brian's internal "smugness" about Sap and Big Ed, surprised that Debbie couldn't see "the hand of the master",lol. :D
Author's Response: Danke BlindDreamer for your kind review. This was an important transistion chapter with a new major player at Kinnetik. Brian wasn't smug at all; just relieved Justin was safe now to his knowledge. Debbie and the kids were in the kitchen and wasn't listening to them. Debbie and Carl know nothing about Big Ed, Michael, Sap and Justin's connection to everything.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!
This is the best story i have ever read. Can't wait for the up coming chapters.... :D
Author's Response: Thank you kwil. Please join my best readers and write a short review for each chapter. Words fail me telling how much it helps me. I'm working on the next chapter today.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Yes!! Yes!! Yes!!! I am so happyyyyyyyy..... Great chapter. I think Gus or Ted can be Brian best man.
Poor Angle... nobody give him a gift before... Love Justin when he give Angle a job. When you are given a second chance, it will drive you to do better for yourself and greatful. (like Angle do.... unlike stupid Mikey).
I'll be waiting for next chapter. Love you. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your comments and review. You're the wind beneith my wings. I see Gus as the ring bearer and Ted is perfect for best man. Molly and JR can be flower girls. Rev. Butterfield (aka: Butterbutt) can do the service since our lovers know him intimately from the baths. Next chapter real soon.
Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I started reading you story yesterday and was overjoyed to find the new chapters today. I really liked how you handled The Sap and Big Ed. I can't wait to see how Mikey messes up again - I am pretty sure he will. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you Jay. Welcome to my universe. Please review each chapter; it motivates and inspires me to write for you. Trust Michael to mess up and Angel to kick his white honky cracker ass!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
This a great chapter with new diversity. BRAVO JT!
You never fail to surprise me with your plot twists.
Author's Response: Thanks David; besides Dejon QAF greatly lacked in diversity so my story wants to change that and I"ve never seen a diversity theme in QAF fanfiction. Before anybody get pissed at me for calling white Michael a honky cracker; duh? I'm white too.
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