Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea

Another great chapter! Love everything w/ the kids & Brian's fangs, very funny!

The end....THE END......OH my gosh!!!!

On to the next chap, right away!!



Author's Response:

Real life is moving in and wanting more of me soon. I must finish the story soon. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea

The twins sound adorable. It sucks what Eric is trying to do.



Author's Response:

Eric is sick in the head but the good guys got to him in time. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea

Great chapter as usual.... it's great to see Logan and Lea doing so well.. but.. it seems as if Eric is turning into Bush Jr. the 3rd.......  

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting BluvsJ. Eric is like so many gay boys who struggle with the faith and are often used by Christians to hurt gays.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea

Well, really ! Leviticus doesn't agree with gays and vampires. Brandish this book is fairly simplistic (pff)... Some people are idiots and moreover the extremists (all religions) - What a load of jerks ! In Leviticus alone, there are still a lot of shit (sorry, precepts) which have nothing to do with the current reality. So, what about the other commandments, here ? I thought we should love each other. ;)  This people, they make me mad. With them, I can't turn the other cheek, I'm rather going to apply the Talion's Law.

I can't wait to see what is happening with Eric. You had started so kindly with the twins and bang, I'm forced to jump up on a moving roller coaster... :D

I love it

 



Author's Response:

I could do an entire story on say a Christian Justin struggling with his faith and what he was taught the Bible says about homosexuals. So much scripture was altered over the years it's unreal; add to that the miss-understandings.  Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea

Wow what a powerful chapter!  Love the the addition of the twins.  This last part really got my attention. Looks like trouble is brewing in kinneyville.  Great, great update.  So many chapters, and you manage to keep the story fresh and interesting. Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you Gina Marie. It's about to get very hot for vampires nationwide and perhaps in the world. Should anybody be a Baptist reading this I say get over yourself; I was raised Baptist and know what I'm talking about. We are approaching the final stage of the story.

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