Reviewer: Adrianne (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
Did you mean South Atlanta or the southside - more accurately, Southeast or Southwest Atlanta? South Atlanta is an actual place where where your characters would draw attention as being a little pale for the neigborhood before they became vampires. Also we're a bit short on warehouses abandoned or otherwise, being a lower to midlde class African-American community. Storefronts we have, warehouses, not so much.
I like your premises, but you need to make ARRANGEMENTS to get a Beta (or a better one). The is no ED in RANG.
Adrianne from South Atlanta
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I've never been to Atlanta so I wasn't aware of a South Atlanta proper. Soon I'll go and correct this chapter. You may see more typos; my readers wanted faster posted chapters and didn't care about the few typos. I hope you enjoy the story and comment again.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
INTENSE! I really like how you've made Justin extremely fair.
Thanks once again for taking the time & sharing w/ us......
Author's Response: Thank you Susan; I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
I am amazed Brian is giving that guy a second chance - must be some compassion. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Justin and Brian realized he was just a kid and a new vampire who didn't have a clue what he was doing. They felt sorry for the guy and his mom. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
Great chapter ! The wait was worth it. John is very, very lucky to be alive. Brian could have ended his life despite Justin's opinion. The organizers of this kidnapping had no chance against our vampires. I loved when Brian said « I guess I need to punish you for getting kidnapped and scaring the shit out of me »... So Brian ! All opportunities are good Kisses Gexan Ps: Thank you for the dedication on the previous chapter and for taking the time to answer to each comment.
Author's Response: Well thank you very much for being such a great fan and reader of the story. It's the reviews that motivates me to write and entertain you. The least I can do is answer the reviews when folks take the time to leave me a message. The best I can do is write more for you.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
I loved it! Great Job! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thank you VG24. Glad to hear from you.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
I love this story. Please, keep up the super, great, fantastic writing. I would rate this above 10 if I could. I sure hope you put this in a book. I would definitely buy it for future reading too. Please do it being vampires and vampire stories are big right now. Thanks for the great story and please, keep on writing!!! Debbie
Author's Response: Thank you Debbie for your comments. Since I'm using copywrited characters with permission to do so for fan fiction without a profit it would be illegal for me to make of a book of it and sell it. I am pondering the idea of a different vampire novel I could sell someday. And this story is already the lengh of two books. I really appreciate your review.
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