Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Beloved
Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 06:19 AM · On: The Most Beautiful Man in the World

Is there any chance of this being finished?

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2016 12:46 PM · On: WTF?

Loved it! Please update and complete for us. 😉

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2016 12:45 PM · On: WTF?

Loved it! Please update and complete for us. 😉

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2016 01:17 PM · On: The Most Beautiful Boy in the World

And this is only chapter two? Wow!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2014 03:10 PM · On: WTF?

Why do I do this to myself .. You can't end it there !!!!!!



Author's Response:

It's not over, just paused until November.

Have you read Taylor, Buttercup and Enigma, or Fawn.Armani? Those are the ones I'll start updating again in 3 or so weeks.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 07:53 AM · On: WTF?

What's going on? More please!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 09:53 AM · On: WTF?

HUH? What happened, did I miss something? 

Reviewer: charlotte (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Comestible

i really love this story, but please say you will finish fawn armani.  you said you  would work on two more stories to finish.  please please say fawn is one of them.  been waiting two years for more chapters to this one.  hopefully waiting.



Author's Response:

I made a poll on my LJ page. You can go vote.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Brian's World

Wow a knife tothe groin.   They are a itch going in and even worst going out.   I am so lovig this cant u tell

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 12:17 PM · On: The Chase

Every chapter is better than the last

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Brian's Mom

Still an evil drunk though.   God Justin needs to save him.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 11:51 AM · On: The Other Side of the Tracks

Oh man he is about to meet jon.   Well she is not bible toting joan but working girl joan oh yea this will e interesting

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Deb Flips Her Wig

So is justin vic in this

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Breakfast in Bed

Awwwww so cute

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Awakening, Part 2

Totally loving the sex but its time our boys leave the bedroom.   loving it

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:16 AM · On: All Mine

Still loving.   They have claimed each other I wonder what will happen next.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 06:40 AM · On: You're Mine Now

Oh I love ToppyJustin.   Still cant believe you made joan a prostitute

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 06:21 AM · On: The Most Beautiful Boy in the World

That was great.   On to the next.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 05:53 AM · On: The Most Beautiful Man in the World

Wow you definitely have a way with words.   I am hooked.

Reviewer: charlotte (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Comestible

so glad you explained.  i can see why your writing took a bag seat to your r/l problems.  glad you are in abetter place now and can write more of your great stories.  i'll be waiting for more story updates. at least you haven't lost me.  just call me ms. patience.



Author's Response:

I decided to focus on three stories (My Beloved and two others to be decided) for the next few months and see if I can't get them done. PS: Telling me how much you like an update motivates me to write more often and longer updates...just an fyi :)

Reviewer: charlotte (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Comestible

i started reading this story a couple years ago.  then it didn't go anywhere so i went on to other writers.  what made you decide to finish this one, hopefully, now.  will you be finishing your other open ones especially fawn armani?  i was really into that one.  i truly hope you finish the open ones as there are quite a few and i think im not the only one that has been waiting. i don't know.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I've kept people waiting. I genuinely am. I don't know what to say except that I write the way I can when I can. My life has changed completely in last 3 years. I got divorced (and subsequently lost all my R/L friends) and moved to NYC, where I knew no one. Since the divorce and the move, I've been trying to remake my life (meet new people and work to get myself in a job I actually enjoy--which means going back to school, trying to get into a residency program-where you work in the field while going to school, and volunteering to get some experience). Writing is important to me, as are my readers, but sometimes R/L gets in the way. I don't expect people to be happy with me, continue to follow my stories, or even leave feedback. I often wish I were the type of writer who worked on only one story at a time and completed each in a relatively timely manner. I'm just not.    

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Rodents

Oh! I can't wait either for payback which, as I heard, is a B-I-T-C-H! And I'm sure you're gonna do it right at that!

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Rodents

Thrilled you have updated and what a way to do it! Fun and hot, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Sara (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Bedtime

hello,

at first when I read the story I thought it would be ridicules… coz I always no matter how I try to imagine…  Justin is shorter and looks younger … but in your story it was beautiful and was filled with emotions, love and care… to see how older Justin is going to save younger Brian from a damaged family and a terrible mother … also its like the same people at the original story but not the same people… in your story we don’t have to worry about younger Brian getting rejected because the older Justin didn't live a bad childhood … the chapter that I loved the most  was (Brian's world) how you described his room and the furniture ,,,etc … I have to say that am turned on by these emotional things not by the description of love making which I find is the same in all of the stories at this site… waiting for the rest… well done…

 

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Bedtime

Finally - all caught up! found this and couldn't stop reading til I got to the end! I kept wantin to give feedback - especially at the dinner party and when Ethan first came on the scene and Kimmey and Mickey! Toally hilarious! And the thought of Justin with skinny dreadies!! Tee hee! And the awww moment when Brian said that he still looked hot! Love the way you keep mixing it up, sad then funny then ultra hot! This fic has it all! Loving it and want more soon please! :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Bedtime

whether he blew them out or left them lit, ethan got an eye/ear full anyway.



Author's Response:

good point :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Fallout, Part 2

“So…now you know. I’m in high school, I take French, and my mom’s a hooker. Questions? Comments?”

I *LOVE* this line! ROTFLMAO! Totally straight up Brian right there!

 

OMG French name, wow does THAT bring up memories! And there were 3 Michelle's in my French class so I think I ended up being Richelle or Rachelle or something like that...

 

“Oh my fucking God! Why don’t you both get down on your knees and start licking his feet?”

Oh, poor Ethan? Did you bring Dougie along to try & divide Brian and Justin and have it backfire on you? You poor, poor thing! ;D

 

Dreadlocks... LMAO!!

 

This chapter was chock full of fun!

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Fallout, Part 2

that turned out to be a nice evening.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Fallout, Part 2

Loved this chapter!  This story 'so rocks!'  Thanks for the update

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

Well.... at least Brian's mom won't be bugging them anymore, right?

Ethan's an ass and I hope Justin kicks him to the curb after his actions in this chapter and the last...

Oooh, Paris sounds fantastic! A chance for the boys to get away from it all and re-group :)

Hope you're doing well,

~Michelle

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

Poor Brian..... I hope he listens to what Justin is saying to him.... but... after what just happened you can't blame him for wanting to run as fast as he can... 



Author's Response:

Yeah...he's had a tough night (and a tough go of it in general)

Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

Please believe it Brian!

I just want to pull them both into a big hug and reassure them that its all going to be OK ...before I drop kick Ethan and Doug out the window.



Author's Response:

Awww...yeah they do need a hug

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

poor brian!

thanks for the update

feroza



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

love it!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad :)

Reviewer: Dawna (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

I'm going to read this story- but I wanted to ask if you would possibly consider completing Fawn Armani. You storytelling skills are so awesome! I can't wait to read this story but I'm waiting till it's completed. ( I've started too many stories that are WIP) that sometimes never get finished.



Author's Response:

My muse does what it wants. I have no control. Sorry.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

omg that was wonderful. if that idiot doesn't see how much feeling there is between brian and justin then he's blind.

going away to paris...ooh la la.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Fallout, Part 1

this story just breaks my heart in a good way.  I'm so loving it.  Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

Awww...that's so great to hear :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Jealousy and Humiliation

Whoa... that sucks! Poor Brian just can't catch a break... well except for Justin who's the biggest catch of all!

Please post soon (if you can)!  :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Jealousy and Humiliation

OMG.... it was going so well.... Brian and Justin put Ethan in his place...then.. OMG.. how on earth are they going to explain what happened next....  I can't wait to see how they get out of this ....

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Jealousy and Humiliation

omg! everything was going so well. who cursed them?

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:00 AM · On: A Little Sex, a Little Thinking, a Little Talking

Wow... I hope Brian doesn't find out about Justin's... "little" lie... that could cause "big" problems .......  update soon...



Author's Response:

I won't make you wait too long :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Enter Ethan

OMG... It seems as if Ethan is Justin's Mikey..... I love that Brian is trying to show Ethan just how together they are..... this should be a interesting two weeks..... If he stays that long... lol...



Author's Response:

Yes, Ethan is most definitely Justin's Mikey. Yeah, Brian's evil in a wonderful way :D

Ethan might not be able to stomach two weeks :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:13 AM · On: A Little Sex, a Little Thinking, a Little Talking

i hope brian never finds out the truth, it would devistate him. but you gotta love justin for thinking it up.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, it would :(

Yeah, Justin's very thoughtful :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Enter Ethan

I just want to tell you how much joy I get out of this story. I'm loving the older Justin/younger Brian and their love.  It's so romantic...



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks!

:) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Enter Ethan

brian is going to make sure nothing and no one will come between him and his.



Author's Response:

Indeed :) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Fighting at School

i hate to think what would have happened to brian if justin wasn't in his life. they are good for each other,



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more (that they are good for each other)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Fighting at School

Stupid football players >:(

But at least they made more time for Brian to spend with and pose for Justin...  :D



Author's Response:

Very true :D :D :D

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:02 AM · On: The Most Beautiful Man in the World

So I've found another story of yours that I love - no surprise there! :D

The whole alter ego thing almost made me choke on my drink it was so friggin funny! I love the older, but still vulnerable & sensitive Justin paired with a younger, romantic Brian. The chapter where his mom was trying to sell him to Justin amde me want to cry & cheer all at the same time. Brilliantly written. :)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you are enjoying this story :) :) :) At first I thought older!Justin, younger!Brian might be too weird, but I love writing this one.

I'm glad you found the alter egos amusing :D

"The chapter where his mom was trying to sell him to Justin made me want to cry & cheer all at the same time. Brilliantly written"

Awww...thanks!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Byron Kimmey and Jason Tyler

byron kimmey and mikey. what a riot.

justin is so supportive that he's scaring brian i think. justin has to make him understand that justin wants him just the way he is.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you found their alter egos amusing :)

Yes, Brian is most definitely scared. He's not used to the kind of caring Justin wants to give him.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Waking Up Has Never Been Sweeter

what a way to be woken up. they are made for each other that's for sure.



Author's Response:

Brian sure liked it :D

I couldn't agree more :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Wanting You, Part 4

I can't believe what a total Bitch Joanie is....  Trying to sell Brian for $5,000 !!!  I am glad that Justin asked Brian to move in with him.. so he never has to go home to his crazy mom...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think she just won worst mom of the century with that d*** move

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Wanting You, Part 4

beautiful chapters. hope mommy dearest leaves them alone.



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks for saying so!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Wanting You, Part 4

ahhhhhh!!  So loved this!  



Author's Response:

That's so wonderful to hear!

:D :D :D

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Wanting You, Part 2

Oh you can't leave me like this!  Please post more soon!  I love this story.



Author's Response:

Sorry :(

I'll post another part later tonight :)

I'm so happy you are enjoying this one :) :) :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Wanting You, Part 1

And I nearly swooned!  With this chapter!  So sweet.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Wanting You, Part 1

AS I read your story, I keep asking myself could this really be Brian as a young man.  So cynical and so open at the same time.  If a lover like Justin let him down, would he become Brian on the show?

The best compliment - I can't decide, so I keep reading.

 

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Missing You, Part 3

thanks for the update!!!!!!!

really love this story..........

cute chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Missing You, Part 2

That's Mikey for you..he never knows when to shut up..... I am glad Brian decided not to pay any attention to what he said about Justin...

 

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Missing You, Part 2

poor Brian having those images in his mind. Maybe he should talk to Justin about his fears and what Mikey said so that Justin can make sure Brian knows the other guys don't compare. Justin could also tell Brian he's the best sex he's had, I'm sure that will make Brian happy =D

This is one of my fave stories. I love your writing =D

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:58 PM · On: The Dinner Party, Part 2

Why was Seth so upset that Justin painted Brian???....I hope everyones questions don't scare Brian away.... update soon



Author's Response:

Cause Justin had never painted someone he'd slept with or dated before. Seth was jealous :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:51 AM · On: The Dinner Party, Part 2

ah jennifer chimmed in.....

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:48 AM · On: The Dinner Party, Part 1

daph you evil girl, you just want to see what brian does ;-)

Reviewer: fwmammd (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Brian's World

Your story is different, I love it. And like Justin much more than usually, especially in this soft chapter.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:51 PM · On: The Dinner Party, Part 1

 

Great chapter.... I am so glad that Daphne can't keep her mouth shut.. lol...  I can't wait to find out just how Brian..."introduces" himself to Seth... and what Justin's reaction will be.... update soon... 

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:15 PM · On: The Dinner Party, Part 1

daph what did you expect.... now how exactly does brian play this.... can't wait to hear

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Brian's World

I love this story... It's intresting to see this B/J relationship. Keep up the good work. :o)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Brian's Mom

sad but great backround chapter. now we've met brian's egg donor ;-(  now on to justin handling brian's burst of temper in the next chapter I expect LOL

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Brian's Mom

 

OMG...  Poor Brian ...Joanie was hitting on Justin right in front of him.... she is sure different than the "real" mother Kinney..

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:55 AM · On: The Other Side of the Tracks

 

Wow... Justin is about to meet his "Mother-in law"... I can't wait to see how you turned hoiler than thou Joanie.. into a hooker.. lol..update soon..

Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:10 PM · On: The Other Side of the Tracks

I'm really enjoying this story. It has a sweetness and innocence that I find really appealing. Can't wait to see how the meeting with Bran's mom goes. A very different character from the original series.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:13 PM · On: The Other Side of the Tracks

NOOOO...bon't end it there.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Daphne and the Morality Police

wow, they really turned on brian... so like mel and lins... hope ted and em are better.... love brian's little 'so you like...' to daphne hilarious, and how he stood up to the 'ladies' at the end.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Breakfast in Bed

excellant a playful brian and an older justin who keeps fruit loops in the house

Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Awakening, Part 2

wow i loved it cant wait for more

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Awakening, Part 2

so he's never painted a trick/ lover... & never will.... until Brian? beautiful chapter



Author's Response:

That was Justin's way of saying that he'd never made love to anyone before Brian (b/c he doesn't paint people he f***s, but he agreed to paint Brian)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Awakening, Part 2

I'm just loving these two!



Author's Response:

That's so great to hear!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Awakening, Part 1

tooooooo short, more please

hope justin talks w/ brian soon about his insecurities so he doesn't end up like brian (canon).

love this brian's response ;-)



Author's Response:

Sorry that chapter was so short...I was in a weird mood...

No matter how jaded this Justin is, he could never be as stunted as Brian starts out in canon. Don't get me wrong, he's gonna be fighting all the way, just not as hard.

I'm glad you are liking expressive/romantic!Brian :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Awakening, Part 1

Great fic....

Please don't tell me this whole thing is Justin imagination !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Nope. It's real.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:14 AM · On: All Mine

Love it!! Can't wait to see where you take this story!



Author's Response:

That's so great to hear  :D :D :D

This one's gonna be a lot of fun!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:18 PM · On: All Mine

I wonder whether Brian will ask Justin on a date first or if it will be Justin that asks Brian on their first date - either way I know it will be great and then Justin will see how much better dating and relationships are when your with the right person :)

I wonder if Joan is good to Brian in this story, at least she hasnt 'turned him out' as Brian says.



Author's Response:

Brian's the romantic in this one (but not into Hallmarky BS romance...)

tee hee :) :) :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:57 PM · On: All Mine

yeah yeah yeah, more please   .... I can only see Joan as a bitter old croun, maybe she's more like debbie here.... a firecracker, a slightly better mother than canon?



Author's Response:

I know it's hard to imagine Joan plying her wares, but she's 12 years younger than canon (and not a bitter alcoholic religious zealot). Picturing her more like Debbie might be helpful...she is a 'better' mother'; I guess the question is how much better?

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 11:21 AM · On: You're Mine Now

This is interesting.  I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

That's great to hear!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 10:10 AM · On: You're Mine Now

This is just the BEST story, your stories are all great but this one and Friendship or Foreplay are my favourites for sure.

I love that last line, I wonder how Justin will react, I am thinking he is going to want to keep Brian all to himself too especially now he knows he is the only one that has had a taste of Brian hehe



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great compliment! This new one has been a real treat so far (to write). I've never done one where Brian so actively pursues Justin before.

Yes...Justin never did like to share Brian with anyone :) and in this situation, sharing would have to be impossible :D

Reviewer: B_O_W_A (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:21 AM · On: You're Mine Now

Oh, last sentence gives me chills!  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm happy you liked that part!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:51 PM · On: The Most Beautiful Boy in the World

love this story. young brian who knows his mind, older justin...



Author's Response:

That he does :) :) :)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:33 PM · On: The Most Beautiful Boy in the World

i like it so far! hope to read more soon



Author's Response:

That's great to hear! I'll post another part today (probably in a couple more hours--work interrupted)

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