Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2019 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Michael will scew up again

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Mikey's mindset is all fucked up.  Love how Brian and Justin will own Craig.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

So now Deb knows about Michael.  Angels shaping up into a great character, but Michael...he just doesn't get it does he?  "Don't worry about it; Brian will give me more if I call him."  gag.  It's nice that Justin is concerned about Craig's employees, I'm sure Craig isn't.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

I would like to see the look on Craig's face when he finds out.  HA HA HA!!!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

My metaphorical mustache began twirling again.  Brian owning Craig...priceless!

I love the interactions between B, J & Gus.  They are all so special.

Michael is still a moron...sadly the hit B gave him had no affect.  Linds' immediate future is taken care of and Carl gets to keep his dick (for now).

Ending with B/J on a white bearskin rug.  Perfect!

I need to sleep now...but I shall return!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you and pleasant dreams of hot steamy B and J action dancing in your head. I'm so happy your reading and reviewing. The hamster sends you his love for all the review lines he snorted tonight.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Excellent chapter. I love moments between Brian and his son. I can't wait to see Craig hears he owns any more the shop but Justin and his partner took possession of his property.

I don't know why but I can feel Michael isn't going to keep quiet.

Well, I'm going to try to get into the house to participate a little even though I already know that I'm going to get kicked out... So, I'll stay here with my brothers and their partners (they are currently sleeping on the deck chairs...) until the dinner 

Big love

 



Author's Response:

You are so kind to take the time to give me these reviews for each chapter. Mega kisses sent your way via cyber space. Michael is Michael; someday he gets a great awakening though.

Big love back for real!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Wow, Michael is just beyond belief! He better not get Angel hurt, really liking Angel. 

Not understanding how a guard at the local jail would know the real details about Michael if it's supposed to be kept quiet & behind closed doors. I hope that doesn't cause trouble for everyone.

Always love Gus.

Great idea w/ Craig's store. He is going to sh!t a brick, bwahaaa!



Author's Response:

The guard was  a supervisor and knew about it. Not all the guards knew. Big Ed make no comments before getting out. Everyone is safe now since he is  gone; same for Sap. More about how they died in the next chapter written tonight.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Ihintza sends you her love. She came out of ICU today and saw her little baby for the first time in neonatology. So, she's in better spirits.

Well, to me now the marathon reading and comments. Another great chapter. I loved it a lot. Justin is as sly as a fox (a cute blond fox ;) ). I would like to be a fly on the wall in the Craig's office to see his face ! Michael is a really moron. And he doesn't even do it on purpose. I wish good luck to Angel.

A good moment, thanks a lot

Gehexan

 



Author's Response:

I'm very happy for Ihintza, Gehexan. ICU isn't a fun place to be. Seeing your child for the first time had to be real special. Please enjoy the new chapters and let me know if you like them. I look forward to each review and comment you give me very much. Thanks!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Another brilliant chapter. I so going to kill Mikey. What a clueless shit head he is. Brian make right choice for Angle to control Mikey.

I always love the way Brian with Gus. Can't wait for Craig shit. What a devil mind our sunshine is.

Love you, JT.



Author's Response:

Mucho Thanks complicated for reviewing this chapter. I look forward to all your reviews holding my gay penis breath. Get in line since Angel has first dubs on Michael. Gus is so adorable and perfect for my story to grow up in. Sunshine is an angel with horns! hehehe! Craig is hanging on by a very thin thread.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

I wish I had an actual visual of the look on Craig's face when he finds out Brian owns his store!!  He just might choke on pure air with that!!

Michael, Michael, Michael...the worlds most delusional dumb fuck! He's so lucky to have Angel as his Jiminey Cricket or he would have already jacked himself up.



Author's Response:

HA! I loved reading your review and thank you very much for writing it. Jiminey Cricket was a perfect metaphor here. Michael's not out of the woods yet.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

sneaky!justin is a delight.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your outstanding for this chapter. Justin learned from the master!

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

woah, great chapter. michael had better not fuck up, because if he does i hope angel will waste him... i think its going to be funny, justin and brian owning craigs store, serves him right...

can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Thank you Lesley for your review. I think you'll love the chapter.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Hi, just writing an encouraging review to let you know that I'm enjoying the story and look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kate; it really does help me to hear from you each chapter. I'm writing the next chapter now.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

i can't whait to see when brian tells justin's father he owns him...and pleeeeease let mickey do something stupid at the store and angel make the call to brian please :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks nicole for commenting on this chapter. Craig will lose it I'm sure of it. Well, you know Michael and fuck up is his middle name.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

another great chapter. thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Your very welcome darkraven; thank you for commenting and another update will be soon.

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

This was a great chapter full of new details. I hate Lindsay's getting off but she's still screwed as a sex offender and not able to see her son Gus. Angel is really cool and I can see Brian helping him later on. Maybe a goffer at Kinnetic. Please write more; my addiction needs a constant fix.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much David for your review and comments. I like your idea for Angel. Justice for the rich is different than for the common poor people. I hope to give you another fix later tonight. Hang in there dude.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

Justin's heart is as soft as he's hair



Author's Response:

Thank you monica for saying that. It's so true.

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