Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee
Enjoyed. Looking forward to Diamond being in the story!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review Susan. Diamond becomes a major character from now on.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee
Excellent as usual! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thank you VG24! The next chapter is underway and Justin shows his true colors and wisdom.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee
Boy do you know how to push the envelope and go where no writer as dared to go before. Diamond Applebee is a very complex character. I can see 8000 years of wisdom failing Dracula dealing with this young vampire boy. I read the review you did for my hazel eyes and realized you set the plot up for some major wild stuff happening. Try not to get kicked off the website. The story is too good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review George. Didn't Brian say to Justin in the first season I think: "You're not an artist if you don't get arrested." He he he he! I'll stay within the rules of this website hugging the legal lines all the way. Diamond will be a handful but Justin has very big hands!
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee
Too cool! Great great chapter. I expected this new update and I wasn't disappointed. Justin is full of kindness and it's a good thing for these kids. And Diamond is the most luckiest of all. I'm happy for him. He is so young. A big big thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for your review myhazel_eyes. Sympathetic characters are the secret of many good writers, for example: poor orphan mistreated Harry Potter, innocent naive bashed Justin Taylor, clumsy loveless displaced Bella Swan, heartbroken Romeo, etc. The more likely I grab the emotional purse strings of the readers the more likely my story is really successful. For Diamond Applebee to have a chapter named after him tells you he’ll possibly be a major character. He’s barely 13 so he looks and thinks like a 12 year old boy. He’ll never get older or bigger. His voice will never change and he’s a vampire. How do you parent a 12-13 year old horny vampire boy? Who can he ever embrace with? Who would want him and be a decent man? Dracula will need Justin’s wisdom with kids like never before.
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