Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Sacrificed
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2018 10:44 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

weird and interesting

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 05:51 AM · On: From Dreams to Reality

"I'll tuck you into bed" okay, how is this sexy and cute all at the same time? LOL

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 05:44 AM · On: I'm Your Boy

Oh poor poor, Justin LOL. And I cannot wait for them to meet eeep :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 05:39 AM · On: Terms and Consequences

Ooooh this is different and interesting. I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: jamine (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 03:55 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

HEY GOOD STORY NOT SURE I LIKE HOW ENTHAN WAS ACKING BUT GOOD FOR SURE.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2013 11:11 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

I really enjoyed your story alot - Yvonne xx

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Cheers! Cheers! Cheers!

Yay for happy endings! This was a very creative story that kept me entertained from chapter to chapter.

You deserve another cheers, so here it is

Cheers!

Vin  :)



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Awww shucks Vin.  *scrapes toe of shoe and ducks head*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 11:07 AM · On: The Test Begins

Oh, you are evil, you are....

No cheers for you,

Vin



Author's Response:

Bwahahahaha. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 10:34 AM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Noooooooooooooo! 

OK, on to the next chapter, you evil, evil, evil writer-you!

I'm not even going to say cheers...

Vin



Author's Response:

Hey Vin,

Yes I am evil...bwahahahahaha.  Hugs Rena

Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 10:41 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

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Author's Response:

*winks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

Wonderful, great story.  Enjoying the fact that it was different from the average B/J story.  Well done!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: lilietmoi (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

Great story, I love that I can't decide who owns who! Even if I'm pretty sure that is J. And I love how your mind work to show us what love can be ...  thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  Yeah, I agree with you...J owns B. *grins*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: leah (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

elyxer.....another amazing story....youre writing hooks me everytime cant wait for the next story you write....i wish i wrote as well



Author's Response:

Thanks Leah.  I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

I waited till this was completed to read... it was definetly worth it... FANTASTIC... I hope you decide to write a sequel someday ...it would be great to see the two of them... helping out different people with their problems along the way...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story, and I may write more in this verse.  I just have so much on my plate already. *grins* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

This story was wonderful, elyxer! I felt so sorry for Justin when he thought Brian wouldn't want him anymore. And I really liked the clever ending of the brown and blonde haired couple arguing. Nice touch!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

Thank you for another beautiful love story of Brian and Justin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 And more to come...................



Author's Response:

You're welcome. *grins*  Yeah, more stories to come. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

blessed be, indeed. clever story - as always!



Author's Response:

*grins* Glad you liked it. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Love is All That Matters

Great job, thank you so much for give us this wonderful story but now? I miss you already...



Author's Response:

Awww.  Well, I'll be back shortly with another story. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Love it. I hope this story inspires you later on down the road. I'd love to see more of it. Thanks so much for sharing it with us <3



Author's Response:

Hey Ashley,  You never know...I might do more later.  Glad you enjoyed. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

So my hunch was correct after all. I thought Brian was being tested too. I loved how this final chapter really showcased the true depth of their love/bond/relationship. Thanks so much for sharing another wonderful story with us. Hope to read more from you soon!!! hint, hint ;)



Author's Response:

*grins* I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Thanks for this story Rena, Great ending!  Another stunning piece of writing and story telling!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gina. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Oh I loved so much this story and the ending was just perfect! You've done an amazing work with this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

a great chapter and story ending. thanks



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Ahh, finally they are together.

I hope Ethan got punished somehow, what he did was wrong and spiteful.

Justin always had power over Brian, Brian just never realized it :D



Author's Response:

Yeah, I agree...Justin did always have power over Brian. *grins*  I'm sure Ethan will get exactly what he deserves.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

Pfff I'm glad it was just a dream.
Thanks for the beautiful story, but I want more chapters please.
Love your stories so much.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for reviewing.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Love is All That Matters

I knew they were testing Brian. Great ending to a wonderful story; thank you for finishing it too. BRAVO!



Author's Response:

*grins* Yeah, I thought it would be interesting to test Brian as well.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for all your reviews. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:05 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Aagrrr your evil, you can't stop writing now. Poor Justin and Brian.
Please update soon.



Author's Response:

New update later today or tomorrow. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:12 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

AMAZING! Best cliffhanger yet. This upcoming week will be torture to wait through but I'm looking forward to the rewarding new chapter at the end :)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I promise to do my best to get this chapter posted on time.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Michelle) (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Terms and Consequences

Yes, suckier more boring stories please! Don't want to actually have to CARE about what happens next ;-)

More soon, yes? :)

 



Author's Response:

ROFL!!  I think I've said I'll do my best to belt out a truly horrible story, but I'm not so sure I can actually do that. *grins*  Maybe I could write a Brian/Ethan story...*shudders*  Hell no...forget I even thought that.  *washes brain with clorox*  I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:13 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

I belt out six chapters in two days and I still have reviews screaming MORE! Duh?


Once a week is very reasonable and not all writers are retired and in good health like me, and able to quinch their thirst for more reading.


I use cliffies very sparingly and only leave them hanging a few hours.


Love your work and do what you can; we can wait for it.



Author's Response:

Hey JT!  As I've said, I know I'm evil and that's part of the fun for me. *winks*  I'd love to be able to write more, but I'm the mother of three boys and two of those boys are seven year old twins.  I love being a Mom and I'm at the school for every activity and volunteer for anything that I think is important to my kids, so that means I'm at the school three days a week.  I have a very demanding husband, who may as well be considered another kid...hehehe.  These are just a few of my routine responsibilities, but I love to write so I find as much time for it as I can.  I think I sometimes forget that the newer readers don't know me as well as most of my reviewers and don't have the benefit of reading my LiveJournal.  I just enjoy cutting up in comments as I'm sure you know.  *points to the first part of her comment about being evil* Thanks for your support and good luck with your own writing.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: angel (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Terms and Consequences

I may be slightly biased and slightly bent, but I love your cliffhangers as it just adds to the whole experience of your fics. Plus I can wait a week, I'm good at waiting.
I am so glad Justin was able to figure out that it wasn't Brian and I believe that Brian has finally shown how he really feels, thank the heavens.

Author's Response:

Hey angel.  Thank you for the sentiment, but as you know me fairly well, you know that you have no choice but to wait a week, so it's a good thing that you're good at waiting. *smirks*  I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for all your loyal support. Hugs, Rena.

Reviewer: Denise (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:54 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Funny, my reaction to your "cliffhanger" is the same as the first person that reviewed this chapter. Nice of you to call your readers stupid, then sign w/ a condescending "hugs?" Real classy. If you updated more often, then it would be fine but not when you take so long.

 



Author's Response:

I post one chapter a week which is the best I can do considering my obligations, and I've done this since I started posting my very first chapter of Give Me Liberty.  Considering the number of writers who post a chapter a month or a chapter every two months or those that don't even bother finishing a fic they've started, I think I post more consistantly or at least as consistantly as any writer in any fandom.  I honestly thought the person who left that review was joking for reasons I've just stated, and I was joking back.  In regards to "hugs", well that's just how I sign each and every review and if you bothered to look, you'd see that.  Now, I have a question for you...do you honestly see a chapter a week as being slow or not updating often enough?  If so, then I suggest you and all those who think like you to wait until I've finished posting the story before they read it.  Finally, I'd just like to say that the people who know me, know I wouldn't insult anyone out of hand.  However, I will say that it's extremely presumptuous of readers to think they can leave reviews telling me when and how I should write my story, or berate me for the way I answer comments.  If Colin has a problem with the comment then he can address me personally and we'll clear things up. Sorry you can't take a joke. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:09 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Okay, I did not like the cliffhanger. So, I am hoping you will continue the next chaper fairly soon.

I love the story. I can just picture all the characters well.

Please keep the great writing. I am hoping for more stories from you to come in the future.

Take care.

Debbie



Author's Response:

Hey Debbie!  I realize that cliffhangers are only good for the writer, but you have to admit, they serve to keep the readers interested.  Oh, maybe that's why writers use them so much.  No, in my case, I'm just evil and enjoy inflicting the pain. *winks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:18 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Evil writer; you better relieve our pain soon or my angel will kick your angel's ass.



Author's Response:

*bats eyelashes, puts hands on hips and leans close, whispering, "You wish."*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:20 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

you are soooo evil and your cliffhangers are soooo not funny.... are you trying to us?? :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Yes Rose, you've figure out  my evil master plan.  I'm waiting on all my readers to drop dead from heart failure. *smirks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:49 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

AAAHH!  This is like the third impossibly evil cliffhanger in a row!!!  Write more now dammit!!!!

 

Or write suckier stories no one gets addicted to... ;-)



Author's Response:

ROFL!!!  Okay, okay!  I promise to write suckier stories.  Happy now? *giggles* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: rzn Rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:02 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

you know , you are evil. how could you do this to me ???? please update sooooooon .



Author's Response:

Hey Rose!  Yes, I know I'm evil, but would you love me as much if I weren't? Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: I Need You

I'm glad Brian came to Justin. He really does love Justin and its good that Em called him on it.



Author's Response:

I agree Kat.  I had fun writing that. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:05 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

“You’re not going to kill him.”

"Yes, I am and then I’m coming after you.”  Brian heard Justin scream and threw his head back letting his own scream join his boy’s"

And then I'll help Brian coming after you "evil"!

(you are a genius :) )



Author's Response:

Woo Hoo...you're bringing Brian to me!  I'll be waiting. *grins* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:43 PM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

That's really pure evil, both the cliffhanger and Ethan. To hate someone so much as to take it out on someone else should be enough to warrent a one-way ticket to hell.

I can hardly wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey edom!  I do love to be evil.  Didn't you know this about me already? *winks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Virtues

Wonder what kind of test Justin is going to have to go through, seems likes he's already been tested so much already.



Author's Response:

Hey Kat!  You could be right, but then again, maybe not. *evil grin* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jenn (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:08 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Wow....it's been a while since a fic has made my stomach all knotted up waiting to see what happens! 

And the week wait between updates is even more killer! 

I thougth about trying to figure out where you're going but I think I'll stick to being surprised or whatever you want to call it!

Amazing writing (all of yours fics are awesome...this is the first time I've reveiwed on MW.  I tend to review more on LJ)

And I've rambled on enough.  Can't wait to see what happens!  I hope Justin finds away to break free...or Brian breaks free.  Or something!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Jenn.  You know I'm not gonna give anything away, but I know you'll like what happens.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:24 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

Oh you are sooooo mean!  Now I'm begging, on my knees ppleaasese up date soon!



Author's Response:

Whoa Gina!  I like you on your knees. *grins* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Colin (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:15 AM · On: The Pain of Betrayal

If you want people to keep reading, don't be so mean with the cliffhangers.  There's only so much one can take especially since you don't update often.  Just a suggestion



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm taking this as the joke I'm sure it's meant to be...otherwise I'd have to consider you stupid. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Kitty_Ballou (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:39 PM · On: The Test Begins

Phheeew... Wow! Amazing story, but this was the most evil thing I'd ever read!!

*want to slap Michael + Ethan*

And I can't wait to go on reading so pleeeeeeeease - update soon, yes??

*puppy eyes*



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this chapter. *grins*  I will try to update on Friday.

Hugs!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:09 AM · On: The Test Begins

With my third read it becomes clear to me now. This is brilliant writing and I get the plot idea where you're going with this. I won't spoil it in my review but it's genius how you did this. Looking forward to the next chapter and Brian's and Justin's actions.



Author's Response:

Thanks for not spoiling it.  I admit that I really enjoy writing twists and turns in an attempt to keep the reader guessing.  I leave little clues through out the story that don't seem to mean much, but when you read the last chapter, I promise you'll see all the clues. *grins*  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:09 PM · On: The Test Begins

As usual you have done amazing things with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if my hunch is correct. Thanks for posting!



Author's Response:

I can't wait to hear if your hunch is correct. *grins*  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:18 AM · On: The Test Begins

OMG Rena, I just reread this, and I  think I know what's going on!  But I wont'  say, but I'm dying to ask, but I won't cause I don't want to give anything away!  lol  Ohhh please update soon, I'm dying to know more about 'the test' and who passes....(evil grin)



Author's Response:

Hey Gina!  I'm so very glad to know that someone "gets it".  I was beginning to worry a bit...NOT.  LOL.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Stephanie Renee (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 04:55 AM · On: The Test Begins

Poor Brian!!! I hate Ian!!!!! Love the story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:13 PM · On: The Test Begins

you.are.a.evil    



Author's Response:

I know. *grins* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 04:23 PM · On: The Test Begins

Grrrrit's not fair, how can Justin now that it's not Brian.
Oh no you can't stop writing, please update soon.



Author's Response:

No it's not fair is it, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:51 PM · On: The Test Begins

I've re-read the chapter searching for details to clue me into your plot again. I'm curious how you didn't write yourself into a corner here. Awaiting you next chapter with wonder.



Author's Response:

I am still following the same plot, but it is a confusing time for the main characters, give them and me time and I know you will be happy with the results, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:28 PM · On: The Test Begins

That's just mean ending it riight there.



Author's Response:

It is isn't it. *evil grin* Hugs Rena.



Author's Response:

It is isn't it. *evil grin* Hugs Rena.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 01:18 PM · On: The Test Begins

It really isn't fair, how is a human supposed to know that the man who looks and feels exactly like his dream lover isn't the right man/angel?

I hope the next chapter comes soon, this cliffhanger is too much :)



Author's Response:

If you think this cliffhanger was too much then I suggest you miss the next one, *evil grin*, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:57 PM · On: The Test Begins

I''m lost; I no longer see where this going to. The plot has gotten confusing for me.



Author's Response:

Keep reading it will become clear, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:11 PM · On: The Test Begins

brian's got to find a loophole..... quick



Author's Response:

Loophole? We don't need no stinken loophole, *grins* hugs Rena.

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:26 AM · On: The Test Begins

Awwww you can't leave break it off there!



Author's Response:

I can and I did, *big evil grin* hugs Rena.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:25 AM · On: The Test Begins

ok, this chapter really upset me!  It's not fair!  I mean really, how is Justin to pass a rigged test? And I don't understand, what did Gabriel put in Justin's drink? And why did he need to put anything in his drink if he was just going to change into Brian's form anyway?

I'm very confused...:-(



Author's Response:

Take a breath and calm down.  I don't want to give things away, but I will tell you this...How do we know that Gabriel/Ethan put anything in Justin's drink?  Simply because Michael told Brian that he did, but did Brian actually see this?  Keep an open mind and remember that things aren't always as they seem.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:57 PM · On: I Need You

Wow. No one writes a sex scene like you ;-) I love the interconnectedness between Brian and Justin. Brian's uncertainly is so believable, too- and such an appealing contrast to the assuredness he shows Justin. I love Emmett in this, too. Wonderful story! Thanks so much for writing!



Author's Response:

I am glad you like the dynamics between the characters and I like Emmett in this too, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:11 AM · On: I Need You

Aw, Sir is back! And the reunion sex was HOT! :)



Author's Response:

Reunion sex between B/J could not be otherwise, thanks hugs Rena.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:08 AM · On: I Need You

You always leave me wanting more, more, more!!! Greedy of me...yes.

Great job with this story so far. Thanks for writing it.



Author's Response:

More I can do, but you will have to wait a week, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:45 PM · On: I Need You

Whew, poor Justin, he thinks that Sir is really displeased with him and in reality he's not.

That was so hot.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it, thanks for reading, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:29 PM · On: I Need You

Poor Justin had me close to tears at the beginning of this. I was so glad to see the boys reunited at the end. Can't wait for next weeks update where Justin will hopefully wake up in Sir's arms for real :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, thanks for commenting hugs Rena.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:38 PM · On: I Need You

great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks Rose, hugs Rena.

Reviewer: Stephanie Renee (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:19 PM · On: I Need You

I loved it!!! I checked the recent thing like every day to see if you have update!!! I almost cried when Brian finally went back to him!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Stephanie, I try my best to update every Thusrday unless something happens, I am glad your enjoying the story hugs Rena.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:35 PM · On: I Need You

Whew. that was so hot. I love your work. Emmett was so right too to slap Brian down. Do we have t wait like three books of Twilight before they do the nasty for real?



Author's Response:

I would tell you but that would take away all my fun, thanks for reviewing hugs Rena.

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Virtues

I'm loving this story. lol..The last line completely cracked me up. I can clearly see Michael's face as he says it. =)



Author's Response:

*grins* I'm glad you enjoyed. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Virtues

Loved this chapter. Lots of new details, developments and insights to Chris and the events. Brian is certainly the one needing to grow up here. HA! Great twist to your plot. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

*grins*  I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Virtues

Justin really is such a good boy. Brian is terribly lucky to have him. Keeping my fingers crossed that the test is just around the corner. Great job as usual!!!



Author's Response:

Justin is a good boy and they are both lucky. *grins* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Virtues

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Virtues

Excellet chapter. :o) I can't wait for B/J union *Sigh*



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Virtues

I love this story so much. I hope Brian will be ready soon, I think Justin has deserved it by now.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Virtues

I love the interaction between Michael and Brian and Justin is so great!!! What he've done with Chris and other artist, was really kind.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Stephanie Renee (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

I love this story soooo much there are not words!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

oh wow... I am speechless. poor justin. I guess loving brian is always hard, no matter what universe you are... :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks Rose! Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

I know Justin is young and is bound to make mistakes, but he still has much to learn. He almost destroyed Brian with his recklessness. I hope Brian doesn't give up on him ...

Great update, elyxer! :)



Author's Response:

You got that right. *grins* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

As others have said the pics are awesome. I can't wait for Justin's punishment to be over. Eagerly awaiting next week's post!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the pics are definitely the stars of this chapter. *grins*  I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic. Hugs!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

Beautiful story, love your writing .. poor Justin .. Love the pics



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love the morphing pics that Nickie made too.  Hugs!

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

This is one of the most unique stories I have come across! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter...hint...hint...



Author's Response:

Thanks Ashley,  I'm glad you're enjoying this one.  Next chapter will be up next week.  Hugs!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

Thank goodness Justin is ok. My goodness what a punishment for Justin!

LOVED the morphing Emmett pics!!!



Author's Response:

Justin will be fine. *grins*  Yes, Nickie did an awesome job with the pics!  Hugs!

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

wonderful again. please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I update every Thursday on my LiveJournal and either Friday or Saturday here.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Hugs!

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

ooooooh poor Justin... I'm so glad that he's ok now and aaaaah he told Brian that he loves him. I can't wait for the new chapter!!! I love this story!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for commenting. Hugs!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

WICKED!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

Intense chapter!  Of course I totally loved it! One question though, I reread the last chapter and I think I'm missing something. How did Justin disobey Brian?



Author's Response:

Technically, Justin didn't do anything that any normal person wouldn't do, but he can't be normal.  Brian told him to go straight home, but he stopped to help someone.

Hugs!

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Cloaked Reprimand

I love all your stories.

You are truly a gifted writer.

I loved how you got Emmett to change from himself to the other 3 guys.

Please keep this story and others coming.

Have a nice summer.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful comment.  As for the Emmett pics...the wonderfully talented Nickie made all those for me.  I forgot to give her credit but I'm doing that now so thank you for reminding me.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Stephanie Renee (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:39 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

i love it!!! Ethan hate-aged is the best!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:07 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I am so happy to see an update.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to see your comment. *winks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:38 AM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Ahhhhhh! I can't believe I have to wait a week to find out what happens. You're too evil ;) Wonderful new chapter. Keep up the great work!!!



Author's Response:

I enjoy being evil...bwhahaha.  Glad you liked the chapter. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:08 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

You know what, that was just evil! Next chapter pronto...please :)

That Ethan is an evil bastard and to be in Chris' head, scary scary thought! I hope Justin will be ok.



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I have to admit that I had fun writing this chapter. *grins* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:15 AM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Please, please update soon>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Cant wait to see what will happen.....................

Thanks for the update and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You're welcome and thanks so much for commenting.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:19 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Oooooh I love so much this story and I'm so happy that they've finally met and fuck, not matter what kind of story is it, I always hate Ethan ahhahha btw, I can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying the fic and thanks for taking the time to comment.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:09 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

if justin dies brian will forfeit his wings and retaliate. ethan will be so dead, again.

what a combo, ethan and chris. justin never stood a chance.

ted better save him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets!  I'm sure Ted will do everything he can to save Justin. Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:04 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Oh you're breaking my heart here!   Please update soon!  This is another fabulous story!  I so love reading all your stories, you never disappoint!



Author's Response:

Hey Gina,  I didn't mean to break your heart.  Thanks for the awesome comment. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:51 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Wow! You're evil!! That was such an amazing chapter ... stupid Ethan and Hobbs, I hate them both even more now.  Here's hoping that Justin's strong will holds and he comes through for his man.  Awesome update! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

*grins*  I enjoy being evil.  I'm glad you liked this chapter. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Beware_Of_Weeping_Angels (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:32 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Wow....that's so cool!  I loved it!  And as long as you update soon, I don't mind the cliff hanger!  ;-)  Great job, I mean, just wow....  Love it!



Author's Response:

I try to update my Livejournal every Thursday and on here every Friday..  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:45 PM · On: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

That was an amazing chapter. Why was Chris in a coma? You didn't explain that very well.



Author's Response:

You mean Justin?  I thought this explained what happened to Justin fairly well.

Chris sat in his car across the street from Justin’s. He smacked his palm against the steering wheel. It wasn’t fair. He needed to do something. He heard the voice whisper in his head, “Follow him home. When he’s off the main road, smash your car into his.”

Thanks for commenting!  Hugs!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:35 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I can't wait for Brian (Sir) and Justin to see each other face to face!! That Craig is a piece of work! Blaming Justin for something he did before he was even born! I'm glad Justin come to trust and find comfort with Brian. I hate that Jennifer was hurt in all of this, but I hope that her relationship with Justin will be ok.



Author's Response:

I admit to having fun writing Craig's part. *grins*  I promise he'll get exactly what he deserves. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:40 AM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I think the only place that Justin really feels comfort and love right now is only with the 'shadow man.' Craig certainly hasn't stood up to his responsibility in all of this. I'm so glad you updated! :)



Author's Response:

You're right.  Justin feels his dream man is the only one he can trust.  Thanks for the comment. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:18 AM · On: From Dreams to Reality

very powerful chapter. craig, for all the drama he caused has no one to blame but himself for whatever may befall him. i feel for jennifer,right now there isn't anything she can do for justin. not that he wants her help, but she's feeling lost. justin is safe and protected by brian, as it should be. if he can stand up to his father like that, then brian did help him finally become a man.



Author's Response:

Welcome back, sjmpets!  I'm glad you're reading and enjoying this little ficcie.  Thanks for all your support and comments.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:15 AM · On: From Dreams to Reality

i like how justin seeks comfort in brian's presence. lovin the fic!

feroza



Author's Response:

Hey Feroza!  I enjoy writing Justin like this almost as much as I enjoy writing him in the dominant role. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:44 AM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I completely love this story, I was so excited to see an update! Really love the dynamic between Brian and Justin, it's perfect.  Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:14 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

Dam love this more please ... ltr



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it, Kaylin. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:08 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

hope jen divorces craig and takes everything....

how does justin finally meet sir? walking down liberty ave to the toy store?



Author's Response:

LOL...good idea.  Hmmm...let me think about it. Hugs!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:56 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

nooo... i need more you can't stop it there..pleeeease right some. pleeeease :)



Author's Response:

More next week. *winks*

Reviewer: Beware_Of_Weeping_Angels (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:37 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

Ugh, you can't stop there!  This story is so much fun to read, it's really interesting, and for some reason, I really love the beginning.  Great job!



Author's Response:

awwwww.  I'll have more up next week.  I'm glad you're reading and enjoying. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:58 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

So loving this story. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this one, Gina.  I had so much fun writing it. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:55 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I'm looking forward to your update of this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm glad you're finding the story interesting. *grins* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:46 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

That was very well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Terms and Consequences

A spirit demon with a BDSM twist. Your stories are always so interesting.



Author's Response:

*grins*

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:36 PM · On: From Dreams to Reality

I missed last week's chapter so I got to read two this week. Such wonderful and delicious treats they were too! I can't wait for Justin to meet his shadow man. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena.

Reviewer: jodeamac@hotmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:33 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

Wow!!!  So hot!!!

Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:35 AM · On: I'm Your Boy

Hey

Great beginning! I can't wait for more. Great writing.

Reviewer: paple (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Terms and Consequences

wow   i really love this story !!!

 

can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:55 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

wow I'm already hooked to your story

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:29 AM · On: I'm Your Boy

I am so glad that you are writing a new story~ I love all of your stories!  This seems like a really interesting scenerio. I can hardly wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:52 AM · On: I'm Your Boy

rena, this was such a surprising chapter. i don't know if i'm the only one who thought brian was the devil yet it turns out he's cupid. omg fantastic.

i see justin learned his lesson well. let's hope he remembers when ethan comes to him or michael throws his anger his way. what a struggle they'll put him through. but he's brian's boy and will give brian the love and companionship he so despertly wants.

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:52 AM · On: I'm Your Boy

Oh I just love this story!!! I love the Greek Mythology because I study it in High School and I just love the idea of the Greek Gods within the QAF characters and the whole story that you're writing it's just simply amazing and I can't wait to read more and more about it!!! And above all, I can't wait to read about the first meeting between Brian and Justin =) 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:42 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

LOVING this story!  I love Angel stories.  Love that you made Brian 'cupid' lol.  Love  the premise, the hot sex....Ok, did I say I love this story? lol  Great job, can't wait for an update.  I'm always excited when I see a story from you.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:01 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

Brian is Cupid!!! Love it!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Terms and Consequences

Loving this already! Brian claimed Justin before he was even born!

The conversation Justin is going to have with Craig is gonna be intense to say the least!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:28 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

love the dialog between Em & Brian.... so Mikie is god of war.... LOL....

Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:19 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

Wow, this is just absolutely fantastic! Just stumbled upon it this morning and wanted to say I'm really excited.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: beware_Of_Weeping_Angels (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:45 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

Oh, wow....You know there is a problem when the god of love doesn't remember what love is like!  :)  Great job, I really like how you have everyone as a god, and you're meshing all of them together into one person.  And I love Emmett!  Great job!

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:53 PM · On: I'm Your Boy

Pleaaase, chapter 3. Soon, very soon... Can't wait...

Reviewer: jodea (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Terms and Consequences

Chapter 2!?!  Please!?!  Soon!!! 

It's too good to be true!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Terms and Consequences

This is a really great begining!!! I can only imagaing what the rest of the storyline going to be.... trying to patiently wait for the next chapter :o)

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Terms and Consequences

Eagerly awaiting the next update. Wonderful story!!!

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