Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Embraced
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

LOVE the flying! It would be SO cool. Every once in a while I dream that I'm flying & it's great. 

Never crossed my mind that there would be domestic violence, very good & realistic story line. I feel bad for Dakota, especially in a situation w/ someone that is beyond human strength & powers. Very scary. 

Our hero, JUSTIN!

Next chap coming up......

 



Author's Response:

Dakota may have got hurt but in the end he came out smelling like a rose and fifthty rich!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

Excellent! I'm on my way to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting VG24.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

Wonderful chapter ! Domestic violence, the hell for many women (and many men too) who suffer this from their spouses every day. Transpose it into the world of our vampires, it can quickly degenerate. Justin is th best. Dakota has been extremely lucky. Poor guy ! I hope that everything will be better for him and he'll find a new love ... I know in advance that my beloved vampires will take control of the problem

Can anyone help Brian ? He isn't very comfortable with the air technique ... (hi, hi ..)

I love their new power ... I love the new boy... I love this new chapter

You are THE master of emotions ....



Author's Response: WOW! Such a detailed in depth review with lots of comments. I'm honored. Thanks for enjoying my story myhazel_eyes.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

wow they can fly!!!! im jelous ;-)

Author's Response: Hi monica! I'm kind of jealous too. Flying would be so cool.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

 

This chapter had an interesting mixture of things... flying powers for Justin and Brian.. also uncovering a case of vampire domestic abuse...



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing BluvsJ. I don't know where my mental hamster gets his ideas from but he spins them out and I write them down.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

Flying sounds like fun.  Are the vampires going to get nervous about Justin being able to toast them one of these days? 

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting Annjeela. Justin is very much under Brian's and Dracula's control and vampires respect him but don't need to fear him. In fact he hasn't torched anyone for years until this abusive lover of Dakota showed up and started to attack Justin. He's not going to go around burning up vampires unless they really have it coming.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

thanks for the haeds up... about the rest of the ch. the last part i had read was when justin told the dr. about gus being the officer incharge.

you kined of tricked me with the "ch." before this one i had thought it was going to be part of the story, till i clicked on it 



Author's Response: I never meant to trick anyone. Maybe I can change the title to be more clear. I just added a new chapter too. Thank you for your comments nicole.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

Great chapter JT. Dakota is an interesting character to add. Spouse abuse with vampires and embraced boys has marred the utopia of Kinneyville. I'm looking forward to how Justin handles this problem.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review George. The next chapter is up now with Justin, Brian, and Dracula taking care of this serious issue in Kinneyville. Dakota is resting at the villa for a few weeks getting well.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

excellant... super justin to the rescue.

seriously though a great chapter, great how the abuse was handled, all the issued dotted and crossed correctly.... wonder how the assoc. meeting will go about this and how many more will be found 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for commenting and reviewing alys. Brian and Justin will deal with this potential problem head on next chapter.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

What a wonderful chapter!  Love the new gift Justin developed.  I wish Brian could enjoy it more. lol.  Dakota is a wonderful addition to this story!  You manage to keep this story fresh and interesting and I look forward to each update!  Loved the pictures in the last update.  Those vamps and their embraced lovers are delicious!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comments Gina Marie. Who would have thunk it; spouse abuse with vampires and embraced lovers in Kinneyville. Justin is now on a mission; that's his boys and he's one little pissed off blond. I thought the pictures were pretty good too so I decided to share them. She did a great job picking out faces for my characters. I get almost as many private messages as I get reviews. This story has developed a life of its own. I'm hearing from readers all over the world who love "Embraced".

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 93: Dakota

see now... you know i'm addicted to this story... and youjust had to post it when i'm about to shut down my computer and go to bedso i can get up and go to work... you are sooo bad : ) lol....now i'm going to have to find someplace to nap at work. lol

Author's Response: Check and make sure you have all the chapter. I was posting it when you left this review. I have to do it in pieces to make it work on this website. Then I have to go back and make paragraph breaks. I hope you like it, nicole.

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