Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

HA! Times sure flies when you're having fun!!

GREAT chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes I did move the time line pretty fast in this chapter; thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

Gorgeous, brilliant, rich and hard-working.  Daniel better watch out for his virtue.  Another fun new character to follow along.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Daniel is a dreamboat and he doesn't even know it. It's fair to assume in med school he's getting loads of attention from both sexes.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

It's a pleasant chapter. I have a soft spot for this kid. Not always easy to be a precocious child  or even to have a precocious child. There is this constant gap which can become catastrophic if the child's environment doesn't provide the appropriate answers. Daniel seems ok. And studying medicine is difficult (I know, I dropped it). It's very theoretical in the early years. Once made the pace, he'll think to expand his knowledge ... in other areas.

So housegirl, houseboy (or both)?

I smiled throughout the chapter

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting once again. I had to accelerate Daniel's life a bit to move the story line forward properly. He ended up without a houseperson chosen.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

I just want to say keep up the good work because i think you do this great, i can´t  stop reading this story i have already read it two times now.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

Thank you Buffytess for your comments. I'm very happy my story has entertained you. Hugs back,

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

great chapter. love how daniel isn't letting on his sexuality, even though brian playfully teases him...



Author's Response:

Thank you alys for your review. Boys come out (or not) when then want to. It doesn't matter if their parents are gay. Some guys are in their 20s or 30s before they admit it to themselves. Daniel is a big question mark and the first of Justin's kids to be like that. Right now all he's thinking about is his career and education. Justin worries about him being nonsexual and if it's healthy for him. It did make it easier to let him live alone in Atlanta however.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

I loved it! This chapter was fucking awesome. I can't wait to read the next one.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you VG24. You're such a cheer leader! I appreciate your review very much.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

Daniel is a very interesting character. I like him, and very curious as to how he's going to get along in med school away from his Dads.  Also curious if he's bi or gay.  Interesting.  Loved the Jaguars scaring everyone into the pool.  lol  Another Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you Gina Marie for your comments. I had fun writing the chapter and moving the time line forward for his young life.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast

loved your update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you Rose! I appreciate your review very much.

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