Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Great installment! What a way to end the chapter, more suspense coming our way. Of course, we know the boys will take care of whatever Mum has planned!

Author's Response: Thank you Susain for commenting. Justin is on top of it and Diamond will keep a relationship with him Mum albeit from a distance.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

 

Great chapter... Alice is something else.. she's totally nuts...but is still  smart enough to try and cause trouble !!!   can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting BluvsJ. Your review and feedback is important to me. I hope to get the next chapter out later tonight.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

glad they're helping D's mom, hopefully she'll appreciate it and not fight the boys abt D.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review alys. What happens with Alice will be in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Stupid bitch. She's only asking for trouble, by taking on brian and justin. She's insane. I have no sympathy for her whatsoever..

great chapter by the way



Author's Response: Thanks for your comment Lesley. Alice is still not mentally stable.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Well, the head is really affected.... I feel no mercy for this woman. Too bad for her if she chooses this path, she's going to get into trouble by attacking Brian and Justin. She'll lose everything.

I look forward to the next chapter. This was great, like always 

(For now, it rains here, so no surf... I'm going to work instead but I take my laptop with me :D) 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review myhazel_eyes. Yes, Alice isn't running on all cylinders so to speak. I've seen lot of rain too this year.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Great chapter! Alice has no idea who she's messing with. She's fucking stupid. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

P.S. Jennifer is a much better mother for Diamond. I hope you write about more interactions between Diamond and Jennifer.



Author's Response: Thank you VG24. She is a mess no doubt. Jennifer is wonderful and their will be exchanges with Diamond soon.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

I love the talks between Brian and Diamond holding a sleeping Justin with his precious heartbeat.

It's good that B/J are taking care of Diamonds mom. But at the end grrrr I hate her.

* knock knock *  you can't stop writing at this point, hurry hurry. Just kidding take your time. Your always fast.



Author's Response: Thanks Marny. Alice is a sick puppy and will be the subject of the next chapter. I have to get some sleep thus a small break in time until the next chapter is posted.

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