Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Secret Society

Nicely done.....

Still amazed w/ the solutions you come up w/ for the drama, you create...

Nice touch w/ Roger. I love how Justin can read people, it's just makes it more interesting.

Looking forward to see how it goes. 



Author's Response: Thank you Susan. I did some research to make those chapters more real. They were interesting to write too.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Secret Society

When I went to bed last night, there were just this new section on the site but I didn't wanted to read it because I saw it was a little hot on the end - I have to wait the daytime for this kind of scène ;) Today, surprise. I just returned from surfing and I find 2 more chapters. Have a little rest from time to time .. *frowned*

And now, I go back for a semi marathon reading .... and review.

To lure these vampires with this attractive invitation to join a secret society is a brilliant...You are great, JT ... In addition, the speech was excellent (it would be state approved in the real life, both some old gays men are sometimes heavy-handed and clingy, barely a bit of lecher). And then, lucky to have Brian as instructor ... mmmm

And after reading the last paragraph, I knew I had done well to wait... Pffff, It's hot or I'm hot ?

Great time, thank you

‘Ego sum bestia', I'm now the kangaroo which jump up to the next chapter....



Author's Response: Thank you myhazel_eyes for commenting and for your review.I'm happy you liked it. Other readers look forward to B/J sex so I have to help them out. 

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Secret Society

I loved this chapter! Keep up the great work. I love how you are going to have Brian do workshops to teach the vampires how to be the best vampires they can be. I look forward to the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you VG24 for your comments. I miss you on IM. I hope all is well for you.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Secret Society

Excellant, if only it were real, think of all those lawyers out of work. ;-) how much happier everyone would truly be.

Author's Response: Thank you alys for reviewing. I'm happy you liked it.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Secret Society

A 12-step program for pedophile vampires.  i can honestly say in years of reading fiction & tons of vampire fiction - that's a new one.  It is what keeps reading your stories interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you Annjeela for your review. I don't think that most of the vampires were really pedophiles but mostly overwhelmed by the beauty and charm of all those gay twink boys in one location. Older vampires remember a time when age didn't matter and they only have to be educated that this is a new age with different rules for the game. Add to that they were stupid and had no clue how to attact a young mate. Their hearts were in the right place but they didn't realize the seriousness of the age difference and how illegal it was and they had to learn despite this being a closed vampire community; they don't get to do as they pleased in Kinneyville. Many men screw up taking my a teenager's beauty and only have to be reminded it's wrong to act on it.

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