Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Oooh, I knew where this was going from the title!

I love how Brian (actually ,you!) think outside the box. He makes sure other little details are taken care in his revenge, ie: the insurance, the evidence, the placing of them in Utah. Very clever.



Author's Response: I was out of town and got home to see your reviews; I'm so happy you take the time to comment for each chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'm glad to say things are not quite that bad in the USA. It's all mental crap here thank goodness.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

I love were the story is going in the plot. It moves quickly with much detail and real life issues involved. I'm curious what new poweres Justin has. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you George for reviewing. Justin's existing powers are stronger and there will be some new stuff to. Thank you for your comments.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

 

Just a quick off topic question... Did Emmett ever get embraced with the bartender.. I think his name was Tony..  Justin introduced to him ?



Author's Response: Hi BluvsJ. Yes, Emmett is embraced but it got overshadowed by the kidnapping of a campus boy. They will appear later in the story.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

 

Amazing.. I love that Justin can turn down the heat.. so the S.O.B feels all the pain he deserves..

 



Author's Response: Thank you very much BluvsJ for your review. Justin's very powerful now as will be shown in future chapters.

Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

fry PK (Prechers Kid) fry... once again you've done it...here's a thought i just had, in early chapters Diamond pick Joey, and Louis because they look like brian and justin...hmmmm. and with the ringing in the ears couldn't  Diamond or brian licked them better? ooo kinky thought lol.

keep up the good work.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Nicole; I'm delighted to have your comments and question. I hadn't thought of the the boys looking like Brian and Justin. It just happened that way. The ear lick isn't a bad idea but the ears are very sensititive. I think the ringing was over the next day and the boys didn't need medical attention after all.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

way to go justin and brian... loved the way justin got rid of that bastard.. keep up the great work..

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to give a review Lesley. I appreciate the compliment.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. ...How to send all your vampires in the real world, Brian & Justin in the lead ? I hate these homophobic assholes ... I swear, if I could ...

My parents told us about Matthew's story. They had been much affected because at his death he had almost the same age as my brother (my age now).I wear all the time on me a badge with the wonderful colors of our flag. I'm proud of what I am. I'm in gays associations. We give talks in schools about homosexuality and homophobia.

In France, we haven't groups like Phelps'. And since 2004, we have a law against sexist & homophobic discrimination. 

They say "God hates fags" but I think God hates even more people like them. This chapter is my wildest dream, JT 



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments myhazel_eyes. We have such a group in America but they are mostly all mouth. I was careful not to use their real name or location. I want to point out that this group is not normal. We have lots of good churches and Baptist churches that preach love; not hate. Thanks for your comments and review.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

i love them, when they are bad :-)))))

Author's Response: I so love the bad B/J team too. Shades of Rage and JT only vampire style. Thanks for your comment, very much monica.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Loved it! Payback is definitely a bitch. I love that Justin can slowly burn something now. The punishment fit the crime. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you VG24. I'll write the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Great update ... Brun baby burn disco infurno ... Later

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing the chapter KAYLIN. I appreciate your comment.

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