Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2012 01:16 PM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

write a chapter or two it's good  kim

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 05:14 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

TRES BELLE HISTOIRE Y IL AURA T IL UNE BELLE SUITE

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 01:43 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

WOW! Can't wait to read next chapter, seriously!! I want to know this totally-out-of-character-(as-we-know-it)-Brian who seems to be the protective and even loving kind in your story. Seems really a good idea, and original and imaginative at that! Waiting for the update with impatience! J.

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:04 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

it would be great if you kept translating it!!! I really like this story!

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:55 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

hi, I love the story, justin has a terrible life, I hope brian can help him to have a better life.

my native lenguaje is spanish and I dont have any problem to read the story, so go on, please I really want to know what happend whit them.

I hope my english is no to bad =)

 kisses

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Your story has a very good premise but I found it very difficult to read. I realize this is being translated from another language into English (so I really give you credit) and that you do have a beta but is your beta a native English speaker or does she also translate into English?

As I said, I like the idea but can't see myself being able to continue reading unless the grammar is addressed. Sorry...

 

Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:55 PM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

Very promising start, I hope you’ll continue with translation. My native language is Russian, so I know how hard this work sometimes is. Thank you.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:14 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

I think you have a good idea starting and would like to suggest that there might a beta that can take the translation you have a correct the English.  It makes it a bit hard to read the way it is and it's a shame.  I'm sure you've put a lot of time into it already.  

 
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Author's Response:

Actually I have a beta. And she´s really god.

I needed 3 hours for 3 pages to translate. I do it with google and correct the unfitting parts and then it goes to my beta.

But thank you for the suggestion

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:44 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

i like this. it seems that roles are reversed a bit. very nice touch. now it's time for both of them to heal and with each other they will. please continue this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah Justins parents are exactly like Brians in the show. Justins parents are going to show up at the end of this story.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:31 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

Poor Justin... This chapter is touching, sad but hopeful. It makes you want to read more. Thank you for this quick update and a thank you also to Jussy_Baby for the translation

Author's Response:

Thank you hazel *hugs* I let her know. It´s going to take a while with the next chapter because it´s really exhausting to translate. I had a few problems and so had my beta. So I need a little time to do it right for you guys.

Hugs

Jen

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:28 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

I hope they can help each other find happiness in life again. I really like the plot it sounds promising.

Author's Response:

It´s going to take a while because Brian really loved his partner but there´s going to be a happy end.

^^ Thank you so much.

I really appreciate the reviews.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:19 AM · On: I just canīt hold this anymore

Oh my god! That was an excellent chapter. But really sad. I look forward to reading more of this story. It's like their personalities and histories switched, Brian being Justin and Justin being Brian. Please thank your beta for such a quick translation.

Author's Response:

Yeah I liked it, too. That´s the good thing about AU-Storys. You can do whatever you want with them.

Thank you, I´ll let her know.

Reviewer: Poppieshaze (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Yeah, go on, i want to know why Justin jumped...

Author's Response:

You will find out in the next chapter. I just e-mailed it to my beta.

I am hoping that I can post it tomorrow.

Reviewer: Calina (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Yes, I think you should continue with this story. It's seems like it's going to be great story. Keep up the great work.

Hugs,

Carlina



Author's Response:

Thank you, Carlina.

After so many Reviews I definetley continue to translate.

Hugs

Jen

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Pls.continue to translate this beautiful story of yours!!!!!!!!!!!!

 It must be Justin!!!!! That will bring Brian Back into the Light!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Cant wait for the next update, pls.............

 

thanks 



Author's Response: I´m working on it. I am at work right now and when I come home tonight I´m starting with the next chapter...I promise.

Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Good start and you should continue.  Enjoyed the first chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I´m glad you enjoyed it. I hope you´ll like the others too.

Reviewer: Sky (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Ich finde es schön das du die Geschichte ins Englische übersetzt, lese komischerweise auch lieber auf englisch als auf deutsch.

Jedenfalls ist die Story super und so romantisch und nach dem 10ten mal lesen immer noch interessant.

Eins möchte ich doch noch gerne wissen, wann schreibst du eigentlich das Sequel zu der Story weiter?



Author's Response:

Danke schön ^^

Das weiß ich nicht. Nachdem ich bei FF.de so gut wie kein Feetback bekommen hab, hab ich sie erstmal auf Eis gelegt.

Erstmal diese hier übersetzen und dann evtl. schreib ich an der anderen weiter.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

this is a very promising start

Author's Response: Thank you very much. And it´s getting better.

Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

looks interesting so far... and what a sad start....i think you should really translate it.

mh, wie heißt den die deutsche version der story und wo kann man sie finden?

allerdings muss ich sagen das ich lieber stories auf englisch lese als auf deutsch, obwohl das ja meine muttersprache ist...



Author's Response:

Auf deutsch heißt sie "Zurück ins Licht" und ist bei Fanfiction.de zu finden. Dort heiße ich Jen84.

Ich lese die Storys auch lieber auf Englisch, einer der Gründe warum ich mich entschlossen hab sie zu übersetzen.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

MORE MORE MORE! I love this story. Please continue giving us more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means really a lot to me. I translate more tomorrow and e-mail it to my beta. So maybe on Tuesday you have the next chapter.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

wie gut dass tom nicht mehr da ist (ups...sorry) aber natürlich, mach weiter. es ist immer wieder schön, wenn sich die beiden in einander verlieben

Author's Response:

Ja das hatte ich mir auch schon gedacht...ab nem gewissen Zeitpunkt. Oh ja, ich bin ein richtiger sucker für Liebesgeschichten ^^

Vielen Dank für deinen Kommi.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Sorry but I expect the result. I want to know what is going on between Brian & Justin, so you must continue ! 

I love the idea and this first chapter is an excellent beginning. Thank you for sharing your baby 



Author's Response:

Yeah I didn´t know what came over me. It was a fix idea and the next thing I know I´m writing like a mad man. I wrote 20 chapters in 2 weeks (I had vacation and nothing better to do). I wrote day and night almost 24/7. But it was worth it.

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: BusySol (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Great story, keep it coming! I'm alittle familiar with German- very little- but I know the sentence sructure is somewhat reversed from English. I imagine it could get a little confusing, so I have to say your Beta is doing a pretty good job. Kudos to you both!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I translate it with Google but when I read it it looked like shit. So I had to overwork it.

Yeah my beta is pretty good...she´s fantastic.

Thanks for the Kudos ^^

Reviewer: Sarenja (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Hey Lady Harold,

I read your Fiction already, the german version :)

Now, as i read the english one, I have to say, I like it too :)

Hope that I don´t have to wait too long for an update :)

LG
Sarenja



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarenja ^^

If you´re impatient you can read the next chapter. You´re lucky because the others can´t. I try to hurry.

Jussy_Baby is going to beta the story. I am so lucky to have her.

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

wow poor brian to lose his partner. this a good story.

Author's Response: Yeah he is really devastated. At some point we´re going to meet Tom. But I don´t want to reveal too much. You just have to keep on reading.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Lady Harold, I have always loved AU and I think this has a lot of potential. I would love to see you continue it.

Author's Response:

I love them too. Because you can create everything like you want it. That´s why I stopped reading Canon fics.

Thanks for you review.

Hugs

Reviewer: lauren49ers (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

Please keep writing this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.It's interesting to see Brian in a relationship and his interactions with Justin.

Author's Response:

Actually the story is finished, I just have to translate it. It´s pretty exhausting but worth it.

Thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Quiet trickels the snow

please keep this story going i would really like to read the whole story.

 

Buffytess



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I try to hurry up ^^

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