Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
Sad & sweet. I'm so happy how Jennifer welcomes Diamond, we knew she would! Sad Diamond wasn't able to get that from his own mom, but like Jennifer told him, Justin will help his mom. Love how you just keep adding layers to the story!
Author's Response: Thank you Susan. It was an emotional section of the story for me too.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
Hey Honey, don't stop ! I read this chapter in the middle of the night and it's true I haven't commented on. But I really enjoyed it. I loved Jennifer. She's wonderful. However, the beginning of the chapter is quite...HOT, I preferred to go to bed immediatly afterwards. I know one here who was very happy to be awake in his first sleep. Don't be angry but that was my priority. :D And now I just get up, I will read the next chapter taking my breakfast. In a moment, my comment about 'Taking care of Mum "
Author's Response: I truly appreciate you taking the time to review the chapter myhazel_eyes. I'm glad the chapter 'entertained' you.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
Hihi I can't stop reading, after reading this chapter I ran to ch75. Now back here for a review. I like the bdsm scene, but I'm glad Brian is a vampire so that he can heal Justin's wounds immediately. I don't like marks on Justin's beautiful body. I so love Jennifer, she has a big heart.
Author's Response: Thanks Marny. Glad the story pleases you. Vampire powers have their benefits. They don't play hard in the dungeon very often; just once in a while.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
Glad the Tucker-Taylor family is so positive and welcoming to Diamond. Goes to show sometimes its the family you choose rather than who you're born to that is you real family.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment alys. It takes a family to really raise a good child.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
This last part was so sad. My heart clenched when diamond asked, "Why didn't my mother love me?" so sad. I'm so glad he's got Jen now. LOVED the BDSM scene! *grin*
Author's Response: I am so grateful Gina for your review. Over a hundred hits on this chapter and only my beta commented so far. I thought I really messed up and was contemplating the final chapter. If I don't get a few reviews then I begin to think my writing must suck now and the wind is taken out of my sails. You probably saved this story. Thank you.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202
Oh, that was so sweet! I just had one question: did mel come back to the family? the reason I ask this is because you mentioned that mel would cross-examine the boy and it made it seem like she was back with the family. I loved this story and the last part almost made me cry, it was so sweet. I love how you're portraying Jennifer. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: After Lindsay and Mel broke up, Mel went back to Pittsburgh and got her old job back. Slowly she rejoined the family at Debbie's house. Over time the hard feelings passed and everyone is sort of friends now. She realizes she messed up and respects Brian and Justin more than she fears them. They could smash her like a bug and she knows it and doesn't do anything to provoke them. She may or may not be at Debbie's house depending if she wants to avoid Brian and Justin. Lindsay's back in New York with Gus. Thank you for reviewing.
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