Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Rustle Me Up
Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2016 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

Loved the storyline..and the last chapter was perfect!!! Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind review!

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2016 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

You may have noticed that the author, Terry, appears to not have answered comments. I recall her having problems accessing her review comments at the time. Her comments were not being posted. FYI, she did attempt to return comments. I'm not certain she is still online today; however, this is a very good story and will be a fun read.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Bob.  I was having trouble answering comments, but the problem seems to have been resolved.  I still come here occasionally.  I enjoy reading any new comments from readers.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 16

This was fun to read! Thanks so much for sharing. :)

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 15

And I thought they will run the Taylor estate. But I think their decision is much better.

Author's Response: It seems that I can finally respond to some of my reviews. Thank you for all of your reviews. They are greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

Why didnt Justin just fire the gun right away?.... Guess he's not a cold-blooded killer.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

Why didnt Justin just fire the gun right away?.... Guess he's not a cold-blooded killer.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 11

Well, Brian trade his men for someone who's an excellent marksman and in blowjob. No contest on which is the better deal! ;)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Out in the open, under the stars(!), no wonder Justin thinks it's something special. Of course Brian doesnt know it yet, but it's just as special to him too. 

How lovely to have a son like Justin. Jennifer is really lucky to have a son willing to risk his life again for his family.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

The escape was fun! I dont know what happens next but I hope Justin gets a chance to make another dash for it. Then here comes an incensed Kinney once more. :D

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 16

I reeeeeally enjoyed this whole story alot Terry my friend ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yaaay,I am so happy Justin is ok ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 14

Holy crap,Justin has been shot??? ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm so excited!! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love a protective Brian ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 11

I so love this alot!! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 10

I hope Brian goes back to help sunshine! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

Some has fell in love hehehe ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

I really should have guessed you wouldn't let Brian kill Justin....what was I thinking??? ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Um, ok so I didn't see that coming... ~Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really loved the sex scene here,very hot. I really hope Brian can do something to save Justin. This is really great,I am so hooked hon ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hot ending,my dear friend ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

Yup,im still reading this,I love it so much. I hope to get it finished before I have to go to bed ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

You such an incredible writer,I love this story so much. I love stories where Brian kidnaps Justin and they fall in love ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm totally hooked on this!!! ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!!! I am gonna love this whole story alot hon,I can tell ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: Christinalin (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was awsome! I love you storys :) thank you for that adroableq story! 



Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing this story and appreciate the positive feedback. Thanks!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

Loved it..... Do you have any plans for a sequel?? It would be nice to see how things turned once they got to NY.... Thanks..

Author's Response:

Thank you, hon!  Right now, I have no plans for a sequel.  In fact, I'm taking a little break from writing.  I might consider it in the future though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks for a really fun read. Sorry to see it completed but it went well and I loved the story.

Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough JT for your support!  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.  As much as I would have loved to continue it, I've got a lot on my plate right now and am taking a break from writing.  Perhaps there might even be a sequel.  ;)   Some day I need to make the time to read one of your entire stories!  (I confess to reading a few chapters here and there.)  

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thank you for another great story of Brian and Justin!!!!

 Is there a sequel??????,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i hope so.............

Author's Response:

Thank you for the words of praise, honey,  As for a sequel, I am not ruling it out.  However, it's not going to be right now.  I'm taking a much needed break.  RL is quite hectic at the moment. 

Reviewer: galesweetie (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 16

Just wanted to tell you how very much I've enjoyed  reading this story!  But you already knew that!;)  I'm actually sorry to see it end!   I know I'm greedy!!  lol!  Thank you for sharing it will us!   I look forward to the next adventure you will take us on....which I hope will be soon! (SEE! GREEDY!)

*hugs you tight*

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, hon! *blushes*  I'm so happy you enjoyed the story.  I'm a little burnt out, so I need a break.  Who knows, maybe someday they'll be a sequel.  I appreciate you taking the time to comment.  *squeezes you in a big hug*

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your constant support.  I'm honored that you took the time from your own writing to comment on mine,  :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great story!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 16

we know that all will work out for them in ny. this was a lovely and loving ending.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support, hon.  Of course, everything will work out for our boys.  After all, they were fated to be together.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

Glad to see Justn made it and you posted a new chapter fairly quickly for us. I'm also very happy to see you didn't end it here; looking foreward to the next installment. Excellent writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, JT!  I felt guilty for the cliffie.  BUt I've been very busy, so the next chapter might not be so quick. 

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

Wow, Brian actually told Justin that he loves him, good for him :)

I'm glad they are going to try and start over, it will probably be good for them.

Author's Response:

Yeah, you know Brian.  Something drastic has to happen before he'll admit to his feelings.  Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 15

nice ending? brian declaring his feelings and jennifer's acceptance is all justin wants. he got both. they should be happy.

Author's Response:

Not quite the ending yet.  Still another chapter to come.  Keep reading!  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 14

friggin' great chapter. intense and thrilling.

Author's Response:

Thank you darlin'   :)

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh shit, that's not good, but at least Stockwell is out of the way.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Stockwell got what he deserved.  Now as for Justin...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 14

So you have applied the cliffie technique on us todqy. I hope you don't leave us hanging very long; I'm only wearing my knickers and it could get cold hanging on this cliff.

Author's Response:

Sorry about the cliffie (well, not really, LOL).  You'll be pleased to know that I've finished the next chapter and will be posting shortly.  Hold on to your knickers...wouldn't want you to catch a cold on that lonely ole ledge.  ;)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

Another excellent chapter.  Can't wait to see what they're gonna do.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, Kat.  They've hatched a clever plan.  Let's hope it works out the way they imagined.  ;)

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, Brian. Or is that oh, Justin. I'm not sure who I want to lament about the most. They really do love each other, but Brian is too stubborn and set in his ways, and Justin is too emotional; great combination, not.

Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Yep, don't you just want to strangle them at times?  LOL  Their chemistry is inevitable.  Thank you for the review, hon!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 13

Very good chapter here. The sex was hot. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Appreciate your feedback, JT.  If you thought the sex was hot, then that makes me very happy since you write some of the hottest sex scenes.   :)

Reviewer: kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

excellent update. looking forward to the next.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, kate.  I'm happy that you are enjoying the story.       

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 12

ooh i loved this chapter. brian's reckoning is all the truth he needs. that virginal blond sucked him right in. spurs and all.

now to come up with a plan. better be a good one.

Author's Response:

Brian is finally realizing that he has some strong feelings for Justin.  They are going to have to be very cunning to outsmart Stockwell and his goons.  Thanks for reviewing, sherri!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

stockwell sure works fast. killing criag... not that I am sad. you go brian and justin and safe the taylors... :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Stockwell wants to get his greedy hands on Craig's property.  He figures that with Craig and Justin gone, Jennifer is an easy target and will cave to his demands.  Thanks for the feedback, rose!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 12

Very nice. I'm glad it wasn't his mother or Molly that was dead :)

Author's Response:

Thanks hon.  Craig kind of deserved what he got because of the way he treated Justin.  However, now Stockwell is going after Jennifer and Molly and Justin must save them. (with Brian's help of course)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter. No matter how hard i try no tears fall for Craig. Brave Justin is interesting and Brian in love very dangerous. I wouldn't want to be Stockwell right now.

Author's Response:

I agree, Craig is not someone to feel any sympathy for.  Justin is determined to protect his family, but Brian will be by his side.  (he wouldn't want anything to happen to his blond boy)  Thanks for the feedback JT!  Keep it coming.  :)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

beautiful update. especially the end.... :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Awww...shucks.  Thank you rose!  Brian will not let Justin face Stockwell alone because he so cares about him!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

Excellent chapter very well written. Your sentences came alive and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Author's Response:

Great to hear from you JT.  I had a lot of fun writing this chapter and I guess it shows!  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 11

well he came back to help. what a nice guy after all. justin showed him the benefits of coming back.

"could he be falling for this boy/man?"  does he really have to ask?

Author's Response:

Justin was a nice reward.  Brian couldn't let his boy face the bad men without him.  Thanks for reviewing hon!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was a super chapter and very well written. Looking forward to your update soon hopefully.

Author's Response:

Thanks JT!  Things are never easy for our boys.  Next chapter coming up soon!  :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh Brian so loves Justin.

Author's Response:

Too bad Brian doesn't realize that he's already in deep!  Thank you for the review, hun.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 10

cold hearted brian. i hope he reaches justin before he does something stupid.

Author's Response:

We all know what an asshole Brian can be at times.  When it comes to matters of the heart, he's a little slow.  Thanks for reading, hon!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 9


Great chapter.... I knew Brian wouldn't be able to kill Justin... I just hope Stockwell and Craig get what's coming to them.....

Author's Response:

Of course Brian couldn't kill him...so he fucked him instead!  LOL   Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

awww they were great together!!!! great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie!  It's nice to hear from you.  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 9

brian is hooked on his hostage. i love it!

Author's Response:

Yep, Justin is addictive!  :)

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very hot!

Author's Response:

Thanx  :DDD

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

That was hot. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

You're welcome hun.  Glad you approved of the hotness!  ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

dliff hanger! not nice!

both on the run. will stockwell still go after the kid even though the father doesn't want anything to do with him. why doesn't stockwell just kill craig?

Author's Response:

Stockwell needs Craig to sign over his house and property to him and he can't do that if he's dead.  I think you'll approve of the next chapter.  ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

I like were we are going with the story now.

Author's Response:

Thanks.  I guess you can say I'm getting to the "good stuff" now.   :)

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 8

Aaaargh !! Chapter 9, please, soon, very soon

Author's Response:

You're gonna have to wait a few more days sweetie...but it will be worth the wait!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

Got to be a major cliffie me smell here. Good work.

Author's Response:

Yep, I love suspense.  Thank you for the review JT.  I appreciate your support. 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you, darlin'.  :)

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

arghhhh! What a place to leave us hanging!! More please soon............ Brave Justin, *wibbles*...

Author's Response:

I love suspense!  Yes, Justin was very brave.  Tune in next week for some answers.  ;)

Reviewer: Josieb1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

No! Please say he didn't o it.............please

Author's Response:

Sorry, but you'll have to wait till next week to find out!  *runs for cover*

Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh no he didn't shoot Justin !! please update soon, your can't stop writing now

Author's Response:

Sorry, I guess I missed this one way back when.  Hope you enjoyed the rest of the fic!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

brian killed justin?? I can´t believe it. come on, where did you hide justin? :-)) rose

Author's Response:

*looks around*  I didn't hide him anywhere.  Keep reading! ;)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 7

what the hecks happenned?!

enjoying the fic so please update soon!


Author's Response:

Brian was ordered to kill Justin.  You'll have to wait to find out next week exactly what happened.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

he didn't do it! he couldn't have! he played the part so well. if he had done it, it wouldn't have taken two shots. omg what are they going to do now?

Author's Response:

Did Brian kill Justin?  I've killed them off before, so you never know! 

Reviewer: b/jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

whew, this was hothothot!! I love stories where Justin is Brian's prisoner, and Brian can't resist him. Very sexy! Very passionate and kinda dirty!Loved it,Good job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliments.  I'm happy to have you as a reader.  Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the excellent work!


Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie.  I appreciate hearing from you.  Keep reading...there's a lot that's going to happen.

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

I can't wait to read the next part

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story! 

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 6

first it was hot and at the end it was sooo sad. poor justin. well and poor brian :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Brian is being his regular asshole self.  Justin is still his captive, so he doesn't want to jeopardize the job. (anymore than he has, that is)

Reviewer: heidi (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really love this story, I've looked for something like it for it seems like forever, but haven't found anything decent. And then you swoop in and save the day, yay!

Uhmm... is it totally wrong of me to be glad that Brian caught him again? lol. Keep up the good work hon :)

Author's Response:

That's me, ready and willing to swoop in and save the day! LOL  Thank you so very much for reading and commenting.  It's what inspires me to keep writing.  :)

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just one word : briliant !

Author's Response:

Two words for you:  Thank you! 

Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon

Author's Response:

You won't have to wait that long...I'm posting weekly.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fwmammd (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh wow, I love your story and Brian this way. Please update soon !!!

Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie.  Brian is trying so hard to prevent the inevitable!  ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

this was great. loved it all. the stupidity of his guard, letting the horses go, and especially brian being hot on his trail.

roping him in, genius.

now what does brian have in mind by turning him onto his stomach? hog tying him or could it possibly be something else.

Author's Response:

I liked the idea of the lasso too!  Good thing Brian just happens to be an excellent tracker.  LOL  Now that he has Justin...what will happen next?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very good chapter. I'm enjoying the build up to next.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, JT.  Next chapter is going to have Brian and Justin getting much closer.  ;)

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

Just finished reading your posted chapters. I wanted to let you know that I love what you have written so far. Looking forward reading more. Curious to find out how you are going to have Brian and Justin get out of this mess.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading amd commenting, nicole.  I'm glad to know that I have you intrigued.  This story will have its twists and turns.  :)

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

Sorry about the silence, I just assume other people reviewing is enough. I love the story line and the characters. It does seem to be moving slowly, but that works well.

Good job, Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie.  It's kind of been really quiet here.  I was just wondering what people were thinking.  I appreciate you commenting to let me know.  I decided to move this story slowly, but believe me something will happen within the next couple of chapters.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

sorry, but I try to read a story, when more chapters are posted. it is not that I don´t like your story. in fact, i wonder if how they will fall in love with each other... :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you for being honest, rose.  It's your right to read a story whenever you want.  I promise this will be an interesting ride.  Thanks again for tking the time to comment.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

Very well done. You have a respectable number of reviews for so few chapters. I'd be proud of it. Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you much, JT.  I know that I have a respectable number of reviews and I am proud of it.  Guess things around here have been quiet and I just needed to feel the love.  <3

Reviewer: Henny71 (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really like this story. Please continue with it. I want to know how Brian and Justin are going to get through this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Henry.  It's nice to hear from someone I haven't heard from before.  I have every intention of continuing the story and eventually finishing it.  This journey is far from over though.  Lots of action to come in the future.  I'm happy that you're along for the ride.  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

they aren't going to know what hit them once they finally get together. i love the sexual tension build up, always makes the story more interesting.

Author's Response: The build up is always fun to write.  Brian and Justin have so much chemistry and we all know that the inevitable will happen.  It's just a matter of when.  Thanks for the review, hon!

Reviewer: minami77 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

I don't comment very much because of my bad English but I want to tell you I'm reading and enjoying this story.

Hope to read more soon. See you :)

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie for commenting and leaving me some feedback.  I appreciate it, and I think your English is great!  ;)

Reviewer: stephanie (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

The story is very interesting, and I can't wait for each new chapter. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, stephanie.  I'm glad that you're enjoying it.  It's always nice to get feedback to know whether or not your story is leaving an impression.  And thank you for the encouraging words!  :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

I wonder what Craig has in mind that he wanted proof they had Justin ?   Brian seems to be taking "things" a little slower than usual.. lol... update soon...  


Author's Response: Craig knew from Jennifer that Justin was going to leave.  That's why he asked for proof.  He wanted to be sure that they had actually kidnapped Justin, before he decides to sign over his property.  (because we all know what a selfish asshole Craig is)  As for Brian, he does not want to mix work with pleasure.  He knows it would only complicate things.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting!  :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you darlin'.  Glad you're enjoying the show.  Your comments are always a pleasure to read.

Reviewer: mactwck (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hopefully Brian will tie up Justin and have his way with him...

Author's Response: Or maybe the other way around.  LOL

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter and plot development. I like what you'e doing here.

Author's Response: Thanks JT.  As you can tell, I like to slowly build up to something.  Glad you approve.  ;)

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

I hope Brian lets his attraction take over soon. The suspense is killing me. Also the captor having his way with the captive is going to be totally hot.

Author's Response: Patience...and you shall be rewarded.  Thank you for reading!  ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

I will most certainly keep reading. You have a very interesting plotline not seen before to my knowledge. I just wish they could be longer chapters but I totally understand. You're a natural writer with the gift.

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for your support and understanding.  I try to write stories that are a little bit "different".    ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good plot development. The story begs for longer chapters though. Looking forward to your updates.

Author's Response:

I'm happy that you're enjoying the story so far.  As for longer chapters, it's probably not going to happen.  I work full time and am a single parent of four (two kids and two pets).  I hope you'll continue reading though!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

You're a very good writer.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, JT.  I write for fun and out of love for the boys. ;)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for following the story.  I am going to try to post once a week.

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh I hope you update soon. I really want to see Brian have his way with Justin and hopefully kick Stockwell's ass.

Author's Response: Thank you for the enthusiastic response, Bridget.  I will be updating once a week.  I think you're not alone when you say you want to see Brian kick Stockwell's ass. LOL

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

oh this is good. stockwell doesn't know that craig doesn't give a shit about justin any longer. brian, well that's another story. care at first site.

Author's Response: Thanks hon.  Things aren't looking too good right now for Justin. 

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh! This is getting good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Brian so likes Justin. I can't wait! Keep up the great work. I was also kinda wondering if you knew how often you'll be posting. The suspense between chapters is killing me.


Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review.  I will be posting once a week, most likely on the weekend.  :)

Reviewer: Memo (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have a feeling that this is going to be good. Yeeha! :)

Author's Response: I plan to have some fun with this story!  Thanks for commenting...things will get interesting very soon. ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

can't wait to see where this goes. seems like fun and fighting and loving are ahead. yahoo!

Author's Response: I'm happy you're liking the start of my fic, hon.  This story will indeed be interesting.  Yippee!

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

i can't wait for update :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for coming along for the ride, monica.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: feroza (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

more cowboy Brian!

Author's Response: Yeeha!  Cowboy Brian is hot.  Of course a blond boy is going to make him even hotter! ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

such a great start. update soon please. I want to know why brian kidnapped justin... :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, rose.  Your question will be answered in the next chapter.  (hopefully I'll be posting once a week)

Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

So great! I've never read anything like this. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, Olga.  I enjoy writing stories that are "different".   I hope you like this one.  Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: black sheep (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!! I am sooo ready for more!!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're ready!  The story will become more interesting.  Stay tuned! ;)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 1


Author's Response: Thank you for the enthusiasm.  More on the way.  I'll be posting about once a week.

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