Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2019 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

This story is amazing with all the medical jargon.  It's strange that when you wrote this years ago we wouldn't know that something simuliar with Epstein would be happening today.



Author's Response:

Truth be told it happens all the time; however, if the kids don't rat on the adults, nobody ever finds out.

b

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

ewww.  I wish all the disgusting info about Sap was pure morbid fantasy... but it is true and happening around us right now.  :(

I am just going to assume Debbie's OOC behaviour to her son is shock.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Talk about Drama!!!!  It's a good thing everything worked out in the end.  Bravo!!!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

I'm glad about Sap.  And Justin, too remembering his prom and Brian.  Great chapters

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

I keep saying the same thing, but it works...Wow!

I love the twists in this chapter...

Sap (what a sleaze), good thing he was finally caught.  I hope his 'mafia' puts a contract on him for singing.  But I hope Michael doesn't open his big mouth...can they wire his jaw shut?

J seeing Vic (I miss him!) in his dream, telling him a wonderful prophecy.  Can't wait till it's fulfilled.

The big bonuses on waking up, J remembering his prom night and what it meant to both he and B, seeing B there beside him when he came to and of course that his hand seems to be all better!

Wonderful, heartpoundingly heartwarming.  On to the next...



Author's Response:

Sorry I missed this review earler. This was a hard chapter but important to move the story forward. I always wanted J to have his prom memories too.

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Wonderful chapter.  A tissue warning would have been good so I didn't have to stop in the middle of reading to go get them.  Write fast please.



Author's Response:

Thank you very very much Lorie! A call for a tissue warning is a high compliment. I created strong emotions in a reader and I'm honored you felt that way. I may have to sleep for a day and then write the next installment. I hope you know I only write one  novel at a time and give it ALL my attention. I wrote "Embraced" in under 3 months and it's the longest novel on MW.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Shit, that's serious stuff. Glad they were cought.



Author's Response:

Thanks edom. Thats the last sick chapter for a while and i don't plan to try to top it. For the story I had to take out the trash (Lindsay, Michael and Sap). Now, let the good times roll!



Author's Response:

Thanks edom. Thats the last sick chapter for a while and i don't plan to try to top it. For the story I had to take out the trash (Lindsay, Michael and Sap). Now, let the good times roll!

Reviewer: ali (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!  no need for me to say owt else.

waiting with baited breath for the next bit

ali x



Author's Response:

*Takes a bow to his audience*  Thank you for letting me know. These reviews are really important to me to write more.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Oh my god! This chapter was fucking excellent. I loved it and I want more.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of this story.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you VG24. I know you appreciate the work that went into this chapter. 16+ hours straight of writing and research made it possible. I sure hope more people let me know they liked it. Thank you very much for your review.

Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Yeah! Nothing like a good dose of vengance! 



Author's Response:

Thank you inkedkelt! I'm glad you like it. It was a major chapter with many many hours to produce.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

wow, sap sings....

wonderful that justin woke up and remebered everything. hope deb, ben and hunter do okay and recover from michael's betrayel



Author's Response:

Thank you very much alys. Sap is so stupid when he gets high. He braged about it. The family won't miss Michael but his nightmare has just begun.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

it all went down nicely. good job.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much sjmpets3. I appreciate that as it was a major endevor to produce it.

Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

Wow love this chapter. Bare me a moment and let me do my michael is gunna get it dance, *does a jiggle*. Put michael in cell with sap so he can say he dobbed him in. Lol. More please i Fucking love this story. :) again sorry for the language :) Xx

Author's Response:

He he he! Cuss all you like Yaz. If I provoke emotions I did my job as a writer. Thank you!

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

WOWWWW talk about an exciting chapter.. i love this story.. i'm glad michael got what he deserved, i have a feeling he has something to do with that poor dead boy.. i'm glad justin is alright...

can't wait for some more....



Author's Response:

Thank you Lesley. I'm totally faged out with writing. I have to sleep. Next chapter in about two days perhaps. I'm glad you liked it. I worked very hard on it.

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