Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

good one, weird ending

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Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2016 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

This story is one for the books! I am begging that you update it. There is solo much more to this tale. Loved it!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2015 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

This is such a marvelous continuation of QAF! Any chance you'll continue/complete "Queer as Folk New York" -- or maybe write a sequel? I know it's been nearly six years since you last posted on Midnight Whispers, but it's nevery too late. :)

I'm begging for more! This story has so many wonderful chapters. Some of my favorites: Chapter 14, "A Day Out", when Brian discovers his "own" family; Chapter 18, "News from Home", when Justin's relays Brian's and his own resolve to not "let the bastards win"; Chapter 19 "Together", with its stupendous romance and love; Chapter 24 "In the News Part I", showing Justin as a civil rights leader; and Chapter 39 "Chicago", with Debbie making clear (to Brian) that Justin needs Brian to thrive.

The characters you introduced are all wonderful: the New York Kinneys (esp. Aiden), the Averys, Marc, Aunt Tilda, and Gareth.

More, please!

Reviewer: Lester (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2012 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 27 - In the News Part 2

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Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

Darling this story is aaaaammmmaaaazing and I am so sad to see it unfinished!

You are juggling so many stories at the same time and you have let us hanging almost before the end.

I trully hope that you will come back to this story and finish it, as much as it can be finished, because it is worth it.

Brilliant work.

Marla

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

I just reread your story- I really, really hope (beg) that there will be more -

Reviewer: kellydeer (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives

Are you still working on this fic?

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's funny and nail biting and just all around fabulous. I hope that there are more chapters planned for the future. It's been such a great read. I devoured it in less than half a day and that was while taking care of 3 kids and doing a week's worth of laundry and dishes.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

Just re-read this and I still love it - it's brilliant! :)

Here's hoping your muse will inspire the heck out of you and encourage you to write more in this fantastic story/universe! :D



Author's Response:

I'm working on it - slowly but surely.  Thanks for the encouragement.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

I definitely could also use a Kinney sandwich. My my my... yummy!!! I need more of Justin loving Brian ^_^ Please, an update soon cause this story is amazing!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll work on B/J love.  Thanks for the encouragement and I hope to update soon.  My muse and I are fighting small battles all the time.  Generally = she's winning :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

can hear the buzzing around babylon. two brian kinneys. many a gay man's dream.  brian better stay as far away from jim jr's up coming family problems as he possibly can.

poor emmett. what the hell is with gareth? pulling a knife on him. good thing axe was there or emmett wouldn't be.



Author's Response:

I agree with your comment about Brian, but who knows whether or not Brian will do what's good for him (LOL)  He so rarely does.  The Babylon part was just plain fun.

As for Gareth - he's got reasons.  I'll leave it up to you after the next chapter to decide if you think they're good ones.  Let me know what you think.

 

Angie

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Babylon

I feel badly for Drew-  I like Drew-  Emmett needs to be creful- Brian and Aiden have such fun and Justin wanting to love Brian-  beautiful-  poor man-  he's had a lot to deal with in a short time



Author's Response:

I agree Emmett needs to be a bit careful and I guess you can tell I wasn't that fond of Drew, so I had Emmett said no.  I'm glad you thought Brian/Aiden were having fun.  I just wanted Brian to have one relative who wasn't a jerk, wouldn't betray him etc. etc.  so I gave him one.

Thanks for commenting Scarlet. I really, really appreciate it.

Angie

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Company

Thanks for another chapter!  I can't wait to read about the three of them at Babylon.  I like that Aiden is curious about B/J on their home turf.  As for ideas, I'm sure you are more creative than I am.  The only scenario I come up with off the top of my head is the surprise of a trick when "Brian" instigates a repeat fuck, and may think of himself as the new "Justin."  Yeah, you could maybe make that good, but like I said, you're gonna be better at ideas than me...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the idea, Kate.  It sent my mind off in a whole new direction i.e. which repeats or not repeats are the most interesting.  Brian did some pretty interesting guys.  One that he didn't do but could have popped into my head as a result.  Maybe Brandon could make a repeat appearance.

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Company

You have me enthralled with Mark's "gift". I don't believe Brian isn't as clueless about his recovery as he seems. I think in his own way he is protecting Mark from all the so called "good" intentioned people of the world. I hope to read more between them soon.

You have Brian at his snarky best in this chapter. Starting with the spot on “I’m not the martyr type.” conversation with his doctor to  “One day, God decided to be kind to all of humanity and clone me.” Then finally the one that could get him in trouble later on “You’ll do edible Justin anytime – you’re easy that way." ::sighs:: This is why we love him though. LOL

I'm 100% with Brian I can't for him to introduce Aiden to the happy denizens of "his" realm. Like Debbie says Gay PA is never going to be the same.” I think poor Aiden is about to find out that whatever is happening in NY is cake compared to the Pitts.

Possible idea? Has Daphne met Aiden yet? A scene popped into my head of her defending Justin from who she thinks is Brian with a "woman". I could so see her handling this Kinney Tom-cat with a few finger pokes followed by a right hook. Mostly I see fireworks because he'd like her spunk.

Thanks for another great chapter~Sara



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the Brian one-liners.  I find myself redoing half the chapters with him in them to try to keep the feel.  Do let me know if you think they're out of character. It also never occurred to me to have him figure out Mark's gift.  I'll have to think about that.  With a nudge or two it wouldn't take much to get there.

I absolutely love the Daphne/Aiden idea.  I'm working on setting it up already.

Thanks for the ideas.

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Company

dress them alike to mess with everyone's heads and when they get to Babylon make a Kinney sandwich with Justin as the cream. LOL



Author's Response:

I like that idea.  Thanks

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Company

what fun this night at babylon is going to be. let it begin.



Author's Response:

AAAHH.  I hope I can live up to any expectations folks have on this one.  Plot bunnies would be most welcome.

(p.s. thatnks for reviewing)

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

Hi, I just read this whole story so far.  It is absoulutely fabulous.  Lots of excitment and lots of fun happenings.  I can't wait to see what happens with Stockwell and more with Aunt Tilda.

Keep up the fantastic work



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jay.  Stockwell updates & Aunt Tilda coming pretty soon, I think.  (I never know for sure - sometimes the story goes places unexpected.)

 

Reviewer: db1234 (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

Your end notes are funny although I cannot offer any help. Just wanted to tell you that I am enjoying this story a lot. Very well written, thanks.



Author's Response:

I wasn't too serious about the request for help - I meant to be funny.  I'm really grateful that you took the time to tell me you're enjoying it. Comments like that make my day.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

I'm continuing to enjoy the story-  lots of twists and turns but not too much angst-  I like angst but not cliff hanger angst-  the banner is beautiful-  I don't do graphics so I ask for them-  amazing what people will do for you.

 

glad that Debbie sees Brian's fears and hope that Brian doesn't back down-  he needs Justin and Justin needs him



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the comment about angst.  I've been known to stop reading myself if I find it's just too much, so I'm glad it didn't come off that way.  I've always thought that Debbie saw Brian the clearest most of the time, so it's nice to write her predicting his mindset.

Thanks a lot for reviewing again.

 

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

Beautiful skyline you chose for the banner.

Justin was born to shine in the spot light wasn't he. Debbie chose his nickname well.

“You’re his wind.”      “I give him gas?”     

::snort::  LOL  I'm surprised he didn't get a smack to the head for that one.

“It happens whenever you’re together. He started Rage when you were together, left home, fought Stockwell, went to Hollywood. When you’re apart, he’s not the same, doesn’t take the same chances..."

Vice/versa and AMEN. Better together then apart. You have their relationship nailed perfectly with those words!

I'm very, very and VERY happy Gareth is on our side. The damage that man did with only few key strokes...    ::shudders::

I hope his and Emmett's "date" goes well. I'm holding my breath on this one because I still feel Gareth is trying to keep an eye on him.

take care ~ Sara



Author's Response:

Hey, Sara

I thought about having Deb smack Brian, but seeing as he's still in a hospital bed, I figured she would restrain herself (maybe).  I agree with you about Gareth, more dangerous than you know and more to come on that front soon.

I'm glad you liked Debbie's logic, though - she's the one who sees the most (and says the most:-)

Thanks for the review, I really love to get them.

Angie

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

I love the banner, simple and yet says it all. I am also enjoying the story very much. Maybe Debbie has actually opened Brian's eyes to all the good that he gives Justin.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Suse.  It's my first attempt at a banner, so it had to be simple (I don't think I could do complicated:-)  I'm hoping Brian will start to get it soon, but sometimes the story writes itself, so we'll see.

Thanks so much for taking the time.  I don't know about other authors, but I love reviews.

Angie

Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives

I love this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know, Elli.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

Really liked this chapter. I like how the story is moving.

 

Keep up the great work!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jay.  I'll try to keep the pace up.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

I loved this chapter!!  I hope the next one has more Oprah in it, too.  More Oprah and Justin would be fantastic.  Maybe dinner with just the two of them...  I can hope, right?  And btw, fantastic banner.  Excellent job.  Sorry, no help with the IGtoPFFE, but as for a review, see above, and the following:  I loved Debbie's forsight, and rebuttal, to the return of dumbass-Brian.  May he take her corny words to heart!  Can't wait for more, I'm always excited to see that you've updated.



Author's Response:

Sorry, but I think I'm done with Oprah for now, I'm afraid.  But Larry King might show up ;-)  Glad you liked the banner.  You know, as I think back on it, I think the Deb/Brian scenes are some of my favorites on the show.

Once again, I really appreciate your taking the time to review, so thank you so much.

 

Reviewer: VM (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

I love this story. I can't wait to read more. Love the banner.



Author's Response:

Thanks VM - I love hearing from people who are enjoying the tale.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

the banner is lovely.

debbie's right. brian is his wind. it's what allows him to soar to be his best. wind, love, whatever it is justin can't do without it. brian has to get rid of his doubts. there is no one else for justin but him. and now he's richer too. what a great way to end his week.



Author's Response:

I thought, given the week he's had, Justin deserved a day with only good things - so I gave him one.  Sometimes it's fun writing! Deb/Brian scenes are always a hoot to write - I'm never quite sure how they'll end up until I get there - weird, huh?

Thanks a lot for reviewing again, I can't tell you how much I appreciate getting them.          

Angie

Reviewer: msv713 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Chicago

I have been reading this story and absolutely love it, but have to say you SCORED on this chapter! Deb hit the mark with Brian here and I thought it was just wonderful. Love seeing updates!

Mandi



Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought the Deb/Brian scene rang true - I love comments like that, so thank you.

Annjeela

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 38 Getting Better

I Can't Wait For More!!  I'm loving this.  I just went back and reread the whole thing, and caught some stuff that I'd missed or forgotten the first time through, one chapter at a time..  You're an excellent writer.  I hope you continue for a long time!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Kate.  I was wondering if folks would go back & check on what Marc had done in earlier chapters.  I really appreciate the feedback.

Angie

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 38 Getting Better

I am impressed!  I loved the way you worked Marc's 'magic' into the story line.  I ended up going back and rereading the part with Justin just before the interview.   Wonder who the gentleman was that made Marc feel better so quickly??

I would love to learn more about Gareth.   Please keep giving us more (of everything....)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Eileen.  I was hoping to see a few hits on the interview chapter. 

Much more about Gareth coming over the next few chapters, so no worries.

Angie

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 38 Getting Better

edit from prev review:

sorry, I should have asked Is the stranger the mysterious 'Colonel'? 

sara

 



Author's Response:

Why Colonel?  I'm thinking Captain Jack, so... who you thinking of?

Angie

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 38 Getting Better

“Cancer – earliest stages. Not even detectable by testing yet.”

Stopped me dead. I'm happy for Brian, who obviously if feeling fine, but what about Mark? Also what about his reaction to the stranger in black? He's a healer by gift not a physic right? Good thing Mystic Marilyn is around to help him recover. Nice background connection you created for the two by the way.

Emmett and Gareth? I'm thinking Gareth is trying to keep him close to see what he knows. 

Ohhhh naughty you... something just occured to me or is it wishful thinking on my part. When Gareth says "Sir" I always yearned at the quip waiting for another to appear. Then I'd have to keep reminding myself Gareth is NOT Ianto. Now appears the dark haired, blue eyed, beautiful man in a long coat? Sigh... loved that coat. Could we have had our first glance at the 'CAPTAIN'?

The chapters just keep getting better and better. Thank you.

take care~sara



Author's Response:

It's the captain - but he'll appear in a different story-line that I'll publish as an AU/crossover.  I'm about half way through it.

Marilyn was probably my favorite drop-in character of all-time on QAF, so I just had to include her.

Thanks for the review. 

Angie

 

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 38 Getting Better

are you telling us that they found or will find that brian has cancer now? i didn't quite understand that storyline. must have missed something. now, who was the mysterious man that marc gave the thumbs up to. very intriging.

emmett and gareth, interesting pairing.

climbing into brian's bed like it was nothing. i loved it. i had done it when my husband was in the hospital too. why should he be the only one comfortable.



Author's Response:

Yup, Brian had cancer.  Marc cured it, just like he did Justin's hand.  I thought it would be okay to throw in a psychic since Mysterious Marilyn appeared in the first show and I absolutely loved it.  It was one of my favorite scenes of all time.  If you look back in the chapters, Marc talks about his parents expecting him to be psychic in the diner one night & then cures Justin later.  Sorry I confused you, I'll have to give it a reread to see if I can make it clearer.

As for the hospital scene, well, as if Justin could keep away :-)

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter.

 

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 37 – How to clear a room

Not much to say, except that I'm still loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kate.  i love the encouragement.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 37 – How to clear a room

ha! justin thought he'd leave the mothers visit to brian alone. brian played that one well.

i too want to know what a twisted capone frame is.  soon please.



Author's Response:

Brian does know how to work a crowd to his advantage, doesn't he?

The explanation of the frame will be out within a couple of chapters. No worries.

 

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 37 – How to clear a room

This chapter is perfection. no more and no less.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Choices

Interesting update.  Justin is going on Oprah.  That makes me giggle.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I got a smile.  Love those.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Choices

why do i get the feeling that brian should have listened to his inner self? it's going to be so hard to nab stockwell and the bashers. will they follow him to chicago or new york, or are they just after brian. but they're not after brian brian pushed justin out of the way. chicago doesn't like a good idea to me. brian should listen to justin for once.



Author's Response:

Stockwell's running out of bad guys.  We'll see.   Thanks a lot for commenting.

Reviewer: VM (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 35 – A Day at the Office

Loved the chapter. I always love it when Justin takes charge.



Author's Response:

I think that's my favorite part of the B/J dynamic - you're never quite sure who's going to be in control.  It's usually Brian, but Justin isn't a pushover at all.  Thanks for taking the time to comment VM

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 – A Day at the Office

I love love LOVE the dialogue and interaction you craft between the characters - I think you've captured the QAF personalities perfectly and Gareth is a perfect addition- I love how he and Justin play off of one another!



Author's Response:

I find trying to make dialogue sound like themselves is the greatest problem.  I frequently re-read and edit in a 'he wouldn't say that' context, so thanks for the comment - really. 

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 35 – A Day at the Office

Yay excellent update!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kate

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 35 – A Day at the Office

oh yes, brian taught him well. he did a great job. knew bill was hiding something when he didn't have jeremy with him. and to fire him yet. way to go justin. i'm surprised by ted's comment. he should have known better.



Author's Response:

Yup - it's all Brian's teaching.  Somehow I don't think Justin figured this one out at the diner.  Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 34 - And the Suspects Are?

interesting twist on things-  I can't wait to see where you go with these new developments.  Emmett is always hearing things- very astute of you .

 

sfscarlet



Author's Response:

Emmett is good at eavesdropping & pretty soon he'll be demanding answers.  I hope you'll like what you hear :-)  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives

LOL... I'm always looking for a good Mom Management technique - they can be such a handful!  Maybe Brian & Justin could launch a course: "How To Successfully (yet tactfully, adds Justin) Manage Your Relatives in 12 Easy Steps"

I'd take that course in a heartbeat - and not only to ogle the professors ;-)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 34 - And the Suspects Are?

Uh oh.... the moms' are descending upon poor Brian! That should be hilarious! :) 



Author's Response:

I think you'll get a kick out of Brian's mom management technique.  It's pretty simple, but effective.

Thanks for the review - I do love them.

Reviewer: kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 34 - And the Suspects Are?

hmm.  this is shaping up to be long.  perhaps even epic.  excellent.



Author's Response:

I will admit, I'm struggling with when to cut it off.  It's a story that could just keep going.  We'll see.

I'm glad you took the time to let me know you like the idea of an epic though.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 34 - And the Suspects Are?

i truly don't understand if gareth, axe, and tank are good guys or not. if they are, why is gareth using an alias? strange things are happening or at least are going to be. why don't they ask justin if he knows the other two guys. they could have been someone he and chris went to school with. two of chris' buddies.

as soon as jim's name was mentioned, i knew stockwell was involved. this doesn't look good at all.



Author's Response:

I'll eventually explain about Gareth, but it isn't going to happen for a while.  Justin actually did the sketch of one of the guys & he didn't know him.  These are new folks.  And you're right, Stockwell involved - not pretty. 

Thanks a lot for the review.

 

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 34 - And the Suspects Are?

Annjeela!

I love this story. I sure up you keep up the great work and will be writing more stories.

I am upset that Brian got shot but glad that he is okay. I would think that some of the NY City would go to see him in Pittsburgh. I love the way you handled Gus' part in the story.

Keep up the great writing!

Have  a nice fall!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Don't worry, at least two of the New York crowd will show up over the next few chapters.  I'm glad you like Gus & how he acts. 

Thanks a lot for taking the time to review, Debbie.

Reviewer: me (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Recovering

Is this an original story It seem that I read something like this a while ago on anther site, after reading this when dose Justin start wearing a dress??? I guess it easy for Justin to be young and weak in your writing and Brain acting like an immature whore



Author's Response:

All I can say is that if you truly want to see Justin in a dress - you'll have to write it yourself.  

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Recovering

Best chapter all around. Domestic banter is so much more intimate then the actual act in my books.  

Can't decide my favorite line. Justin showing his SAT score or Brian's mini-me:

'Justin paused before opening the door. “From deranged, homophobic, mass murderers – absolutely. When it comes to our assorted mothers – you’re on your own. I’ve already gotten hit in the head once – I can’t handle Debbie’s methods of tough love.”

“You better let me see my daddy, mister.” Gus’ anger was readily apparent to the men inside the room. “He needs me to kiss it better.”

I can't wait for the rest of the family to visit. Thank you yet again for a wonderful chapter.

take care ~ sara



Author's Response:

Rest of the family showing up shortly.  I do struggle with when B/J need to show their IQ's.  Brian usually only does it when he gets upset.  Justin usually does it when he's calm and retrospective.  At least that's my recollection of the show.

Thanks again for a great review.  I do appreciate them.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Recovering

nothing keeps those two down huh?  oh yes brian is feeling so much like his old self.

does michael always have to whine? i mean really he's over thirty. enough is enough.

i wouldn't want to be in brian's place when the mothers descend on him. justin better stick around for that. glad gus has a mind of his own, so like his father.

now i'm very curious as to what emmett overheard. who was axe talking to? about what?



Author's Response:

In all fairness to Michael, Deb would hit him in the head without a status report (LOL)  But I agree with you, mostly he's grown up.  I just like to let him slide back a bit.

I think you'll find Emmett's eavesdropping interesting.  I should post it soon.

As always, thanks for reviewing.

 

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Recovering

Loved this!  And I'll be eagerly looking forward to the gossip Em's overhearing ;-)



Author's Response:

I think you'll like the gossip.  I should be posting it pretty soon.

Thanks for keeping your patience with the slow posts.

Angie

Reviewer: Vallery (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Recovering

Another Great chapter. I love this story. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks Vallery.  I should be posting more soon.  I love hearing from a new reviewer that they like the story.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 18 - News From Home

I hope you take this comment the way it's intended.

I knew it was coming sooner or later. I just hit my Wall of Suspension of Disbelief: ANGST. My least favorite thing about QAF is the angst, because I just don't get it and never will. Years ago, my then teenaged daughter told me that it's "emo." I didn't know what "emo" meant until she explained. Her: "Emo" is when someone thinks that everything in the world that happens is about THEM and it's their fault. You wouldn't know about that. Me: Why's that? Her: Because you always place the blame where it belongs.

Out of the mouths of babes......

The fact that you wrote it and I recognized it and could actually see it happening within the "Season Six" story you've created means you stayed in canon. From someone who doesn't like the angst: YOU NAILED IT.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm not a huge fan of the angst either, but most people do find themselves blaming themselves for all kinds of things they shouldn't.  Your daughters definition is great.  I'm glad you think I got it.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Hanging with Friends

I'm actually on Ch. 19 right now, but came back to comment on this chapter b/c I know how important feedback is to writers.

My favorite things about QAF in order: (1) the characters; (2) the relationships among the characters; (3) the dialogue and humor among the characters; and (4) hot mansecks (I love the porn, but it's plot driven and that's what thrills me most).

You absolutely NAILED #3 in this chapter!. I saw them, I heard them, I laughed and I "aawwed."

AWESOME JOB!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  It's a funny chapter.  It does almost nothing for plot advancement, and has no hot sex.  It's just the friends hanging out, pure QAF.  It's one chapter I've gotten almost no feedback on, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole

"On the name of Brian's company - no problem on the comment.  I found the Kinnetic/Kinnetik thing frustrating.  I went to the official web-sites to try to find the right spelling.  If you're sure, I'll fix it up, because it bugs me I couldn't find it."

I'm absolutely sure, but you don't have to take my word for it. Rewatch the very first shots of Ep. 404 (when Brian shows Justin around Kinnetik for the first time) and pay particular attention to the front doors. The word "Kinnetik" is etched into the glass in what appears to me to be "Orange Is The New Blue" and also white.



Author's Response:

You're right.  I had to pause to read it, but it's there.  I've fixed it throughout the story (I think).  Thanks for that.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Fate Steps In

“I’m not a match.”

Just as I knew the decision Justin would make, I KNEW there wouldn't be a match.

Life's not that simple.



Author's Response:

No, life isn't, is it.  The situations people get into are complicated.  I've had years where my life felt like a soap opera and others where nothing huge seems to happen.  Life just has a way of catching you by surprise.

Once again, thanks for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole

P.S. You present this story, standing on its own without a seductive banner. Harkens back to the days when story was everything.



Author's Response:

Thanks. 

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole

This is going to be a long comment, because I'm late to the party. Better late than never!

I was scared to read this fic. There's so much post 513 fic out there that isn't "my cup of Liberty Diner coffee" (especially the newer stuff). It's too OOC and I love the canon folk as they are, warts and all. I can't tolerate abject "character hate"; it makes me feel like I'm watching a cherished friend get mutilated. Don't get me wrong; I want everyone to write whatever their muse demands they write. If I don't like a particular story, I just move on. I often see things in QAF that others don't.

*smackles you silly* A million "thank you's" for treating all the canon folk with such love and respect and bringing back images from QAF that I cherish so much.

You have done an amazing job of showing subtle changes in the S5 folk while keeping them in character. I enjoy the ease and simplicity and fluidity of your writing. GREAT job with dialogue. May I offer one observation (NOT a criticism) out of pure love of canon? Brian's business name is spelled "Kinnetik."

You are using a light touch with the whole Craig situation (neither overly rageful, nor overly sentimental), which is indeed very complex and painful for Justin (and Brian, for a variety of reasons).

The Craig/Justin situation was one of many I personally identified with in QAF. I, too, am estranged from a once-loving father. The love, anger, and sense of loss and longing never go away, no matter how old you get.

I knew what Justin would decide right from the start, because it's what I would do. Justin is compelled by virtue of character and heart to do had he knows is right, regardless of how he's been treated before or how he'll be treated after.

I was deeply gratified that in Ch. 7, Brian admitted: "I didn't [escape]. You had 17 good years with your father. I don't think I had 17 good minutes with mine and I couldn't escape him." I believe if Jack had shown up at the loft that one night and said: "Sonnyboy, I'm dying and I need a kidney," Brian would have given him one. Sadly, I think Brian would have been compelled by his inner abused child, always seeking the love and approval he'll never get.

Justin and Brian are two very different men with distinct personalities, experiencing similar pain and handling the pain in their own ways unique to them. I don't want Justin to be like Brian. I don't want Brian to be like Justin. I just want to watch them accept and love each other for who they are and argue and change and grow along the way.

WRITE ON, my friend!!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  My goal was to keep to canon while letting them grow up and I find it gratifying that you think I did so.  At times, it takes me a long time to post because they don't 'sound' right.  I also find it difficult to meld Brian from the last few episodes with Brian throughout the show.  On the name of Brian's company - no problem on the comment.  I found the Kinnetic/Kinnetik thing frustrating.  I went to the official web-sites to try to find the right spelling.  If you're sure, I'll fix it up, because it bugs me I couldn't find it. 

Thanks for the review.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

“Asshole.” Brian watched as Justin’s eyes filled, then cleared as he fought back the tears. “What did I do?”“Took a bullet that was aimed at me,” Justin sighed dramatically, faking a smile. “Didn’t you know Rage is supposed to be fiction?”Brian snorted softly. “I had to do something. Everybody knows that mind control doesn’t work at long distances.”Justin leaned down and gently touched his forehead to Brian’s. “You’re going to have to be more careful. I want you around for a long time.”

Yup Brian is gonna be alright. It funny how few non romantic words can speak so much love between them.

The ending was all about the Moms. We can easily see where Brian gets his dry sarcastic wit from and Justin his tenacity. 

This wonderful chapter will keep me smiling for quite awhile. Thanks~



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  I always got a kick out of their implied love on the show.  Nobody really says too much, but it's all there if you listen hard enough.  I just can't see B/J turning all lovey-dovey. The Moms are great fodder for story-telling.  The personalities of the four women are just so different.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

Re-reading this chapter and knowing Brian was going to be OK, I was able to pick up on the reactions of the various moms in this chapter: Joan, Debbie, Jennifer, Lindsay, Aileen... quite lovely.

 

And even though I tend to rank Joan right up there next to Craig, I think this was a very realisitic portrayal of how she would react; her human, motherly response to her son's injury and finding out the way she did was spot on, IMHO.



Author's Response:

I completely agree with your opinion on Joan (obviously).  Any mother would be seriously ticked off - even a bad one, to find out over the radio.  I hadn't really thought about it - but you're right, there are a lot of moms in this chapter (LOL)  I didn't even notice I did it.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

I love this story and the characters esp. Liam, Aileen, and Adian.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Please keep up this story and I hope you do more in the future.

Have a nice fall!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thnks a lot Debbie.  I really appreciate hearing you like the new characters.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

GREAT UPDATE-thanks for reloading -  It will be interesting to see if Joan and Brian make up



Author's Response:

I've been debating about that.  I figure it'll be a slow, cautious approach.  I'm glad you liked the update, Scarlet.  Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

well, certainly not the way to find out about brian. gus, must be horrible. good thing emmett got a hold of cynthia.

joan, what a turn around. justin just might be right about her being proven human. it would be good for them, although i don't know if joan knows or wants to know about the family found recently. i hope all goes smoothly.



Author's Response:

I agree, if I were B/J, I wouldn't want Joan to find about the New York crowd.  Although I'm not sure how much of a difference it would make.  Distance usually makes things easier.

Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 32 Shock Waves

It wasn't you; I had the same problem with the website eariler. And it ate the chapter before the one I was posting. They have something going on and I told Elsa Rose about it. Good luck with your story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for telling me.  I thought I was going a bit crazy because I was sure I checked it:-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

this is such a wonderful story-  you continue to add twists and turns without making it difficult to read- -   glad Brian is going to be okay  can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the fact that it's a bit more twisty than the average story.  I sometimes wonder if I'm making it too complicated so I really appreciated the comment.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Fallout

great story-  I just keep reading and reading-  will be sad when I catch up to your last chapter

 

sfscarlet



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Scarlet, I'll try to get more up for you soon.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole

I love this story.  I like Debbie's statement about expectations-  very accurate.



Author's Response:

The scenes between Debbie and Brian were always some of my favorites & she always seemed to have some words of wisdom, so I'm glad you liked my take on it.  Thanks a lot for reviewing.  I really appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives

I accidentally got spoiler-ed (is that a word?) for Season 3 of Torchwood so I boycotted it altogether.  They have killed off the three most interesting characters IMHO...

 

Glad you're keeping Ianto's spirit alive ;-)



Author's Response:

I completely agree.  Gwen was always my least favorite (of course they didn't kill Jack and he's the best (LOL))

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

Oh you had me so worried for Brian! His mom is such a bitch!

BTW- LOVED the Torchwood mention! It's another one of my favorites- or at least it WAS...



Author's Response:

I know what you mean about Torchwood.  Loved the show, hated the last episodes, so I inserted a Ianto like character just so I wouldn't miss him.  (he ain't Ianto, but still visualization is fun, isn't it .)

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

very nicely done. I really love this story, and I will pay you one of my highest fanfic compliments:  I don't think about the quality of the writing.  Which means, you are a very good writer, bc I focus only on the story that tells me that your writing is not distracting at all.  I hope you understand how great a compliment that is, bc I am an avid reader, of both fanfic and novels.  Bad writing compels me to edit and pay no attention to the story.  Great job, and I look forward to more!



Author's Response:

That truly is a compliment and I know what you mean.  Some stories are wonderful plots, but somehow it just doesn't click as a writing style and you get distracted, usually by sentence or paragraph structure as you try to figure out what the author was really saying. 

Thank you so much for the review.

 

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

This is the most perfect character study of Justin that I think I have ever read. You captured the one quality of Justin's most people overlook and that is his strength. It is quiet but formidable having to bolster Brian's on a day to day basis. To see it waivering allowing us to see his vulnerability depending on who he was dealing with kept me rivited. His reactions to Joan I applauded and I cried with him when he initially broke down in Jennifer's arms.

You had me so focused on him that I had to go reread what had transpired around him when the shock finally cleared. Everything but him was a blur until they reconnected again at the end. I again bow to your talent.

Thank you again for another wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that review.  People aren't one-dimensional and I'm glad you found Justin to have some layers in the chapter - it means a lot to me as a writer.  Thanks again

Angie

Reviewer: Jenn (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

Oh thank goodness he's ok!

And go Justin...put Joan in her place.  Love seeing pissed off protective Justin.

I'd put more but I'm headed to bed.  Great chapter!  Glad I checked this before heading to bed!



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to keep you up, Jenn, but I'm really glad the story did.  It's quite a compliment.  I like a strong Justin as a character - he's a lot more interesting than weepy Justin in a lot of ways. 

Thanks for taking the time when tired to review.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

got to wonder what joan is always doing at the hospital, just waiting for brian to die to get his money and play the martyr.

great chapter

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  I'll explain Joan's motivation a bit in the next chapter, so I hope you'll like it.

Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

not completely out of the woods, but a hell of alot safer. joan definitely picked the wrong time to try and play mother. glad justin could stand up to her and put her in her place.

that guilt that justin was feeling should give him some insight as to how brian felt about the bashing.

fascinating chapter.



Author's Response:

I hadn't thought about the guilt in that context, but it does lead in nicely to an idea for a later chapter. Thanks for the thought and the review. 

Angie

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Aftermath

I am definitely enjoying this story.  Keep the updates coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know Samcdee.  It really helps the motivation.

Reviewer: biting my nails (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

will U be updating soon?  I've been checking every couple of hours since U posted this chapter



Author's Response:

How about today?  Thanks for the post, I'm glad I succeeded in a bit of suspense.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

Wow where to begin. First I have to commend you on Hobbs' demenor. A true picture of a psychotic with all the fearless arrogance and onimpotence played out. Bravo!

I am intrigued with the admission of the ring of vigilantes. It makes the act of the bombing more inhuman and frightning somehow.

That leaves the ending. Oh that ending. I was expecting some sort of retailiance to happen but never for Brian to be its victim. What a twist you've gone and thrown us with this wonderful chapter.

Thank you for updating so soon.

sara



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sara - especially for the comment about Hobbs - it's the first I've gotten, most focus on the ending.  I had been wondering if he came across as caricature or truly psychotic & your comment makes me hope I got it right. 

I'm also very glad you found the end twisted - it was meant to shock with the suddeness, and I guess I succeeded.

Thanks for your reviews.

angie

Reviewer: Jenn (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

Ok..so my copy and paste obviously got mixed up on my attempt to comment!! I could have sworn it worked.  I feel dumb!   *blush*

Anyways.  Let's see if I can remember what I had said earlier.

I love this fic!  I spent last weekend catching up on it.  It got me hooked. I just hadn't gotten a chance to comment.

I'm anxious to know if we know anyone else in this group of Hobbs'....like maybe if Craig is part of it..  Hope they catch the shooter cause no one should be able to get away with shooting Brian Kinney!!

I think one of my most favorite parts though is Gus loaning Justin the dollar to buy the church/whorehouse! :)  So adorable.

Great job and can't wait for the next chapter....because OMG...you shot Brian!   (hope my comment works right this time!)



Author's Response:

Your comment worked great & makes a lot more sense now.  I also really enjoyed reading it, so thank you for very much for posting (twice)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

OMG! PLEASE tell me you'll be posting another chapter soon (like NOW)! :)

 

For your first story, this is completely amazing! I think you've captured the characters' voices perfectly and the plot is fantastic - not overly angsty, not overly sappy - just the bittersweet happiness that is Brian & Justin and the whole QAF crew. I am also enjoying your new characters - John & Marc, Emmett and Jared, the NY Kinneys, and Detective Cam (and possibly Lindsay), Aunt Tilda & the Averys... you've woven them into the QAF world seamlessly and made them just as "real" as the Pittsburgh folks.

This is truly a wonderful story and I eagerly wait for each new chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. That was a really wonderful, encouraging review to get.  And yes, I'll post soon.

Reviewer: Jenn (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

#5 - 1



Author's Response:

Jenn,  I'm not sure what that means.  If you could explain I'd appreciate it as I am quite curious.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

Great chapter extremely cruel place to end............



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  The odd cliffhanger is a good thing, isn't it?

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

hey,

Just to say I like this story. The cliffie is to die for. Keep up the good works.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I love that you took the time to tell me.  I do like the cliffhangers every now and then, myself.

 

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

Holy asdkjfja;gj!  Really?  You'd best be updating soon, my dear.  This turn of events is unacceptable.



Author's Response:

It won't be too long before I udpate.  I agree - it's unacceptable.  Thanks for the comment.

Angie

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

OMG!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Insanity

quick, don't leave us hanging.... how bad is brian hurt, is justin hurt,

wonder who the ringleader is and if the boys know him.... stockwell?



Author's Response:

You're jumping ahead - but I got to admit, you're good at it (LOL)  I'll update soon & thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Aunt Tilda

great chapter. aunt tilda is great. loved the whole spinster/ serious boys thread



Author's Response:

Glad you got a kick out of the 'serious young men' bit.  I can't remember where or if I saw that turn of phrase, but it stuck in my head just waiting for the right moment.

Thanks a lot for reviewing.

Angie

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Aunt Tilda

I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate.  I'm really glad you liked it and took a minute to tell me.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Aunt Tilda

no more? Amazing story. You have a talent so few have in making a story feel alive. I can't wait to read more.

Thank you

sara

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for all the reviews, Sara.  You've made my day. Angie

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Family Part 2

The little boy smiled brightly at the stunned adults as he continued, “Aileen likes to hug. Aiden likes to kiss.”

Can't stop laughing. Again the dynamics between the characters is brilliant.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that line.  It took a bit to set up.  Thanks so much for reviewing.

Angie

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 27 - In the News Part 2

::tears of joy::



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

::squeal:: As soon as I read Welsh and Gareth I was grinning from ear to ear. Ohhhhhhhhh Ianto... pleeeeeeeeeeeease make him a good guy.

“Not all the cops are in on this or even approve. That’s why I got warned and I’m warning you.” Carl smiled grimly.

you have me believing in the good guys again ~ thanks

 

 



Author's Response:

You're very welcome.  I knew the guys would confront Hobbs - especially Justin, he'd want to put it behind him, and like you said - not all cops are bad guys, just enough for a good story line :-)

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 24 - In the News Part 1

"If that’s what happens when Hobbs sees an image of Taylor, I wonder what would happen if we brought the two of them face-to-face?” Rennick speculated."

Wow and these are supposed to be the good guys.  Let's hope Brian's following words were not prophetic.

“I’m just scared he’s going to follow Mr. King straight into his early grave,” Brian responded quietly.

Enriching words and images.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you noticed the DA will try anything for a conviction - of course, the good news is he's trying, unlike last time.

I really appreciate you taking the time to review so frequently. 

Well - it's time for this author to go to sleep - it's getting pretty late here.

TTFN

Angie

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 19 – Together

"Justin smiled. “That we’re together because we want to be, not because we have to be. One day we’ll do it, but not today, I think.”

More touching and real than if his words would have been 'I do'



Author's Response:

I thought he ought to meet Brian half-way since Brian's putting himself out there so much. 

Thanks for taking the time to comment.  I love getting them.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 18 - News From Home

BRILLIANT



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It was certainly an interesting chapter to write (and rewrite a few times)

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Fatherhood

:snort: That last part was alot of fun. Got to love Molly. Jennifer is going to have her hands full with her.

The dynamics between your characters is spot on and so very rich. It is more like viewing a movie then reading a story.

take care

sara

 



Author's Response:

I'm picturing Molly visiting in New York - should be a lot of fun.  Thanks for the comment on the characters.  I tried to keep their own voices, but it's hard to know if I'm succeeding, so the comments are really appreciated.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole

"Brian sat on the floor beside the woman he considered his real mother, thinking. Years of having her watch out for him had coalesced into one simple truth - he trusted Debbie. He felt… safe when she was around. Relaxed by a combination of the drugs and that sense of safety, Brian’s subconscious took Debbie at her word and reran his past with Justin, the viewpoint shifting slightly as he replayed the scenes assuming that Justin loved him rather than doubting he could. After a while, the memories coalesced into a different, more solid pattern.  It felt right."

I saw the lightbulb go off in his head and felt the content fall off in him. Just beautiful.

sara

 



Author's Response:

I loved Brian's & Debbie's relationship in the series, and thought that she was one of the few who could get through to him.  Michael & Lindsay always seemed a bit blind.  Thanks again for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 14 – A Day Out

"The day that followed was simplicity itself - a family day at the park. Nothing unusual happened that day, nothing to mark it different than all the other days that make up a life. And yet, there are days where the simple becomes profound, the ordinary - extraordinary. Days on which decisions are made, and lives change forever... The day that followed was simplicity itself - a family day at the park. Nothing unusual happened that day, nothing to mark it different than all the other days that make up a life. And yet, there are days where the simple becomes profound, the ordinary - extraordinary. Days on which decisions are made, and lives change forever."

Beautifully simple yet so powerful in image

sara



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sara.  I often thought that Brian simply wouldn't know how to deal with 'normal' family situations, so I did want to tell that part.  I appreciate the review enormously.

Angie

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Family Part 2

I just wanted to say I love this story. I sure you you continue to finish it and write more for us readers to read.

I am looking forward to Brian and Aiden getting to know it other along with Justin and Aileen.

Plus, the move to NY for all of them. I am sure hoping they get the "whore" place.

Please keep up the great work. You are truly a gifted writer.

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for taking the time to review, Debbie. I'm not quite sure how to make Aiden and Brian's first outing in Pittsburgh happen.  I'm picturing Debbie's reaction but am open to any and all suggestions, should be fun.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Family Part 2

I've nothing at all to say except, "MORE MORE MORE!"



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate.  I really appreciate the encouragement and more is definitely coming.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Family

I love this story and this is an excellent chapter.  I can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate.  I'm glad you liked it.  I really appreciate your continued encouragement.

Reviewer: denise (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Family

I am really enjoying this story. Great writing skills.

 



Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to review, Denise.  Any and all are so welcome.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Family

I love the story even though you have placed chapter 22 in it.

I love the way Aiden and Aileen are in the picture. Plus, Justin helping out in the Pub.

You are truly a gifted writer.

I am looking foward to the rest of the story.

Thanks again!

Keep on writing!]

 a fan,

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks Debbie.  I'm looking forward to Aiden and Brian meeting.  (Sorry about the Chapter 22 mess, but I wanted Emmett to land in NY - I like him.)

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

still loving it!



Author's Response:

still loving hearing you do!  (Thanks again)

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

I really enjoy reading this story. You did a wonderful job.

Thanks, Sunny



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to tell me you're enjoying it.  So long for now.

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

Now we have a mystery man with a mysterious past.  This could be quite interesting.  ;-)

Later, my dear!!



Author's Response:

Glad I caught your interest.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives

glad carl have the boys a heads up about hobbs



Author's Response:

Yeah - he's too much a member of the family to just let them walk in blind.  I couldn't see him doing that.  Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

i can't believe brian is okay with justin seeing hobbs. i can't believe justin is okay with seeing hobbs, even if it does help send him to jail.

so this gareth guy. not who he seems to be. what's he hiding and how badly will this effect brian and justin? what harm will it cause them and the family?



Author's Response:

I'm thinking closure for Justin - he's going to insist because that's the only way to finish it off. 

As for gareth - I'm glad you're asking, you're supposed to be (LOL)  Thanks so much for all yours reviews.

Reviewer: gizachick (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

Oooh ... I believe that Gareth may prove very interesting.  My interest is definitely piqued.  In the mean time, I hope that Brian & Justin get the church for their office / home.  I think the meeting with the current owner could be very entertaining.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the nibble for Gareth.  He's sizing up in my mind to be a fairly interesting guy.  And I do hope you like the meeting.

Thanks so much for reviewing (sorry for the late response - I'm not sure how I missed it:-)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Emmett

auntie em is going to shake up the university and eric all at the same time. then he'll take ny by storm.



Author's Response:

Absolutely.  Em is nothing if not all out there & passionate.  He's definitely one of my favorites.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

I have been enjoying this tale!  Great chapter. Can't wait to see the confrontation between Justin and Hobbs



Author's Response:

I hope I can manage to live up to expectations on the confrontation.  It won't be long before it's posted.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Conversations

Nice twist at the end.....



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - I've got to try to keep your interest, after all.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 24 - In the News Part 1

Yay more of this story!  It is really good.  Looking forward to Brian's reaction the the DAs planned manipulation...



Author's Response:

I somehow don't think Brian's going to love it, but what Justin wants, Justin gets - usually.

I'm really really glad you're enjoying the tale.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 24 - In the News Part 1

what the hell is wrong with those men. are they wanting justin to be killed? if not by chris, then someone else. omg that is so wrong. putting justin and chris in the same room is just asking for trouble. i hope justin refuses to the meeting. brian better become aware of this before justin gets home.



Author's Response:

I think if you're trying to put somebody away for bombing you'll try most anything.  Besides, it could be quite angst ridden - and folks do seem to love that.

Thanks for taking the time to review each chapter.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 23 - House Hunting

home sweet home, finally found. this was a great chapter. a brothel. why not after a bath house.



Author's Response:

It took a bit of thinking to come up with something unique for them.  Glad you liked it - I figure Brian will like looking at the 'art'.

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 24 - In the News Part 1

I do not have a good feeling about this next encounter with Hobbes.  Thanks for the updates, my dear.  Till nex time!



Author's Response:

Neither do I.  Hobbs is going not so quietly insane.  It ain't going to be pretty.  Thanks for the reviews.  It's awesome getting them.

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Fallout, Part 2

I've just been catching up on reading this evening, and I have finally caught up on this one.  More, please!!!  You've woven a wonderful story.

Later!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment - more will be coming soon.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Fallout, Part 2

It's possible that I may be this story's greatest fan.  I love it.  I love your Emmett, your B/J, your ocs, your plots, everything.  More soon, please.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot - I love having fans- especially ones who review and more uploads are coming very very soon.

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Fallout, Part 2

just wanted to say, i LOVE the end, when justin's like "we have ninety minutes..." and of course, i love this story in general



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it.  Please keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Fallout, Part 2

the interview went well. something for everyone. justin and brian got immunity, emmett may have gotten someone to be with and cam may get lindsay. brian may even have gotten new relatives he didn't know he had. yeah, good for everyone.

brian and his secrets. boy oh boy.

justin, it wouldn't be him if he didn't try. brian knows that. now he'll have something else to worry about.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  You got to know Brian would like to wrap Justin up and keep him safe, but that Justin will never let him.

Thanks for taking the time to review

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Fallout

ems coming, yay. it will help justin.

the da, yay. someone is actually fighting for them instead of against them.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Fallout, Part 2

great chapters. love the dynamic of the lawyer, cop and agent & Em. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad yu're enjoying them.  Writing chapters with groups is really interesting to do - it's a very different feel than the B/J only scenes.  Thanks for the review.

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 19 – Together

brian can certainly pour on the romance when it's needed. the contracts, the golden gardenias, the rings. they just committed themselves. nothing else is needed.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think it's done, too.  I simply can't see Brian agreeing to the big ceremony again after what happened the last time!  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - News From Home

This is the most well-written fic I've read by an as of yet undiscovered by me author in a long time.  Please, please keep writing it.  I would love to read more adventures in New York with pro hockey players.  Greg seems an interesting character with a crack in his closed mind I would like to see widen.  Meg could become more sincere in her open-mindedness...  Lindsey is well written and it's not anti-Deb and Michael.  I love Emmett and would love to see more about his show and Marc's possible contributions.  John and Marc are great OMCs and your B/J are in a relationship that I consider ideally canon-continued.  I just read the whole series, and thoroughly enjoyed it.  Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kate.  I really appreciate your comments, especially about the B/J relationship.  I wanted to make sure that the guys stay as close to canon as possible.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 14 – A Day Out

I just discovered this series today, and usually wait until the most recent of a wip before commenting bc I tend to read in one sitting, but I had to comment after this chapter.  You are a fantastic writer and I sincerely hope you continue this wonderful series.  This was fast paced entertaining and moving.  A combination not often seen in fanfic.  Thank you for your efforts.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews.  I really appreciate your taking the time to write the extra one.

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 18 - News From Home

Thank you so much for that update. I really like that story. You have a wonderful way with words and I like you Brian and Justin and their relationship very much. I hope you´ll post again soon

Sunny



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the compliment.  More will be coming up soon.

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